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The state of writing a composition
1. I am a primary school student, and now I am in Grade 6. I read more extracurricular books, preferably essays or novels that strengthen education. I mainly exercise my thinking logic and write a composition, and I can't break my train of thought. When writing a composition, it is best to match your own feelings. When writing scenery, use more modifiers, plus some poems or celebrity words to set off.

Extracurricular reading pays attention to comprehension. Read it briefly first, get familiar with the purpose and theme of thinking and writing, find the central sentence and see what is written around. Besides, extracurricular reading has a characteristic, and all the texts you answer have original words, which I hope will be helpful to you.

You are in the sixth grade.

When I wrote my composition, it was also a tragedy to death. I have been trying to grasp the center and point out what the classic sentence quotations are.

.. it's a pity that in the end, my composition was still rubbish to death. And the writing method they said almost made me feel that the original spiritual writing has become a dead thing with a regular fixed route, a fixed writing method and even a fixed central idea.

I haven't practiced any composition since high school, but now many people say that my writing is very good, and I am even writing a novel.

How can I put it? If you want to write a good composition and practice writing, you must read more books and articles and think more about yourself. Only when you know so much about self-cultivation and have so much ink in your stomach will you naturally show it in your writing.

And there is no ink in my stomach, and my ideological connotation is not so good. I just imitate to learn what writing skills and writing points are ... I think it's funny ... Don't write a running account, briefly describe what happened, and then express my feelings. It must be positive and positive, even if there are negative thoughts, you can't write them. Let them be positive. Of course, the true feeling is the best, and then the beginning and end should be innovative. Primary school students' compositions can start with alliteration. Although they used bad tricks, the teacher liked them.

Finally, we should read more books and think more, and cultivate independent thinking ability from an early age, but this is a long-term solution. The sixth grade is about to take the junior high school entrance examination. Now, read more excellent compositions. It's really not good to recite a few hot topics. So, how can you write in the examination room?

As for reading, the topic revolves around the article, and the answers to the reading questions in primary and secondary schools are found in the short passage. The main idea of the article is not the first sentence or the last sentence. Almost all other texts have original words, so just find them and write them down.

The sixth grade level is ok, but the language expression is not skilled enough, too colloquial and the narrative is a bit cumbersome. Writing articles requires more written and formal language, and the use of good words, sentences and idioms will become a bright spot. This article has a good idea and real examples, but it is still lacking in literary talent. This depends on your usual reading and accumulation. Read more and write more. You can choose to keep a diary or a weekly diary to improve your expression ability. As for extracurricular reading, I have always been good at reading comprehension. I think this is because I read a lot of Chinese and foreign classics in primary school and junior high school, which makes my understanding ability particularly good. I can understand the meaning of an article immediately after I get it, so you should use your spare time to read more books, and there are not many types of reading comprehension topics. As long as you remember the answer mode of each question, you will be more standardized and easier to score.

I hope it helps you, son ~ read more books, classics, classics and articles.

Recite many poems, ancient prose, good sentences and good paragraphs.

Write more, keep a diary, practice writing and write compositions.

Change more, correct the wrong words, correct the wrong sentences and admit that you can't do it.

Writing: a good beginning+the cause of the event+the feeling of the result+the ending: a good beginning+the appearance of the characters+the event shows the characters+the ending: a good beginning+the scenery, the event+the feeling+the ending (pay attention to the blending of scenes). Writing: a good beginning+the source of this thing, and its thing+the end 1. Be ambitious and be different.

Recite many poems, ancient prose, good sentences and good paragraphs.

Write more, keep a diary, practice writing and write compositions.

In the sixth grade, the level of correcting mistakes, typos and other sentences is not bad, but the language expression is not skilled enough, too colloquial, and the narrative is a bit cumbersome. Writing articles requires more written and formal language, and using good words, sentences and idioms will be the highlight. This article has a good idea and real examples, but it still lacks literary talent. This depends on your usual reading and accumulation. Read more and write more. You can choose to keep a diary or a weekly diary. As for extracurricular reading, I have always been good at reading comprehension. I think this is because I read a lot of Chinese and foreign classics in primary school and junior high school, which makes my understanding ability particularly good. I can understand the meaning of an article immediately after I get it, so you should use your spare time to read more books, and there are not many types of reading comprehension topics. As long as you remember the answer mode of each question, you will be more standardized and easier to score.

