1. How to make the language of the composition beautiful and moving

1. Clever use of rhetoric. The clever use of rhetorical techniques can enhance the expressiveness and appeal of the language and ensure that the language is rich in literary talent. an important means.

Among various rhetorical techniques, there are three that are worthy of attention: 1. Parallelism The form of parallelism is neat, the language is condensed, and the momentum is abundant. Appropriate use of parallelism in the text can effectively enhance the beauty and expressiveness of the language.

For example, in an article about personality, he wrote: When Pythagoras chose the sun and abandoned Caesar; when Zhuang Zhou chose to "turn back to the fields" and abandoned the palace; when he was arrogant Ruan Ji was roaring in the mountains, the dashing Ji Kang was caressing "Guangling San", and the indifferent Tao Yuanming "wouldn't give up for five buckets of rice" - two square words weighing more than a thousand kilograms surfaced: personality. Several parallel sentences are linked to each other, and they lead to personal topics. They are completed in one go, very powerful and contagious.

2. Metaphor Metaphor can not only make abstract concepts concrete and perceptible, but also make the narrative or reasoning in poetry vivid. For example, one student's exercise is a metaphor for maternal love: the fish said to the water: "You can't see my tears, because I live in the water."

Facing the sad fish, the water is light He said softly: "I can see your tears, because you are always in my heart." This apt metaphor accurately depicts the breadth and depth of maternal love, and is truly touching, making people feel wonderful and extraordinary.

3. Quoting appropriately quoting some famous poems, character allusions, etc. in the article is a good way to improve the connotation of the article and increase the readability of the language. This cannot be ignored.

In the article "The Reed of Thought", there is such a wonderful explanation: This white-haired reed is the wisp of autumn light floating leisurely by the woodcutter, and the lingering feeling between the village girl's brows. A touch of desolate charm. The woman who looks like a woman with fragrant clothes and shadow comes walking on the water. From ancient times, from the Book of Songs, "the grass is green and the dew is as white as frost", which has become an eternal masterpiece.

In the Si River, the young man playing poles and boating, picking orchids and rhizomes, and the graceful lady on the side of the water, set against the dense reeds, have become the most beautiful lines of poetry in this ancient country with a civilization of three thousand years. This passage cleverly quotes and uses ancient poems, so that the taro, taro, reed and beautiful lines of poetry are harmoniously blended together, and the connotation is enriched.

Of course, in the process of composition, you can not only use a certain rhetorical technique, but sometimes you can also use a variety of rhetorical techniques comprehensively. This depends on the needs of the writing.

Rhetoric is to an article, just like white clouds are to the blue sky and starlight is to the night sky. Its beautiful embellishments make words shine. However, in many compositions, we often read dry statements throughout, which makes them boring and boring.

As everyone knows, there is no beauty in a piece of cloth wrapped around the body. Therefore, allowing students to consciously learn to skillfully embed rhetoric into articles when writing should be an issue that cannot be ignored.

2. Refining words and sentences Chekhov said: "The skill of writing is the skill of deleting poorly written parts." Writing an article well is not something that can be accomplished overnight.

Only by constantly tempering the language, elaborating the language, and revising it repeatedly can the text gradually become perfect. Only by striving for the perfection of every detail can the overall coordination and beauty of the text appear.

When refining words and sentences, you can generally pay attention to the following three items: 1. Strive for accuracy. Striving for accuracy in language is a key to writing a good article. There are so many allusions to the ancient people's writing that I won't list them here.

The French writer Flaubert once said: "The most accurate adjective, the most accurate verb, the most accurate noun... there is only one, which is the most accurate one." This can be said to be everyone's Calligraphy style.

In the drama "Qu Yuan", Guo Moruo changed "Song Yu, you are a **** literati!" to: "Song Yu, you are a **** literati!", the taste is completely different. . Not only the accuracy of a sentence, a word, a word, and sometimes even a punctuation also requires careful consideration.

For example, the first sentence of a classmate's composition wrote: "Far in the east, the sun is rising." His Chinese teacher added a comma after the word "的", which became " Far away, in the east, the sun is rising. ”

Once changed, the original plain statement suddenly became vivid. In writing teaching, if we can guide students with this rigorous guiding spirit and attitude, I think it will benefit students throughout their lives, and their writing language will definitely become more and more accurate and exciting.

2. Seeking simplicity Whether the language is clean, concise and clear is an important criterion for measuring whether it is vivid. Those words that are long-winded, unclear, and unclear are worthless and should be resolutely discarded when writing.

