Write a composition about one thing about a person.

Pupils write filial piety to the elderly] Pupils write filial piety to the elderly.

Double Ninth Festival

The Double Ninth Festival is a festival for the elderly, and primary school students write filial piety to the elderly. On the Double Ninth Festival, we should send blessings and greeting cards to the elderly. On that double ninth festival, I did such a thing.

Today is the Double Ninth Festival. I'm thinking about what to give my grandparents. Xiao Wang on the side inspired me: "How about Chongyang cake?" I thought about it and pretended to be angry: "please, my grandparents are not in Shanghai, so it's strange that they don't get moldy when sent there!" " Suddenly, a motive flashed through my mind clearly: Yes!

I hurried home, rummaged through the closet and found two beautiful stationery and a small fish hot handbag. I remember grandma once said that she was afraid of cold in winter and her hands and feet were cold. If I give her a hot handbag, her hands and feet won't be cold.

Then, I spread out a beautiful stationery, which was full of my blessings and what I always wanted to say to my grandparents. I have two thin pieces of writing paper in my heart. I signed my name and put the letter in the envelope. I want to send my thoughts and love to my grandparents' home far away. ...

Xiaoyu's hot handbag is wrapped in a gift box with a golden ribbon around it. In the evening, with the help of my father, I sent my gifts and letters, as well as my heart. I firmly believe that my grandparents will be happy and excited when they receive my gift. ...

The second article

Once upon a time, there was an old man who lived with his son, son and grandson. The old man is too old to walk. His eyes are blurred, his ears are hard to hear and his knees are shaking all the time. The old man can't take care of himself. Whenever he sits at the dining table, he can't hold the spoon steadily and often spills vegetable soup on the tablecloth or on the floor. Neither his son nor his daughter-in-law likes him.

Once, when the old man was eating, he spilled soup all over the floor and broke the bowl. The daughter-in-law was very angry and pointed at the old man's nose and shouted, How do you eat? Spill soup and other things all over the floor every day and break the bowls! Do you know how busy I am in a day? You want to kill me! "So, they don't allow old people to eat at the table. When eating, they drove him to the corner behind the stove and gave him a clay pot with only a little food in it. Old people don't have enough to eat every meal and are often scolded. The old man was so sad that he often hid in the corner behind the stove and secretly shed tears.

One day, the old man's hand trembled so much that he couldn't even hold the pottery bowl. It fell to the ground and broke into pieces. His wife kept scolding him, but the old man kept sighing. The couple discussed: My dad, he can break everything. At this rate, how much will it cost us to buy him a bowl and a basin? We must find a way. What is not perishable? By the way, make him a bowl out of wood. So, the son found a fast wood and began to make wooden bowls. In a short time, the wooden bowl was ready. My daughter-in-law was about to remove the sawdust when the old man's four-year-old grandson came running. He picked up the sawdust on the ground. "What are you doing? What do you want with all this useless wood? " The old man's son asked, "I'm going to make this wood into a wooden bowl and keep it." When I grow up, I will take it out for my parents to eat. " Hearing this, the son and daughter-in-law looked at each other for a while, first with a wry smile, and finally began to cry. They seem to finally understand that everything they do is in their eyes and in their hearts.

From then on, they stopped driving the old man to the corner for dinner, and even if the old man spilled something, they stopped saying anything. Slowly, they are getting better and better to the old people.

Composition is the "half of the country" that determines the score of Chinese exam, so the success or failure of composition often determines the success or failure of the whole Chinese exam. So how do you get high marks in the exam composition? I think the following points must be noted.

1. Questions and ideas All exam compositions should be tested because candidates should compete fairly in the same environment. Examining questions is to read and understand all the contents displayed in the questions comprehensively and accurately, read out the intentions of the proposer, clarify the limitations of examining questions, and clarify what I should write, how to write, and to what extent, so as to truly grasp them comprehensively and profoundly. Write a composition impartially. The composition marking of the college entrance examination clearly stipulates that the final score of any problematic test paper generally does not exceed the lowest score of the second-class test paper. It can be seen that the accuracy of the exam is the key factor in the success or failure of the composition. It is intended to ask the author to stand at the height of the times, observe and understand life, refine the theme, and make the theme reflect the spirit of the times, reflect the times, act on the times and beat the pulse of the times. It has promoted the progress of the times. The "meaning" of the article is actually an idea gradually developed by the author in his life experience. It is the product of the "collision" between the author's subjective understanding and the objective reality. It reflects the author's ideological level, cognitive level and world outlook, outlook on life and values formed in social life. In recent two years, the composition reform advocates students' real life and true self. Some students ignore the grasp of the ideological tendency of the article and see the problem incompletely. The views are extreme, and even worse, they doubt the party's leadership and policies because of corruption. Although today's China is politically clear and free of speech, and mistakes will not be investigated for any political issues, as a builder of the future society, we should still have a correct view of right and wrong. We must pay attention to this.