I hope it helps you, son. Writing a composition is not difficult, but writing a good composition does have certain skills. A good composition either has an attractive theme, or is rich in literature and emotion, or both. A composition combining the two is usually called the best composition, which can be called writing or creation. As a student, I think it is not easy to reach the level of a good composition. Let's talk briefly about writing a composition based on some articles or poems. For example, there is an article about the teacher's embarrassment in class, and the story is very popular. It is said that one day when the teacher called the roll in class, he met a student's name he didn't know, so he used his decades of teaching experience to deal with it-separated from him, and asked the students in public after the roll call: Who did you miss when you called the roll just now? As you can imagine, if that classmate immediately stood up and said that my name had dropped, it would be a cliche, because everyone knows the story, but the author didn't write it like this. The teacher's inquiry was silent below. How to end it? Teachers are naturally people who have taught for decades. He said extemporaneously that since all the viewpoints were put forward, there might be some classmates.

2. How to write a good composition in an ideal state I am realistic, but I am not short of imagination, so I am somewhat dissatisfied with myself.

In my ideal, I should be a burly and handsome Mu Tiezhu figure, but in reality, I am "small and exquisite", which is really detrimental to masculinity. Needless to say, I am small and my head is not big. "My heart window is too narrow (I'm really sorry for the audience). Fortunately, the lighting is good, and my vision is 2.0. I belong to "ribs". Everyone affectionately calls me "thinner". They observed and analyzed my back from a geometric point of view, and then gave me this conclusion seriously: I stand at attention like a sesame pole when I stretch my legs. A friend also smiled and said, "You are so slim that you can take part in the health contest. "At this time, I had to hold back and didn't dare to show my teeth at all, for fear of attracting the notoriety of' dog teeth show their teeth and the dog hole is wide open'.

In my ideal life, I should be eloquent, witty and eloquent, and better than Song Shixiong. But in reality, I am not only eloquent, but also tongue-tied, even suspicious and inexplicable. A simple question, if you want to defend it, often backfires. If you don't argue, it's okay. The more you argue, the less "white" Every time you encounter this embarrassing moment, you simply keep silent and say "silence is golden" over and over again in your heart.

In my ideal personality, I should be very easygoing and sophisticated, but in reality, I am not only tactless, but also angular. I am a famous "hedgehog", which is quite unpleasant. I once enjoyed a short poem, and I still remember it clearly: "I am a rock, and I was born with angular edges." If one day I become round, it won't be me anymore. I have to jump up again, try my best to break myself and rebuild an angular self. " I am like a stone described in a poem, and I really can't cure myself.

The ideal me should be ordinary, ordinary and unobtrusive.

But in reality, I don't want to be lonely. Always try harmonica, guitar and football, thinking that only you can enjoy "authentic and original" songs; I don't care about the advice that "if you shoot the first bird, the first one will rot"; I don't say the old saying that "the wood in the forest is beautiful and the wind will destroy it." I'm bent on appearing in the camera and making a big splash. After drinking a cup of boiled water, my head got hot and my inspiration came. With a stroke of a pen, I painted it as a "masterpiece", thinking that I am emotional and sincere, and Nobel Prize in Literature belongs to me. But a friend circulated it and said, "I dare not compliment."

And sincerely point out this misnomer ... At this moment, I grabbed it, locked it in a box, and muttered:

"You can't eat grapes and say that grapes are sour!" But the manuscript has never been sent, but I still comfort myself: "Failure is the mother of success …" It's hopeless!

This is my ideal, and it is the same in real life. To do that, I must build an ideal "bridge" in my heart and turn reality into an ideal. Only in this way can I be satisfied. Friend, do you believe it or not?

3. The composition on the topic of mentality and state cannot change the past, but it can change the present. Let bygones be bygones. As long as the future is better and unnecessary burdens are abandoned, life will be beautiful and good. Life is so short, why not cherish it? There are too many things waiting for you to do and too many people waiting for you to love. Don't look back, the world ahead is more exciting.

