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I am also the protagonist of life, staring blankly at the lonely leaf outside the window trembling in the cold wind, looking so pitiful and lonely. For most people, they may only notice the tall tree trunk and ignore the sparse leaves in the corner; but I have a special liking for it. In the eyes of ordinary people, I am just such a leaf - without the beauty of flowers, without the brilliance of the sunset, without the charm of the rainbow, just the ordinary green - natural and simple. On a campus full of sunshine, I am a character that is often ignored by the sunshine. In terms of study, I am not considered the best in the class, and it is difficult for me to be appreciated by teachers; in competitions, I am just an outside spectator, not qualified to receive applause; in life, I am so ordinary, it seems that even I I feel like there is no special highlight. In a home full of warmth, my father is the protagonist of the family economy, my mother is the protagonist of family affairs, and I can only play a dispensable role. I pointed to the leaf outside the window and asked my father doubtfully: "If that green leaf falls, will the tree still grow next spring?" "Of course it will!" The father who was fooling the side looked so confident. "Who do you think is more important, trees or leaves?" I couldn't hold my breath and wanted to go straight to the topic. After hearing this, my father said to me seriously: "They are all the protagonists in life!" "Really?" I was a little skeptical. "Go and do your homework. Tomorrow dad will take you to the Fairy Lake Botanical Garden!" I felt that dad was changing the subject, so I said sarcastically: "What's so good about the botanical garden in winter? There are no delicate flower clusters and no melodious birdsong." "My father said, "You'll understand after you go there." I felt a little confused. The next day, I followed my father to the botanical garden in confusion. The botanical garden in winter does not have the new beauty of spring, the prosperity of summer, or the richness of autumn, but only a touch of green. Like a tour guide, my father introduced me to various plants that are not usually noticeable, including cacti, ferns... Most of them are ignored because of their mediocre appearance, but they look so charming in the botanical garden in winter. : Various shapes and graceful shapes make the botanical garden even more confusing. Plants in winter take off their gorgeous coats and show their truest side to people. The side that is usually ignored is now completely highlighted. Without the blue sky and white clouds as a background, without the crisp and pleasant accompaniment of bird sounds, without the colorful flowers as a foil, the botanical garden presents a completely different flavor. Looking at all this, I was stunned: things that I had not noticed before also had such bright colors. These inconspicuous things on weekdays seemed to have become the protagonists here today. Dad looked at my silly look and said to me meaningfully: "Today you have seen what a protagonist is!" He pointed at everything in front of him, "Every plant and tree in nature is the protagonist in nature. Similarly, we are all the protagonists in life." I looked at my father who was full of philosophy and felt that he was so tall. "Let's just talk about you. You are indeed not very important in our family, but you will always be the spiritual support of our parents. Similarly, at school, you may feel that you are ordinary, but to others, you also have extraordinary meaning. Teacher I once told me that you are a very humorous and independent girl. You bring joy and happiness to everyone. Isn’t this what you are about? Without you, don’t you feel that there is a pistachio missing in the class? , you are also an indispensable protagonist in the class at school." My father's words made me enlightened. The worries of many days were finally gone. Yes, I am also the protagonist in life! Next spring, I believe that the leaf that has been ignored in the cold wind can also bring a stronger spring color to the world with its unique green. Be a strong "tree" In life, we see grass covering the ground, but it is too small to be trampled on by people; we see flowers that are bright and beautiful, but very delicate and easy to be picked by people; and there is only one Only a tree can stand upright between heaven and earth, be self-reliant and self-reliant, and make people admire it. Trees are exposed to the wind and the sun and cannot control the arrival of rain. Some trees die due to exhaustion, while other trees can survive vigorously, not afraid of wind and rain, just because they have found the source of life-water. He also developed a strong will. And these trees are century-old trees, a group of "strong" trees! As human beings, we must also be a strong "tree" that can withstand wind and rain. To stand in society, we must have hard skills, a strong will, and people who are not afraid of setbacks and storms! There are two people, one named Exploration and the other named Xianyou. Both of them came from a famous family and entered the society. Exploration was a man who had the courage to explore new discoveries and set up a research laboratory of his own; while Xianyou casually joined a company and became an employee. Explore and study hard, strive to create your own characteristics, and acquire new experiences and knowledge; wander around without making progress, learn nothing, and just wander around. Ten years have passed like this, and the two young men in their twenties are now two men in their thirties with their wives and children. At this time, Xu Xuan became famous due to his discovery and became the deputy director of a group; what about Xian You? He was poor, gambling all day long, and living on his wife's meager salary. Two completely different encounters resulted in two different fates. Exploring constantly pursues new knowledge and enriches oneself; while leisurely wandering thinks that one can have enough food and clothing by destiny. The two of them are like two trees. One tree is still standing in the wind and rain, but the other tree has fallen to the ground.

