My hero

My heroes are countless stars in the sky. There are Lei Feng who did good deeds without leaving a name, athletes, and today's space heroes ... the brightest of which is world champion Liu Xiang.

I believe everyone is familiar with the name Liu Xiang! He is the pride of our track and field in China! His brilliant achievements are inseparable from his daily training.

In midsummer, Liu Xiang is sweating profusely under the scorching sun. In the winter of March, his shorts struggled across the track and field. Liu Xiang's spirit of hard work and never giving up runs through every training class. In technical training, it is common for him to trip over the hurdles and fall to the ground. Other athletes often choose to give up and prepare to cross again from the beginning, but Liu Xiang can persist because he thinks that practice is like "fighting". It is because of Liu Xiang's hard training that he has achieved success again and again.

On May 28th, 20001,Liu Xiang won the first world championship title-World Universiade 1 10 hurdles champion. On May 8th, 2004, Liu Xiang beat Johnson with 13.06 in the IAAF Grand Prix held in Osaka. And defeated Liu Xiang's idol. On August 27th, 2004, in the men's 1 10 meter hurdles final of Athens Olympic Games, Liu Xiang won the gold medal with a time of 12 second, which tied the record of Englishman colin jackson and created the miracle and myth of China people in short track events. Liu Xiang, who was only 2 1 year-old, won the 1 10 meter hurdles championship in one fell swoop, which not only achieved a zero breakthrough in China, but also achieved a zero breakthrough in Asia. Liu Xiang has become the most dazzling star in sports in China and a well-deserved hero in many people's hearts. In the next four years, the young man made contributions frequently. In the 2008 Beijing Olympic Games, Liu Xiang fell ill. Although there are some regrets, he is still a hero in my mind. After a period of time, Liu Xiang overcame the disease with strong will and the operation was successful. I was very happy when I heard the news. Liu Xiang's strong will is an example for us to learn. He will soon return to the national team and continue to win glory for his country. I believe he will get good grades in future competitions. Although he may not be able to achieve brilliant results immediately, I still cheer and applaud him. Because of his never-say-die spirit, I feel an eternal flame in his heart. His strong will not to bow to fate and start all over again is worth studying by our generation. "All the honors of yesterday have become distant memories. I've worked hard for half my life, and I'm going into the storm again tonight. I can't walk in the wind and rain, for my beloved relatives. No matter how hard it is, I will be strong, just for those who expect it. "

The ancients said, "Don't judge heroes by success or failure". In competitive sports, the situation is changeable and there are too many uncertain factors. No one can guarantee that he is a winning general, especially when many opponents are equal to his own strength. Victory and defeat may only be as short as 0.0 1 second. Successful people are heroes, losers, warriors and heroes worthy of our respect.

Liu Xiang-You are my hero forever.

Composition is the "half of the country" that determines the score of Chinese exam, so the success or failure of composition often determines the success or failure of the whole Chinese exam. So how do you get high marks in the exam composition? I think the following points must be noted.

1. Questions and ideas All exam compositions should be tested because candidates should compete fairly in the same environment. Examining questions is to read and understand all the contents displayed in the questions comprehensively and accurately, read out the intentions of the proposer, clarify the limitations of examining questions, and clarify what I should write, how to write, and to what extent, so as to truly grasp them comprehensively and profoundly. Write a composition impartially. The composition marking of the college entrance examination clearly stipulates that the final score of any problematic test paper generally does not exceed the lowest score of the second-class test paper. It can be seen that the accuracy of the exam is the key factor in the success or failure of the composition. It is intended to ask the author to stand at the height of the times, observe and understand life, refine the theme, and make the theme reflect the spirit of the times, reflect the times, act on the times and beat the pulse of the times. It has promoted the progress of the times. The "meaning" of the article is actually an idea gradually developed by the author in his life experience. It is the product of the "collision" between the author's subjective understanding and the objective reality. It reflects the author's ideological level, cognitive level and world outlook, outlook on life and values formed in social life. In recent two years, the composition reform advocates students' real life and true self. Some students ignore the grasp of the ideological tendency of the article and see the problem incompletely. The views are extreme, and even worse, they doubt the party's leadership and policies because of corruption. Although today's China is politically clear and free of speech, it will not pursue any political issues if it makes a mistake, but as a builder of the future society, it should have a correct view of right and wrong. We must pay attention to this.

2. Titles and paragraph titles are the eyes of the article, and also the first impression of the marking teacher on the article, especially the writing of self-made topics. The marking teacher attaches great importance to the questions put forward by the candidates. As the saying goes, "half the grain is well planted and half the words are well written", which shows the importance of the topic. Some candidates may not have time to write the title after writing the article, or forget to make up the title. Although the scoring rules stipulate that there is no topic to deduct 2 points, the actual result is far from 2 points. Someone did an experiment in which two groups of teachers graded several well-written compositions according to the two types of reserved titles and hidden titles, and the difference in scores was generally more than 5 points. This is because the marking teacher has a psychological distance from the untitled composition and unconsciously lowers the score level. As for how to draw up the title, I think we should do the following: ① Exactly. It means that it conforms to the content of the article. Also refers to choosing words and making sentences according to norms). 2 exquisite. The number of words in the index question is appropriate. 3 vivid. It means that the topic can reflect a kind of vitality, readability and interest. 4 novel. It means having a new perspective, new ideas and new insights, which can give people a sense of freshness. ⑤ meaningful. This means that it has an inherent meaning. There are many ways to plan a topic, which can be used in rhetoric, quoting common sayings and using old sayings. You can also skillfully use formulas or symbols from other disciplines to ask questions, and candidates can use them flexibly according to their own situation. Paragraph: The structure of the first, belly and tail paragraphs is the most taboo in the exam composition. Is it better to divide the article into several paragraphs? I think it is enough to divide the composition into 5-8 natural paragraphs within 1000 words, because the more natural the natural paragraphs, the more mature and sophisticated you will be. In addition, you should write the first sentence of each paragraph well. The first sentence of each paragraph is like the human eye, and the whole paragraph is remarkable in spirit.