You cannot control others, but you can control yourself. Go your own way, even if it is rugged and steep, but still go forward bravely. You are your own, no one can control your rights.

You can't control the weather, but you can change your mood. If you smile at life, life will smile back at you. Let our hearts not be depressed, let her be free! Let the mind fly freely to meet the colorful sunshine.

Life can't be smooth sailing. We should treat others, ourselves and the world with tolerance. There is no "perfection" in this world, but there is "perfection". It doesn't mean that we can't do it. We must do everything with a serious attitude. Everything can't be smooth sailing, but you can do everything wholeheartedly. Only in this way can we realize our own value.

The long road of life, twists and turns and bumps are inevitable. Falls and failures should not affect our hopes and determination for future success. We can't change the past experience except sigh and regret. As for the future, who can be sure that it will be worse than the past and a continuation of the failed experience?

The past is not equal to the future. Past success does not mean future success; Past failures do not mean future failures. The success or failure of the past only represents the past, and the future is determined by the actions of the present. Those who fail should not be discouraged, and those who succeed should not be proud. Neither failure nor success is the final result. This is a great event in life. Therefore, there will be no people who will succeed forever, and there will be no people who will fail forever. No matter how unfortunate the past is, it doesn't matter. The important thing is that you are full of hope for the future. As long as you are full of hope for the future, you will be full of strength. Whatever happened in the past has passed. As long as you adjust your mentality, define your goals and take optimistic and positive actions, then success is yours.

Whether it is a glorious past or an unbearable yesterday, it is already the past, and the glory cannot be reproduced, and the failure will not last long. We should pursue tomorrow.

What attitude we take towards life is completely within our control. And the attitude of life has a great influence on life. I have chosen a loyal and dedicated attitude, and I am tired of my work. Choose an optimistic and positive attitude, and life will be full of sunshine; Choose an attitude that never gives up, and you will be more frustrated and brave until you succeed; Choose a serious and rigorous attitude, life will be beautiful because of meticulous ... This is precisely: attitude determines height, and what kind of attitude determines what kind of life.

We can't extend the length of life, but we can expand the width of life; We cannot change the past, but we can change the present; We can't control others, but we can control ourselves; We can't control the weather, but we can change our mood.

You can't do everything smoothly, but you can do everything with your heart. Our destiny is in our own hands. We should carry out our life plan sincerely and wisely, face life with a correct attitude and feel endless happiness and happiness!

People's life plays multiple roles, and the change of roles gives us responsibility. Before taking on these responsibilities, it is particularly important to change your mentality. My experience has limited my thinking and I can't think deeply about this transformation process. But one thing I am sure of is that if I don't change my mind, I will either ignore the existence of responsibility; Or struggle in pain and become unacceptable. Once, I tried to feel the mentality of "being a father", but the insurmountable age gap and experience always made this "age-changing" thinking impossible. Maybe this is the reason for the generation gap.

The soul needs people to manage slowly and eat grass slowly. Too often, we can't give ourselves and others a relaxed attitude, face the people and things around us, make ourselves ungrateful, reject other people's criticism, isolate ourselves and embarrass others.

Freeing our minds and establishing a good attitude are the first step to our success in work and study. "Peace of mind is natural and cool" and "peace and distance" are the functions of a good mood. Everything in the world is changing all the time, and a person's mentality can stabilize everything. "Inner peace" is a kind of realm, which is really "not happy with things, not sad for yourself". Don't take everything too seriously in life, but choose something. After all, "you can't have your cake and eat it."

We should relax our mentality, which is the first step to correct our mentality. Don't force yourself, sometimes some things really don't belong to you. Treat things around you with a normal heart, sometimes you will get unexpected surprises, and sometimes hope will become a trap, which will make you feel extremely painful at the moment you fall from heaven to hell. Relaxation is to treat everything with a normal heart, neither indifference nor excessive enthusiasm.

The second step to correct your mentality is to adjust your mentality. On the premise of relaxation, adjust your mentality to the state that suits you best. Is it quiet, reserved, happy or full? We have our own choice. Don't force yourself. There are no two identical leaves in the world. We should let ourselves live smartly and confidently! The ultimate goal of establishing a good attitude is to guide personal practical activities. We should live and study fully with a relaxed and happy attitude and constantly enrich our hearts.

