The beginning of the composition

Jia Baoyu said a very insightful saying when commenting on the Grand View Garden: All beauty must "have natural principles and obtain natural interest." In order for millions of candidates across the country to compete in college entrance examination essays to be outstanding, it is inseparable from a "reason" and "interest". "College Entrance Examination" magazine has collected and sorted out the excellent college entrance examination essays in recent years and found that there are many remarkable things, but all of them are shining with "wit" and "rational interest". Just looking at the beginning and end of these articles is enough to make us feel gratified and inspired. We have made some classifications of them for you, maybe you can also learn from them.

1. Be the first to read the opening paragraph

The most taboo thing about the opening paragraph is that it gives people the feeling of going off topic in one stroke. It bluntly tells the marking teacher that the author has not reviewed the meaning of the question, and the composition will be scored badly. Big discount. Please look at the beginnings of several essays from the 2004 Guangdong College Entrance Examination.

Example 1 "Remembered by Language and Communication": "Look at the flowers blooming and falling, and the clouds rolling and relaxing. The bright sunshine in early spring reveals the breath of summer; the lush green clothing in midsummer indicates autumn. The abundant harvest of golden autumn indicates the desolation of winter. As autumn turns to winter, everything in nature performs wonderfully. How can our human society hope for the early spring if it has not been baptized by the harsh winter? Just like nature, without the connection of language and different ways of life, how can we connect the world as a whole and build a bridge of communication? "This metaphor at the beginning is inappropriate, and the previous metaphors do not have similarities. Lay the groundwork well. Why do you say this? Language and communication are the relationship between premise and result, but where does this relationship exist between "green clothing" and "harvest", "fruit" and "bleakness"? In particular, the rhetorical question "If you have not experienced the baptism of severe winter, how can you hope for the hope of early spring?" is even more inaccessible to the topic.

Example 2 "Soul Interaction": "The big trees never laugh at the weakness of the grass. Although the grass is weak, it adds to the greenness of the grassland; peonies never laugh at the simplicity of wild flowers. Although wild flowers are simple, But it brings infinite vitality to the earth. The reason why big trees and grasses, peonies and wild flowers can live in harmony is because they have the same language, communicate with each other, and have spiritual interaction. " When this beginning moves closer to the topic, it also fails to identify the similarities and seems far-fetched.

Example 3 "Language and Communication": "Language is a grass, communication is a green shade; language is a white cloud, communication is a cloud; language is a flower, communication is a A sea of ??flowers." This beginning treats "language" and "communication" as the relationship between the individual and the whole, without understanding the connection between the two.

The above three examples are all writing methods that use metaphors to break into the topic in order to increase literary talent. This is also the usual writing method of many candidates. If the examinee does not have an accurate grasp of the topic and gets off track at the beginning, his or her score will be seriously affected. The following example illustrates the role of language more accurately and vividly.

Example 4 "Communication starts with language": "Language is a bridge, connecting this shore and the other shore; language is a waterfall, connecting streams and deep pools; language is a rainbow, connecting the sky and the earth. Only language can be accurately understood Only through expression can communication be successful. If the language is wrong, it may cause unpredictable consequences. So how can the language be expressed accurately and the communication be successful? ”

So, is the opening paragraph good? The core issue still lies in reviewing the question; when reviewing the meaning of the question and solving the problem, first seek accuracy and then image. Here are some ways to get started.

1. Quote famous quotes

①Ask what love is in the world and teach you how to make love between life and death. Yuan Haowen is indeed easy to ask and very good at asking questions. His question can be said to be a question for the ages. Over the years, how many people have been lingering on this issue, and how many people have made the final answer in life after paying a huge price. But each family's words are as different as each person's face.

Xi Shi said: "Love is a tool..." ("Asking What Love Is in the World")

②In a church in the Middle Ages, a saint began his Speech: "The reason why I became a saint is because I have seen through money, and what's mine belongs to everyone." After a long time, I waved my fingers. In a prison across the century, a thief began his life monologue: "The reason why I became a thief is because I saw through money, everyone's is mine.

