The beginning of a good composition should be: first simple, second new and third beautiful.

The so-called simplicity means that the beginning should be concise and clear, without being wordy and repetitive. For example:

Everyone has a home, some are happy, some are happy and warm, some are united and harmonious, and some are deserted and lonely. Similarly, I also have a family, but my family is different from other families. My family values ??democracy and loves science. "I Have Such a Family"

If you ask me what kind of family I have, I can answer you in one sentence. I have a family that values ??democracy and loves science.

The content that can be written clearly in just one sentence, but so many long-winded narratives are added at the beginning, making the beginning seem sloppy. Cut out all the nonsense and make it appear straightforward and clean.

The so-called new means that the beginning is unconventional, novel and unique.

The so-called beauty means that the beginning can give people a sense of beauty.

First of all, we can use vivid descriptions, such as:

1. Through the window, I saw the flowers of the locust tree blooming again. It still blooms as white, crystal clear and fragrant. "Locust Tree Flower"

2. Finally, in the dim street lights, the bloated body of Route 51 bus appeared. People who had been waiting for more than an hour in the night began to come alive. "Squeeze the Car"

Secondly, we can use appropriate rhetoric and quoted poetry. Such as:

1. Maternal love is as long-lasting as a long river, as fresh and sweet as a mountain spring. I am also a lucky person who is bathed in the sunshine of maternal love. "Endless Love"

2. "The flowers fall helplessly, and the familiar swallows return." Whenever I think of this poem, I can't help but think of the round face, the flowing and elegant letters, and the distinctive Qian's spoken language. "Good Teacher"

Common ways to start a composition

1. Get straight to the point and go directly to the topic

Don't go around in circles at the beginning, just point to the topic directly. Narratives that focus on people can directly describe the characters or directly introduce the characters through a brief introduction to the characters; narratives that focus on narratives can point out the time, place and related background of the event at the beginning. Such as:

1. The days are getting lighter and lighter, and the sky is getting higher and higher. Summer is coming... "Summer"

A few crosses vividly express the characteristics of summer, going straight to the theme and fascinating.

2. Outside the window, rain hits the plantains; inside the curtain, a lamp looks like a bean. Sip a cup of tea, hold a good book, and spend a quiet night alone. "Rainy Night"

It begins with only two sentences, concise and to the point yet full of charm.

3． Wang Jing was my class monitor when I was in the second grade of junior high school. Although we have been separated for more than a year, the anecdotes of the class monitor are still vivid in my mind and unforgettable. "There is such a good squad leader"

2. Description and rendering, showing literary style

Start by describing the scenery and people, exaggerating the atmosphere, so as to set off the characters and unfold the story. Such as:

1. During the blooming season, the fragrance is everywhere, but I have no intention of watching it because at this time I lost my classmate and friend Qiang. "Classmates"

2. The summer night is very deep. Occasionally, the sound of frogs in the water and the sound of cicadas on the trees can be heard, and the breeze blows, bringing a hint of coolness. I couldn't sleep for a long time. Quite by chance, my debut novel was published in the newspaper. I was so happy that I forgot everything else. I became extremely arrogant. It wasn't until tonight that I realized that I seemed to be missing something. "Confession"

3. Parallelism and metaphors are used in the title, and the literary talent is outstanding (this method is often used in topic compositions)

The combination of parallelism and metaphor can increase the momentum of the article, make it catchy, and make the article more popular. Full of rhythm and phonological beauty. Used to describe things, it can create colorful scenes; used to narrate, it can be hearty; used to reason, it can be majestic; used to debate, it can overwhelm mountains and seas; used to express emotions, it can be overwhelming.

1． If I could pick up a handful of moonlight, I would choose the softest one; if I could pick the red leaves of Xiangshan Mountain, I would choose the most gorgeous one; if I could pick the stars in the sky, I would choose the brightest one. Maybe you will say that my choice is not the best, but my choice is what I like.

("My Choice, I Like")

2. What is happiness? Happiness is the joy on the faces of the fruit growers in the orchard as they look at the branches covered with fruits; happiness is the touching smiling faces of the students in the classroom looking forward to the future; happiness is the unfurling brows of the scientists in the laboratory who have made new discoveries... Happiness is the crystallization of struggle. , the monument of hard work "What is happiness?"

4. The opening of the dialogue is fascinating

The advantage of this form is: you can hear the person before you see him.

My mother’s nagging is the music I hear every day.

