beginning

the beginning is the first step of the text. A good beginning can make the composition ideas fluent, logical and attract readers. Ouyang Xiu, a great writer in the Song Dynasty, once wrote a poem: "When the article is written, it is said that the first thing to do is to break the stone and make a treasure." This means that when writing an article, you should pay special attention to the place where you start writing. If you start writing, you will break the ground and emerge the essence, then the whole article will be like a cliff, and the momentum will be like a flood. Xie Zhen, a poet of the Ming Dynasty, also said: "When you start a sentence, it sounds like a firecracker." It is also emphasized that the opening should be shocked by the sudden sound of firecrackers. Visible. The beginning of the article is very important, especially the composition in the examination room.

The basic requirements at the beginning are:

Get into the topic quickly, be clever and novel, be concise, and take care of the overall situation.

Here are some examples of different ways to start, as a reference when writing.

1. Get to the point and get to the point.

For example, I haven't seen my father for more than two years. What I can't forget most is his back.

-Zhu Ziqing's Back

A Min and I have a special friendship-our deskmate for three years in junior high school. I have a lot to say to her. -"deskmate"

2. Explain the reasons for writing at the beginning.

For example, I have long wanted to write some words to commemorate some young writers. This is not for anything else.

It's just that in the past two years, grief and indignation have always attacked my heart and have not stopped. I really want to take this as a change to get rid of my sadness and relax myself. Frankly speaking, I want to forget them.

-Lu Xun's "In Memory of Forgetting"

(This kind of beginning can make readers have a general understanding of the writing motivation and general content of the work, and can arouse readers' emotional * * *. )

3. Explain the story or the time, place, people and environment related to the story at the beginning.

for example, it was more than ten years ago. -Bing Xin's Little Orange Lantern

(This kind of beginning is simple and clear, and after the beginning, it can directly lead to the story. )

In the second half of autumn, the moon goes down, and the sun hasn't come out yet. There is only a sky in Ulan, and everything falls asleep except things that travel at night. Hua Laoshuan suddenly sat up, struck a match, lit greasy lamps, and the two rooms in the teahouse were filled with blue and white light.

-Lu Xun's Medicine

4. At the beginning, explain what you want to describe or explain. The monument to the people's heroes was completed. Recently, with great reverence, I visited this

towering, majestic and solemn monument. -"Monument to the People's Heroes"

At the beginning of the new semester, I noticed a problem: there are 33 boys and 27 girls in our class, and there is just one more boy at a table, and the same is true for girls. There is bound to be a crisis in which a boy and a girl sit at the same table. But I never imagined that this crisis would come to me. -"deskmate"

5. Start with an environmental description. Description of the environment, rendering the atmosphere

For example, the most unforgettable thing is bamboo in the 5-mile forest sea of Jinggangshan. Seen from a distance, it's lush,

overlapping and endless. Seen from a close distance, some ...

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October 9th has arrived again, and Mr. Lu Xun has been dead for sixty years. From evening to midnight, quietly, a person sitting in front of the window, let the cold rain beat against the window lattice. Under the lamp, a pot of chlorophytum lightly smeared a wall of emerald bookcase. The night wind is blowing, and my body is slightly chilly. Tears fell when I thought of Mr. Lu Xun.

(This opening can also describe the social environment. )

6. Start with a description of the characters. Vivid in description and vivid in impression

For example, two children came to our hospital. One is my sister, wearing a small plait and a small flower jacket;

one is a younger brother, with hair on his forehead, just like a teapot lid.

She is really ugly: yellow and thin face; A pointed chin; Under the eyebrows that are almost invisible, a pair of narrow eyes; The nose is flat and big; A jagged tooth, slightly yellow ... Alas! Not to mention, her appearance really doesn't match such a beautiful name-Zhu Lili. -"deskmate"

(This kind of opening will immediately arouse the reader's interest, eager to know what happened. In addition, a good character description can also highlight the character characteristics at the beginning. )

7. Symbol of association is wonderful

A dream was once buried under the gunboats of western robbers, leaving behind the bitter and tearful heartache and eager anticipation of the older generation as witness. Growing up with the Yangtze River in tears, we have tasted the sorrow as teenagers, stepping on the confirmation expectations left by our predecessors, and looking forward to one day ...-"Expectation"

