● Youth is the blood drop of will and the nectar of hard work-Mika; Youth is a rainbow woven with eternal hope and eternal yearning-gorgeous and brilliant; Youth is an iron wall built with eternal persistence and tenacious toughness.
Faith is the pillar of towering buildings. Without it, it's just a pile of scattered bricks. Faith is the bed of a surging river. Without it, there is only a tidal wave. Faith is the beacon of blazing fire. Without it, there is only a cold firewood. Faith is the main engine of ocean-going ships. Without it, there is only a paralyzed giant frame.
Standing on the coast of history, tracing back to the ditch of history: Dr. Chu meditated on both sides of the Zehe River and died without regret; Wei Wudi pointed the whip to the east with great courage; Tao Yuanming carefree Nanshan, drinking and picking chrysanthemums ... they chose eternity, even if they flatter and slander, they don't follow, which is a persistent choice; Even if the horse dies, it is only a hero's choice; Even if you are poor and have no food all day, you are willing to take pleasure in it and devote yourself to farming. This is an elegant choice. Some choices, emperors will become their great achievements, and sages will touch guests and become their eternal articles.
● Only when you set out will you reach your ideal and destination. Only by working hard can we achieve brilliant success. Only when you sow will you reap. Only by pursuing can we taste honest people.
● If friendship is an evergreen tree, it must be watered by a clear spring from the heart; If friendship is an unbeaten flower, then it must be the rising sun in my heart.
How much laughter friendship has aroused and how many tears friendship has dried. The harbor of friendship is warm and affectionate, and the breeze of friendship sails. Friendship is not an emotional investment, and there is no need for dividends and dividends. (Friendship can be changed into other words)
Yingying moonlight, I scooped up the clearest glass; After sunset, I hold a wisp of the warmest; Burning red leaves, I picked up the hottest one; I picked a bunch of the most colorful herbs; In the long life, I want to pick out the most important thing in the world-perseverance.
If life is a solemn castle, if life is a lush tree, if life is a flying seabird. Then, faith is the pillar of the dome, the deeply rooted root and the fluttering wings. Without faith, there is no motivation for life; Without faith, the beauty of life will disappear. (You can change other words where they are underlined.)
Perseverance is the condensation of a sand and a stone on a thousand-mile levee. Only by accumulating bit by bit can there be a grandeur that has never been seen before; Perseverance is that spring silkworms spin silk one by one, and only by persisting one by one can they break out of the cocoon and see the brilliance again; Perseverance is the sail of a long-distance ship. With sails, the ship can reach the other side of success.
Love is a piece of sunshine shining in winter, which makes poor and sick people feel the warmth of the world; Love is the spring in the desert, which makes people on the verge of despair see the hope of life again; Love is a ballad floating in the night sky, which gives spiritual comfort to lonely and helpless people.
The true nature of the heart should be like this. Success, like the moonlight shining on the flowers, the deep pool is slightly blue, no matter good or bad, no matter the detachment of success or failure, it is a post station with a whip and a horse, climbing high and looking far; Defeated, still dripping water wears away the stone and merges into the sea. There is a kind of pride that is poor and strong and does not fall into the blue sky. There is a kind of stubbornness of "being a self-taught person and constantly striving for self-improvement". Rong, Jiangshan is still the same, the painting style is still the same, just like the sea and mountains, familiar with the years, flashy and arrogant; Bear the burden of humiliation, Han Xin, snow pine, like a fairy with feathers, know how to take a step back and broaden their horizons, and refuse to give up eating because of choking.
● Happiness = material/desire. This is the happiness equation put forward by American economist Samuelson. From an economic point of view, the greater the material consumption, the smaller the desire and the greater the happiness, which is exactly in line with the old saying of China people that "contentment is always a pleasure". On the contrary, what happens if a person's material consumption is limited and his desire is infinite? Mrs. Loizai has so many "dreams" and so many "intoxicating people", how can she not be sad from them?
Russian writer Chekhov said: "there are big dogs and puppies, and puppies should not be disturbed because of the existence of big dogs." All dogs should bark and let him use the voice God gave him.