A tree also needs the "desire for knowledge" of constant exploration, the support of hard skills and perseverance. The brilliance they create is to become a century-old tree. We should also be a big tree, a strong "tree", self-reliant and self-reliant, standing forever in the wind and rain, not afraid of wind and rain, and a big tree that can last a hundred years! Example 2 of a masterpiece: The Heart of a Carpenter In ancient times, there was a man who was an apprentice to a carpenter. He studied very hard and had a very flexible mind. The master was very attentive to him, but he had never done anything to praise him. He didn't understand why he studied so hard but didn't get a word of praise. After two years of this, he worked hard for two years, and his master was "silent" to him for two years. Although his current workmanship skills cannot be compared with his master's, they are not far behind. But when the master saw the extremely exquisite little objects he made, he always shook his head. He didn't understand. One day, he finally couldn't bear it anymore and asked his master why. The master didn't answer, but took him to a room full of all kinds of fine wood. The master pointed at the wood and said to him: "Within ten days, make these wood into something you think you are best at." After that, he turned around and left. He was puzzled for a while, but when he saw these fine woods, he suddenly became happy again. In this case, I have to be rude, he thought, a smile appeared on his face. Ten days later, he invited the master into the house. In fact, he completed it all in just seven days. In the remaining three days, he carefully made several exquisite objects from other materials and placed them inside. Then he invited the master with satisfaction. The master stood among these exquisite objects and just shook his head. He, who had always respected his master, was also a little angry. These are all his hard work. Pick one at random, be it as big as an exquisite bed or as small as a bird. Which one is not the best one in ten thousand, but the master is not satisfied yet. "Master," he didn't care about respecting him anymore, "can you tell me why I'm doing so well but you're still not satisfied?" The master still didn't speak and took him to a study room, which he had never been to before. Pass. Hey, I didn’t expect Master to write so well. The master took out one, opened it, and let him see it. The calligraphy in this painting includes official script, running script and regular script. The official script is full of waves and time-divided back; the running script is flowing and expressive; the regular script is smooth and precise. Every word is so beautiful, but the whole article looks very uncomfortable. Then the master took out another picture of characters. The whole text was written in running script. Each character was not very beautiful, but the whole text looked like flowing clouds and flowing water. It was free and elegant and very harmonious. Reading it made people feel refreshed. It dawned on him. What the master wants is harmony, and although the ones he made are all exquisite, once they are put together, they are dazzling and have no sense of beauty at all. From then on, he worked harder and often went to the wilderness to observe the harmonious beauty of nature. Later he finally became a master. Comment: The word "harmony" has profound and broad connotations. It can be said to be the condensation of the teachings of China's "Confucianism" and "Taoism" - harmony between heaven and earth, achieving the unity of heaven and man. Throughout the ages, countless literati and poets have tried to describe it. Chang Jian's "The moon is dewy between the pines, and the clear light is as bright as the king", which harmonizes man and nature in the clear moon, and has always been a good story. The exercise places "harmony" in two characters, one of which expresses "disharmony" and the other of which expresses "harmony". Through sharp and strong contrast, the meaning of "harmony" is reflected and the topic is clarified. The exercises are cleverly conceived, with prominent themes and vivid narratives, making them rare masterpieces in the examination room. Let the flower of friendship bloom. There is an old saying in China: "It is better to have friends than to have brothers." Making friends is really one of the joys of life. In the special stage of life in middle school, due to inner awakening, we often feel a sense of loneliness, and we need friendship to comfort our souls more than ever. It is easy to make friends, but it is difficult to maintain friendship. Small things can destroy friendship, so we must take good care of the flowers of friendship. First, treat each other with sincerity, integrity and integrity. The interaction between classmates is