"There is an ambush behind. 2, poplar is really extraordinary, I praise poplar. (Mao Dun's "Praise of Poplar") The first sentence at the beginning defines the object of praise-Poplar, and sets the full text.
Affectionate praise.
3. On the vast sea, the wind rolls dark clouds. Between the dark clouds and the sea, Haiyan flies proudly like black lightning. (Gorky's Haiyan) begins.
Firstly, the fighting environment of Haiyan's brave soaring is explained, and then the fighting heroism of Haiyan's swift soaring is revealed from three aspects: color (black), shape (lightning) and gas (pride). Seeing this topic, I couldn't help but burst into applause, which expressed my daughter's recognition and admiration for her mother. Two years ago, I would have booed my mother. (Composition MagazineNo. 10 1999) This is 1999 "Wenxin Cup", the first prize winner of the junior middle school group of the national middle school teacher-student composition competition, Jiang Jing.
Fee "applause" at the beginning. This beginning comes straight to the point, and at the same time, I want to publicize first and then suppress it, but also ambush and pose suspense for the back. 1, mountain, what a big mountain! The ups and downs of the green hills change one after another, extending into the distance and disappearing into the confused twilight. (Peng Jingfeng's "Pear Blossom on the Post Road") This is the beginning of the novel "Pear Blossom on the Post Road". The description of the mountain is the basis of the plot. On such a big mountain, dusk is approaching. For people traveling on the road, staying at night is really a difficult problem that must be solved. How anxious they should be! It can be seen that a series of plots such as guessing and praising the owner of the cabin have paved the way for the "setting off the scenery" style.
The time is eight o'clock in the evening. Although the sun has set, the summer heat has not subsided. There is no wind, and the old trees standing in the park are very quiet. Leaves are quiet, too. The outdoor labor theater is also very quiet. (Ye Junjian's Go to the Theatre) Use "silence" to set off the quiet atmosphere of people waiting for the performance to start. Not only that, but also compared with the tsunami scene when Mei Lanfang performed later, it showed the penetrating power of art and contrasted Mei Lanfang's superb performance skills.
Tip 1: Design suspense to attract readers. I'm dying-I'm lying in a hospital bed, surrounded by darkness, very quiet, in a huge room, only
You can hear my faint breathing. Nurses only come in when taking medicine or giving injections, and seldom talk to me. I'm used to it. I won't eat too much.
Complain, because I know I'm going to die. I stared out of the window and told myself to face death calmly. (Feel the Beauty of Life, the perfect composition for the senior high school entrance examination in Shaanxi Province)
Tips: There is a suspense at the beginning of this article: "I'm going to die". So readers can't help but be attracted and think, how could he die?
And then what? What happened to him? What will happen next? This series of questions naturally brings your eyes to the following, making you eager to know the following. This kind of beginning
The method captures people's curiosity when reading, and is carefully designed to attract readers to read, with good results. Tip 2: Cut to the chase and make your point clear. My friend, how do you feel when you see mountains of garbage, streams and rivers stinking and harmful gases poisoning people? At that time, I was so angry that I wanted to shout loudly: "Please pay attention to the living environment of human beings!" (Excerpted from the full text of "I am concerned about the living environment of human beings" in Guangdong senior high school entrance examination) Tips: The writing of argumentative papers in the examination room must clearly show your own views. It is a common but practical method to come straight to the point and make a clear attitude when writing. At the beginning of this paper, the way of asking questions and answering questions is adopted, which is concise and powerful, and clearly shows my own views, laying the foundation for the later development. When you are in pain, you will go home and vent in tears; When you are upset, you will go home and let the warmth of home dispel the dark clouds in your heart; Home-what melts in is sadness, and what melts out is happiness; Home-accept sadness and release happiness. What a nice home! (Selected from the composition "Home is really good" in the senior high school entrance examination in Yunnan Province) Skills: Narration can also come straight to the point. You see, this article uses parallelism to express the feeling of "home" without any cover. Set the tone for the full text. Tip 3: Associating memories, cleverly describing the independent small courtyard, the moonlight is like water, flowing quietly around me, feeling the coolness of my heart sinking into the bottom of the water, causing endless thoughts about you! I remember it was a moonlit night. I put you on the train to a foreign land ... at an early age, you struggled alone in a foreign land. Is everything all right? (Selected from the perfect composition "When I Face the Dissolved Moonlight" in Henan senior high school entrance examination) Tips: In the senior high school entrance examination, there are often recollection questions, asking candidates to recall an event that happened in the past. At this time, you may wish to associate memories and cause thinking. This method is introduced at the beginning of this paper. This article first wrote the moonlight, which triggered the association of "I" and reminded me of the story that happened on such a night. This kind of beginning is filled with a strong emotional atmosphere, which is conducive to expressing emotions.