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("The Saint and the Thief")

③ Rodin, the master of aesthetics, once said: "Beauty is everywhere. For our eyes, it is not a lack of beauty, but a lack of beauty. Discovery is missing. "Today, inspired by this innovative scholar, I want to say: "The answer is universal. For our heads, it is not a lack of thinking, but a lack of perspective. "Many times, we are confused by the incomprehension of a problem or wandering at the intersection of multiple solutions. How to go becomes a puzzle in our hearts. We are often undecided and swayed. At this time, it is necessary to think from another angle. This will Bring you more opportunities for success ("Spinning the Kaleidoscope")

2. Use letter format skillfully

①Dear Grandpa Confucius:

< p>Hello! I am an ordinary descendant of yours, and I dare to write to you after thousands of years, not only to send you my respectful greetings, but also to urgently await your advice on several difficult questions. "A Letter to Confucius")

②Hateful standard answer:

When I saw you, I was really filled with righteous indignation. So, driven by the flames of anger, I wrote. This letter comes to denounce you. The answers are colorful, but you insist on wearing the label of "standard". You know, because of the word "standard", countless tragedies have happened. Here are three of your answers. Major crime:... ("A letter to the "Standard Answer"")

3. Borrowing the writing style of Zhanghui novels

① "It is said that the general trend of the world must be united if it is divided for a long time, and it must be divided if it is united for a long time. . "The era when the three kingdoms of Wei, Shu, and Wu were at odds with each other no longer exists. The rivers are moving eastward, and the waves have wiped out all the heroes of the past. And Adou, the heir to the former Shu Kingdom, has also become "lucky to miss Shu", and the world has become "Sima". ("The Meeting of the Heroes of the Three Kingdoms")

②The Juyi Hall in Liangshanbo is now brightly lit and full of people. One hundred and eight heroes are gathered here, everyone They are all arguing. What are they arguing about? It turns out that Liang Shanbo is going to be selected for the honorary title of Tiger Fighter. Whoever wins the award will be ranked second among the heroes. We gather here and argue endlessly ("Who is the Hero of Tiger Fighting")

4. Use rhetoric skillfully

Using rhetorical techniques to start can easily express the author's inner feelings and arouse readers' appreciation. For example, the beginning of "Spiritual Choice" in 2002 reads: "If you choose wings, you will embrace the entire blue sky; if you choose fins, you will kiss the vast blue sea; if you choose four legs, , you will appreciate the vast green forest. But my choice is one cage after another. "Begin with a parallel sentence, the sentence structure is neat, the language is sonorous, and the contrast between the front and back not only highlights the topic but also sets up suspense, prompting people to enjoy reading. In addition, the excellent composition for the 2001 College Entrance Examination "Integrity-Eternal Green Card" is written at the beginning of the article Said: "Integrity is like the first ray of sunshine in spring, which makes people yearn for; like a piece of sweet watermelon in summer, which is held in the mouth and sweet in the heart; like the autumn wind brings a red maple leaf from afar, causing infinite concern; like in winter, The falling snowflakes cover the wheat fields with thick quilts. "Use metaphors and parallelism at the beginning to describe the value and significance of integrity, and express the desire for integrity.

5. Lyrical method.

That is, express yourself directly at the beginning of the article The commonly used lyrical methods are hypothetical lyricism, contrastive lyricism and foil lyricism. For example, the 2001 college entrance examination masterpiece "Pick Up the Rucksack of Honesty" begins with: "If life is If life is a moving train, then integrity is an indispensable wheel; if life is a sailing ship, then integrity is an indispensable backpack, which will accompany you forever. "The author uses metaphors and contrasts to illustrate the importance of integrity through contrast and contrast. Another example is the beginning of the 2002 college entrance examination excellent essay "The Footsteps of Choice": "What is it that suddenly passes through my heart, leaving a moment of splendor? What is it that quietly waters the heart and cultivates sweet memories? What is it that gently touches the heart and brings eternal beauty? What is it that makes your heart, my heart, and his heart play that magnificent movement together? One by one is the shocking choices, the difficult and beautiful choices again and again, and the singing of the songs of your choice..." The opening chapter starts with four parallel questions to arouse people's deep thoughts and express their choices. The value and meaning of life, thus expressing the author's feelings

6. Get straight to the point.

Because this kind of beginning is straightforward, it can go straight to the title of the article, enter the scene of writing the narrative, or grasp the essence of the discussion at once, so it is suitable for a variety of literary styles. For example, the 2002 excellent college entrance examination essay "Choose the Soul of China" begins with "Looking through past history to find the heart's regretless choice." The following is divided into subtitles: 1. The choice of a hero. 2. The choice of the king. 3. The choice of scientists. In this way, a few words at the beginning lead directly to the following. Another example is the 2002 college entrance examination excellent essay "Wisdom and Thought - My Choice", which begins with: "After completing middle school, I received admission brochures from three universities, and I had to make a sacred choice." The author is straightforward, concise and concise. He uses the summary to lead to the following, and provides a general introduction to how he chooses between the "university of wealth", "university of power" and "university of wisdom".

