Practical practice of the proposition composition "Standing with you all the way"

Author/Shandong Liu Guiyou

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Read the text below and compose according to the requirements .

Farewell to the ignorant youthful days, we open our arms to embrace the colorful youth. Along the way, the love of relatives, the support of teachers and friends, the guidance of knowledge, the beautiful vision, or...

Please write an essay of no less than 600 words titled "Stay with me all the way" article. You can decide your own intention and choose your own style (except poetry).

Explanation of the question

When reviewing the question, you should grasp the key word "all the way". "All the way" highlights the span of time, so the events selected in writing must be "staged" and cannot be concentrated at a certain point in time.

From the materials provided, it can be seen that the companions along the way can be actual references, such as relatives, teachers, friends, etc.; they can also be imaginary references, such as knowledge, longing, beliefs, etc. Regardless of whether it is actual or imaginary, you should not be limited to the given materials when writing. You can and should broaden your ideas based on the materials.

Guidance of ideas

Conceptual angle 1: Write about the care and help of parents, teachers and friends who accompany you all the way. The river of time flows slowly, and we will receive a lot of care on the way to growth. Parents' care, teachers' greetings, friends' help... This heavy love accompanies us as we grow up step by step, making us feel extremely happy and giving us a grateful heart...

Conception angle two: write about specific things along the way. For example, students who like reading can write books to accompany them through the spring, summer, autumn and winter, cultivating their sentiments and increasing their wisdom; students who like to play chess can write chess pieces to accompany them and give them the fun of the game... You can also place the love of parents, teachers and friends on a specific thing, such as a Xinhua dictionary that you have always treasured because it was given to you by your father after you made a mistake in reading a word.

Conception angle three: writing abstract things along the way. You can choose knowledge, longing, happiness...for example, "happiness will accompany you all the way."

Conception angle four: Change the perspective, change others and "me" to "accompany you all the way" and give "me" care to "I" accompany others all the way, and "I" give care and help to others. For example, it can be written about a friend who encountered setbacks and depression, and that I accompanied him along the way and helped him get out of the trough of life; you can also write that my grandma is older and I understand the value of family affection. After studying, I chatted with her and let her She feels the happiness of life...

No matter what the intention is, you must pay attention to touching people with details and true feelings, and avoid speaking in generalities.

Classic material

○Quotes

The reason why the grass is green is because of the presence of rain and dew; the reason why the big trees have lush branches and leaves is because Because they are accompanied by the earth; the reason why flowers are fragrant and charming is because they are accompanied by the sun.

——Bi Shumin

With a good book, life will never be lonely.

——Wang Zengqi

It is always uncomfortable to walk alone, without the care of others. When everyone comes together, loneliness and isolation will no longer exist.

——Lin Ping

Farewell tomorrow morning, I hope the clouds and the sun will accompany you to the end of the world; flowers and green grass will accompany you, spreading out a bright future for you .

——Anonymous

○ Case

Cai Chang’s brother Cai Hesen and Zhou Enlai organized the Xinmin Society Studying in France Society in Paris to provide work-study students in France. Students launched a struggle to obtain living support from the Beiyang government. Cai Chang is also one of them.

At a gathering of students studying in France, young Li Fuchun met Cai Chang, who was holding a leaflet in his hand. The moment their eyes met, he was fascinated by Cai Chang's youthful look. He caught up with her and sent her home. Along the way, they talked about study, life, revolution, and the Xinmin Society, which was very speculative... Cai Chang's mother, Ge Jianhao, liked this simple and lively Hunan young man very much, and warmly entertained him to eat in his hometown. Spicy noodles.

In front of the Beiyang Government’s Legation in France, Cai Hesen, Zhou Enlai, and Xiang Jingyu led work-study students to demonstrate and petition the Beiyang Government to recover the living expenses of the students studying in France. The despicable Minister Chen summoned the French police to suppress the students. In the chaos, Li Fuchun was knocked to the ground by the patrol police in order to save Cai Chang. His "Communist Manifesto" was stained with blood...

Cai Chang was moved by Li Fuchun's true feelings, and they fell in love. . For freedom and independence, and to fight side by side forever, they high-fived and formed an "alliance." Shortly afterwards, the two got married with the blessing of their friend Deng Xiaoping and stayed together for a lifetime.

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Along the way

One candidate

Everyone has a kind of happiness in their hearts, which fills the soul and nourishes life. . In my heart, having you by my side is my greatest happiness! Grandma, can I always have the happiness you give me?

Looking back on the past, I had your care every day. In my 16 years of life, I got used to having you by my side all the way!

Not long after I was born, my parents gave me to you for work and career. For as long as I can remember, I have been teased by my neighbors about being an unwanted child. Whenever I hear this, I will run home angrily, hold your hand and ask: "Grandma, why do people say I am an unwanted child?" Looking at my anxious eyes, you will pick me up and put me in your arms. I put it on my lap and said seriously: "It's not that no one wants our girl. Our girl has the pain of grandma, the love of grandpa, and the concern of parents who are far away!"

