1. Direct opening method
My father is short, slightly hunched, and walks with a hunchback, like a lame...
This is the most common opening method used by students, and it is also the simplest one. This kind of straight-forward beginning often makes the article seem dull. Here are four fresh ways to start.
2. Start with a classic sentence
1. Start with a poem.
“Don’t wait any longer and your head will turn gray.” My father is over forty and has turned gray, but he is still very ordinary...
2. Use common sayings beginning.
There is a saying in China that "three mallets cannot make a fart." My father is a man who doesn't like to talk...
You can also use couplets , start with idioms, etc.
3. Start with a sound.
1. Start with singing.
"Smile, honey, you smile sweetly, as if flowers are blooming in the spring breeze." It was almost eleven o'clock in the night, and my father was still in front of the computer, using his tone-deaf voice to write online Singing, I tossed and turned in bed and couldn't fall asleep. I was so upset. There is a Chinese language test tomorrow...
2. Start with a sound.
"Pi Da, Pi Da." The dull and lazy footsteps sounded in the silent staircase late at night. It must be that my father is back from playing mahjong. Maybe he lost miserably again this time.... ..
You can also use dialogue, the sound of the piano, the sound of the wind, the sound of thunder, etc. Anything that can make a sound can be used as the beginning.
4. Start by thinking of one thing and another. (Associative opening method)
Every time I come back from school and see a dilapidated permanent bicycle parked downstairs, I think of my father. He used this bicycle to send me to kindergarten...
5. Start with the result. (Flashback method)
Our whole family was having dinner, and my dad was watching TV while eating. He suddenly stood up and yelled like crazy: "I won, I won." It turned out that he won 5 million in the lottery. The whole family danced, laughed, and cried. Everyone was so happy that they didn't know where to put their hands and feet. My dad’s fascination with lottery tickets started ten years ago...
(1) Excellent opening demonstration?
1. Quoting famous quotes?
①Ask what love is in the world, and it will teach you how to make love between life and death. Yuan Haowen is indeed easy to ask and very good at asking questions. This question of his can be said to be a question for the ages. Over the years, how many people have been lingering on this issue, and how many people have made the final answer in life after paying a huge price. But each family's words are as different as each person's face. ?
Xi Shi said: "Love is a tool..."? ("Asking What is Love in the World")?
②In a church in the Middle Ages, a saint began He said in his speech: "The reason why I became a saint is because I have seen through money. What's mine belongs to everyone." After a long time, he just waved his fingers. In a prison across the century, a thief began his life monologue: "The reason why I became a thief is because I have seen through money, and what belongs to everyone is mine." ("The Saint and the Thief") ?
③ Rodin, the master of aesthetics, once said: "Beauty is everywhere. For our eyes, it is not a lack of beauty, but a lack of discovery." Today, inspired by this innovative scholar , I want to say: "The answer is universal. For our heads, it is not a lack of thinking, but a lack of perspective." Many times, we are confused by the incomprehension of the problem or wandering at the intersection of multiple solutions. How to get there easily? It has become a mystery in your mind, and you are often hesitant and hesitant. At this time, it is necessary to change your perspective and consider it, which will give you more chances of success. ?("Spinning the Kaleidoscope")?
2. Clever use of letter format
①Dear Grandpa Confucius:?
Hello! I am An ordinary descendant of yours has the guts to write to you after thousands of years, not only to send you respectful greetings, but also to urgently await your advice on several difficult questions. ?("A Letter to Confucius")?
②Hateful standard answer:?
When I see you, I am really filled with righteous indignation. So, driven by the flames of anger, I write this letter to denounce you. The answers are rich and colorful, but you have to wear the "standard" hat. You know, just because of the word "standard", countless tragedies have happened. The following are your three major crimes: ("A Letter to the "Standard Answer")" The days when the three kingdoms of Wei, Shu, and Wu were at odds no longer exist. The great rivers are moving eastward, and the waves have wiped out all the heroes of the past. And Adou, the former heir to the Kingdom of Shu, has also become "lucky to miss Shu", and the world has become the world of the "Sima clan". ?("Meeting of Heroes of the Three Kingdoms")?
