1, evaluation method
At the end of the narrative, there is often a short comment or a comment at the end of the article. For example, Cang Kejia's "Mr. Wen Yiduo's example" has such an ending: Mr. Wen Yiduo is an outstanding scholar, an outstanding poet full of enthusiasm and a brave revolutionary martyr. He has a big mouth. He is of high standard. For example, at the end of Mark Twain's campaign for governor: "Your loyal friend, Mark Twain, used to be a decent man, but now he has become a perjury, thief, corpse thief, alcoholic madman and fraud expert."
Such as "Haicheng": the real Haicheng is not anywhere else, but the Miaodao Islands.
For example, the "Forward" written by Luo Guangbin, Liu Debin and Yang Yijing ended like this: "Revolutionary comrades defeated the enemy with incomparable wit and saved the party organization." This ending explains the ending of the story.
2. Appropriate methods
The article always runs through one thing and ends with it. For example, Jiang's "Red Army Shoes": "Fortunately, except for a hole made by a bullet, nothing else was broken. I quickly took it off, knocked off the mud and hung it on my waist. " This ending takes the Red Army shoes running through the article as the end of the story.
3. Lyric method
At the end of the article, the author writes his own hopes and inner feelings directly and unabashedly.
For example, Bi Ye's "Scenery of Tianshan Mountain" ends like this: "My friend, the rich scenery of Tianshan Mountain does not stop there. Tianshan stretches for thousands of miles, and there are wonders everywhere, regardless of mountains, deep valleys, grasslands, forests, streams and lakes. If you ask me, I'll say you can't finish it.
If one day you are passionate about visiting Tianshan Mountain, don't forget to let me know before you leave. Maybe I can be a bad guide for you. But being a tour guide is just a beautiful excuse for me. In fact, I really want to find a chance to visit Tianshan again. "This ending expresses the author's hope.
Some are lyrical and argumentative. Ending an article with lyrical comments can express the emotions in the author's heart, arouse the emotional waves of readers and arouse their voices, which has a strong artistic appeal.
For example, the end of Silent Fatherly Love reads: Today, in the examination room, a child is writing a silent fatherly love, and his heart is full of gratitude and pride. My father, his feelings are like delicate autumn rain and soft spring breeze, with no ups and downs, but indifference and silence. Silent fatherly love-I am very grateful.
Some also expressed deep nostalgia, leaving people with endless thoughts. For example, Ji Fang's "Between Waves" expresses this feeling at the end: For more than ten years, the scene of seeing off at Yan 'an Airport has often appeared in front of us.
The chairman stood in the hatch of the plane, looked at the crowd with firm eyes, held the dark gray helmet in his broad palm, lifted it slowly, lifted it, and then stopped in the air with a wave of his hand ... In front of him, countless soldiers were marching bravely in the direction he pointed out.
Some attract readers. For example, Lu Xun's Diary of a Madman: Are there still children who don't eat people? Save the children ...
4. Landscape drawing method
At the end of the description of characters or scenery, it is often simple to render a dull, sad, bright or hazy artistic conception, showing a poetic feeling. For example, Du Pengcheng's Night Walk in Lingguan Gorge: The wind is stronger. The snow is getting heavier and heavier.
For example, "We must cross this hurdle": When I came home, my landlady came to hold my hand and I helped her cross the threshold. She hugged me trembling and struggled out. She said she would come next time with a strong accent. I nodded and stared at her little feet. The car is drifting away. I turned around and looked at the old woman leaning against the door. When the sun sets, the door is yellow, but it doesn't shine on her lost years.
For example, "Step and Life": There are cheerful songs floating in the maple forest. I looked back at the original door, flashing blue light. I went up without hesitation to meet the golden life I expected!
For example, Dinner on the Grass: Sunset makes the grassland more splendid. Commander-in-chief's steady body, like a pine tree, is more majestic under the sunshine.