From small to large, we all have our own "endings". Everyone is a shepherd boy, grazing his own soul, making it sunny and dewy in the pasture. ...

Take it in time and live up to the enthusiastic help of the respondents!

4. As long as the narrative environment is described from the beginning, the shorter the beginning, the better. 1. Sitting by the window, the moon is still there. Moonlight slides down from the window like satin ... I wonder who pushed this full moon into the sky. I looked at the full moon as a mirror and the silent night, feeling extremely disappointed.

Tell my story to the moon, tell my troubles. In the last few days of the third grade, the test scores again and again hit my heart and constantly sounded the alarm for me. The moon hangs high on the branches, and the moonlight sweeps sadly to the earth, adding to my sadness.

At the beginning of the above two paragraphs, the first paragraph States that the moon is in the sky, in order to render a sad atmosphere for the story. )

2. The sunset is like blood, reflecting the beach in early summer. Looking at the waves, boundless; Smelling the sea breeze, salty; Listen to Haitao and talk to Kan Kan.

The waves are like songs, and every sentence is full of passion. The waves surged up, washed up on the beach and beat the rocks. Every note is so moving and majestic, just like a symphony of fate. (Selected from Song of Tao, the perfect composition of Xiamen senior high school entrance examination in 2006)

3. Walk through the mossy stone road, cross a pile of crooked fences, push open the creaking wooden door, and a window is embedded in the old blue brick wall. Enough paper is long gone, leaving only panes covered with red silk threads of different lengths. The red silk rope swayed helplessly in the wind, like someone was sad, and like a faint sadness that could not be blown away. ...

Features: overlapping words, metaphor, parallelism, giving the context of the story to be told, burying suspense to attract readers.

Purple clouds filled the whole sky, including a bloody sunset. Such a warm picture shows the warmth and calmness of The Most Beautiful Sunset, which is intoxicating and fascinating. (Selected from the full text of "Bringing the Beauty of Dawn to Lost Me" in Jingzhou, Hubei Province)

Writing about the sunset is mainly to pave the way for writing about your life feelings below, which is an emotional trigger. )

The evening breeze blows the last ripples on the river, the sunset puts away the last afterglow, and the autumn frost watches the last goose return. We stood quietly, our eyes wandering on the distant door of memory. When many have withered, we can at least say to ourselves, "Don't be sad, I have experienced that feeling, although only once." (Selected from the full text of "Once Owned" in the senior high school entrance examination in Anhui Province)

Through the description of "evening breeze", "sunset glow" and "autumn frost", the mood of the characters at this time is set off. )

6. The wind is cold and the stars are sparse.

A hidden moon rises from the river like an illusion, attracting all the lights. I sat by the window alone, listening to the creaking of the wooden window, telling my sad mood, and my heart was even more uneasy.

"Do I really find happiness now?" I walked on, thinking of your tearful eyes. Sandwiches on the table, I whispered, I gave up your sadness and desolation. Looking at that extremely heavy paper, my heart has already been wet with regret, and my thoughts can't help wandering. ...

7. At sunset, the tide receded and the tourists on the shore dispersed. The fiery red clouds dyed half the sky red. The evening breeze bursts, and my heart is a little lonely. I stared at her face, and that smile, faint and sweet, melted people at once. .

This is the last flower in summer. It swayed in the evening breeze and seemed to fall down, but it stubbornly grasped the branch. All summer, it has been fighting against the night breeze. Finally, the first autumn wind blows, it struggles to fall, and leaves in summer with the fall of the last petal.

9. The faint clouds are fluttering, the faint wind is blowing, the faint lake is flowing, everything is faint, so quiet. Now, nothing has happened, and her faint smile remains ... which makes me warm and unforgettable.

10. At the end of spring, with the alternation of seasons, everything seems to be afraid of the hot summer, and even the blooming spring red dares not throw itself into the arms of Mother Earth. The branches used to be red and green, but now there are only scattered stars, and the earth is covered with colorful carpets. In the warm sunshine, only the fallen branches stand alone, waiting for the next spring.