3. Style and Content There are two types of style requirements for the composition questions in the college entrance examination: one is to stipulate that a certain style must be written, such as "writing an argumentative essay"; The other is to exclude writing a certain style, such as "except poetry". Candidates must write in accordance with the prescribed style. In recent years, the college entrance examination composition questions are "no style", allowing candidates to choose their own style freely. Here, pay special attention. No style does not mean that you don't want a style, but after choosing a style, you must write according to the style characteristics and write whatever you want. You can't write at will. Don't write your own thoughts after a little thinking; Take a few minutes to write something unexpected. It is best to set the protagonist as yourself in the narrative, enter the article in the first person, and let the passion of "I" shine in the article, which is sincere and resonant. Argumentative writing should avoid big talk, cliche and nonsense, and avoid empty talk, moaning, slogans, calls and empty expressions of determination. A composition can be fictional.

4. the beginning and end of the exam-oriented composition are the edge of the article. All the methods of beginning and ending learned in and out of class can be used in exam-oriented composition. No matter how you start and end, you must start with a pen and point out the main idea at the end. In order to make a good impression on the marking teacher, don't smear the beginning and end. As the saying goes, a good beginning is half the battle. However, some candidates make the mistake of "getting into the business slowly", and some spread out the original simple raw materials; Some materials are laid out from the beginning and spread all over the world. Take your time. The opening is loose, which takes up a lot of space, but the content that should be said later is "yet we called and urged a thousand times before she started toward us", and some of them are only skimmed, which is seriously out of balance, so it is difficult for teachers to measure their actual writing level. It is reasonable for the ancients to pay attention to "phoenix head", "pig belly" and "leopard tail" when writing articles. Or click on a string of ellipsis, so that even if you carve a "phoenix head" and grow a "pig belly", you won't become a good article because you don't have a "leopard tail" and you won't get high marks. The marking teacher measures the quality of an article, first of all, looking at the whole. Therefore, candidates should give the teacher a complete composition anyway.

5. Language and word count test The composition language should be standardized, accurate, individual and energetic. Don't confuse literature with white; Don't use dialects and words that others don't understand; Use less long sentences and more short sentences; We can introduce some new words of the times, quote famous sayings and aphorisms, quote the lyrics of popular songs, and quote the oral folk songs of the people, but the guidance must be positive and the language should really light up. It stands to reason that articles are tools to express feelings, and long stories are short. It seems that there should be no limit to the number of words. However, as a special form of composition, in order to achieve a certain test purpose, and taking into account the test time and other factors, the number of words is generally stipulated. We must follow the rules. If the minimum number of words is limited, write enough words or slightly more than 50- 100 words. If the number of words is insufficient, although the scoring standard stipulates that every less than 50 words will be deducted 1 minute. However, the actual situation is that the lack of words is often considered to be thin and difficult to score. If the number of words is limited, it is difficult to score. Moreover, it takes a long time to write a long composition and less time to answer the previous questions, which is bound to be affected. If there is no limit to the maximum number of words, it is generally limited to composition paper, that is, writing in the composition paper grid. Don't flatter yourself, go beyond the writing style, lest you be ungrateful.

6. Writing and Rolling In recent years, in the scoring standard of college entrance examination composition, writing has accounted for a considerable score. Generally speaking, writing does not require good-looking, but requires neatness and legibility, clear strokes and no cursive characters. Punctuation writing should also be standardized, especially the format should be correct, and no period, comma, question mark, exclamation mark, pause or semicolon should appear at the beginning of the line; Quotes, brackets and book titles do not appear at the end of the first half of the line. You can write a word after these symbols. Quotes, brackets and book titles do not appear in the first half of a line, but can be squeezed at the end of the previous line. Ellipsis and dash occupy two spaces and cannot be broken. If you can't write it, it will be squeezed at the end of a line. As for the size of a composition, just like a person's appearance, impression is very important, especially for the college entrance examination composition. Whether the paper is neat or not directly affects the psychology and mood of the marking teacher, and the handwriting is neat and curly.

7. Check and revise the exam composition questions, just like other questions. After writing, you need to check carefully to see if there are any typos, sentences that are not fluent, and contents that need to be adjusted. If you find typos or improper words, you must correct them. If you want to delete a sentence, you should add it. It should be clear and tidy, so that people can know it at a glance. You can't affect the neatness of the paper because of the revision.