8, starting with the language of lyrical discussion. Express one's feelings and move people with emotion

For example, every day in North Korea, I was moved by something. The tide of my thoughts and feelings is running freely in

, which makes me want to tell my friends in my motherland everything. But what I am eager to tell you is an important experience of my feelings, which is: I feel more and more deeply who is our most lovely person! -Wei Wei "Who's the cutest person"

In the twilight, wisps of kitchen smoke curled up from the farmhouse. I stood at teacher Zhang's window with a bunch of gardenias in my hand. Teacher Zhang, are you still so busy? It's time to have a rest. Today is your holiday-Teacher's Day. I came to see you with my harvest. -"Trivial Memories"

(At the beginning, it is directly lyrical, which captures the reader's heartstrings and can arouse the reader's emotional * * *. )

9. Start with suspense or other fascinating ways. Setting contradictions is fascinating

For example, Professor Su Lin, a famous vocalist, discovered a strange thing ...

-What is the Second Exam

"I can't believe this. After living in this class for more than two years, you will have no feelings for this group." ..... "This is what the head teacher Chen said to me this morning. I looked at Mr. Chen's angry eyes, and the wronged tears swirled in my eyes. I said psychologically, "Mr. Chen, you misunderstood ... how can I not love our class?"

1. Start with an argument. Famous sayings show the way, and make it clear from the beginning

For example, we China people have backbone. -

Bacon said, "A person who has no real friends can be called a poor person who lives in a lonely life forever."

his words showed the importance of friends. Yes, if a person loses friendship, he can hardly live in the world. -Friends

(This method of getting to the point and revealing arguments is often used in argumentative writing. )

11. Start with rhetorical methods

● Repeat parallelism and create melody

A friend is someone for whom I can give my sincere feelings; A friend is someone I can trust completely. Friends, share with me when you are happy, and walk with me when you are in danger. Life without friends is like life without sunshine. I have such a good friend. -"Friends"

● There is no edge at the beginning of the question

The past is like smoke, and most of it is gradually forgotten as time goes by, but how can those eyes make me forget?

-"Friends"

● Quote the beginning of the lyrics and resound through the clouds

"Will you remember tomorrow/the diary you wrote yesterday/will you miss you who used to cry the most ..." A melodious song "You at the same table" came out from the roadside audio-visual bookstore, which brought my thoughts back to three years ago. -"Friends"

● Metaphoring people with things has a profound meaning

In the endless wilderness, an ancient tree, although its life has reached the last moment, is still growing stubbornly. Beside it, a small tree is pulling out tender buds. The root of the old tree withered, and it lost the juice of life to the young tree; The leaves of the old tree are yellow, and it injects green life into the young trees. The old tree has gone through many vicissitudes and completed its difficult course. Now, the young tree has just sprouted branches and spat leaves, but the old tree has left it ... Just like my grandfather left me, he left me in a hurry before he could accept my gratitude. -"Petty Memories"

12. Start with the writing method of the article

● Want to promote first, restrain first, and develop appetite

Alas, how can the teacher let me sit at the same table with him? She is the fiercest girl in my class! Because of this, everyone called her "Tigress". -"deskmate"

● Flashback the beginning to attract readers

When we left the national defense education school, I don't know why, tears actually swirled in my eyes. Is it nostalgia? Do you want to stay in that bitter but tired but energetic life, or do you want to stay in that harsh but sincere and kind soldier, our instructor? -"Friends"

● Set things right, clear the clouds and see the sun

Some people say that indifference is to see through the world of mortals and think everything is false and hypocritical ... This view is a misinterpretation of indifference. If we look at the dictionary, we will understand that "indifferent" means not pursuing fame and fortune ...-"indifferent"

● solving problems and making clear the responsibility of the center

is what one should do. Soldiers have the responsibility to defend their country; Doctors have the responsibility of saving lives; Teachers have the responsibility to train successors. Workers, farmers, employees, businessmen ... Everyone has their own responsibilities. In our society, there are many conscientious people in all walks of life, who form the most beautiful scenery-please allow me to capture a moving picture from this beautiful landscape scroll.

