20 13 college entrance examination Anhui volume full score composition: Chaoyang flowing water dream When a touch of sunshine shines on me in the morning, I understand that I can't stay where I am, I need to keep running to chase my dream. The sun in the morning is like a fiery red sun, using its own ability to sprinkle the first ray of sunshine in the morning to the earth. This burning morning sun tells me that people can't just live in the past and always complain about "why", so your life will be gloomy; The burning morning sun told me to explore the unknown world and asked, "Why not?" Chaoyang told me that the reason why the event passed away was to inspire people to run forward. Asahi is like fire, and dreams are like flowers. In the bright sunshine, we should not be in bud, but be brave and in full bloom. Running water is like running water. It always flows slowly and continuously. "The deceased is like a husband, not giving up day and night." We just turned our heads white. "Chu Tian is thousands of miles away in clear autumn, and the water goes with the day to the end of autumn", and the rushing water takes away our past memories, either sad or happy. Running water tells us in its way that time is in a hurry. Running water also brings dreams of opening the future, either hard or beautiful. Every time we cross the canyon, flow through the plain and rolling in the deep, it indicates that we should pursue the future and keep exploring. Even if it is a deep ravine and a cliff, even if it is a biting wind and rain, has the running water ever been afraid, stopped or hesitated? Our dream road should also be like running water, running all the way, running here and there, never giving up. The running water is in a hurry and time flies, warning us to pursue infinite dreams with limited life. Dreams are like the wind, dreams are like the wind, constantly blowing our hearts and causing ripples. The process of chasing dreams is hard. We walked like Dai Wangshu, who walked silently in the rain lane, hoping to meet the fragrance of lilacs. In this wind, we should have Sima Qian's forbearance attitude, Bernard Shaw's questioning spirit and Shi Tiesheng's strong determination. Dreams swept my heart like the wind, leading me to pursue the fragrance like cloves. I have never stopped to doubt and doubt, I only know that I will take steps to pursue and be a teenager chasing the wind. The scorching sun gave me motivation and courage. The swift current took away my doubts and puzzles. Dreams, like the wind, blow my dream skirt and keep moving forward for the fragrance of lilacs. 20 13 Zhejiang college entrance examination excellent composition model essay: It was the silence at the beginning that always thought that the lotus flowers on the ground would no longer bloom, but the wandering white clouds could not find their home, and there was not much room for the world in the clear baby's pupil. The nursery rhymes with frankincense and wheat fragrance have gone with the wind, and only a shallow childhood is reflected on the lake, reflecting the serene appearance when I was first released. I don't know when the fairy tale aura of childhood kingdom was thrown to the ground, and Andersen's paradise garden probably had already sunk into the ice dome. I want to walk into the dense and turbulent crowd just to find a pair of clear eyes like a naked child. I'm afraid of this world where the age is getting longer and the mind is rigid ahead of time; I feel sad for this window of the soul that is no longer clean and dusty. Sometimes, I stand on the noisy street, eager to have a good look at this earthly fireworks, only to see my childhood holding hands with my companions and running on the Yuan Ye in spring, so happy, so unrestrained and so uncontested. Sometimes, I sit by the window and think about the night alone, but the noise of the pages always disturbs my mood. Oh, where is the "I" who always looks up at the starry sky on summer nights and lifts the veil of the universe inch by inch with childish ideas? Perhaps, as Fielding said, once we lose the great childhood kingdom, we are really sinking. And I don't, I want to hold on to the innocent tail and keep the child's innocent background forever. Then, you might as well be an aging child. Let those honors and disgraces, sorrows and joys, fame and fortune, and even the disappearance of appearance no longer disturb our childlike world. Just be a child and expect winter and spring to whisper in front of the eaves like a purple swallow; Be a child and keep a pure white background like the bright moon on the roof. Or pick up a pen and write down the moment when the first drop of morning dew falls on a slightly cold late autumn morning; Or close your eyes and listen attentively to the beautiful sound of night flowers blooming in the fragrant greenhouse. Being a child makes your eyes less troubled and fettered. Be a child, and make the distance between mind and nature closer. I just want to be a growing child. I have my own thoughts, and I also have my innocence: I don't give up purity, and I also pursue profusion. As the poet said, I was in my world, and I was still peaceful when I was released for the first time. Listening to the storm, waiting for the rain, I am just a baby in the world. 