In the early morning, when the "ding" of the alarm clock has not yet sounded. My mother started nagging: "Are you up? Why aren't the lights on yet? If you stay in bed again, you will be late." "Wash your face with hot water," "Be folded, and don't be lazy." She nags her tirelessly every day. So, even with my eyes closed, I had to turn on the light first and muster up the energy to answer my mother's nagging. Even if I can't get up, I have to take the time to get dressed even if I'm just lying in bed. Mom’s nagging is so annoying! But think about it carefully, without these nagging, how could I say goodbye to the sweet dreamland on time? ... "Mom's Nagging"

5. Present examples and address topics cleverly (this method is commonly used in topic compositions)

Choice is difficult, not to mention the choice of the soul. Gao Jianli chose to die for Jing Ke; Ma Benzhai's mother chose to sacrifice for the revolution; Zhu Yingtai chose to transform into a butterfly for true love. In the choice between friendship, family and love, this is what they did - ("Between Life and Death")

6. Symmetrical opening, neat and bright

In Die's In the eyes of the flower, the flower is an angel, because the flower gives her the nectar of life; in the flower's eyes, the bee is a close friend, because the bee gives her the continuation of life. ("Dedication")

7. Use famous poems and lines to highlight the background!

"Continuous cutting and confusion are the sorrow of separation, especially the feeling in the heart", this This is Li Qingzhao’s sentiments; “There is no way to be ecstatic, the west wind blows behind the curtains, and people are thinner than yellow flowers.” This is Li Qingzhao’s feeling; “Gently I left, just as I came gently, I waved my hand gently, "Farewell to the clouds in the western sky", this is Xu Zhimo's reluctance; "People have joys and sorrows, and the moon waxes and wanes. This is difficult to do in ancient times." This is Su Dongpo's magnanimity... ("Beautiful Farewell")

8. Lyrical discussion, emotional introduction

Use a few brief comments and affectionate words to start the article, either to impress the readers, or to point out the main idea and lead to the following. Such as:

1. Whenever night falls, the floating clouds in the western sky will tug at the wings of my heart, leading my chaotic thoughts to fly to that vast and distant place to find my father...

Dad, can you see me? You are alone, floating in heaven, can you take care of yourself? My sister, brother and I are all fine now. It is just my mother who is in trouble at home. "Dad, I say to you..."

The author's true confession brings readers into the author's emotional world, creating a sad and sad atmosphere for the article. Let the readers follow the author's thoughts and taste the hardships, strength and loneliness of the mother after losing her father. The feelings are sincere and tear-jerking.

2. Grandpa, you are my favorite relative. My childhood was spent with you. It was you who held my hand and taught me how to walk; it was you who made me understand a lot of truths since I was a child. Grandpa, you were the crutch for my childhood growth. "Grandpa"

9. Setting up suspense and attracting readers

Setting up suspense is a way to start the story by deliberately leaving doubts in order to stimulate readers' psychological expectations. Setting up suspense at the beginning can catch the reader's heart, inspire people to think, and have a fascinating effect. Such as:

1. I think I will never forget that day, that warm smile on that misty and rainy day... "That Rain, That Smile"

What is so special about that rain, that day, and that smile? It has strong appeal and appeal.

2. The wall clock walked calmly and rhythmically, "tick tock, tick tock..." It's almost 4 o'clock, why hasn't mom come back yet? "Worry"

ten. Use inscriptions skillfully to reveal the theme

Set up a meaningful inscription, which can often produce unexpected results. The inscription plays an important role in outlining the article. It is concise, meaningful, philosophical or literary. It makes people feel like eating sweet fruits and drinking from cool springs. For example:

1. Standing on the coast of history, the long journey Tracing the historical ditches one after another: Dr. Chu meditated by the riverside and never regretted his death; Emperor Wu of Wei raised his whip to the east and was full of ambition; Tao Yuanming leisurely roamed Nanshan, drank wine and picked chrysanthemums... They chose eternity, even if they were flattered, falsely accused and looked down upon, they would not follow its flow. To make waves, this is a persistent choice; even if the body is wrapped in horse leather and the soul is lost in the smoke, there will be no regrets, this is a heroic choice; even if one is in poverty and cannot have enough to eat all day long, one is willing to enjoy himself and work hard to cultivate the long acres, this is An elegant choice. In a choice, the emperor will achieve his unparalleled achievements, and the migration of wise men will achieve their eternal legacy.

2. In the full moonlight, I drink a cup of the clearest; in the afterglow, I embrace a wisp of the warmest; in the scorching red leaves, I pick up a piece of the hottest; in the luxuriant grass, I pick a bouquet of the most brilliant; in the long life, I want to pick it up The most important thing in the world - perseverance.

