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Ancient poems and famous sentences are a rich and colorful composition material library. If you are smart enough to transplant them into your own articles, you can make them colorful and create a strong cultural heritage. So, how to skillfully transplant famous ancient poems and sentences into the text?
First, use the inscription to reveal the main idea.
Inscription refers to an independent paragraph under the title of an article and before the text to reveal the main idea of the article. Borrowing famous poems and sentences as inscriptions can not only promote the full text, highlight the main idea, but also increase literary talent. For example, "a famous person said: send a rose and leave a lingering fragrance in your hand." In 2009, the author skillfully borrowed this famous sentence as the inscription of the article, which played a leading role in the article and set a poetic tone for the whole article.
Second, the quotation begins with a high starting point.
Cleverly quoting famous sentences at the beginning of an article can often arouse readers' emotional resonance and increase the literary grace of the article without deviating from the theme. Such as: "The deceased is like a husband, not giving up day and night!" With the passage of time, generations of sages and groups of sages have settled in the torrent, solidified in their own position and solidified in the long river of history-only by being their own true colors can they be excellent. "(In Wuhan, Hubei Province in 2009, a perfect composition," Being yourself is excellent "fragment) The author made an extraordinary opening, quoted Confucius' famous words, and cut to the chase at the highest point of examining the historical status of sages and sages, which was amazing.
Third, interspersed with words, poetic.
When writing a composition, if a few famous sentences are carefully interspersed in the article, it will definitely make the article poetic. For example, "in the middle of winter, snowflakes are flying." Everywhere is made of powder and Daiyu, wrapped in silver. Thick ice without crack, cold light in short days', cold in winter; When winter comes, flowers will be extinct', and winter is cold; A boat, a bamboo cloak, an old man fishing in the cold river-snow, lonely in winter. Three million Yulong has been defeated by the war and broken bones are flying all over the sky', but the footsteps of winter can't bind people's feelings anyway. Because everything in winter may be brewing the dream of spring, they have an unchanging belief in their hearts: if winter comes, can spring be far behind? "(In Xuzhou, Jiangsu Province in 2009, I got full marks for the composition" Walking into the Four Seasons ". ) A large number of famous sentences are skillfully quoted, which highlights the characteristics of winter scenery, shows the influence of nature on people, expresses the love for the four seasons, adds poetry to the article, and shows the examinee's profound literary foundation.
Fourth, act as an argument to support the point of view.
In an argumentative essay, if famous ancient poems and sentences with profound philosophy are cited as logical arguments to support the central argument, the persuasiveness of the article will be enhanced. For example, "when you open the long scroll of history, you will see celebrities who are full of hope for the future, and you will achieve great success." Li Bai, a poet, had been confused and confused in the face of his own life, but he was able to re-establish his hope for the future before he wrote the eternal swan song "One day, I will ride the wind and waves to make and set my cloudy sail straight and bridge the deep, deep sea", which can not help but make people feel infinitely excited. Back to Gou Jian, the King of Yue, I realized his hope for the country and the nation. It is this hope that encourages him to stand still and be willing to rely on others. Finally, with the strength of the people of China, it became the last hegemon among the five tyrants in the Spring and Autumn Period and occupied an important position in the ancient history of China. " The two famous sentences quoted in this paper can fully demonstrate the view that "hope plays an important role in life" and are full of literary talent and persuasion.
Fifth, put it at the end and sublimate the theme.
In composition, ending with famous sentences can make the finishing point, sublimate the theme of the article and achieve natural and appropriate results. Such as: "He who conquers others is strong, and he who conquers himself is strong", a failed hero and a strong person. Avari, that's great! "(Avari, Greatness, the composition of Shanxi senior high school entrance examination in 2009) quoted Lao Tzu's famous words, which further revealed the valuable spirit of failed heroes, pointed out the center and sublimated the theme.