At this point, Chekhov once gave such an example. He said: "It is very difficult to describe the sea. I read in a middle school student's exercise book, you know how he described "Hai Da", nothing else.

In my opinion, it's very good. "This means that the key to writing is to be concise and concise, and not to be lengthy. It's unreadable.

For example, we may often find articles like this in students' homework: lengthy articles citing examples to prove a point; stating several paragraphs in thick and colorful terms before introducing the topic to be discussed; or even in a general passage. A complete narration ended abruptly, without a finishing sentence... and so on, it is not feasible. At this time, if you want to keep the language concise and pure, you must take drastic measures, search for thousands of things, and "give up love reluctantly."

When writing, the unrestrained and irrelevant nonsense and superfluous words in your mind should not be put on paper. When you need to cherish ink like gold, you should use every word carefully. 3. New and innovative words are always dynamic and attractive.

Whether the language is fresh and agile is a crucial part of creating a good article. This must not be taken lightly.

If we open the text of the composition, we will find that they talk about Einstein, Edison, etc. in the same way. Both the examples and the beginning and end are all clichés, and they all read like "Once upon a time there was a mountain. There is a temple in the mountains..." The aged flavor. At this time, it is better to read one or two articles. If you read too much, you will inevitably suffer from reading fatigue, or aesthetic fatigue.

When writing, only by weaving the language with originality and striving to improve the quality of the text can readers' interest in reading be enhanced. In a composition, even if there is only one fresh and lively paragraph, like "thousands of green branches are a little red", a bright color will suddenly shine in front of people's eyes. 2. How to write the language of the composition well, so that the language of the composition is beautiful, vivid, etc.

(1) In terms of language, a "vocabulary library" must be established. Vocabulary is the cell of the article. In a broad sense, vocabulary not only refers to A collection of words and phrases, including sentences and sentence groups. There are two ways to build a "vocabulary library": the first is reading. You should read extensively books, newspapers and periodicals, and take notes on reading, and compile some beautiful words, sentences, and phrases. Excerpts can be put in a specific book or on reading cards. The second is life. Usually, we should capture the vivid language in public speaking and write down these languages ????in a small book or card that we carry with us. This way, over time, we can accumulate If you speak well, you will be able to speak well, and your composition will be brilliant. (2) It is necessary to strengthen the accumulation of materials. Materials are the flesh and blood of the article. Many students do not pay attention to accumulating materials, so they go to search every time they write. , or made up or plagiarized. The way to solve this problem is to accumulate materials. If possible, you can bring a camera and a tape recorder to observe life in depth, actively participate in life, and use sketching, diary writing, observation notes, etc. Timely record what you see in family life, campus life, and social life. When recording, you must grasp the details and grasp the characteristics of people, things, objects, and scenery. In this way, the articles you write will have flesh and blood. (3) Strengthen the accumulation of ideas .The point of view is the soul of the article. The center of the article is not clear, or the intention is not profound, which often indicates that the author’s thoughts are superficial. Therefore, it is necessary to establish a “think bank”. There are two methods: first, be good at thinking. “Think more, and think more.” A harvest." You should think deeply at ordinary times and ask "why", "what" and "how" when things happen. In this way, you can see the essence through the phenomenon. You should also keep the "spark" of thinking and the source of thinking at any time. Record the conclusion. The second step is to compile, that is, to excerpt famous quotes, aphorisms, etc. In short, the composition must strengthen accumulation and establish three major writing warehouses: "vocabulary library", "material library" and "thought library", and It must be regularly inventoried, sorted and classified into categories, and it must be constantly enriched and expanded. 3.

The organization of an article has the following aspects: first, the meaning and purpose to be expressed, which is the soul of the article. Second, how to fully express it. Whether it is description, explanation, or argument, This is the channel you want to express. Third, the collection of materials is also used. Collect some materials around the meaning you want to express, of course the famous sayings and aphorisms that best express your meaning. Fourth, language vocabulary and modification techniques. Vocabulary is important It should be rich, vivid and accurate, and it is necessary to use rhetorical techniques appropriately, such as metaphors, parallelism, etc. Just like building a house, what kind of house do you want to build, classic, modern, square meters or buildings, how many rooms to build, etc. You have to know this. Then you have to select the "construction team", and finally you have to "decorate" the house. This is the program for writing articles! Write good articles.