3． The Russian writer Chekhov said: "There are big dogs and there are small dogs. Small dogs should not be flustered by the presence of big dogs. All dogs should bark, and let each one use the voice given to him by God. People are the most important thing. The most important thing is to value yourself.

4. Her name is Wang Qianqian, and she was the monitor when I was in the second grade of junior high school. Although we have been apart for more than a year, the anecdotes of the monitor are still vivid in my mind and unforgettable. "There is such a good monitor")

5. The morning sun comes out, and the lake dresses it; the new moon comes up, and the stars accompany it; the spring flowers bloom, and the green leaves set it off; the birds sing , the cricket plays the piano for it... Everything in the world is telling us the story of love ("Love Forever")

6. "Mother, you are the lotus leaf, and I am the red lotus. The raindrops in my heart are coming. Apart from you, who is the shade of my unobstructed sky? "Whenever I read the words of old man Bing Xin praising my mother, I can't help but think of my short and thin mother who shouldered the burden of the whole family's life alone. ("Mother's Love is Boundless")

Technique 1 : echoing from beginning to end, highlighting the main idea (this ending method is suitable for articles about people, events, and scenery.)

(First) It is said that the ship of life cannot be without ideal sails, and it is said that the sails of life are Ideal is for ideal life, and the happiest time in ideal life is the flowering season of dreams.

(End) In the flowering season, I hope I can always remember the wise words of the sage: The boat of life cannot be without ideal sails. The ideal of life is for the ideal life. (Selected from the Hujingzhou High School Entrance Examination Full Score Essay "Bringing Dreams to the Flower Season")

The echo between the beginning and the end is the most practical in the examination essay. One method is generally that the author first puts forward the center of the article at the beginning, and then emphasizes it again at the end, echoing the beginning, so that the center of the article is clearly highlighted. You see, in the above example, the author uses the method of echoing the beginning and the end. The main theme of the article is highlighted in beautiful poetic language - the happiest time in an ideal life is the flowering season of dreams.

Skill 2: Speak as the voice of the heart and call out.

Let us all take action and bring love to others, to those children who are out of school, to those lonely elderly people... and to everyone around you. When you give love to others, you will also gain great things. Happiness. We must believe that as long as everyone gives a piece of love, the world will become a beautiful world (selected from the Hubei Jingzhou High School Entrance Examination Full Score Essay "Bringing Love to Others")

Twenty-one. Century, we are the spring of our motherland, and enthusiasm is our character. We don’t need to abide by those rules. If you want to laugh, just laugh hard, if you want to cry, just cry hysterically. Don’t suppress yourself, and don’t let the old ideas constrain you. , don't change yourself casually, please remember my famous saying: "I am who I am, give me a little sunshine and it will be so bright."

"(Selected from the full-mark essay "Give a little sunshine, it will be so bright" in the Fujian Provincial High School Entrance Examination)

The essay in the examination room pays attention to sincere emotions. You must write your own call for truth, goodness and beauty, and lash out against the false, ugly and evil. This kind of emotion is not only Limiting yourself to yourself, you can also issue a sincere call at the end of the article, calling on everyone to pursue truth, goodness and beauty, and to fight against falsehood and ugliness. The above little author’s true call is the voice of his heart and expresses his yearning for a better future. The young author's words are urgent, full of personality, and his expressions are unabashed. He sends a true call to all his peers, effectively highlights the theme, and deeply shocks the readers' hearts.

Technique 3: Ask questions skillfully and make people think deeply

Natural color, natural fragrance, natural taste, and natural beauty all come from nature. It is so magical. So close, so tight. Isn’t savoring nature the same as savoring life?

A good article should be full of meaning and philosophically enlightening. The music ends but lingers, leaving endless charm. You see, in the above paragraph, the author cleverly asks questions at the end, which makes the readers think and deepens the meaning of the article. Character and uniqueness.

Different words have different effects, different angles have different visions, different fun mirrors have different images, different flowers have different fragrances and looks, and different evaluations create children. Different fates. Why let your narrow perspective unfairly judge someone and hurt someone? Why extinguish the candle in the wind? Why let all children become impersonal models carved out of a mold? From the Hubei Provincial High School Entrance Examination full-mark essay "Me in the Mirror")

The end of this paragraph expresses his own views on the teacher's comments. First, he uses a parallel sentence to explain that every student has his own personality. Teacher There is no need to destroy the students' personality, and end with a question to inspire people to think and deepen the connotation of the article.

Technique 4: Use colorful quotations.