In a word, classic poems and famous sentences are rich in connotation and profound in meaning, and they are the crystallization of human wisdom. Sometimes it is eloquent, but it is not as concise and powerful as a famous saying. And skillfully quoting famous sentences in classical poetry can make the language appear thick, cautious, implicit and full of philosophical implications. If you can quote skillfully in the composition of the senior high school entrance examination, your article will be full of literary talent and show rich cultural background.
Example:
Listen to the rain.
A candidate in Xuzhou
Summer rain is coming. At the beginning of the exam, Sun's face was still red. Half an hour later, the rain splashed on the ground, and the wind with rain blew in from the door, which made me feel a little cold.
Why does this relentless rain ravage the earth and destroy trees, so that we students can't calm down and answer questions quietly? "The joys and sorrows are always ruthless, and the first step is until dawn." Ruthless rain, you let Jie Jiang leave a sigh that "teenagers don't know the taste of sorrow"; "Sunrise in the east and rain in the west, but sunny on the road." You asked Liu Yuxi to write the poem "Willow Green, Jiang Shuiping Green"; "Rain hates clouds, and Jiangnan is still called a beauty." You let Wang Yucheng miss the beauty of "water town fishing market, a wisp of solitary smoke" ...
Rain, listen, the voice is much lower. You are tired. Do you want to have a rest? Do you know that there has been a severe drought in the old course of the Yellow River? The seedlings need your gift, your care and your running water. All right, stop it. They are still weak. They can't stand your madness or listen to your anger. I know that the torrent shows your majesty, but just a little rain can show the beauty of silence. "Seven or eight stars are outside the sky, two or three points before the rain", how many surprises and hopes are contained in countless raindrops! "The curtain falls, and it's drizzling in Shuang Yan". How much poetry and painting is conveyed by the drizzle!
In the rain, I heard the expectation of the earth. In the rain, I heard the cries of heroes of ancient and modern times. In the rain, I couldn't help thinking of the eternal songs of those literati and poets.
"Sleeping at night listening to the wind and rain, iron horse glacier dream." Lu you once dreamed of the lost land of his hometown in the rain; "There are many rains during the Qingming period, and pedestrians on the road want to break their souls." Du Mu lost in the rain, deeply grieved ... It is a kind of fun to hit banana in the rain; Rain makes people sad, which is a kind of melancholy. When it rains, I can't bear to see that "a pool of broken ping"; Walking in the rain, I came across a good situation and felt sorry for "it rained at home in Huangmei season, and frogs were everywhere in the grass pond"
"Good rain knows the season, when spring comes." The subtle rain reminds people of the beauty of spring. You see, the spring grass is green after the rain, and the bright green makes people witness the true colors of nature, make people daydream about the kindness of the creator, and make people listen to the sounds of nature.
The rain has stopped, the whistle has sounded, and there are 15 minutes left. The rain is going to stop, but my thoughts are still expanding. I seem to have become a drop of rain, and together with many raindrops, I slowly gather into a stream, flow into a small river, and rush to the vast ocean.
"Wind and rain send spring home, and snow welcomes spring." I may encounter many bumps along the way, but I have to do this ... hand in my paper in two minutes. What's the next sentence? You can't lose points in this fill-in-the-blank question! The window lit up and the weather cleared up. "It's already sunny, and the birds are still singing!" "
short review
The biggest feature of this paper is to quote poems and show literary talent. Candidates love rain and love poems describing rain, so they choose more than ten poems of famous poets such as Liu Yuxi, Wang Yucheng, Lu You, Du Mu and Bai Juyi from their memories, which are scattered in the article like pearls, adding a lot of color to the article. On the one hand, it highlights the characteristics of rain and its influence on people's minds, adding poetry to the article. In particular, the topic at the end of the article has an extraordinary artistic conception. It skillfully uses Mao Zedong's poems to imply the artistic conception of the article, including the philosophy of "seeing the rainbow after the storm", which makes people think deeply and shows the talents of candidates.