Techniques for sublimating the theme at the end of a composition:

The ancients often used "leopard tail" as the standard when talking about the ending, which means that the writing style at the end should be concise, crisp, and clean, as if The leopard's tail sweeps vigorously, loudly and powerfully, leaving readers with room for chewing and aftertaste. Please take a look at the ending tips for getting a perfect score in the recent high school entrance examination.

Technique 1: Echo the beginning and end to highlight the theme

(First) It is said that the ship of life cannot be without ideal sails, and they all say that the ideal of life is for the ideal life, and the ideal The happiest time in life is the flowering season of dreams.

(End) In the flower season, I hope that I can always remember the wise words of the sage: The ship of life cannot be without ideal sails. The ideal of life is for an ideal life.

(Selected from the full-mark essay "Bringing Dreams to the Flower Season" in Hujingzhou High School Entrance Examination)

Technical tips:

Echoing the beginning and the end is the most practical method in the examination composition. One, the general situation is that the author first puts forward the center of the article at the beginning, and then emphasizes it again at the end, echoing the beginning, so that the center of the article is clearly highlighted. You see, in the above example, the author uses the way of echoing the beginning and the end, and highlights the main theme of the article in beautiful poetic language-the happiest time in an ideal life is the flowering season of dreams.

(First) There is a kind of brilliance that envelopes the spiritual home of the Chinese nation: there is a kind of flame that dances on the Olympic Mountains of the national soul: there is a kind of flame that warms the distant feelings of civilization, and that is friendship. !

(End) We cannot lose the confidence to fight against ugliness just because we have been hurt repeatedly, because we need to guard our spiritual fire - kindness!

(Selected from the full score essay "Guarding the Spirit of Fire" in Henan High School Entrance Examination)

Technical tips:

This is the beginning and end of an argumentative essay in the examination room. Compared with the previous example, this example is concise and clear. It puts forward the argument at the beginning and quickly gets to the topic. It repeats it again at the end, echoing the beginning, and strengthening the strength of the argument.

Tip 2: Speak with your heart and call for help

Let us all take action to bring love to others, to those out-of-school children, to those lonely elderly people... To everyone around you. When you dedicate your love to others, you also gain great happiness. Believe that as long as everyone gives a piece of love, the world will become a beautiful world.

(Selected from the full-mark essay "Bringing Love to Others" in Hubei Jingzhou High School Entrance Examination)

In the 21st century, we are the spring of the motherland. We are not our parents. Enthusiasm and unrestrained are Our character, we don’t need to keep those rules, break the rules, let the passion fire in our brains burn more intensely, string together our laughter and love, and let the whole world be enveloped in love. If you want to laugh, laugh heartily. If you want to cry, cry hysterically. Don’t suppress yourself, don’t be bound by old ideas, and don’t change yourself casually. Please remember my famous saying: “I am who I am, give me a little sunshine.” It’s so bright.”

(Selected from the Fujian Provincial High School Entrance Examination Full Score Essay “It’s So Bright with a Little Sunshine”)

The essay in the examination room should pay attention to sincerity of emotion, and you should write your own call for truth, goodness and beauty. , a lashing of falsehood and ugliness. This kind of emotion is not limited to oneself, but can also send out a sincere call at the end of the article, calling on everyone to pursue truth, goodness and beauty together, and to lash out against falsehood and ugliness. The young author's sincere call above is the voice of his heart, expressing his yearning for a better future. In the second paragraph, the young author's words are urgent, full of personality, and his expressions are unabashed. He sends a true call to all his peers, effectively highlights the theme, and deeply shocks the readers.

Tip 3: Ask questions skillfully and lead to deep thought

Natural color, natural fragrance, natural taste, and natural beauty all come from nature. Nature is great. is magical. It is so close to life, so tight. Tasting nature is the same as tasting life, right?

Tips:

A good article should be exhaustive and meaningful, and should be philosophically inspiring. It's like appreciating a beautiful piece of music. Although the music ends, the lingering sound lingers, leaving endless charm. You see, in the above paragraph, the author cleverly asks a question at the end, causing readers to think and deepen the meaning of the article. It reflects the depth and uniqueness of the author's thinking.

Different words have different effects, different angles have different visions, different hazy mirrors have different images, different moods have different actions, different flowers have different fragrances and looks, different The evaluation of children creates different destinies. Why do you need to let your narrow perspective unfairly evaluate and hurt someone? Why do you need to extinguish the candlelight in the wind? Why do you need to let all children become impersonal models carved from the same mold?

