Dear friends who insist on the 13 Star Gala Camp, Happy New Year! I'm Molly. I am very happy to share it with you on the third day of the lunar new year. The theme I share today is: how to make my speech deeply rooted in the hearts of the people.

There is a popular ratio in the speech circle: 55, 38 and 7. This means that the speech is multi-faceted, with body language accounting for 55%, pronunciation accounting for 38% and content accounting for 7%. That's right. If you give a speech on the stage, you are stiff, reluctant and unconfident. Obviously, such a speech is hard to move people. And if your content is not wonderful, open it again, it's still the same. Therefore, if the speech content is wonderful and touching, it will make your speech icing on the cake.

So how to write an impressive speech? Today, I want to share six aspects with you:

1, how to establish the theme of the speech and the principles of establishing the theme.

2. How to structure your own speech.

3. How to organize your speech with good materials and language.

4. Be sure to pay attention to the beginning and the end.

5. After the speech, rethink your title. And master a few tips.

6. Enjoy the speech.

First, how to establish the theme of the speech

Just like writing a composition, making a work report and writing an article, establishing a theme is actually "what are you going to say?" That is, before writing.

The question of what to say is very important, which determines whether it can attract the audience.

Whether you are thinking in your head or writing, first look at the book, look at the web page, and then think about the theme of your speech.

To create a theme, you can follow this principle:

1, the theme should be healthy. For example, when we talk about ideals, the first thing to consider is that "ideals are positive and promising", rather than "ideals are full, reality is very skinny, and my ideals are far from me after all, which is a pity". If so, the audience will think, what is this? Too pessimistic, I don't want to hear it.

2. The theme should be novel. We should also jump out of the old box and think of ways to speak creatively. For example, there is an old saying that "those who are near ink are black", and one can write such a novel view that "those who are near ink are not necessarily black", which makes people shine at the moment. Freshness means "speaking people's words" and "speaking things that people have not said"; "People don't have me" and "People have me".

3. The theme should be profound. We should not only look at the surface of the problem, but also look at the essence through the phenomenon. If your speech is only superficial, it won't leave a deep impression on everyone. Therefore, a good speech should not only talk about "what" but also "why" and "how to do it".

Tips for establishing a theme: seeing the big from the small.

Start with life and short stories. Small events reflect the truth and make your speech more lively and interesting.

For example, the theme of the Belt and Road is too big. It will be easier to understand if we talk about the great changes in our lives in the past 20 years due to our close ties with the world and international trade cooperation.

Therefore, the theme of the speech: health, novelty, profundity, seeing the big from the small.

2. How to organize your speech?

That is, the structure of the speech. A complete speech must have a beginning and an end.

When commenting, we learned the structure of hamburgers, which can also be used in the writing of speeches. Or the structure of Sugar-Coated Berry.

This structure is used a lot, mainly because: there are main lines interspersed, and it is not easy to go astray; It has a head and a tail and is complete; The meat, vegetables or Sugar-Coated Berry are all seasoned, which makes people feel colorful.

The characteristics of a good speech: 1, the overall structure of the total score, of course, the total score can also be divided A good speaker will always spend a long time telling stories, which is what we usually do, and finally suddenly reveal the theme, giving people an unexpected feeling. But most speakers suggest using total score or total score, because people will know what you are talking about after you start showing the theme. This is a common method of insurance.

2.30 second rule

In the first 30 seconds, the theme was announced.

3. Three theoretical principles. Have you noticed that the number 3 is very common? For example, the hamburger just mentioned is 1, which is 2 cents and 3 yuan in total. Comments: We are also three. Let's talk about our overall feelings about noodle homework first, then say a few advantages and suggestions, and finally sum up our views.

When writing a speech, there are generally three points in the middle of the argument. It will be easier to impress everyone at three o'clock.

Here is a detailed introduction to the general structure of the speech. I kind of gave flowers to the Buddha. A tutor has talked about this structure before.

The first step is to start with the theme and list three reasons.

The second step is to explain the three reasons and give the demonstration process. Usually used, first, second and third.

The third step is to summarize the viewpoint and sublimate the theme.

Third, how to organize your speech with good materials and language.

The routine of selecting materials comes from life, right? With so many things in life, how should we choose?

1, first establish "what to write"

Among many materials, you must choose an example that impresses you the most or has the most educational significance to try to write.

2. Establish "How to Write"

After selecting the materials, arrange the writing direction according to the characteristics of the materials, and write one thing in order-"before", "during" and "after"; You can also "flash back"-grab the most eye-catching points and write them first, and then explain the ins and outs of things. A person's words should use several things to set off his character.

Tip:

1, choose your own personal experience. It is not only easy to speak, but also easy to write feelings because of my own experience. It is often the key to success in writing to see the big picture from small things and lead to the big truth from small things.

For example, a little thing our parents do to us can reveal the greatness of fatherly love to maternal love. When you become a parent, you naturally do so. This is the inheritance of love.

2, looking for material in observation. If you can't find your own experience for a while, you can also observe other people's stories. We can also make use of the experience of family, friends, classmates and even the partners in the speech camp.

