There is something wrong with your poem. The original poem should be Lu Xun's bleak golden wind, the original text is as follows:

Author: Lu Xun

Works: Year of the Sea and Late Autumn [1]

Content:

I'm surprised that Qiu Lai is human, and I dare to send a spring essay to my pen.

The sea of dust is boundless and heavy, and the golden wind is bleak.

When I was old, I returned to osawa, but my dreams failed and my teeth were cold.

I heard that pheasants are lonely, as if the stars are dying. [2]

December

Precautions:

[1] Lu Xun's diary 1935 12.5: "There is a small piece of cloud for Ji Yi's book:' Autumn shock, I came to earth ...'" "

[2] Pheasant: Zhou Lianggong's "Shadow of the Qing Dynasty" Volume IV: "In ancient times, there was a pheasant before three drums." .

The stars are dry, and the ancient Yuefu is "kind": "The moon is not horizontal, and the Beidou is dry."