20 13 excellent composition of Guangdong college entrance examination: let love flow in both directions. China has a famous saying: "The grace of dripping water is rewarded by the spring." It can be seen that gratitude is a traditional virtue of the Chinese nation and has been passed down. There is some truth in this statement. Everyone needs help sometimes. If you accept help but take it for granted, don't appreciate it and return it with love, who will be willing to help? Therefore, for the harmonious development of society, please don't hurt people's hearts and let love flow in both directions. Thankfully, grateful people are the mainstream of our society. When a self-made businessman becomes rich, he will never forget the hard days of the past, which makes him want to pass on his love to those who still need it. We are all ordinary people, and I believe most people are willing to taste the joy of gratitude. When the giver sees that the person he helps knows how to repay, even if it is not for himself, but for society and others, he sees the value of what he has done, which undoubtedly gives him the motivation to continue to do good things. This is the dedication of love, the two-way flow of love, the acquisition of love and the benefit of society. Maybe you only paid one point, but the society may benefit a lot. Remember the rainstorm in Beijing last summer? Disaster is being broadcast, and warmth is being staged. A group of people from rural Hebei helped the victims, regardless of their personal safety, and they were praised by everyone. As everyone knows, they were all rescuers of the Tangshan earthquake that year, and it was everyone's selfless dedication that gave them the materials and confidence to survive. Now, they don't forget to repay them and help another group of people get a new life. The flow of love and positive energy supports the society, stands firm and goes forward bravely. We can't forget the most beautiful rural teacher-Wu Yuxi, who suffered from gastric cancer for more than ten years and had three quarters of his stomach removed. He has never missed a class and corrected his homework for so many years. It was the concern of the community, students and parents who helped him to support the platform. This two-way flowing love is more precious and harder than gold. Of course, there is also the phenomenon that the "regression chain" of love is missing. Look at a director in Shaanxi who helped many enterprises to raise money during his term of office, but was "abandoned" by enterprises after his term of office, and you will know how painful unrequited love is and the society will become less harmonious. Don't let "two-way love" be lost, let love pass on. 20 13 Shandong college entrance examination perfect score composition: face up to criticism and achieve modesty and gentleness. Faced with the criticism of speaking like a book, famous writers responded positively, expressing their gratitude and understanding, which was touching. I always believe that only by actively facing the criticism and criticism of others can the realm of life be continuously sublimated and life become immortal and great. The necessity of finding fault comes from the narrowness and one-sidedness of the subjective world. We often indulge in our brilliance beyond ordinary people, but we forget to remain humble in the face of shortcomings while being proud. Therefore, the mistake of being kind to others is to shape a more rational soul, make people awake and comfortable. Wise men, such as Cao Yu, also understand this philosophy. When the American playwright Monte visited the playwright in China, the communication was in full swing. Cao Yu took out Huang Yongyu's critical letter to him: "I don't like any of your future plays, and I don't like any of them. Your psychic Baoyu is lost, and you are wrong by the situation! " So pungent, it hit the nail on the head and pointed out Cao Yu's mistake of "emphasizing politics and neglecting creation". Cao Yu insisted on translating it word by word to Monte ... It can be seen that Cao Yu's greatness is not only his unremitting pursuit of art, but also his rational face and calm acceptance of criticism. However, if you are arrogant and turn a deaf ear to other people's mistakes, the road of life will only get narrower and narrower, and even inevitably accept the pain of failure. After the reform and opening up, Jianlibao Company was established in Li Jingwei, creating a business legend comparable to Pepsi. However, in the face of unprecedented success, Li Jingwei completely refused to find fault with others. In the face of criticism and obstruction from the company's top management to employees, he set up a huge sum of money to build Jianlibao Building in Guangzhou, which finally exceeded the company's capacity. In the face of the mistakes made by friends in the industry, he refused to absorb them sincerely, which eventually eclipsed Jianlibao in the long river of history and put him in prison. So, how to be kind to criticism and pursue perfect self? First of all, in the face of other people's sharp mistakes, we should maintain a calm and peaceful attitude, without anxiety or concealment; As Ji Xianlin said: "What others say is encouragement, criticism and spur, which is good for me." Secondly, we should learn to distinguish between "valuable" finding fault and "finding fault for the sake of finding fault", that is to say, in the face of others' finding fault, don't give in, but keep a minimum of trust. For example, the actor Yu Shizhi has been criticized by the audience all his life, but he has to go through the process of "examination-digestion-absorption", and finally plays a vivid role in people's hearts ... Everyone will make mistakes, get lost and even be alienated in life, but often he is kind to others and can lead you to enjoy more charming scenery. I won't ~ ~ but I still have to laugh ~ ~ ~:)