really a touchstone. Some people say that friendship between classmates is the purest and most precious friendship in the world. But this kind of friendship cannot be established in a day or two. It is like a flower in a greenhouse. It needs to be watered and cared for with the water of "sincerity". If you are not careful, it may lose its luster and wither immediately. Sincerity is simple, it does not require impassioned words or gorgeous rhetoric, so what is it? It is the excitement you and I feel when we receive postcards from friends many years later. Second, learn to understand and tolerate. As classmates and friends, we must learn to understand. When classmates or friends encounter frustration, depression, or depression, they need someone to vent their emotions to. Listening patiently is a great understanding of a friend. While listening, insert one or two emotionally comforting words from time to time to guide him out of the mud of trouble and unhappiness. As classmates and friends, we must also learn to be tolerant. Third, there must be "degree" in communication. Only by grasping the right "degree" can the friendship between classmates become eternal. Only by grasping the scale of interactions between classmates and friends can we establish healthy, pure and elegant friendships. What's more, "distance is also a kind of beauty." In this way, from meeting to separation, classmates and friends can achieve the artistic conception of "the meaning is not yet finished, the love is not yet over", and only then can they be happy because of his arrival and miss him because of his departure. Fourth, say “no” boldly. It's normal for classmates and friends to often ask each other about things. But sometimes things go beyond the scope of your principles and objective reality. Faced with this situation, you must say "no" decisively.

In short, as long as we treat people sincerely and grasp it correctly, friendship will last forever; otherwise, friendship will be fleeting and fleeting. Let us wish our friendship to last forever! Today's classroom seems particularly depressing. There is no longer the loud sound of reading in the past, nor the usual sound of red-faced arguments. Everyone felt very sad because classmate Wang Ming's father passed away when he was a child, and his mother also passed away yesterday, leaving only him and his sister. What a heavy blow this is! When a child is in need of maternal love, his mother suffers from cancer and leaves him prematurely. How will the Wang Ming siblings live in the future? In our class, happiness does not belong to one person, but to the whole class. Wang Ming's pain of losing maternal love does not belong only to him, but to the whole class. Wang Ming walked in from the door. He had a black gauze on his arms, his eyes were red and swollen, and he moved into the classroom step by step with heavy steps. Everyone raised their heads and looked at him, watching him sit in his seat. The whole class felt extremely heavy throughout the morning. At noon, after lunch, everyone gathered around Wang Ming. Some people looked at him with comforting eyes, some hesitated and sighed, and some stepped forward and patted him on the shoulder. . Wang Ming stood up, walked to the door of the classroom, looked back at everyone, smiled at everyone, and walked out. This is not an ordinary smile, it is a smile that a child puts on when he loses his mother's love, in order to comfort everyone, and is afraid of affecting the learning of his classmates. This smile meant that he could get through it. I firmly believe that he will survive it. Everyone sat together in silence for a long time, and suddenly someone said: "Let's donate money to Wang Ming!" Everyone replied in unison: "Yes! We will definitely support him until he graduates." One cent, two cents, Fifty cents, one yuan...notes were put into Wang Ming's pencil case one by one. After Wang Ming came back, he looked at the money in his pencil box and then at his classmates. They all smiled at him. During the first class in the afternoon, many people put money and a notebook on Wang Ming's desk. Wang Ming opened the book. There was a famous saying in the book: "Life is not a happy dinner, but struggle and hardship; more struggle, more hardship." There are also precious words of advice from classmates in the book. Wang Ming read it, with tears in his eyes, and wrote at the end of the notebook: "I am a member of Class 1 of the third grade of junior high school, and my heart will be merged with fifty-three hearts..." Here For a moment, I felt an invisible force, that is, love. When Wang Ming was frustrated, the whole class used their hearts of gold to warm his already cold heart. What I saw was not fifty-four classmates, but fifty-four gold-like hearts, tightly leaning together... [Brief Comment] The