● Inscription is the crown, philosophy comes first

Everything in the world can't escape the dialectics of nature, which is right and wrong, which is better and which is worse, which is happy and which is worrying, can it be said in a word? -"If Memory Can Be Transplanted"

A clever beginning of the topic composition

A good beginning is half the battle, and the beginning of the article should be beautiful and handsome. However, the beginning of many students' compositions is either irrelevant to Wan Li, empty and tasteless, or bland, which does not meet the requirements of "vivid image" and "literary talent" in the cooperation paper. The following is an example.

Material: Businessmen say that happiness is to see the business they have painstakingly managed booming; The teacher said that happiness is the joy of seeing yourself "full of peaches and plums"; Parents say that happiness is to see their children grow up; My little sister said that happiness is to wear a beautiful skirt to celebrate Children's Day on June 1st. Senior three students say that happiness is to see the smiling face of the lovely sun in the performance barometer ...

Please write the beginning of an article on the topic of "happiness".

general requirements

1. If you are not writing a novel, you must deduct the topic at the beginning? It is best to have topic words. The deduction should be flexible and avoid repeating the topic.

2. At the beginning, we should try our best to avoid plain abstract discussion and avoid telling lengthy stories as the beginning of discussion.

3. at the beginning, it is necessary to make it small, and choosing one level from the big topic is conducive to specific description and lyricism.

4. The beginning should reflect literary talent and emotion.

1. Process

This way of beginning is easy to write narratives and essays about my experiences and emotions.

Example: When I was a child, I was always fascinated by other people's stories, moved by others' feelings, and grieved by others' sadness. Once my tears were weathered in the depths of my memory ...

When others no longer touched me, I tried to touch myself, so I raised a pen-writing, which was my happiness.

Comment: Write out the reason why writing is "my happiness" in a short process, and introduce the topic naturally.

2. Analogy

Generally, this kind of topic is introduced into life by natural phenomena and scenery, which can obviously reflect literary talent and certain ingenuity.

Example: Happiness, a wave jumping in the sea, has gone through the valleys of Qian Shan, and it is free; Happiness, a note dancing on the piano, is wonderful after careful creation; Happiness, the unchanging truth in life, is eternal through unremitting efforts; Happiness is a harvest after hard work, and a fruit watered by sweat.

comments: from nature to life, the introduction echoes well, which better reflects literary talent.

3. Dialogue

It is generally lively and natural to lead out the main idea in a dialogue way, and it is not easy to get off topic.

Example: In the early morning, the sun has just risen. I asked a blind man, "Are you happy?" "Happy. Because I can feel the warmth of the sun in my heart. "

in the distance, an old man who was stumbling came over. I asked, "Are you happy?" "Happy. Because my children and grandchildren are full. "

I asked according to my heart, "Are you happy?" "Happy. Because I have the love of my loved ones. "

yes, the greatest happiness in life is to cherish possession.

comment: starting with a dialogue naturally leads to the center of your expression-cherishing what you have now is happiness.

fourth, lens style

choose the lens in life that can reflect the theme of the topic and write it concretely and vividly.

Example: Birds are singing happily in the morning fog; The stream flows happily in the mountain stream; The breeze caresses the mountain forest happily in the spring; The drizzle happily moistens the earth in the coolness. Friend, look at these, can you not be tempted?

We are heartbroken because we are eager for a happy life. How can you be happy? Happiness comes from a little satisfaction in life.

Comments: Starting from the beautiful scenery of nature, the topic of "happiness" is introduced, and the writing is natural and smooth. Clear structure and open mind.

V. Summary

This kind of opening makes up for the defects of generalities at the beginning and puts forward opinions concisely and clearly.

Example: Happiness is the mood of the elderly when they see their children and grandchildren; Happiness is the mood when two lovers snuggle together quietly; Happiness is the feeling of getting a favorite book and eating a sweet strawberry.

Happiness is a deep feeling.

Comments: Make a group of three internally related scenes, and use a summary period to illustrate the main idea of the article.

VI. Inverse formula

Starting from the opposite angle to the topic material or from the opposite side, it is easy to create new ideas.

Example: When Jane Eyre said, "I am not an emotionless machine", I smiled like a bitter gourd. I am the emotionless dead machine with a white cloth on my head.

is it too exaggerated? No! Seriously, I said that I am unhappy, because of the test questions and exams, happiness has become a rusty screw on the machine.

comments: starting from the opposite side,