②In the Juyi Hall of Liangshanbo, the lights are brightly lit and there is a lot of people. One hundred and eight heroes gathered here, and everyone was quarreling.
What were they arguing about? It turned out that Liang Shanbo was going to select a tiger fighting hero recently. This honorary title is a big deal, and whoever wins it will be able to sit in the second place in Liangshanbo. So all the heroes gathered here and argued endlessly. ?("Who is the Tiger Fighting Hero")?
4. Clever use of rhetoric?
① "Bang!" With the sound of a hammer, Mr. Question Mark cleared his throat Said, "The space-time discussion has now officially begun. Today our theme is 'What is Beauty'. Scholars from different eras and different countries are invited to speak actively." ("What is Beauty")?
5. Use fables skillfully?
① Yu Gong’s family has lived here for generations. Two mountains, Wangwu and Taihang, block the way. Life is hard! It seems to be isolated from the world. , anything new in the city has become old news by now. This kind of life really needs to change. Yu Gong thought: He must find a way to move Taihang and Wangwu mountains. ?("The Story of New Foolish Old Man and Zhisou")?
②Magpie posted a large advertisement: "In order to adapt to the needs of the times, our school will promote all-round quality education, and learn everything and learn everything." Teach your children to become omnipotent and invincible in the competition. The tuition fee is 3,000 yuan per semester; the training fee is 2,000 yuan; the sponsorship fee is 15,000 yuan." ("All-round School")?
6. Use inscriptions that reveal the theme skillfully?
① There is no majesty of the tree, but you can have the greenness of the grass; there is no beauty of the peony, but you can have the freedom and ease of the small wild chrysanthemum. ...Life may not be brilliant, but it must be great!?
Inscription?
Die was once a beautiful girl who was good at dancing. Her long shawl hair and her graceful dancing posture once brought her thunderous applause and countless flowers. She was once praised by others as the future Duncan of China... However, everything is over, and the god of fate will always be there. She was pressed into the wheelchair. Life becomes dim and silent, and the "white swan" becomes an ugly duckling that no one cares about. How many times did she dream that she had put on glass slippers and continued her pursuit, but when she woke up she could only hear the "miserable" cold autumn wind. ?("Star Night Talk")?
②If you lose money, you only lose a small part;? If you lose health, you only lose a small half;?
If you lose integrity, you're pretty much penniless. ? Inscription?
What is "integrity"? It means being honest and trustworthy. Looking at history, the word "integrity" has been soaked in the blood and tears of many people. ?("Who is praising the emperor's new clothes"?
7. Use problem-solving methods skillfully?
A friend once gave me such a question ingeniously:?
Which one of the following beautiful scenes do you like best?
A. A piece of pure white feathers, falling leisurely in the shining golden sunlight?
After reading this question, I was stunned. The ever-changing nature, sunrise and sunset. , the tides rise and fall, how many beautiful scenery make people's hearts beat, and they are leisurely and fascinated...? ("Infinite Possibility of Infinite Beauty")?
8. Clever use of celebrities for questions and answers?
①Someone asked: What is happiness? The answer is rich and colorful?
Nietzsche believed: "You can swallow centipedes, broken glass, meat worms, and stones at the same time, but not feel disgusted." People are the happiest."?
But the Stoics believe: "Having infinite wealth and power, and being able to do things without panic, is the real happiness." ("The answer is. Colorful》)?
②Archimedes said: "Give me a fulcrum, and I can lift the earth!"?
I said: "Give me a fulcrum. , I can support the soul!" ("Give the Soul a Fulcrum") 9. Use poetry skillfully to show poetry?