title of this article "Warmth" and the previous article "Care" are actually The above belongs to the same topic. In society, school, and family, people care about each other, love each other, and help each other, which will bring warmth to people. As we said before: the center is the soul of an article and the author’s writing intention. A clear and concentrated center is the most fundamental requirement for a good article. The author of this article shows that Wang Ming's class is a united, friendly, and warm class by writing about the care and help Wang Ming received from his classmates after his mother passed away, and expresses the author's love for this class. Love, praising the spirit of unity and friendship. The author is good at using incisive language to express the central idea. The concluding paragraph summarizes the significance of the event, points out the center with vivid and incisive language, and vividly and accurately expresses the author's thoughts and feelings. These are all worth learning from. 2008 Beijing College Entrance Examination Excellent Essay: The Meaning of Life Published on: 2008-7-22 14:43:24 A cup, a stone, some sand, some water, what is this? If you are a chemist, maybe you can tell me their structure and their ingredients; if you are a physicist, maybe you can tell me what kind of physical phenomena they can produce; if you are a philosopher, maybe you He will tell me a lot of truths. As for me, I am an ordinary person, and I think this is life. Life is a big cup. When I was a baby waiting to be fed, the cup was empty. When we grow up slowly and parents, relatives, friends, classmates, colleagues, society, and the country continue to give to us, our cup begins to have something. There are many things, such as love, wealth, honor and so on. The biggest and most important thing here is "love". This love includes so many aspects of life. Our parents gave us selfless love when we were young. When we grow up, many people give us love. We start a family and have a career. More. When we are parents, we will give love to our children, and at the same time we will also give a lot of friendship to our friends and colleagues around us. This is also a kind of love. Especially, after the May 12 earthquake, in our land of China, Tamana once again understood what love is and what boundless love is. When we see our People's Liberation Army and police, search and rescue personnel, and volunteers working day and night, working a hundred times harder for even a glimmer of hope; when we see touching stories one after another, when for students and relatives , in order to give more people hope of life, many people would rather bear the threat of death than risk their own lives; when we see every Chinese person lending a helping hand and giving their love hour. I deeply understand the meaning of life.

When facing such a major earthquake, we may lose a lot, but as long as there is love in the world, our cups will be full, our lives will be fulfilling, everything will be able to start over, and we will surely rebuild our home. , making life more exciting. Reflecting on our daily lives, we are busy and running around day after day, and sometimes when we rack our brains for a little wealth and honor in life, have we made some mistakes? Maybe your wealth will increase, maybe you have enviable honor and fame, but is your cup already missing the most important "love" in life? When your wealth and honor increase, And occupying the position that should belong to love, then is this kind of life destined to be an empty and incomplete life? A sudden earthquake wakes us up from the comfort of life, and once again understands what love is and what is the heaviest thing in life. Should we also look at our own cups? What else is there? Is it time to clear out some and add some? The meaning of life may lie in this choice, in this cup within the cup. Comments on the Excellent Chinese Essays of the 2008 Beijing College Entrance Examination The 2008 Beijing College Entrance Examination essay title: "The drizzle and wet clothes cannot be seen, and the idle flowers falling to the ground are silent" is a famous line in Tang poetry. Some people say that this is the beautiful character of spring; some say that this is a tranquil state of life; some say that this is the lonely situation of sighing at the unknown "drizzle" and "idle flowers"; some say that "invisible ", "Listening to silence" does not mean doing nothing; some people say that the taste here is no longer suitable for today's world... Please make associations and write an article based on your experience of reading these two poems. (Compiled by YouTheme model website YouTheme.cn) Requirements: 1. Make your own questions and angles. 2. There is no restriction on the style of writing except poetry. 