(Selected from the Hubei Provincial High School Entrance Examination full-mark essay "Me in the Mirror")

Technical tips:

The end of this paragraph expresses my own feelings about the teacher's comments. Views, first use the form of parallel sentences to explain that each student has his own personality, and the teacher does not need to erase the students' personality, and finally end with a question to inspire people to think and deepen the connotation of the article.

Technique 4: Quote beautiful sentences and make them colorful

“The wild fields are fragrant and fragrant, the beautiful trees are beautiful but dark, the wind and frost are noble, and the water falls and the rocks emerge.” In the past 15 years, Life has taught me to give up! For my ideal and for more people to study, I must give up!

(Selected from the full score essay "Thoughts from the Sky" in Guangzhou High School Entrance Examination)

Thinking of this, I I remember what a famous person said: "There are a lot of books around you. As long as you notice them, you will definitely learn a lot..."

(Excerpted from the Shaanxi High School Entrance Examination Full Score Essay "Reading the People Around You" )

The song "Tomorrow" says: "Tomorrow comes tomorrow, there are so many tomorrows, I am waiting for tomorrow, everything will be in vain..." I hope everyone can seize today and create a better tomorrow.

(Selected from the full score essay "Creating a Better Tomorrow" in Neijiang High School Entrance Examination, Sichuan)

Zola said: "Life - only two and a half minutes, one minute to smile, A minute of sigh, half a minute of love..." In my opinion, when I was intoxicated in admiring my mother's dressing, the smile for that minute was not forced. After that minute of sigh, it was no longer a sigh, but a smile of love. Passing on, my mother integrated her love for life, love for life, and love for relatives into every little thing in her daily life, and I lost my love for it...

(Excerpted from Jilin Province High School Entrance Examination Full Score Essay "Intoxicated" 》)

There are many famous sayings at home and abroad in ancient and modern times. If you can quote them skillfully at the end of your composition, it will definitely make the article more colorful. Here are a few examples of quotes from poems and quotes from famous people, which not only add to the literary grace but also deepen the artistic conception of the article. The effect is very good and students should learn from it. In addition, the scope of quotation can be wider, such as sayings, proverbs, popular lyrics, etc. can be quoted.

Technique 5: Lyrical discussion, extraordinary momentum

In fact, tranquility is that simple. A shallow smile, a thoughtful word, and a heart that can contain everything are enough to make a person happy. The tense faces relaxed, letting smiles bloom gently on people's faces. The smiles were like clouds wandering in the sky, gently dotting the blue sky, fresh and natural.

(Selected from the full score essay "Thoughts from the Sky" in the Guangzhou High School Entrance Examination)

Spring is like the sea, and youth is like flowers. Youth is beautiful, and beautiful youth lies in struggle and hard work. I hope that people all over the world can let their youth bloom with the fragrance of flowers!

(Selected from "In the Mood for Love", a full-mark essay for the Jilin Provincial High School Entrance Examination)

Technical tips:

These two paragraphs come from the heart, out of emotion, and use Parallelism, metaphor, and beautiful words are used to express true inner emotions, coupled with appropriate discussion, making the end of the article powerful and powerful.

Technique 6: Scenery contrast, scene integration

The wind stopped, the rainstorm ended, the sun smiled again, and the glass of two generations was also covered by the setting sun. Melted. The sun gradually faded in the distance and disappeared into the sunset. The two merged into one, without any distance.

(Selected from "Reading in the Rain", a full-mark essay for the Guangzhou High School Entrance Examination)

Technical tips:

The characteristics of this ending are very prominent, and the scenery is also very effective. Obviously, the young author hints at the disappearance of the emotional gap between the two generations through the description of the scene after the rain, and the emotion and scenery are organically combined. Subtle and timeless. Endless aftertaste.

At this moment, a ray of sunlight shines into the ward from the outside, and I feel like a wounded tree bathing in it. Oh, although there are unpredictable situations on the road of growing up, the sunshine is good after all! I think.

(Selected from "Growing Up in the Sun", a full score essay for the high school entrance examination in Xiantao City, Hubei Province)

Technical tips:

This ending highlights the role of sunlight and The combination of sunshine and growth implies that although your growth path is not smooth, it is full of sunshine, expressing an optimistic mood. It not only responds to the theme, but also appears to be deeply emotional.