7. Description.

Descriptive method means to use some kind of rhetoric or certain descriptive techniques to exaggerate the atmosphere and set off the atmosphere through the description of the scenery, so as to set the stage for the beginning of the following characters or events. This method is particularly effective for narratives, essays, and argumentative essays. For example, the 2002 college entrance examination excellent essay "Zhaojun's Choice" begins with: "The deep wall, the bright-eyed palace maid, the silent pink butterfly, and the lazy dressing are like the wheels of the palace, slowly rolling through Zhaojun's heart." Four more formal phrases are used at the beginning of the article. They are neat in form and elegant in wording. They are modifiers that describe the character's traits. The image accurately reveals the character's characteristics. It renders and highlights Zhaojun's wise spiritual choices below, making the opening sentence more vivid. The description fits well with the events in the text. Another example is the National Essay Competition in 1997. Someone wrote in an article titled "White Cloud, Water Drops": "There is a white cloud floating in the blue sky, and in the white cloud are small water droplets. Who makes the white cloud high?" Floating high? It's those little water droplets, you hold my hand, I hold yours, creating that freedom and elegance together." The article begins with a metaphor, personification, and a very poetic passage. , for the following metaphor, our society is a white cloud, and each member is a molecule in the white cloud. It inspires us that we should work together to create a beautiful environment.

8. Take over the topic method.

That is, at the beginning of the article, you should make reasonable imagination and extension along the topic material and the ideas provided by the topic. This kind of continuation can either continue from the end of the topic background, or it can intercept a little continuation from the raw material. For example, the 2001 college entrance examination excellent essay "Integrity Interview" begins with: "It's so boring. 'Integrity' has always been troublesome, and I sigh from time to time, why did you abandon me? Could it be that the times are different and I am useless too? ? No, I'm going to find good friends and let them comment!" After that, the article compiled the story of "Integrity" visiting "Money", revealing the large number of money transactions, power and sex transactions in real life, and even "Penny transactions" also appeared in the civilized and pure cultural pure land. The ingenious design at the beginning provides a scientific and thorough introduction to the following story.

9. Character appearance method.

In articles about human narratives, in order to inspire readers, sometimes close-ups can be used to let the characters reveal themselves, so as to catch the readers' attention before seeing their actions. For example, the 2001 College Entrance Examination masterpiece "How Can You Abandon Me - A Self-Report of Honesty" reads at the beginning: "My surname is Honesty, my name is Honesty, and I don't deceive anyone. I am born with the universe and depend on the human heart. It can be traced back to ancient times, and it can shine today." , It can help make friends from afar, and it can help relatives and friends from afar. "The article begins with a self-introduction, explaining the surname, birth background and unique personality, narrowing the distance between the author and the reader, expressing his heart through words, and enlightening the theme of the article.

10. Clever use of fables

① Yu Gong’s family has lived here for generations. Two mountains, Wangwu and Taihang, block the way. Life is hard! This place seems to be isolated from the rest of the world. Whatever new things happen in the city have become old news when they reach here. This kind of life really needs to change. Yu Gong thought: I have to find a way to move Taihang and Wangwu mountains. ("The Story of New Foolish Old Man and Zhisou")

② Magpie posted a large advertisement: "In order to adapt to the needs of the times, our school will implement all-round quality education, learning everything and teaching everything. Make your child a versatile generalist and invincible in the competition. Tuition fee is 3,000 yuan per semester; training fee is 2,000 yuan; sponsorship fee is 15,000 yuan.

"("All-round School")

11. Clever use of inscriptions to reveal the theme

① You don’t have the majesty of a tree, but you can have the greenness of grass; you don’t have the beauty of peonies, but you You can have the freedom and ease of Ono Ju... Life doesn't have to be brilliant, but it must be great!

Inscription

Die was once a beautiful girl with shawl hair. Her graceful dancing posture once brought her thunderous applause and countless flowers. She was once praised by others as China's future Duncan... However, everything ended, and the God of fate pinned her in a wheelchair forever. It became dim and silent, and the "white swan" turned into an ugly duckling that no one cared about. How many times did she dream that she had put on the glass slippers and continued her pursuit, but when she woke up she only heard "miserable and pitiful" sounds. Indifferent Autumn Wind. ("Star Night Talk")

② If you lose money, you only lose a small part; if you lose your health, you only lose a small part; if you lose integrity , then you will be almost penniless.

