A The White Paper on Trade in 2003 submitted by Japanese Minister of Economy, Trade and Industry pointed out that the rise and fall of Asian economy depends on the growth of China's economy.

Rude: ups and downs-growth, the problem lies in two sides and one side, which is illogical.

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1. The 2003 trade white paper submitted by the Japanese Minister of Economy, Trade and Industry pointed out that the prosperity of Asian economy depends on the economic growth of China.

2. The 2003 edition of the White Paper on Trade submitted by the Japanese Minister of Economy, Trade and Industry pointed out that the rise and fall of the Asian economy depends on the success or failure of China's economy.

Powell will attend the closing ceremony of the 28th Olympic Games. In Greece, 2,000 protesters chanted anti-American slogans and criticized George W. Bush by doodling on the wall of Athens University.

Rude: "Graffiti", the words are carefully written (often out of politeness), and the words are inappropriate.

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1. It is reported that Powell will attend the closing ceremony of the 28th Olympic Games. In Greece, 2,000 protesters shouted anti-American slogans and drew cartoons criticizing George W. Bush on the wall of Athens University.