Famous books and ancient poems are the material of our speech. We can quote some ancient poems and quotations from famous books in the writing of the speech, so that our speech will become in-depth at once.

Ordinary news is also our material.

How to organize a speech in appropriate language?

Language text

Good language will make your speech lively and interesting, and show your writing ability.

A good speech has three characteristics: the head of a cockscomb, the streaky belly and the tail of a leopard.

Cocktails mean: have a good start. How to make your beginning beautiful? Learn to use rhetoric, parallelism, metaphor and other methods. For example, at the beginning of this paragraph: In my life, I have been at school, on my way to school, or discussing what happened at school.

At the beginning of this sentence, we used a comparative sentence to guess her occupation at once. What she wants to say must be related to the school and students.

When we are writing a speech, we should also design the beginning. For example, in my sharing today, I will tell you that our speeches are usually divided into 55 and 38.7, but what I want to tell you today is 7. Everyone must be curious, hey, why not say 55, 38, but 7? Then I'll get to the point: don't underestimate this 7% ratio, because without this 7, your speech will lose a lot of excitement.

Therefore, the beginning must be beautiful enough and attractive enough.

Pork belly: the content of the composition should be substantial. -don't write very broad and empty. How to make the topic of the speech rich and interesting? In addition to paying attention to the structure we just mentioned, we should also pay attention to the language method by using the trisection theory. Like adding some details.

There are many details, such as scenes, costumes, language, movements, demeanor, appearance and so on.

Let's enjoy a few details together.

1, Prussian soldiers are practicing on the grass behind the sawmill. (Last lesson of buddy)-Who, where and what. This is a detailed description of the scene.

Although I am wearing a robe, it is dirty and torn. It seems that it hasn't been mended or washed for more than ten years. (Lu Xun's Kong Yiji)-The image of being down and out comes to mind. This is a detailed description of this dress.

Mother always said, "As long as this kind Yule comes back, our situation will be different. He is really a man with a way. " (Mo Bosang's My Uncle Yule-this is a detailed description language.

If he doesn't say, ... he will pay a lot of money. (Lu Xun's "Kong Yiji"-action details description.

This is an excerpt from literary works. Let's look at the details in the speech.

A colleague once told me, "My job is not to like those children, but to teach. Children learn, I discipline, and they manage learning. This is the truth. "

Then I said to him, "You know, children don't learn from people they hate."

He went on to say, "Nonsense."

Then I said to him, "well, honey, your year will be very long and painful."

Leopard tail: the content has been expressed, and the ending must be clean and neat. At the same time, we should learn to deduct questions to achieve the effect of echoing from beginning to end. Let's enjoy an ending.

How powerful our world will become. If our children are not afraid to accept challenges and think, will they all win a championship? Every child can be a champion. An adult should never give up on them. He knows the power of contact and firmly believes that they can be the best themselves. This profession is arduous, but it is not impossible. We can, because we are educators. We were born to reinvent others.

A good speech is at the end. In addition to deducing the topic and echoing the end, you must learn to sublimate and learn to be infectious. This will make people feel that this speech is very exciting and unfinished.

Tip:

In terms of content expression, we should learn to prioritize, that is, what to say mainly, so we should spend a lot of pen and ink to write the content that plays an auxiliary role. The simpler the better.

For example, I just shared a speech with you. This speech is from Ted's speech, Rita Pearson's Every Child Needs a Champion. So, although she used a comparative sentence at the beginning, I have been at school, on my way to school, or discussing what happened at school all my life. But what she really wants to say is, as a teacher, how to have a good relationship with children and let them know that everyone can be a champion. Therefore, when she transited from the first paragraph to the second paragraph, she quickly got into the theme.

Fourth, we must pay attention to the beginning and the end.

The beginning of a speech determines whether your speech is attractive or not, and whether it can make the audience want to listen.

The end of the speech determines whether your speech has a stirring effect, whether the audience has gained something from your speech, and whether they feel that a few minutes have been wasted.

So be attractive at the beginning-get to the point quickly; Use stories or golden sentences; No, Rory. Very wordy. When I was studying writing and speaking, I saw many people who like to talk at length. If you want to talk about this and that, the result is to grab your eyebrows and beard, and there is no focus. In fact, this is not only unattractive, but also makes people lose interest.

There must be sublimation in the end. Many people are not good at sublimation and feel that they have not grasped the routines and essentials. In fact, these points are enough:

End with a golden sentence. -Read relevant articles and extract them.

Call on everyone-whether it is environmental protection or self-improvement, an appealing speech can inspire people.

Increase interaction-it's great at the beginning or the end, but remember to keep what you want to say.

5. After the speech, rethink your title. And master a few tips.

A speech is an article. We say that the title determines the opening rate and the content determines the forwarding rate.

Therefore, the title of the speech must be attractive.

I thought of the following techniques for the title:

Directly hit the pain point-"How do you know if you don't try?" Great Annie, I'm sorry, I'm going to live that 1% life, Ted Lewinsky, the price of shame.