5. Summary method
At the end of the article, the contents of the full text are summarized, and some of them also summarize the central idea of the full text, which is also called the method of making the finishing point and showing great achievements.
For example, at the end of Ma Shitu's "Notes on Flood Relief in Sichuan", the party, government, army and people in Sichuan, in this flood relief, in the overall battle with nature, in order to save national materials and people's lives and property, they forgot their own self-interest, their own country, their own homes and their own personal safety, and made great achievements.
Sometimes famous sayings, epigrams or poems can be used to summarize the whole text, so that the ending is concise and clear, which plays the role of making the finishing point.
(Composition material: The story of Cong Fei. Title "Falling Red"): A flower is like this, needless to say to people. I remember two poems written very well-"Falling red is not a heartless thing, but turning into spring mud protects flowers more."
For example, "Pear Blossoms on the Post Road": When I look at these energetic Hani girls and the white pears, I can't help but think of a poem: "Pears on the Post Road are everywhere". Euphemism is implicit and touches the subject.
At the end of some narratives, readers should be reminded to understand the theme of the article at the same time, but the author does not express it directly in the way of logical thinking, but implies it in the way of metaphor, symbol, etc., leaving readers room for imagination, allowing readers to think and experience, resulting in endless effects.
Such as the title "Season": wisdom in winter, love in winter, sharpness in winter ... This season is very long, and the affection given this season is continuous. ...
Such as the title "A faint smile without trace": Time flies, how many such determined women disappear by the West Lake, how many beautiful first encounters are sealed, and how many gloomy loneliness are buried.
When the halo of dawn dispels the water vapor by the West Lake, when the chaotic morning glow disappears among the hipsters again, and when everything is exposed to the sun, there are no so-called singers and pedestrians. She is no longer a singer by the lake, but a nun in Gushan Temple. She no longer has that proud talent, and she is no longer the ornament of any life. Smile without trace, leaving only faint loneliness. ...
6. Reference method
At the end of the article, in order to echo before and after, the center is clear, the clues are clear and the structure is compact, we often take care of the previous article. Take care of the topic, the beginning, the clue and the protagonist.
Like the dead soul of Nikolai Nikolai Gogol. At the end, I got the protagonist: This is the kind of person standing in front of Chichikov now!
For example, at the end of the chameleon, the care begins: "I will punish you sooner or later!" " Ralph threatened him, wrapped his coat tightly, and then crossed the market square.
The ending echoes the beginning, and writing a sentence that echoes the beginning rather than simply repeating it is a very common ending method for all kinds of articles. This method can arouse readers' psychological aesthetic feeling and produce a sense of echo and integration from beginning to end.
Another example is (the topic "Time will not corrupt memory" and the topic "When memory flows through Auschwitz")
At first, when the wheel of history ran over Auschwitz, I heard men's roars and women's screams, and I saw mothers' cries and children's fears. Today, Auschwitz's sky is blue and transparent, and rows of towering buildings go straight into the sky, which seems to break the tranquility here.
At the end of the day, Auschwitz's alarm bell rang; On that day, the Jews burst into tears; On that day, memories flowed through this peaceful world; On that day, peace condemned extreme utilitarianism and hypocritical war. The bell of victory will resound through the chest of the peacemaker.
Time can never stand the suffering of Auschwitz in the depths of memory! Another example is (the topic "Time will not corrode memory" and the topic "Straw rope in mother's hand"). Just last night, I stretched out my hand and touched the straw rope under my pillow, and my chest was covered with blood. ...
Finally, I grew up in your hands, from grass to a rope like straw. Your hand has accompanied me through night after night, and time will never stop blowing the straw rope in your hand, not to mention Shuang Yi's trembling hand. ...
The conclusion of the article is related to the echo of the topic. For example, Lao She used this technique at the end of Winter in Jinan. Please see: ... this crystal is covered with red roofs and yellow grass hills, just like the small gray shadows of flowers on the carpet. This is Jinan in winter.