5. See the state of things clearly. Everything in the world is complicated, and many events are mixed together, which makes people have no clue. Only by seeing the essence of things clearly can we succeed easily.

The essence is simple, but it is difficult to do. Many times, we often have a sense of confusion. In fact, this is precisely because we are limited by appearances. The so-called "appearance" can be external, objective, favorable or unfavorable, because this data comes from a wide range of language elements, or it can be a person's inner emotions, such as anger, jealousy and so on. Once limited by these appearances, it is very likely to make some irrational things that could have been distinguished or obviously wrong choices, and eventually fall into an irreparable situation and sink completely. Therefore, seeing the essence clearly can make us not be limited by appearances and become frozen frogs.

Seeing the essence clearly can also help us simplify the complex and understand the problem in the most concise way. In Buddhism, the world we live in is called Hanazono Sakura World for 3,000 times, Zhong Qian World for 3,000 times in Hanazono Sakura, and Daqian World for 3,000 times. However, this boundless world can appear on the Internet, and everything on the Internet is nothing more than a code represented by binary numbers. The two simple numbers "0" and "1" can simplify everything into a series of codes. It is precisely because the original users of binary numbers can see the essence clearly and turn all the complexity into a string of codes that we can use the Internet so easily now. Therefore, only by seeing the essence can we simplify the complex and understand everything concisely.

Only by seeing the essence clearly can people quickly find the key to solving problems and finally succeed. It is said that there is an extremely complicated knot. Unlocking it can be a great success. Many people tried, but they couldn't solve it. Alexander the Great was just a knot cut with his sword. In the end, he successfully conquered a large area of land and became famous all over the world. In fact, if Alexander the Great, like others before him, is trapped by complicated knots, I'm afraid he can't untie this knot, but because he sees the essence clearly, he knows that no matter what method is used, he only needs to untie the knot. The simplest method can be said to be simple and rude, but only those who really see the essence will know.

Seeing the essence clearly can make us not be limited by phenomena, but can simplify things and find the key to success.

6. A 300-word composition about my study.

In the just-concluded mid-term exam, I made many mistakes that I shouldn't have made.

My Chinese has always been good, but this time, due to some strange coincidences, I made many mistakes in Chinese. After careful reflection, I think this has a lot to do with my carelessness in reading the topic. This also extends to math and English. Many small mistakes in calculation and grammar cost me a lot of points. For example, I can't write this for you. I don't know what happened to you. Just a few small examples, about 50 words.

I know the teacher expected a lot of me, but I still didn't do well in the exam. I'm very sorry about that. But since you made a mistake, you have to correct it. So, I also thought a lot about what I must learn after the exam.

First of all, I want to get rid of the bad habit of not looking at the questions carefully in the exam. Sometimes I often look at the front of the topic and write the following questions conveniently, but there are many mistakes. This may also have something to do with answering skills. In a word, through the later practice, I must carefully examine the questions in the exam, see the questions by myself, and see the questions clearly and optimistically. Check it several times when time permits, and never allow yourself to make unnecessary mistakes like this again.

Secondly, I also want to strengthen the practice of Chinese, mathematics, English, politics, history, geography, biology and physics. After the exam, I finally understand that there are mountains outside the mountains and people outside. On weekdays, everyone gets together to do the same topic, and there is no obvious difference. But as soon as I took the exam, I found that there were so many questions that I had never seen before (just make up first). Only blame yourself for not exercising enough. I can't allow myself to continue like this, so I must redouble my efforts, learn from this exam, increase my strength, prepare for the next exam and lay a good foundation.

Practice is the key to exam skills. In life, I should practice and review more, and make a comprehensive review plan before the exam, so I don't have to be impatient and have no direction. Learn to accumulate good words and sentences in daily life and study, and accumulate difficult topics in mathematics. English is a grammar project. Doing cloze and other exercises is also a good way to improve English.

After all, the mid-term exam is not the final exam, but I still have a chance. In the next exam, I will work harder and try not to disappoint my teachers, parents and classmates. Don't disappoint yourself.

For teachers in all subjects, I hope teachers don't lose confidence in me. Although I didn't do well in this exam, I believe in my own strength. I will definitely work hard in the next exam!