My mother is a troubled pianist. When your loyalty is low, elegant melody comes and your eyes turn green immediately.
Mother is a flower concentrated in yellow. When you are lonely and melancholy, look at the green leaves and smell the fragrance, and you will feel comfortable and not lonely.
Mother is a breeze in frustration. When you are frightened and sad, I will wipe away your anxious sweat and tidy up your messy thoughts.
Mother is a crutch in trouble. When you fall, help you find the center of gravity and support a hopeful vilen.
How to improve the literary talent of composition-Use case parallelism is introduced into parallelism
In discussion prose and lyric prose, it is a common method to form parallelism sentences with example sentences. But how to use it properly is really particular.
For example, the following passage is selected from "Life is Different because of Choice" written by a Jilin examinee in 2002, in which the use of positive use cases and negative use cases is just right.
"Zhigao Pu chose money beauty and became a shameless traitor who betrayed his conscience and framed his comrades; Liu Hulan's choice of the hay cutter "The Enemy" is worthy of being a heroine of "great life and glorious death"; The car pushed junior high school student Wang Ping into the river, and the mayor sitting in the car was just a "spectator". His choice killed the students, suspended him from inspection and was put on the moral platform forever; Seeing someone fall into the water, Luo Shengjiao, a volunteer soldier, rushed forward to save him. His choice saved Cui Ying from danger, but he became an internationalist soldier buried in a foreign land. When the Japanese invaders invaded China, the nation was in danger, and "the outside world must be decided first"-Chiang Kai-shek's choice brought a deeper disaster to the ancient old China, and he became a public enemy; It's hard to know at night; Rivers of blood. "Cooperation between countries, for Japanese reunification"-Mao Zedong chose to save people from fire and water and create a new China, and Kyushu sang: He is the great savior of the people. "
In 2002, a candidate in Henan province interpreted the ranking of life height as follows: "Jane Eyre gave up her inferiority complex and chose happiness;" Katyusha gave up depravity and chose rebirth; Angel Clay gave up his self-esteem and chose Tess. Ferdinand gave up wealth and chose love; Paul gave up the hook and chose the capitalist cause; The gadfly gave up his life and chose the revolution. " This passage also uses a small form of contrast to make the article swaying.
The introduction here refers to quoting famous aphorisms and forming parallelism sentences through the introduction.
In 2002, an article quoted a poem and wrote a parallelism sentence: "My heart is still good. Although I died nine times, I have no regrets." This is Qu Yuan's choice; My heart is a magnet, which does not mean that the south will not rest. Is Wen Tianxiang's choice; "Greedy for life and death, do you avoid it because of disaster?" This is Lin Zexu's choice. What they care about and devote themselves to is the national economy and people's livelihood and the great cause of the world. "'the plan of the east window is unwarranted, and the wind and rain are unjust, crying in the daytime.' This is Qin Gui's choice; Although' yours is as deep as the sea' and' mine is as heavy as a mountain'? This is Hong Chengchou's choice; No matter "crying all six armies", he will only "turn one anger into a beauty", which is Wu Sangui's choice. What they pursue and yearn for are high officials and high salaries, and they lead a drunken life. "
It can be seen from this paragraph that the author's basic skills, proper reading and extraordinary memory make this article get full marks.
In the 2002 college entrance examination, "the answer is colorful", and one candidate used parallelism in this way. "Our ancestors also had different views on history: Meng Haoran was careful as silk and sometimes free and easy. He said,' while worldly matters take their turn, ancient and modern, back and forth.' Optimistic and positive, like Li Bai, he is surprisingly negative about history:' All saints and sages in the world are lonely, and only heavy drinkers are famous through the ages.' Du Fu maintained his consistent concern for the country and the people. He sighed and said, "Looking sadly at a thousand autumn days, a rain of tears, melancholy in different times, not at the same time." Actually, why bother? "Here, when the author uses the introductory parallelism sentence, it is not a simple introduction, but it skillfully runs through the evaluation of the ancients and increases its artistic appeal.
Mind-
The mind is a vast sky, which contains everything in the world; The mind is a calm lake, occasionally rippling; The mind is a snowy area, reflecting a colorful world.
Pain-
Pain is groping in the dark, and the road ahead is bumpy; Pain is a kind of sadness that no one understands, and it is helpless in the face of all setbacks; Pain is the deepest torture of the soul, and it cannot be confessed without tears; Pain is a natural expression and a devil in trouble.
Stupid-
Stupidity is a natural helplessness, an acquired laziness, a bad result planted by oneself, and a moth in good fruit.
Lies-
Lies are moths of the mind, eating people beyond recognition; Lies are a deep quagmire in which people can't extricate themselves; Lies are an endless black hole, which makes people fall into the abyss of sin.
Insane-
Insidious, is a wolf in sheep's clothing, doing shady business; Sin is a good enemy and a jealous friend; Insanity is the iceberg of the soul, which makes people feel chill through clarity.
Selfish—
Selfishness is a mirror, in which you can only see yourself forever; Selfishness is a piece of cloth that covers your eyes and can't see the pain of others; Selfishness is a layer of glass, which looks transparent, but always separates each other.
1. love: love is a piece of sunshine shining in winter, which makes people who are poor and sick feel the warmth of the world; Love is the spring in the desert, which makes people on the verge of despair see the hope of life again; Love is a ballad floating in the night sky, which gives spiritual comfort to lonely and helpless people.
2. Beauty: Still life is the beauty of solidification, and moving scenery is the beauty of flow; Straight lines are smooth beauty, while curves are euphemistic beauty; A noisy city is a prosperous beauty, and a quiet country is an elegant beauty. There is beauty everywhere in life, as long as you have a pair of eyes to find beauty and a heart to feel beauty.