"Ye Fang." "The hair is fragrant, the beautiful trees are beautiful but dense, the wind and frost are noble, and the water falls and the rocks emerge." Over the past 15 years, life has taught me to give up! For my ideals and for more people to study, I must give up! (Selected from Guangzhou High School Entrance Examination's full score essay "Thoughts from the Sky")

The song of tomorrow says: "Tomorrow comes tomorrow, there are so many tomorrows, I live to wait for tomorrow, everything will be wasted..." I hope everyone can seize today and create Create a better tomorrow (selected from the full score essay "Create a Better Tomorrow" from Neijiang High School Entrance Examination in Sichuan)

There are many famous quotes at all times and in all countries. If you can quote them skillfully at the end of the essay, it will definitely add color to the article. Many. Here are a few examples of quotations from poems and famous sayings, which not only add to the literary grace but also deepen the artistic conception of the article. The effect is very good. Students should learn from it. In addition, the scope of quotation can be larger, such as common sayings, Proverbs, popular lyrics, etc. can be quoted.

Technique 5: Lyrical discussion and clarifying the topic

Explain what you feel in simple and clear words. Any lyrical discussion is acceptable.

In fact, tranquility is that simple. A shallow smile, a thoughtful word, and a heart that can contain everything are enough to relax a tense face and put a smile on people's faces. Opening gently, the smile is like the clouds wandering in the horizon, gently dotting the blue sky, fresh and natural, (selected from the full score essay "Thoughts from the Sky" in Guangzhou High School Entrance Examination)

Spring is like the sea, youth is like flowers. Youth is beautiful, and beautiful youth lies in struggle and hard work. I hope that people all over the world can let their youth bloom with the fragrance of flowers! (Selected from "In the Mood for Love", a full-mark essay for the Jilin Provincial High School Entrance Examination)

These two paragraphs are written from the heart and out of emotion. They use parallelism and metaphor to express the true inner emotions in beautiful words, and are accompanied by Appropriate discussion makes the end of the article powerful and powerful.

Technique 6: Scenery contrast, scene integration

The wind stopped, the rainstorm ended, the sun smiled again, and the glass of two generations was also covered by the setting sun. Melted.

The sun gradually faded in the distance and disappeared into the sunset. The two merged into one, without any distance. (Selected from "Reading in the Rain", a full-mark essay for the Guangzhou High School Entrance Examination)

The characteristics of the ending of this paragraph are very prominent, and the role of scenery is also obvious. The author hints at the relationship between the two generations through the description of the scenery after the rain. The emotional barrier disappears, and emotions and scenes are organically combined. Subtle and timeless. Endless aftertaste.

At this moment, a ray of sunlight shines into the ward from the outside, and I feel like a wounded tree bathing in it. Oh, although there are unpredictable circumstances on the road to growth, the sunshine is good after all! I think. (Selected from "Growing Up in the Sun", a full score essay for the high school entrance examination in Xiantao City, Hubei Province)

The ending of this paragraph highlights the role of sunshine, combines sunshine with growth, and implies that although your growth path is not smooth, it is full of sunshine. , expressing an optimistic mood. It not only responds to the theme, but also appears to be deeply emotional.

Technique 7: Implicit and thought-provoking

This is a technique that is opposite to the direct expression of one's own thoughts, that is, the meaning is not stated clearly but is contained in the described image. Leave plenty of room for imagination for readers. For example, "Two Dandelion Seeds" is:

The new seeds bred by the second seed are mature. It looks at the children leaving one after another, and suddenly thinks of the seed boss: "Where is my brother?" Did it also fall on the grassland like me and give birth to so many children so quickly?"

Here are the "children who left me one after another" "It also fell on the grassland like me, so? "I soon gave birth to so many children." The first is the implicit topic "position and value"; the second is the implicit theme: a person's life destiny and life value will be different depending on his position.

Tip 8: Draw close-ups to enhance feelings

This is to skillfully capture the character’s momentary expression and make a striking outline, allowing readers to get a glimpse of the character’s richness, complexity and subtlety. 's inner world. Anhui candidate's masterpiece ""What?" - "That's it!"":

"Ring, ring, ring..." "What? The exam is over?" I said in surprise. On second thought: "Yes, that's how it should be!"

Here, "I was surprised" and "On second thought" and other sentences not only hint at the topic, but also vividly convey the suddenness of the rigorous candidates at the end of the exam. The expression when hearing the bell is vividly depicted, making people feel like seeing the person, hearing the sound, and being there.

The beautiful four seasons are like beautiful postcards, turning page by page. I grew up quietly like this, growing up happily in the embrace of nature. Just like the lotus in front of the door, it blooms with the true nature of life.