3. The full text should be no less than 800 words. Rain moistens everything and fills the sky with fragrance. Beijing Candidates In early spring, the continuous drizzle scatters in the world, and the drifting petals quietly fall into mud. The drizzle makes the clothes wet and invisible, and the flowers falling to the ground are silent. Has all this really gone silent? Don't you see that after the drizzle, everything is moisturized and full of vitality; don't you see that the idle flowers are floating all over the sky with their fragrant fragrance, turning into spring mud to protect the flowers. Comments: The writing begins with a descriptive style to reproduce the artistic conception of the two lines "drizzle" and "idle flowers" in the title of the composition. The words "continuous", "floating", "scattered", "quietly", "falling" and other words delicately and dynamically depict the mood of "rain" and "flower", which is very interesting in life. The great wheel of time rumbles by, leaving a line of ruts in the depth of history. In the slightly wet traces of the soil, I saw the drizzle formed by muddy water, which nourished everything. I also saw a line of petite footprints in the fragrant soil, recording that someone was walking through here wearing beautiful flower shoes. Comment: This paragraph shifts from describing, asking, and discussing lyrical writing to associations about "time" and "history." It is very creative to use "rumbling past" to describe the passing of silent time. "When you were young, Chen Lixi was a duke, and Xu Guo was no longer a plotter." However, the failure of the "Yongzhen Reform" ruined your reputation, and the wheels rolling south crushed your dream of Eguan Bodai. Comments: With a sudden change of writing, the book turns from things to history, to poetry, and to people. In short, the "Yongzhen Innovation" failed, but it is a new chapter that creates new ideas, which is quite interesting for readers to think about. "When I was young..." the quotation shows a solid accumulation and foundation. However, the miasma in Lingnan could not knock you down. You turned into the continuous drizzle and did your best to benefit the people of Yongzhou. You dug wells, established schools, freed slaves, and created a beautiful scenery in this wild land. Comments: Recalling the past, integrating the characters' character and actions with the role of "drizzle" in nourishing all things, and then briefly describing the characters' achievements, turning them into "beautiful scenery", and the meaning is reborn. With a sinful body, you turned into a continuous drizzle, silently nourishing all things in Lingnan. Behind you is a soul with a clear conscience, a touch of green on the border of the motherland, invisible to wet clothes due to drizzle, infiltrating everything to reveal its youthful beauty. Comments: Commenting on the characters, the words "bringing guilt", "turning into", and "moisturizing" in the paragraphs are both sad and admirable, making readers' hearts tremble. The sentence "Drizzle... soaks..." sublimates the meaning of the text and turns stone into gold. "With an imperial edict, the Han and the Hungarians will be reconciled." Many beauties in the harem have lost their beauty after hearing this. Only you, the weak and beautiful Zhaojun, resolutely shouldered the heavy responsibility of protecting the family and the country. Farewell Chang'an, leaving Tongguan, it is difficult to see the south of the Yangtze River. Standing on the Qilian Mountains with the bright moon rising, you threw the flower-like figure holding the pipa into the desert without any regrets, and made a vow: You are willing to protect the Han and Huns for hundreds of years, until you "leave the green graves alone into the dusk." You transform your youthful appearance into the fluttering petals, scattered in the desert sand, and protect the people of the world with your tolerant love. Behind you is a world of brotherly harmony, national peace and security, a distant song of Hujia music in the desert, and idle flowers. It falls to the ground and is silent, turning into spring mud to protect the flowers. Comments: These three sections quote historical events and ancient poems, and use concise descriptions to vividly reproduce Zhaojun’s magnificent act that shook the past and the present, who had the courage to sacrifice himself and “defend the country.” The words of praise echo the praise words of Liu Zihou, the "drizzle" character mentioned above, "Dry rain wet clothes... show youth". It is not only a clever use of the original poems in the material, but also the author's emotional expression, which is touching. All things in the world are born in this cycle and reproduce for generations. A few words are important, and a hundred thoughts are illuminated by candles.