Inscription

What is "integrity"? Honesty and trustworthiness are the same. Throughout history, this word "integrity" has been soaked in the blood and tears of many people. Ah. ("Who is praising the emperor's new clothes")

12. Use problem-solving methods skillfully

A friend once asked me such a question ingeniously: In Which one of the following scenes is your favorite?

A. A piece of pure white feather falling leisurely in the shining golden sunshine.

B. , swirling and floating in the quiet and deep water.

C. A shooting star, passing by in the dark blue sky.

D. On the tips of the tender and green grass blades, they slipped quietly

After reading this question, I was stunned. The ever-changing nature, the rising and setting of the sun, the rising and falling of the tide, how many beautiful scenery are stunning. Heartbeat, leisurely and fascinated... ("Infinite Possibilities and Infinite Beauty")

13. Use celebrities to answer questions

① Someone asked: What is happiness?

Nietzsche believed: “The happiest person is one who can swallow centipedes, broken glass, meat worms, and stones without feeling disgusted. But the Stoics believe: "Having infinite wealth and power, and being able to do things without panic, that is the real happiness." "("The answer is colorful")

②Archimedes said: "Give me a fulcrum, and I can pry the earth up!

I said: "Give me a fulcrum, I can support my soul!" "("Give the Soul a Fulcrum")

14. Use poems skillfully to express poetic flavor

① Looking through the Tang and Song Dynasty poems that shine like a galaxy, there are countless farewell poems. Wang Bo Zhuanghuai sings loudly: Inaction is on the wrong road, and the children are stained with towels. Liu Yong's voice is sad: Where can I wake up from the wine tonight? The river is flooded with thousands of sails. That's it. Some people are beating their chests and stamping their feet: How can I endure the rush? Now there is Wang Guozhen whispering: A life span of a hundred years, no matter where you are, I only pray for Xi Murong's gentle warning. Quote: If parting can bring back the neglected details caused by getting together, is it really bad to say goodbye? Such various emotions are really beautiful. Reflecting on the insights of different times and different lives, you will have unexpected gains. ("Stick to Yourself in Vientiane Life")

②What is beauty? I know that beauty is the first light rising on the horizon, beauty is the maple leaves that are hotter than fire in autumn, and beauty is the beach at dusk. Beauty is the red-crowned crane galloping on the grassland, and beauty is the sika deer galloping on the prairie... Baumgarten agreed with me and added: "Beauty is perceptual knowledge, and the study of aesthetics is the science of perceptual knowledge. But Kant glared at me angrily and said, "One-sided. Beauty is a purely formal subjective feeling of human beings and has nothing to do with the thing itself." I advise you to read my "Criticism of Judgment". "I was very open-minded and carefully studied his aesthetic works on emotions. When I was feeling complacent about my mystery, Hegel poured cold water on me: "No, beauty should be the appearance of human nature. change. "Then, he talked about his aesthetic theory proudly. Just when I, the second monk, was scratching my head, Marx whispered next to me: "Don't listen to him, he has everything upside down, and he can't distinguish between right and wrong. Don't fall into the pit of idealism.

Beauty should actually be the unity of human essence and free form. "What exactly is beauty? I decided to leave the incongruous Europe and go to the ancient Eastern civilization to find the answer to beauty. ("What is Beauty")

③When the vast sky is dyed into a pitch black background Color, when the new moon rises and the endless sky is dotted with stars, I can't help but feel full of thoughts while leaning on the fence. I ask the moon in the sky: What is loneliness? "Perhaps, loneliness is the feeling of being surrounded by each other when the bright moon is in the sky, the wind is like water, and everything is silent! Once upon a time, Empress Li lamented, "Speechless, I went up to the west tower alone, the moon is like a hook, and the lonely phoenix trees in the deep courtyard lock the autumn. "Perhaps, loneliness is the entanglement of love in the deep palace compound, where the country is worried, the family is worried, and people are also worried! Once upon a time, Chen Zi'ang lamented, "I have never seen the ancients before, and I have never seen the newcomers. Thinking of the long journey of heaven and earth, I shed tears alone." , maybe, loneliness is the empty state of mind where the grass is still there, the end of the world is still there, things are different and people are different! So, I asked the moon, and Chang'e in Guanghan Palace told me that loneliness is "the candle shadow is deep on the mica screen, and the stars are gradually falling on the long river." "Blue sea, blue sky, night heart". What is loneliness? ("The Rhythm of Loneliness")

④What is it? It comes quietly and leaves no trace, but it leaves no trace. What is it that makes all the colors dance lightly?

