How should the composition be written to pass? I'm afraid it's difficult for your teacher to come up with an accurate answer to such a question.

Perhaps there is someone who can answer your question. Hechaovsky said that the composition should be written like "Back View".

So what does "Back View" look like? Let's take a look.

I think my back is very handsome.

This is the first paragraph at the beginning of the composition. There are no extra words to embellish it, but it is so shocking to people.

Many times when we write a composition, we fail to grasp the key point. Although the title of the composition is "Jasmine", we have to take a detour to write about roses at the beginning.

It is better to be straight to the point. Sometimes highlighting the key points is more conducive to the success of an essay.

Yes, many people write rose instead of jasmine at the beginning in order to better highlight the characteristics of jasmine. However, you need to understand that your writing skills are not very good in the first place, so why add superfluous information?

Hechowski once said plus what he said.

A successful essay is not persuasive if it is all your own opinions. To impress others with your opinions, you must first quote the words of some famous people, because their words are persuasive. Strength, and then modify it on the basis of famous quotes, a description of a dozen words may be much better than a long paragraph of your own.

In addition, it can also reflect the writer's accumulation of knowledge. Whether a person has read books and how many books he has read can be seen from his conversation and writing.

In other words, just one quote adds a lot to this composition.

Of course there are exceptions, such as the child who usually sits next to me.

When describing a thing, the writing point of view cannot only start from the thing itself. After all, everyone has a common understanding of the back. If you want to reflect the difference in your back, you can only start from the point of view of the thing itself. Starting from the back itself is obviously very difficult.

Therefore, it is necessary to use the writing technique of foil.

What does it mean? The purpose is to write about the difference of your own back. Then write about the difference of other things when facing the back. Under such contrast, you will gain unexpected things. result.

Finally, I can only express it with a little regret: Don’t love me, it won’t work out.

Perhaps for ordinary writers, at the end, they will choose to emphasize their back again, and feel complacent after finishing writing.

In fact, if you really write it like this, no matter how well you write it, the composition will no longer have any appreciation value. If you use this method of emphasis, it is better to write your own throughout the article. The back view is different.

Since you are writing a composition, you naturally cannot end it with an ending, leaving the reader with room for imagination. This is a smart way of writing.

Does it give readers a refreshing feeling by adding the sentence "Don't love me, it won't work out" at the end?

At this time, there is no need for the writer to emphasize the key points of the article, and the readers can understand it on their own.