① Turn over the Tang poetry and Song lyrics that are as bright as the Milky Way, and there are countless farewell poems Now, Wang Bozhuang sings loudly: Inaction is on the wrong road, and the children are in trouble. Liu Yongze laments: Where can I wake up from the wine tonight? The wind and the moon are waning on the bank of the willows, but the river is full of sails. , It’s just a farewell. Some people are beating their chests and stamping their feet: How can I bear the rush! Now there is Wang Guozhen whispering: A life span of a hundred years, no matter where I am, I just pray that Xi Murong is here again. Gentle warning: If parting can remind us of the neglected details caused by getting together, is it really bad to say goodbye? Such various emotions are really beautiful and will make you feel unexpected. harvest.
?("Stick to Yourself in Vientiane Life")? ②What is beauty? I know that beauty is the first light rising on the horizon, beauty is the maple leaves that are hotter than fire in autumn, and beauty is the red-crowned crane speeding on the beach at dusk. , Beauty is the sika deer galloping on the prairie... Baumgarten agreed with me, and added: "Beauty is perceptual knowledge, and the study of aesthetics is the science of perceptual knowledge." But Kant glared at me angrily and said: "One-sided, beauty is a purely formal subjective feeling of human beings and has nothing to do with the thing itself. I advise you to read my "Criticism of Judgment"." I was very open-minded and studied his aesthetics of emotion carefully. book. When I was feeling complacent about my mystery, Hegel poured cold water on me: "No, beauty should be the externalization of human essence." Then he talked proudly about his aesthetic theory. Just when I was scratching my head, Marx whispered next to me: "Don't listen to him, he has everything turned upside down, and he doesn't distinguish between right and wrong. You must not fall into the pit of idealism. Beauty should actually be the essence of human beings and Free form of unity. "What exactly is beauty? I decided to leave the incongruous Europe and go to the ancient countries of Eastern civilization to find the answer to beauty. ?("What is Beauty")? ③When the vast sky is dyed with a dark background and the new moon rises, the endless sky is dotted with stars. I can't help but be filled with thoughts while leaning on the fence. I ask the moon in the sky from a distance. :What is loneliness? Once upon a time, Li Bai "raised a glass to the bright moon and made three people in the shadows." Perhaps loneliness is the feeling of being together when the moon is bright in the sky, the wind is like water, and everything is silent! Once upon a time, there was Empress Li The Lord sighed with emotion, "I went up to the west tower alone without words, the moon is like a hook, and the lonely sycamores in the deep courtyard lock the autumn." Perhaps, loneliness is the deep palace courtyard, the sorrow of the country, the sorrow of the family, and the entanglement of love! Once upon a time, Chen Ziang lamented: " I never see the ancients before me, and never see the newcomers after me. I think about the long journey of heaven and earth, and shed tears with sadness." Perhaps, loneliness is the empty state of mind where the grass remains the same, the end of the world remains the same, things are different and people are different! So, I asked the moon, Guanghan Palace Chang'e told me that loneliness is "the shadow of candles is deep on the mica screen, and the stars are gradually setting on the long river" and "the heart of the blue sea and blue sky every night". What exactly is loneliness? I can’t answer. ?("The Rhyme of Loneliness")? ④What is it that comes quietly and leaves no trace, but it stirs up all the colors to dance lightly? What is it that leaves no trace and comes quietly but can Leaving behind the passionate singing that spans a season? What is it that comes quietly and goes away quietly, leaving behind the hanging golden color in the harvest season? What is it that goes away quietly and comes again quietly, for The silent earth spins out white dreams? The philosopher smiles at the blue sky: "It's time." The child holds the kite and claps his hands: "It's the wind." The wanderer says: "It's nothing, just a dream." (" "Happiness of having answers") 10. Borrow medical records for good writing? ①Patient name: Wu Liangliang Identity: Businessman? Clinical impression: Integrity deficiency syndrome (late stage)? Medical history: Twenty years ago, he first cheated customers by shortcomings and contracted the disease This disease. This disease is getting worse day by day as Wu Liangliang becomes increasingly sophisticated in his deception and speculation. Chengxin Hospital had diagnosed this patient three years ago. Wu Liangliang refused the hospital's prescription, fled the ward, and went to do business abroad. After investigation, this person's honesty and credit index has dropped to zero, and his social threat is +100. ("Medical Records of Wu Liangliang") ② Name: Zhang Damao, Gender: Male, Age: 18, Medical History: Schizophrenia, Cases: Too numerous to mention, Ι.8 years old, in kindergarten. The teacher asked me to draw pictures of my parents. Zhang Damao drew a big bad wolf with green eyes, a gentle sika deer and a little white rabbit crying on the ground. The teacher gave zero points. ? Doctor’s diagnosis: The teacher’s judgment is good. Da Mao’s painting is a story in the forest, which is off topic. ?("Diagnosis")?