What is it that leaves no trace and comes quietly, but can leave behind a passionate song that lasts for a season?

What is it that is so gentle? The earth comes and then goes quietly, leaving behind the hanging golden color in the harvest season.

What is it that goes away quietly and then comes again, spinning whiteness for the silent earth? Dream?

The philosopher smiled at the blue sky: "It's time.

The child held the kite and clapped his hands: "It's the wind."

The wanderer said: "It's nothing, just a dream." "("The Happiness of Having Answers")

15. Use lecture notes skillfully

Lecture time: September 15, 2000

Purpose of lecture: Primary school The second-grade students serve as examples to study and discuss "being honest", and use "Honest Children" as the content to educate children about "being honest"

Lecture content:...? ("Lecture Record")

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The following will focus on how to write argumentative essays in the college entrance examination.

In recent years, the essay questions in the college entrance examination have always been in the form of topic essays, which are more open-ended for candidates. Showing talent provides a very free space for writing. Many excellent essays emerge in the college entrance examination every year. Among the excellent essays in various styles, the most outstanding one is argumentative prose. Argumentative prose can contain rich content and is convenient for writing. Expressing sincere emotions, expressing profound thoughts, and showing profound cultural heritage are the easiest to win the favor of marking teachers. However, it is not easy to write argumentative prose well, and many candidates often encounter the following problems when writing such articles. The problem is that the entry into the topic is slow. Of course, the entry into the topic slowly is not off-topic, but it often makes the whole article seem loose and the center is not prominent enough. Naturally, it is not easy for such an essay to get high scores. On the topic "Cognition of Things", I select the beginnings of several typical argumentative essays among the outstanding essays in the 2003 National College Entrance Examination, and briefly introduce several methods of quickly entering the topic.

1. From novel The metaphor of the image is used in the title, directly to the title

“Reason and emotion are the two footprints in human life. Every growth of human beings on the road of understanding things is related to their reason and emotion. "(Jiangsu Candidate "The Balance and the Lyre")

Comparing reason and emotion to two footprints in human life, the first sentence of the title vividly points out the inner relationship between emotion and reason—— Emotion and reason have an important impact on cognition. This kind of beginning introduces the topic quickly and sparkles with speculation, which is refreshing.

2. Use vivid and appropriate personification to stimulate imagination

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“In the eyes of the butterfly, the flower is an angel, because the flower gives her the nectar of life;

In the eyes of the flower, the bee is a close friend, because the bee gives her the continuation of life.

However, in the eyes of the butterfly, the bee is just a fool who works hard, and in the eyes of the bee, the butterfly is just a prodigal son playing among the flowers.

"(Hubei Candidate "Learning History")

At the beginning of the article, butterflies, bees, and flowers are given human temperaments. Even objects will evaluate and recognize things with an emotional perspective, let alone emotions. Rich people? Through vivid and appropriate personification, the inner meaning of the topic is cleverly pointed out, which not only evokes people's associations with beautiful things, but also reflects the author's wisdom.

3. It is wonderful and profound. It raises questions and inspires people to think deeply

“People have seven emotions, including their own likes and dislikes. However, when these likes and dislikes are mixed with the understanding of the truth, what will happen? What about the impact? ” (Shandong examinee "Don't judge based on likes and dislikes")

As soon as the writing is written, it is closely linked to emotion and cognition, using a hypothesis to lead the reader's thinking to thinking about essential issues. The purpose of the article is very clear. Profound. This way of entering the title gives full play to the rhetorical effect of the question, which is concise yet full of weight.

4. Start the title with a beautiful parallel sentence

“Would you disdain the coconut trees and sea breeze in the South because you love the white snow in the North? Will you deny the magnificence of the northwest, where "the solitary smoke is straight in the desert, and the sun sets over the long river" because you are obsessed with the small bridges, flowing water, and green tiles and white walls in the south of the Yangtze River? Would you mind if Lin Daiyu 'played her temper' instead of reading the classic "Dream of Red Mansions"? Do you fall in love with pop music and get bored with 'boring' classical music? ——The ancient Greek philosopher once said that humans are emotional animals. Therefore, in the face of the world, emotional closeness, likes and dislikes often affect our views on people and things. I believe that everyone has a balance in their heart and their own standards to measure everything around them. " ("The Balance in the Heart" by Hubei Candidates)

Aren't elegant language, harmonious syllables, and rich images enough to touch your emotions? Not enough to make you suddenly realize in the taste of beauty "It turns out that I am right." Is the perception of beauty, and the view of people and things, all affected by the balance in the heart?

