We are all just ordinary people, sometimes even mediocre. Life is connected by trivial details, not as sensational as the plot in the soap opera at eight o'clock, but with more real and touching details than the TV series.
Meng Jiao wrote down the details of "She sewed carefully, she made up thoroughly, and she was afraid that the delay would make him go home late", which made countless wanderers cry; Wang Wei wrote down the details of "advising you to drink more wine, there is no reason for people to leave Yangguan in the west", which made countless pedestrians sigh; Su Shi wrote down the details of "Xiao Xuan window, dressing", which made fans all over the world lament. Just details, not just details, it contains the deep feeling behind the details themselves.
Often moved by Rembrandt's Jewish bride, the couple wore beautiful clothes and looked gloomy and restrained. In the dark background, two people snuggled up to each other, without looking at each other, without ups and downs, only holding hands, as if in a casual moment, they caught the painter's heart and left it on the canvas. Even after hundreds of years, they still depend on each other silently, and this feeling will never change.
For the viewer, no matter how gorgeous the clothes are, it is their deep affection, the life course that they have walked through each other and will continue to walk, and the promise of "holding your hand and growing old with your son". This is such a cool and affectionate detail.
The same affection is often found in life, including a cup of hot tea and a knitted sweater presented by my mother to my father; There is a hot water bottle filled by my father and a basin of washing water poured by my mother; And they prepared three meals a day for me, and I patted them on the back.
We can't expect life to be great, we just want to make the details better. "In a word, the love of a lifetime", the lyrics sometimes reveal the truth of life so easily. True warmth is only silently transmitted in the details; People who really love you will only show their love in the details. Just like mother, father, teacher, friend and lover.
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This is an exam composition, and I got 57 points. The author firmly grasps the word "ordinary" to write details, so that the details that are often ignored by us in life can enter our field of vision one by one and show the feelings behind the details. And through ancient poetry and Rembrandt's paintings, further highlight the details, so that a drop of water fully reflects the brilliance of the sun. The full text is fluent, the sentence is beautiful and the meaning is endless.
[Example 2]
Anatomical details
Hu Wenwen, Class 4, Grade 3, Pinghu Middle School, Zhejiang Province.
Once, when a meteor crossed the starry sky, I missed the details of my wish; When the waves beat against the rocks, I missed the details of prayer; I missed the details when you told the story. But I won't miss it again. I will seize the details and wait for the miracle of life.
The detail is the sewing needle in the mother's hand. Needle and thread is full of love, and mother uses it to light the flame of hope. The detail is a small screw on the machine. When it gets to the place where it is most needed, the machine will follow it freely. Detail is a dazzling little star in the vast starry sky, which guides us to the palace of success. Details attract countless eyeballs with their charm.
Life is full of surprises because of details! Painters draw the details of life into pictures with colored pens, and writers feel and experience the details with their hearts, and use them to create the most attractive chapters; Photographers capture details and make countless unforgettable details exude unparalleled fragrance.
Lu Xun's details are on the road of "there is no road in the world, and more people will become roads". With his enthusiasm and persistence, he climbed up the ladder and opened up the road to success in life. The details of Zhu Ziqing are looming in The Back. "Flowers are getting more and more charming", but the details are hidden in it. Affection is hidden in "I miss my dear ones more every festive season", friendship is planted and blossomed in the details, and love is nurtured in the details. ...
Accumulate small details in your study and pay attention to small details in your work, and your life will be more substantial and perfect.
Don't ignore the details, if you put it aside, you give up the beginning of success; You should grasp the details of success. Over time, every detail is in your diary. When you open it, you have your efforts, your ups and downs. It turns out that you have been working hard, trying to find your miracle and trying to ignite your hope.
Gently pick up a maple leaf on the road, just a small maple leaf, but it records the past of life. Grasp the details of life, with the details on the road to success, you will have the motivation to move forward and a beacon of hope. One day, when you suddenly look back, you will be delighted to find that so many details around you have paved the way for life. Dissect the details and you will learn to nourish life.
Grasp the details and appreciate the miracle of life!
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Details are not refined, and we can't ignore details in life, because details breed success. By expounding the importance of details, the author makes everyone understand that we should firmly grasp the details, dissect the details and ignite the fire of hope in life. The full text is profound, sentence by sentence, patchwork and full of power.
[Example 3]
Details-the source of beauty and eternity
3 14200 Lu Minjie, Class 4, Grade 3, Pinghu Middle School, Zhejiang Province
People say, short as morning dew, fleeting when the sun clears; Eternity is like the sun, rising and setting day after day. The whole process of all living things is only a moment in the universe for the creator with infinite power.
We really feel the flow of time and try to slow it down or even stop it-but who can do it? Poor man, where can I find that tree and fix my short-lived self in the chain of history and become an eternal existence? Actually, it's all around us, the details.
The details are the stones that make up the pyramid, and the sleepers that are peaceful when laying the railway. Only by paying attention to details, grasping details and deducing details can we grasp life and destiny. Every door-to-door service of Xu Hu is so ordinary and ordinary from an individual point of view, but it is these countless details that have made his glorious image and made him loved by people.
There is no denying that Einstein's genius created the theory of relativity. But when people opened his manuscript, they found that there was no complicated calculus, no exquisite syllogism, only thousands of seemingly ordinary calculations, reasoning and proofs. Every calculation, reasoning or proof itself is tiny, but it is these tiny details that have contributed to a breakthrough and leap in the history of human science. You can't succeed without details, and you can't get eternity without details.
Some people say that details are only a fragment in the evolution of things, which is true. But even so, who can deny the meaning of the details? Can a thing or thing give people a sense of beauty without any details that make it up?
Chernyshevski famously said: Beauty is life. In other words, beauty is made up of bits and pieces in life, and details are the source of beauty. "The moonlight shines in the pine forest, and the crystal stone shines in the stream. Bamboo whispers that the laundry girl returns, and the lotus leaves bend in front of the fishing boat. Every sentence in Wang Wei's poems is just a general description of the scenery, no matter which one is not a famous sentence. But a few words together form the realm of painting in poetry, where poetry and Zen blend and scenes are intertwined.
It was Cao Xueqin's painstaking management and meticulous carving that made the immortal Dream of Red Mansions. How can the images of Jia Baoyu and Sister Lin be so deeply rooted in people's hearts without his originality and countless details to express the personalities of the characters?
Details are the source of beauty, which makes every tree and stone shine; Details are the saints of time, making fleeting things eternal. Friends, let's seize every detail of life and let life show its due glory!
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Life is short, everything is a moment, and there is a warning from the beginning. Where can I find a tree to freeze eternity? The author found the tree of details. Beauty is life, and details are the source of beauty. In this way, the author's writing will have a good support, and then he will explain it, and everything will be logical. The full-text language is sophisticated, beautiful and concise.