2. Titles and paragraph titles are the eyes of the article, and also the first impression of the marking teacher on the article, especially the writing of self-made topics. The marking teacher attaches great importance to the questions put forward by the candidates. As the saying goes, "half the grain is well planted and half the words are well written", which shows the importance of the topic. Some candidates may not have time to write the title after writing the article, or forget to make up the title. Although the scoring rules stipulate that there is no topic to deduct 2 points, the actual result is far from 2 points. Someone did an experiment in which two groups of teachers graded several well-written compositions according to the two types of reserved titles and hidden titles, and the difference in scores was generally more than 5 points. This is because the marking teacher has a psychological distance from the untitled composition and unconsciously lowers the score level. As for how to draw up the title, I think we should do the following: ① Exactly. It means that it conforms to the content of the article. Also refers to choosing words and making sentences according to norms). 2 exquisite. The number of words in the index question is appropriate. 3 vivid. It means that the topic can reflect a kind of vitality, readability and interest. 4 novel. It means having a new perspective, new ideas and new insights, which can give people a sense of freshness. ⑤ meaningful. This means that it has an inherent meaning. There are many ways to plan a topic, which can be used in rhetoric, quoting common sayings and using old sayings. You can also skillfully use formulas or symbols from other disciplines to ask questions, and candidates can use them flexibly according to their own situation. Paragraph: The structure of the first, belly and tail paragraphs is the most taboo in the exam composition. Is it better to divide the article into several paragraphs? I think it is enough to divide the composition into 5-8 natural paragraphs within 1000 words, because the more natural the natural paragraphs, the more mature and sophisticated you will be. In addition, you should write the first sentence of each paragraph well. The first sentence of each paragraph is like the human eye, and the whole paragraph is remarkable in spirit.

3. Style and Content There are two types of style requirements for the composition questions in the college entrance examination: one is to stipulate that a certain style must be written, such as "writing an argumentative essay"; The other is to exclude writing a certain style, such as "except poetry". Candidates must write in accordance with the prescribed style. In recent years, the college entrance examination composition questions are "no style", allowing candidates to choose their own style freely. Here, pay special attention. No style does not mean that you don't want a style, but after choosing a style, you must write according to the style characteristics and write whatever you want. You can't write at will. Don't write your own thoughts after a little thinking; Take a few minutes to write something unexpected. It is best to set the protagonist as yourself in the narrative, enter the article in the first person, and let the passion of "I" shine in the article, which is sincere and sincere, causing * * * sound. Argumentation should avoid empty talk, groans, slogans, calls, empty statements and so on.

4. the beginning and end of the exam-oriented composition are the edge of the article. All the methods of beginning and ending learned in and out of class can be used in exam-oriented composition. No matter how you start and end, you must start with a pen and point out the main idea at the end. In order to make a good impression on the marking teacher, don't smear the beginning and end. As the saying goes, a good beginning is half the battle. However, some candidates make the mistake of "getting into the business slowly", and some spread out the original simple raw materials; Some materials are laid out from the beginning and spread all over the world. Take your time. The opening is loose, which takes up a lot of space, but the content that should be said later is "yet we called and urged a thousand times before she started toward us", and some of them are only skimmed, which is seriously out of balance, so it is difficult for teachers to measure their actual writing level. It is reasonable for the ancients to pay attention to "phoenix head", "pig belly" and "leopard tail" when writing articles. Or click on a string of ellipsis, so that even if you carve a "phoenix head" and grow a "pig belly", you won't become a good article because you don't have a "leopard tail" and you won't get high marks. The marking teacher measures the quality of an article, first of all, looking at the whole. Therefore, candidates should give the teacher a complete composition anyway.

5. Language and word count test The composition language should be standardized, accurate, individual and energetic. Don't confuse literature with white; Don't use dialects and words that others don't understand; Use less long sentences and more short sentences; We can introduce some new words of the times, quote famous sayings and aphorisms, quote the lyrics of popular songs, and quote the oral folk songs of the people, but the guidance must be positive and the language should really light up. It stands to reason that articles are tools to express feelings, and long stories are short. It seems that there should be no limit to the number of words. However, as a special form of composition, in order to achieve a certain test purpose, and taking into account the test time and other factors, the number of words is generally stipulated. We must follow the rules. If the minimum number of words is limited, write enough words or slightly more than 50- 100 words. If the number of words is insufficient, although the scoring standard stipulates that every less than 50 words will be deducted 1 minute. However, the actual situation is that the lack of words is often considered to be thin and difficult to score. If the number of words is limited, it is difficult to score. Moreover, it takes a long time to write a long composition and less time to answer the previous questions, which is bound to be affected. If there is no limit to the maximum number of words, it is generally limited to composition paper, that is, writing in the composition paper grid. Don't flatter yourself, go beyond the writing style, lest you be ungrateful.

6. Writing and Rolling In recent years, in the scoring standard of college entrance examination composition, writing has accounted for a considerable score. Generally speaking, writing does not require good-looking, but requires neatness and legibility, clear strokes and no cursive characters. Punctuation writing should also be standardized, especially the format should be correct, and no period, comma, question mark, exclamation mark, pause or semicolon should appear at the beginning of the line; Quotes, brackets and book titles do not appear at the end of the first half of the line. You can write a word after these symbols. Quotes, brackets and book titles do not appear in the first half of a line, but can be squeezed at the end of the previous line. Ellipsis and dash occupy two spaces and cannot be broken. If you can't write it, it will be squeezed at the end of a line. As for the size of a composition, just like a person's appearance, impression is very important, especially for the college entrance examination composition. Whether the paper is neat or not directly affects the psychology and mood of the marking teacher, and the handwriting is neat and curly.

7. Check and revise the exam composition questions, just like other questions. After writing, you need to check carefully to see if there are any typos, sentences that are not fluent, and contents that need to be adjusted. If you find typos or improper words, you must correct them. If you want to delete a sentence, you should add it. It should be clear and tidy, so that people can know it at a glance. You can't affect the neatness of the paper because of the revision.