11. Use lecture notes skillfully? Lecture time: September 15, 2000? Purpose of lecture: Using second-year primary school students as an example, study and discuss "being honest", With "Honest Children" as the content, it educates children to "be honest". ? Lecture content:...? ("Lecture Record") 12. Use the product instructions skillfully? ① Product: pure natural integrity oral liquid? Indications: Insufficient secretion of "credit", honesty deficiency, "lie disease", etc., caused by A series of diseases caused by too little synthesis of "integrity" in the human body. ? Dosage: For those who are severely lacking in integrity, take two bottles three times a day. ? For those who are mildly lacking in integrity, take one bottle twice a day. ? Half the amount for women and children. ? Advertising creativity:...? ("Pure Natural Integrity Oral Liquid")? (2) Excellent ending demonstration? ① Young people, remember in the next life, never make the wrong choice at the Mijin Ferry. Integrity is the source of happiness in life and cannot be lost. I just conclude with this poem:? 〖JZ〗 Throw away the truth at the Mijin Ferry, ? ? 〖JZ〗 And pay the hypocrisy to Jianglan, ? 〖JZ〗 Cut off the mortal world and let Xiaoyao.
("An epitaph for those who abandon integrity") ② The conference is over, and there is still no answer. Things in the world are really ever-changing and unpredictable. Let the right and wrong be left to future generations to comment. "The rolling water of the Yangtze River passes eastward..."? ("The Meeting of the Heroes of the Three Kingdoms")? ③ Suddenly someone shouted: "The big insect is coming, run away!" When everyone heard this, they were shocked and fled, but Wu Song shouted: "Where is the tiger?" Li Kui shouted: "Where is the tiger?" When people recovered from the shock, they realized where the tiger was? It turned out to be a good deed done by Qian Qian when there were fleas on the drum. Everyone heaved a sigh of relief and suddenly discovered that the tiger general Li Zhong had disappeared. ?("Who is the hero who fights the tiger")? ④Zhongxin Bridge? Wind,? The integrity of the sages is the same. ? I want to express this to the audience, ? The clinker pen is full of waves!? ("Integrity Wumen")? ⑤ Lu You once said: "Who can nourish the Qi to fill the heaven and the earth, and spit out self-sufficiency to become a rainbow." Even if you don't have a broad mind , but if you are conscious, you have the right to speak. Stand up and dance out the highlights of your life like Wang Shuo challenging Jin Yong. ?("Spitting out self-sufficiency into rainbow")? ⑥"Where is the return journey? The long pavilion is shorter than the pavilion." No matter how we interpret the connotation of "home", we should know that there is waiting and love at home. . ?("Where is the return journey? The long pavilion is shorter")? ⑦It can be seen that Leo Tolstoy's famous saying "All happy homes are alike, and every unhappy home is unhappy in its own way" does not need to be completely accepted as truth. The answers to happiness are equally colorful. ?("The Answer is Colorful")? ⑧As soon as he finished speaking, the audience burst into warm applause. At this time, Mr. Question Mark said with a red face: "The young friend just said it is right, but we are a time and space discussion, so everyone's opinions are different. In fact, the answers are rich and colorful, and there is no unified standard. I hope You can all find beauty. That's it for today. Let's break up.
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