Example of real question
Materials:
1, Hu Jianhua, a cardiologist in Enshi People's Hospital, has been a doctor for more than 20 years. He never accepts red envelopes from patients. After the operation, he will quietly transfer the money to the patient's in-patient medical account, and then give the invoice to the patient when the patient leaves the hospital. He is called "Doctor of Conscience". "The patient is sick, and it is understandable to ask for peace of mind, so I will temporarily accept the red envelope that I can't take off in person and then deposit it in the patient's hospitalization account." Hu Jianhua told reporters, "This will not only dispel patients' doubts, but also let them treat their diseases with peace of mind without violating our professional ethics."
"Dr. Hu is not only good at medical skills, but also more admirable in medical ethics!" Some patients praised him in the guest book.
Some people say that winning respect is more important than success in a person's life, and the key to winning respect is to stick to conscience.
Answer the request:
Please combine the above materials and write an argumentative essay of about 800 words around "sticking to conscience".
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First, the turning point begins.
Our common related words are "but, but, but, but, in fact, in fact" and so on. As we all know, the content guided by turning related words has opposite meanings, and problems usually appear after turning. It is a language expression habit, and at the same time, turning the beginning is also a common and simple way of writing in material composition writing.
The general writing structure is: write the theme (meaning/achievement) first+turning words+theme questions+harm+put forward general arguments.
Example 1:
Conscience is like a compass, a morning star, which guides us to avoid evil and do good, and finally grows into a qualified citizen. Sticking to conscience will thaw the cold mind and form a good atmosphere in society, which is of great benefit to social harmony and stability. But unfortunately, living in an impetuous material age, we constantly pursue interests, but ignore the persistence of conscience. From the proliferation of fake and shoddy goods to frequent food safety problems, from the terrible wounds of vaccines to the increasingly severe crisis of social trust ... It is really lamentable that conscience is so pale and powerless in the face of interests. Only by sticking to conscience and holding high the banner of justice can we sow the seeds of hope and dispel the moral haze.
Example 2:
Sticking to conscience is the key to win respect, the requirement of professional ethics and the guarantee (significance) of governing the country by virtue. However, with the rapid development of society, people are becoming more and more impetuous and unscrupulous in the environment of material desire expansion. From the proliferation of fake and shoddy goods to frequent food safety problems, from the horrible vaccine to the increasingly severe crisis of social trust ... It is really regrettable that conscience is so pale and powerless in the face of interests. Is it necessary to go with the flow under the temptation of interests? No, we should stick to our conscience and rebuild our moral homeland.
Example 3:
Guo Moruo once said: "The saddest thing for a person is the death of conscience, and the saddest phenomenon in a society is the death of righteousness." It can be seen that having a conscience is the basic condition for human beings to live in the world. If conscience dies in a person's heart, then his life will lose its meaning and will eventually be spurned (importance). However, with the rapid development of society, people are becoming more and more impetuous and unscrupulous in the environment of material desire expansion. From the proliferation of fake and shoddy goods, to frequent food safety problems, to the terrible wounds of vaccines ... It is really regrettable that conscience is so pale and powerless in front of interests. The lack of conscience has become a stumbling block to moral construction in China. So we must stick to our conscience and rebuild our moral homeland (general debate).
Second, explain the significance of the theme+the importance of the theme (or problem+harm)+put forward opinions.
The general expression structure is: the theme of XX refers to XX, if not, it is XX, and the general argument is put forward.
Example:
The so-called conscience is the innate ability to judge right and wrong, good and evil. This is a human gift, and it is learned in life without learning. It is a kind of consciousness, a kind of social morality, the foundation of life and the bottom line (explanation) of social morality. If there is a lack of conscience, officials may be corrupt; Doctors may accept red envelopes to avoid losing everything; Businessmen may cheat and seek profits. In this way, the country may fall into the quagmire of "moral decay" (problems and harm). Therefore, adhering to conscience is the fundamental guarantee for individuals to win respect, social harmony and stability, and national morality.
Third, skillfully use rhetoric to increase literary talent.
Rhetorical devices such as epigrams (such as the first sentence of Example 3), parallelism (such as from ... to ...) and metaphor (such as 1 the first sentence) can be used in the writing process.
(1) Parallelism: A sentence consisting of three or more phrases or sentences with similar meanings, the same structure or the same tone.
1, phenomenon (grade/problem) parallelism:
Structure 1: from a phenomenon to b phenomenon+from c phenomenon to d phenomenon+from e phenomenon to f phenomenon.
Structure 2: From …, to …, and then to …
Structure 3: whether ... or ... or ...
2, meaning parallelism:
Structure 1: XX is XX's compass/morning star/navigator//cornerstone/cornerstone//key//lifeline/safeguard/safeguard line/engine/new engine/power/driving force/booster/engine//bottom line/bottom net/umbrella/firewall/incubator/culture medium//source running water//panacea.
Structure 2: XX is beneficial to XX: beneficial to XX: beneficial to XX.
(2) Metaphor: To describe or illustrate something with another thing similar to something.
Structure: XX resembles/resembles/resembles/resembles XX.
(3) Famous sayings and epigrams: famous sayings or slang to enhance persuasiveness.
The saddest thing for a person is the death of conscience, and the saddest phenomenon in a society is the death of righteousness; Conscience is the right temple for God as the sole judge. Conscience is more rare than genius; People who lose their conscience are like clay bodhisattvas, with empty shelves; Life is what I want; Justice is what I want. You can't have both, and you have to sacrifice your life for righteousness.