There will always be something that touches your heart, makes you happy, makes you passionate, makes you sad and makes you sad. Isn't this a poem?
There are often things in life that make you passionate and touch your heart; There are always things that make you happy in life that touch your heart; In life, there are often things that make you think deeply and touch your heart. Isn't this a poem?
First of all, explain the transformation knowledge points of whole sentences and clauses.
In a word, the sentence pattern is neat and symmetrical, and most of them constitute parallelism and duality, which is called the whole sentence. Its structure is neat, syllables are harmonious, momentum is connected, meaning is clear, and atmosphere is rendered.
Compared with the whole sentence, a loose sentence is a group of sentences with scattered structure and uneven sentence length. Its form is flexible and natural, full of changes and avoids monotony.
Whether to use whole sentences or scattered sentences should be decided according to the needs of expression. Whole sentences and scattered sentences are also interchangeable.
Turning a loose sentence into a complete sentence means turning a long and short sentence into the same sentence pattern, or all of them into long sentences, or all of them into short sentences.
Changing a whole sentence into a scattered sentence means changing "neat" into "scattered". When rewriting, the sentence pattern is changed, and long and short sentences are interspersed to become scattered sentences.
Second, practice. Change the knowledge points of whole sentences and loose sentences
Example 1: Change the underlined sentences in the following text into complete sentences.
There are all kinds of flowers in the world. I have seen elegant peony, noble and elegant chrysanthemum; I have seen graceful daffodils and muddy lotus flowers. I have seen unpretentious wheat flowers and sorghum flowers, and I have also seen glorious hero flowers.
However, in my deep memory, it is such a flower that I will never forget; Not in the spring of March, but in the cold winter; It doesn't bloom in a flowerbed greenhouse, but in the ice and snow. It is not the warm spring breeze that welcomes its birth, but the cold north wind; It is the people's tears and painstaking efforts that nourish its growth, not the spring breeze and autumn dew. This is a flower dedicated to Premier Zhou, an endless flower in Tiananmen Square.
Example 2: Modify the underlined part of the following sentence to form a complete sentence with the sentence before it. You can't change the original intention, but you can change the words appropriately. )
The bud of "experience economy" has quietly appeared in Shanghai, which can provide customers with rich personal experience: rainforest restaurants that can let you experience the feeling of entering the tropical rainforest; ① Sightseeing agriculture in sunqiao town allows you to experience field work; An entertainment shopping center with a collective leisure shopping investment of more than 300 million US dollars will soon appear, and a famous tourist attraction like Victoria Harbour in Hong Kong and Sydney in Australia will soon be built ... All these are wise moves to develop the "experience economy".
Answer 1
Answer 2
Example 1 reference answer: not in the spring of March, but in the cold winter; It doesn't open in the flower bed greenhouse, but it blooms in the ice and snow; It is not the warm spring breeze that welcomes its birth, but the cold north wind; It is not the spring breeze and autumn dew that nourish it, but the tears of the people.
Reference answer: ① Sightseeing agriculture in sunqiao town, Shanghai, can let you experience field work.
② Famous tourist attractions such as Victoria Harbour in Hong Kong and Sydney Harbour in Australia will also be built.
Third, explain the transformation knowledge points of oral sentence patterns and written sentence patterns
Sentence patterns that often appear in spoken language are called spoken sentence patterns. It is short and pithy, with simple structure, few related words, vivid and natural. The sentence patterns that often appear in written language are called written sentence patterns, which use long sentences, have complex structures and use more related words, so they are rigorous and thorough.
In addition, there are obvious differences between spoken sentences and written sentences in terms of words: spoken sentences mostly use easy-to-understand words, while written sentences are mostly composed of elegant and solemn words.
Fourth, practice the transformation of sentence patterns between spoken and written language.
Example 1: According to the language environment, paraphrase the contents of the following written materials in spoken language. (Jiangsu Volume of College Entrance Examination in 2004)
MATERIALS: ① Xu Fan, male, from Nanjing, Jiangsu Province, is a professor at the School of Literature of Oriental University. (2) He is a rising star in China's redology circle, especially in studying the author's life experience. (3) The monographs Cao Xueqin's Family History Examination, On Figures in Grand View Garden and Introduction (④ Excellent Education Book Award) enjoy a high reputation at home and abroad.
Requirements: ① The content is appropriate. ② Appropriate expression. ③ It conforms to the characteristics of spoken language. ④ Write the reported words on the corresponding horizontal lines.
When the school invited Xu Fan to discuss with the students, as a member of the literary society, you introduced to the students:
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Example 1 Reference answer: Key points of transformation: ① Xu Fan should be mentioned, and gender should not be introduced. ② "department" and "rising star" must be transformed into "yes" and "research expert". ③ The author's life experience should be transformed into that of Cao Xueqin or the author of A Dream of Red Mansions, and the content in brackets of "good at" must be transformed into sentence (4).
Fifth, explain the knowledge points of transformation between regular sentences and variant sentences.
Regular sentences are sentences with normal word order. Variant sentences are sentences with inverted sentence components. Common variant sentences are: verb inversion, adverbial postposition, Zhuang preposition and attributive postposition. The purpose of variation is to emphasize something.
For example:
What's the matter with you? (Routine sentence)
What's the matter with you? (verb inversion)
We will discuss and solve this problem in the conference room tomorrow. (Routine sentence)
We will discuss and solve this problem in the conference room tomorrow. (adverbial postposition)
Tomorrow, we will discuss and solve this problem in the conference room. (adverbial preposition)
He beat Xiao Ming in Class Kloc-0, Grade Two. (Routine sentence)
He beat Xiao Ming in Class Kloc-0, Grade Two. (attributive postposition)
Practice the conversion between normal sentences and variant sentences.
Example 1 The following sentence transformation is correct.
As we all know, Li Bai was a great poet in China in the Tang Dynasty.
No one can deny that Li Bai was not a great poet in Tang Dynasty in China.
They deserve a new life that we have never experienced before.
They deserve a new life, which we have never experienced before.
C Against the background of thick clouds, the dam seems to be a big warship moored in the sea, which is even more majestic.
Against the thick clouds, the dam seems to be a big warship moored in the sea, which is even more majestic.
The rain came suddenly and violently.
Change it into an exclamatory sentence: let the rain come more suddenly and violently!
Choose B.
Seven, explain the knowledge points of sentence reorganization
This kind of topic is generally to change the beginning of the sentence or the object of the statement, so that the answer can reorganize the sentence without missing the information of the original sentence.
Eight, practice sentence reorganization
Example 1. Start with Confucianism, Buddhism and Taoism, and reorganize the following sentence without changing the original intention.
Su Shi's life and creation are full of contradictions, because he is influenced by Confucianism, Taoism and Buddhism, and his thoughts are complicated.
Confucianism, Buddhism and Taoism
Confucianism, Taoism and Buddhism all influenced Su Shi, making his thoughts complicated and his life and creation full of contradictions.