Appreciation: quote famous sentences to describe the picturesque and vibrant scene of spring in Jiangnan. Four-character short sentences are full of rhythmic beauty
Leaping over the mountains, crossing the mountains, inserting gullies, filling mountain passes, whistling and whistling, flying sand and stones, flapping on the window, Sarah, flapping on her face like countless needles.
Appreciation: this sentence uses exquisite brushwork to write the spring breeze in Beijing, combining long and short sentences, using duality and catchy. Using figurative rhetoric, the feeling of writing Spring Breeze is like countless needles, which shows the coldness of the northern spring breeze.
3 "Bang", where did the river ice crack? With a "honk", the diseased branch with a big bowl mouth was scraped.
Appreciation: write the scene of spring coming with vivid and delicate brushwork, and describe the huge roar of river ice crack with onomatopoeia; "Ga" describes the short, loud sound made when a diseased branch breaks. According to records, the spring breeze in the north is strong.
Spring breeze breathlessly helps breathless people.
Appreciation: "Breathing" describes the sound of breathing. It is very vivid to praise the spring breeze with personification, just like hardworking people who work hard in the sowing season.
Looking forward to, looking forward to, the east wind is coming, and the pace of spring is approaching.
Appreciation: Looking forward to spring is the beginning of the article. Putting the two "expectations" together shows how eager we are to look forward to the arrival of spring. The east wind is coming, reporting the news of spring. Listen, the pace of spring is near. In just a dozen words, the author's serious and joyful mood is fully expressed.
Everything looked like I had just woken up, and I opened my eyes with joy.
Appreciation: using personification rhetoric, everything is revived, lifelike and full of beauty.
The mountains moistened, the water rose and the sun blushed.
Appreciation: The author carefully observed the mountains, water and sun in early spring. "The mountains are moist", which means that the snow is melting, the spring is bright, and the tender grass is green, which is particularly refreshing and moist. The blush of the sun personifies the sun, which not only shows the warmth of spring, but also captures the characteristics of spring and shows the inner charm of spring. To write about the mountains, water and sun in early spring is to start from a big point and outline a general outline for the following detailed description.
Grass crept out of the soil quietly, tender and green. In the garden and in the field, look, there are many such trees.
Appreciation: how vividly the word "drill" is used; How do "tender, green" and "soft grass" write the characteristics of early spring grass succinctly and richly.
9 "Blowing your face without chilling the wind" is good, like a mother's hand stroking you.
Appreciation: The author describes the spring breeze with "blowing the face without cold wind", and then captures a vivid and intimate metaphor of "touching you like a mother's hand" to express the charm of the spring breeze.
10 Peach, apricot and pear trees, you won't let me, I won't let you, they are all full of flowers. Red is like fire, pink is like chardonnay and white is like snow.
Appreciation: This passage highlights the "competition" of flowers and draws a prosperous scene of spring flowers. The use of personification, parallelism and metaphor is vivid.
1 1 Rain is the most common and lasts for three or two days. Don't be upset. You see, like cow hair, like a flower needle, like a filament, densely woven diagonally, and there is a thin layer of smoke on the roof. The leaves are bright green, and the grass is green enough to stare at your eyes. At night, the lights turned on, and a little dim light set off a quiet and peaceful night. In the countryside, on the path and by the stone bridge, people with umbrellas are walking slowly.
People who are sleeping and farmers who are working in the fields all wear hats and hats. Their houses are scattered and silent in the rain.
Appreciation: The author first wrote about the spring rain, and then wrote about its characteristics: "Like ox hair, like a flower needle, like a filament, it is densely woven, and there is a thin layer of smoke on the roof." Then write the scenery in the rain, and paint a quiet and beautiful picture of ink and spring rain. By using rhetorical devices such as parallelism, personification and metaphor, the charm of spring rain is vividly written, such as hearing its sound and seeing its shape. At the same time, leaves, grass, people and houses are used to set off the beauty and tranquility brought by the spring rain.
12 Feather swallows lightly cut a few rays of sunshine and wandered in the green field of vision.
It uses metaphor and personification to express the lightness and beauty of swallows and their love for spring.
13 The lotus pond is covered with attractive emerald color, moist as jade and round as jasper.
The beauty of green leaves in the lotus pond is expressed by figurative rhetoric, and green is compared to jade and jasper, which shows the warmth and roundness of green and expresses the author's love for summer.
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