5. From lyrical discussion to the topic, into the emotion and reason

“It is often a When a relative's life falls like a meteor, we lament the ruthlessness of death; it is often when a friend is fighting desperately against the disease that we curse the rampant disease; it is often when our own interests are violated that we face the society squarely. The cancer on my body..." (Jiangsu Candidate "Putting Down the Leaves of Emotion")

Isn't this kind of language easy to arouse your screams? Such an opening is not only full of deep emotions, but also Reflecting the color of reason. Such emotional and reasonable words lead us to touch the essence-the leaves of emotion often block our rational vision.

6. Use famous aphorisms to highlight the background.

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“People have feelings, just as the old saying goes, ‘Human beings are not grass and trees, how can they be ruthless’. Therefore, when recognizing things, strong personal emotions are unconsciously attached to them. So there is the lingering feeling of "beauty is in the eye of the lover" and the sadness of "tears splashed by the flowers of time". ” (Shandong examinee "How can the word "love" be so good")

The beginning of the article is closely linked to the word "love", and three famous sentences about emotions are embedded in the three sentences, showing that It gives candidates a solid foundation in writing. To put it bluntly, foundation is accumulation. When you go to the examination room, you should have accumulated a lot of famous sayings, and what you have accumulated is not just for the famous sentence fill-in-the-blank question worth only 4 points.

7. Use contrasting techniques to enter the topic and express your position

“Sometimes, feelings are a fickle medicine that can melt into the lover’s wine glass, even in the bitterness. The taste is sweet; sometimes, feelings are a double-edged sword, held in the enemy's hand, even if it is swung lightly, it will feel scarred. "(Zhejiang candidate "True love is valuable

Reason is more valuable")

Emotions are not only a "fickle medicine" that can turn bitterness into sweetness, but also can bring troubles The "double-edged sword" of scars. The exquisite metaphor reveals the duality of emotion and forms a clever contrast, which vividly highlights the core of the article: sincerity is valuable, and reason is more valuable.

8. Let’s start with a hypothetical scenario and lay the groundwork

“If you are in a hurry, but when you reach the intersection, you are told that there is no way to pass.

What would you do if this person was someone you knew? What would you do if this person was a stranger? "(Jiangxi candidate "Don't talk to strangers")

Yes, if we encounter this situation, what should we do? From the perspective of emotional intimacy, trust more in the people you know. , trust people you don’t know less, or the other way around? What should we do if there are other similar situations? Naturally, we will follow the author’s ideas to see what the author’s preset answer is. What.

9. Start by commenting on current affairs and trace the essence

“APEC has caused a “Tang suit craze” around the world. When I saw people of different skin colors and nationalities wearing the same Tang suit, I couldn’t help shouting, I love Tang suits! In the past, such traditional clothing was repulsive to Chinese people. It was boring, not as light and comfortable as western clothes. People complained, people blamed, and even made them ashamed to wear such clothes. I couldn't help but ask: Can one piece of clothing have so many faults? "(Hubei candidate "I Love Tang Suit")

The topic is directly based on the "Tang Suit craze" caused by the APEC meeting, and related to the different emotional attitudes towards Tang suit before and after, leading to the questioning of the essence - clothes are naturally not There will be right and wrong, and what is wrong is people's emotions and cognitions. If you can use current affairs materials to stick to the topic when entering the topic, and trace the essence through commenting on current affairs, will the beginning of your composition be somewhat fresh? , shining with a few rays of intellectual light?

Editor's note: In fact, if an essay wants to stand out in the college entrance examination, it is not enough to just pay attention to the skills of writing a good beginning. It can be seen that these exquisite beginnings are not just a simple application of a certain topic entry technique to show new ideas, but a combination of several or more techniques. Moreover, from the beginning of excellent examination compositions, we can feel that These candidates' ability to control language and good Chinese literacy are the fundamental reasons for their high scores. Therefore, I hope that during the preparation process, students will not only consciously learn from the successful experiences of others, but also enrich their own knowledge accumulation. .