When I was in elementary school, I was very ignorant and willful. I would often lose my temper because the food you cooked was unpalatable, and I would even refuse to eat my job. You are not a soft-tempered person, so just put away my bowls and chopsticks. In the end, I couldn't "fight" you and ate the food that I hated obediently.

As time goes by, your hair on the temples gradually turns gray, and time carves wrinkles on your face. You are changing quietly, but your love for me has not changed. That summer, my grandpa went to the back mountain to cut down trees, and I followed him excitedly. If you don’t worry, tell me to stay away and don’t play in the direction where the tree is about to fall, so as not to hurt me. But due to the sudden change in the wind direction, the moment my grandfather cut the last axe, the tree fell towards me. I was petrified and stayed motionless in place. At this time, you rushed over to cover me with your body. The tree was not sideways. The ground hit you on the waist. Since then, your waist has been suffering from pain, and you can't even get out of bed. Grandma, what kind of love is this! You protect me with your life.

Under your care, I grew up healthily and happily like other girls. As I grow older, I have rebellious thoughts. I am always tired of your nagging, and I don’t even know how to care about you. I often get angry with you and yell at you because of trivial things. Maybe God is punishing me. When I know how to repay you, happiness leaves you like wings. A few months ago, you, who had always been healthy and strong, fell down and never stood up again. Every time I have a holiday, I can't wait to rush home. I even imagine on the way that I will see your smile as before when I get home, and hear you calling me a dead girl loudly, but what I see is you getting better and better every time. weak. From you I realize the fragility of life.

You cannot scold me now because of the pain, but from those loving eyes and from our heart-to-heart communication, I know what you are going to say to me. Grandma, I will be fine and strong. In the days to come, I will not forget your smile along the way and your unforgettable love for me!

Comments

The love between ancestors and grandchildren is a relationship across generations. The author simply tells the story of his grandmother's upbringing and education, and expresses his respect and gratitude to his grandmother. The article was written with sincerity and truly moved people with emotion.

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Accompanying me all the way

A candidate

A distant and peaceful song "Travel to Suzhou" accompanies me here Beautiful Jiangnan. There is clear river water there, and there are soft water plants at the bottom of the river. Smell the evening fragrance of the two thousand years of Jian Jia, and savor the folk custom that becomes more and more innocent the more you recite it: "If you follow it, the road is long and difficult.

Traveling back from it, you will feel like you are in the middle of the water..." Playing the flute is like reciting a poem. Every time you press the six holes, it is like bathing in the rain of long drought, washing away the fatigue and lethargy all over your body.

Ten years My career as a bamboo flute has been going on for ten years, and I have regained my warmth many times in the midst of indifference. I am just grateful to have you by my side along the way.

I remember the frail me in my childhood, who was as tall as the bamboo flute. The shortness of breath and the fingers that were too thin to block the flute hole, but I still insisted on choosing the bamboo flute, not for the beauty of silk and bamboo for literati, just because I was intoxicated when I leaned in the corner and listened to the teacher playing.

So, I will be with you on the road of life.

I remember the first time I played a complete song of "Little River Water", I held you in my hand and paid my emotions to you. To you. That time, the teacher and classmates all applauded me, and I cried with joy.

In the days that followed, I carried you and you accompanied me, so we knew each other tacitly. , walked over without hesitation. In your world, I experienced the elegance and beauty of the lush forests and bamboos, and the grandeur of "looking up at the vastness of the universe and looking down at the prosperity of categories". It is a kind of magnanimity with the world in mind. It is an innocent expectation, a kind of detached calmness, and a selfless and unrestrained dance with music.

I once ignored you during the final exam last semester. After the results were announced, I was the first to tell you the good news. Only then did I realize that I had been with you through all the ups and downs, and my fingers jumped as I pleased without any emotion. Express with reserve. I hold you, just like hugging an old friend who has been away for many years.

The geese pass by without leaving a trace, and the wind blows invisible. You follow me day after day, year after year. Through spring and summer, and through autumn and winter, you never tire of listening to me and sharing my worries. Thank you for being with me all the way.

Now that I am taking the high school entrance examination, I still refuse to leave you. A cup of fragrant tea, a book, and the song "The Flower Burial Song" are a very fulfilling evening self-study. Every time I play, I feel like I am in front of the flower tomb, chanting with the Xiaoxiang Concubine, "The flowers are withered and the flowers are flying all over the sky, red." "Who will pity me when my fragrance is gone?"... After letting my thoughts wander, I returned to intense study, as if I was shouldering your infinite hopes.

You are with me all the way, I am full of strength, and you are with me all the way. , I move forward bravely.

Comments

The bamboo flute brushes away the fatigue and lethargy, accompanying "me" through spring, summer, autumn and winter, and accompanies me as I approach the high school entrance examination. The anthropomorphic technique and fluent language describe the spiritual comfort that the bamboo flute gives to "me" and the deep love for the bamboo flute.