Although the drizzle is small and invisible, it is attracted in the process of nourishing all things and obtains eternal life; although the idle flowers lose their grace and splendor after falling to the ground, they are reborn in the dedication of turning into spring mud to protect the flowers. Comment: This paragraph is concise, logical, reveals philosophy, and has endless implications. The two words "although" and the two words "but" briefly commented on the beautiful qualities and dedication of "Xianyu" and "Xianhua", enthusiastically eulogized their eternal charm, and formed a three-part song with the above. The charm of sigh. May the river of life keep growing and may the flowers of life bloom forever. Comments: The two words "wish" are used side by side, and the full text is concluded with a dualistic arrangement of words. It is both wonderful that "it comes naturally" and "the lingering sound lingers". (Compiled by YouTheme Essay Network YouTheme.cn) General comments: This examination essay has at least the following advantages: 1. The title is bright, attracting the reader's attention and impacting the reader's vision. The word "run" cleverly connects "rain" and "all things", dynamically revealing the life relationship between the two; the word "香" cleverly connects "xin" and "mantian", making people immediately smell the richness. of fragrance. 2. Description, discussion, lyricism and other expressions are naturally integrated. Sometimes it is described accurately (such as the beginning), sometimes it is appropriately argumentative and lyrical (such as the two "You don't see me" sentences in the first paragraph), and sometimes it is simply described (such as the sentence "Farewell to Chang'an, leaving Tongguan"), and the "drizzle" ", "Xianhua"'s noble character of "infiltrating all things to reveal its youthful beauty" and "turning into spring mud to protect the flowers" is revealed in the writing, which makes readers have to admire it. 3. Elegant diction and touching sentences. Light is "Although the drizzle is small and invisible, it is attracted in the process of nourishing all things and obtains eternal life; although the idle flowers fade away in their grace and splendor after falling to the ground, they gain in the dedication of turning into spring mud to protect the flowers." The sentence "rebirth" raises the main theme of the full text to a higher level.

Reference material: I don’t know if you are satisfied or not, I looked it up online! ! The Color of Love Love, what color is it? On May 12, 2008, an earthquake tore the earth, shrouded in black clouds, and gradually destroyed the city. But we will never give up! Look, love is shining and shining. Looking at the color of love, there is hope of life! You said, love is green. Look, green, armed police soldiers in action! The Wenchuan earthquake measured 8 or 0 on the Richter scale. You did not look back. You rushed towards the ruins and the dangerous area with constant aftershocks. You were racing against death. You ignored your personal safety and put the interests of the people above all else as your creed of action. You started from the god of death. Seizing fresh lives in your hands, you use green to interpret the hope of love! You said, love is white. Look, white, the angel in white is in action! Doctors are on the move! They race against time, they fight against the pain, they hold up the infusion bottles and use their bodies as supports. The white coats that run around 24 hours a day, the angels in white who stand by 24 hours a day, and their focused eyes tell us that love is white and so sacred. You said, love is orange. Look, orange! The rescue team is in action! They go deep into the dangerous ruins, they hold up the dying bodies, they drag their firm steps, they shed their tired sweat, they use their wisdom and do not give up any living life, they create the miracle of life, they turn the orange Love the vivid interpretation! You said, love is yellow. Look, yellow! The Chinese people are taking action, no matter where they are, whether in disaster areas or far away. Teacher Tan spread his wings, protected four students with his life, and flew to heaven; Teacher Zhang took off two wings and gave them to the students to fly; the bereaved civil affairs director directed disaster relief for five consecutive days and only slept for seven hours . Donations, donations, charity performances, attention, the whole country is taking action, which tells us that the yellow Chinese are a nation full of love! What color is love? Love has no color distinction. Love exists in any color. When all the colors come together and become a huge and bright light, love illuminates Wenchuan, illuminates China, and illuminates the whole world! The color of love is the color of humanity, the color of Wenchuan, and the color of China.

I believe that the strong Chinese people will withstand the hardships and become stronger under the light of love! What color is love? Love is the color of strength; What color is love? Love is the color of mutual help; what color is love? Love is the color of faith: Faith: Rise up, Sichuan! Rise up, China!