This article follows the order of time, adopts the form of fragment composition, and depicts a picture of the four seasons of nature to us in a fresh and elegant style. The ending closely follows the changes of the years, writing about one's own growth, and smooth Naturally summarizes the full text.

2. Echo the beginning and the end. The beginning and end echo each other, which can better highlight the center and make the structure compact and integrated. For example, the Anhui volume's full score essay "Start with Moves":

At the beginning, because we are moved, the brilliance and color of life can be appreciated by us; because we are moved, the rhythm and power of life will give us hope; because we are moved, Only the deep beauty of everything can be touched and appreciated by us. So, set out with emotion, and use emotion to enrich a brilliant life.

We are not afraid of the dangers and ups and downs at the end; we still move forward with our heads high in the wind, sand and snow. This is because moving prepares the richest food for our hearts. Set off with emotion and let the course of life always move towards a beautiful distance. Set off with emotion, and let the hard and long life be filled with happiness and hope because of emotion!

The first paragraph uses parallel sentence patterns to interpret the touching connotation. The ending echoes the beginning, deepening the theme.

3. The death chapter shows the ambition. It is to use concise language to express the theme idea clearly at the end of the article, or to clearly explain the author's writing intention, which is often called "the finishing touch".

For example, the National Volume I Excellent Composition "Life Is Above All":

Life is too precious. Heshibi cannot compare with its roundness, gold cannot compare with its luster, and diamonds cannot compare with its beauty. Its purity is nothing compared to its tenacity. It is irreplaceable, it is above all else. This was the most alarming realization brought about by the earthquake, and it made me pay attention to life again. I only hope that every life can show its full glory under the oath that transcends everything. Life is above all else, love it and pay attention to it.

The rhetorical techniques of contrast and parallelism are used here to express the preciousness of life and point out the theme that "life is above all else" and that we should "love life and pay attention to life".

4. Use good quotes. Ending with poetic sayings or famous aphorisms can not only increase the cultural connotation of the article, but also deepen the theme, giving the expression effect of "endless words but endless meaning". For example, Jiangsu's high-scoring essay "Curiosity":

There is a saying in "Hamlet": "I am in a nutshell, and I think I am the king of the infinite universe." Perhaps, it is because of the reality With "curiosity", we can make such a cry with a more powerful voice. What's more, because of curiosity, our world is much broader than a nut shell.

At the end, the words of Shakespeare's characters are quoted, and the philosophy is explained, stimulating the readers' imagination and thinking.

5. Blending of scenes. The combination of scene description and lyricism shows readers a beautiful picture full of poetry and painting, which not only expresses the author's feelings well, but also easily arouses readers' emotions, arouses excitement, and has a strong artistic appeal. . For example, the full score composition of Shandong Juan "Flowers Blooming on the Mosque in March":

When the first breeze of spring blows across the field, the grass pokes out its green head; when the first sunshine of spring shines At that time, the ice and snow melted and the creek gurgled; when the first new thunder sounded, the flowers bloomed on the road in March. It is optimism, indifference, calmness, and the wonderful fragrance of flowers that goes with the flow.

The author mobilizes the readers' senses with fresh and natural brushwork, depicts a spring-filled picture, and generates discussions, blending emotion and reason.

6. Ask questions. The ending is not written according to the general order of development of things or the reader's psychological expectations, but is unexpected and reasonable, just like Maupassant's "The Necklace", which is endlessly memorable; or in the form of a question , raise questions, deepen the theme, and stimulate thinking. For example, the full score essay "The Great Principle of the Small Cup" in the Beijing Exam:

The "scientific outlook on development" reflected in the small cup is not worthy of human reflection on the major issues of industrial and agricultural development, environmental protection, and urban expansion. ? Why are the roads getting wider and wider but the traffic getting more and more congested? Why are high-rise communities getting denser and denser while people’s spiritual homes become increasingly empty? Why is the water quality of Taihu Lake and Chaohu Lake becoming more and more polluted in today's technologically advanced world? Facts have proved that "development" cannot ignore ecological balance and follow scientific laws to unleash the potential of material properties. Otherwise, it will achieve half the result with half the effort, and even be "punished by civilization."

The candidates generated many associations from an empty cup, and finally connected it with social reality, raised questions, and asked and answered themselves, which made the facts logical and enhanced the practical significance of the article.

As the saying goes, "There is no fixed rule for writing", but there are still some rules that can be followed in writing. As long as the candidates carefully study and strengthen training, practice will naturally make them perfect and their writing will become more beautiful. The ancients said: "The conclusion should be like ringing a bell, with more than enough clear sound." I hope that the candidates can write rich content, withstand chewing and inspire readers to think and think