Grasping people's hearts-for example, Luo Pang's speech "Make Time Your Friend", we all know that time is precious, especially for speakers who love to learn. Time is indeed our best friend. For example, TED talks about "introverted power" and "fragile power"

Curiosity-such as "Carry the Ordinary to the End", such as TED's speech "Can you control others' attention? "People who can't sleep well are full of rubbish."

Share some tips on speech writing:

1, use appropriate celebrity quotations to add points to the speech.

2. Tell stories with humor.

Life experiences and stories are good materials.

4, the usual accumulation is very important, see a good story and a good sentence to save.

I hope my sharing today is useful to you, and I wish everyone a gripping speech.

Finally, share a TED talk "Every child needs a champion"-Rita Pearson.

I hope everyone can appreciate the overall structure of the speech, including rockhopper, streaky pork, leopard tail and her detailed description in the middle.

Every child needs a champion.

? Rita Pearson

Phoenix head:

In my life, I have been at school, on my way to school, or discussing what happened at school.

My parents are educators, and so are my grandparents. For the past 40 years, I have been engaged in the same industry. Therefore, it is obvious that in the past few years, I have had the opportunity to examine the education reform from all angles. Some reforms are effective. While others have little influence. We know why children fall behind and drop out of school. We know why children can't learn. The reason is nothing more than poverty, low attendance and bad peer influence. We know why. But what we have never discussed or rarely discussed is the value and importance of the kind of connection between people, which is called "relationship"

Pork belly: a detailed description

James Camo (a famous American child psychiatrist) said that without strong connection, there would be no significant progress in learning. George washington carver (a famous American educator) said that learning is to understand all kinds of relationships. Everyone here has been influenced by teachers or adults. For so many years, I have been watching how others teach me. I have seen the best and the worst.

A colleague once told me, "My job is not to like those children, but to teach. Children learn, I discipline, and they manage learning. This is the truth. "

Then I said to him, "You know, children don't learn from people they hate."

He went on to say, "Nonsense."

Then I said to him, "well, honey, your year will be very long and painful."

That's what happened. Some people think that a person is either born to build relationships or not. I think Stephen Guy is right. He said that you just need to do some simple things, such as trying to understand others first, instead of wanting to be understood, such as apologizing. Have you ever thought about saying sorry to a child? They were all stunned.

I was not very good at math, but I was teaching math at that time, and then I went to class and looked through the teacher's books. I was completely wrong. So the next day I went to class and said, "Students, I want to apologize. I taught the wrong classes yesterday, and I am very sorry. " They said, "That's all right, Mr. Pearson. You were very involved in teaching, so we will let you continue. "

I once taught a very low-level class, and my academic accomplishment was so poor that I cried. I thought at that time, how can I raise these children to the level they must have in nine months? This is really difficult, too difficult. How can a child regain his self-confidence and make progress in his studies?

One year, I had a very good idea. I want to tell my students, "You came to my class because I am the best teacher and you are the best students. They put us together and set a good example for others. " A student said, "Really?" I said, "Of course it's true. We should set an example for other classes. When we walk in the corridor, because everyone will notice us, we can't make any noise, and everyone must strut. "

I also gave them a slogan: "I am a character. I came here as a character, and I will become a better character after graduation. I'm strong, very strong. I have to be educated here. I have a lot of things to do. I want people to remember me. I want to go to many places. " Then they said, "Yes!" You say that for a long time, and he starts to become a reality.

I did a small experiment with 20 questions. 18 A child made a mistake. I wrote a "+2" and a big smiling face on his paper. He said, "Mr. Pearson, is this a failure?" I said, "Yes," and he went on, "Then why did you give me a smiling face?" I said, "Because you're getting better. You are not all wrong, but you are also right. " I said, "won't you do better when we do these problems?" He said, "Yes, sir. I can do better. " You see, "-18" makes people want to die, and "+2" means "I'm not that bad."

For so many years, I watched my mother use her rest time to correct her homework, went home in the afternoon, bought combs, brushes, peanut butter and biscuits, put them in her drawer for hungry children, and gave those dirty children a towel and some soap. Look, it's hard to teach those smelly children. And children are sometimes cruel, so she put all these things in her drawer. Then after many years, after she retired, I saw some children come back and say to her, "You know, Mr. Walker, you changed my life, and you made him meaningful. You make me feel like a person, although deep down I know I'm not. I just want you to see what kind of person I have become now. " When my mother died at the age of 92 two years ago, many former students came to her funeral. I cried, not because she died, but because she left these connections that will never disappear.

Can we really have more relationships? Of course.

Will you like all your students? Of course not.

You know the most difficult children are always hard to get rid of.

Never, you won't like everyone, but there is a reason for the difficulty. This is a connection, a relationship. When you don't like each of them, the key is that they will never know this. So the teacher became a great actor, we had to force ourselves to work, we had to obey those unreasonable policies, and we had classes. We still have classes, because it is our responsibility. Teaching and learning should be enjoyable.

Leopard tail: end and sublimate as soon as possible

How powerful our world will become. If our children are not afraid to accept challenges and think, will they all win a championship? Every child can be a champion. An adult should never give up on them. He knows the power of contact and firmly believes that they can be the best themselves. This profession is arduous, but it is not impossible. We can, because we are educators. We were born to reinvent others.