● Maturity is a bright but not dazzling brilliance, a mellow but not greasy voice, a calmness that does not need to look at others, an atmosphere that eventually no longer appeals to the surrounding, a smile that ignores the hustle and bustle, and an extreme indifference that washes away. A thickness that does not need to be revealed,
Not steep height.
Low love, sometimes don't need a vow of eternal love, but she must need meticulous care and greetings; Love, sometimes does not need Liang Zhu to become a butterfly's tragic, but she must need tacit understanding and congenial; Love sometimes doesn't need to be followed by a man and a woman, but she must need mutual care, support and understanding.
● Smile and sing the song of life. Don't complain that life has given too much hardship, and don't complain that life has too many twists and turns. The sea has lost its grandeur without the rolling of huge waves; The desert has lost its splendor without the wild dance of flying sand. If life only wants two points and one line of smooth sailing, life will lose its meaning of existence.
● Even if youth is a delicate and charming flower, I understand that a solitary flower is never spring, and spring should be a colorful world.
Even if youth is a tree with a mighty land, I understand that unique trees are never tall and straight, and rows of trees are the green Great Wall that blocks the wind and sand. Even though youth is a lonely sail in the sea, I also understand that it is difficult to sail with lonely sails, and the competition in Qian Fan is spectacular.
● Life is not a "digest", it does not accept dullness, but only collects wonderful things. She is a complete process, a serial. Whether she succeeds or fails, she won't leave a blank behind you. Life is not a rehearsal. If you don't walk well, you can start all over again. She will never give you a second chance. If you walk past it, you can't turn back.
Give it a try-instead of standing quietly by the sea like a penguin, waiting for an opportunity, you are constantly hovering like a goshawk, looking for it persistently.
Give it a try-in the face of twists and turns and overgrown future, don't sigh in vain, cut through difficulties and be brave in exploration.
Give it a try-instead of being bound by fate and at its mercy, try to knock on its mysterious door and open up a new world. Smile and sing the song of life.
● What can be broken must be really alive. Lin Daiyu broke up because of her unforgettable love; San Mao's breaking stems from her understanding and detachment at that moment of vicissitudes; Van Gogh's "Break" is the sharp pain of the sun in the light with a golden knife, while Beethoven's "Break" is a tragic movement in which black and white keys hits life with great spirituality. If the breaking of ordinary people reveals the purest and most beautiful light of human nature, then the breaking of these excellent souls, like a silver pear flower, permeates the sky above us.
● Spring silkworms died, but they left behind luxurious silk; The butterfly died, but left beautiful clothes; Thrushcross flew away, but left a wonderful song; Flowers withered, but left a wisp of fragrance; The candle burned out, but it left a bright light; The thunderstorm passed, but colorful neon lights were left behind.
● "The sun rises tirelessly every day" Balzac said that "misfortune is the ladder of genius, the baptism of believers, and the bottomless abyss of the weak". After the storm, it will be the color of Tianshui where seagulls swim; Out of the thorns, the road ahead is covered with flowers; When you climb to the top of the mountain, there is a misty sky under your feet.
In this world, a star falls, the starry sky cannot be dimmed, a flower withers, and the whole spring cannot be deserted.
Try your best to get through every level of life, and don't give up easily no matter what difficulties you encounter.
Tolerance is a kind of magnanimity, which can be selfless, fearless, unrestrained, dust-free and uncontaminated.
Tolerance is an open mind, a broader mind than the ocean and the sky, and a superposition, continuation and sublimation of broadness and generosity. Tolerance is measured, tolerance is priceless, and it is the basic law of life.
If the beginning is compared to "firecrackers", then the end is like "bells". The ancients said, "A good ending is like chewing dried fruit and tasting the fragrance."
Ming, memorable. "Like the beginning, the end is also very important. If an article with a clear theme and a novel angle is read to the end, it is
It's a pity that the ending is not good! The ending should not only serve the content and center of the article, but also be restricted by the "beginning", so that
Speaking of which, the ending is even harder to write. People call the end of a good article "leopard tail". Judging from the composition of the senior high school entrance examination, although there is no need to have an article.
The endings are all "leopard tails", but the endings are also required to be concise, vivid and just right. Generally speaking, the common mistakes at the end of students' compositions are: ①.
Gild the lily. Is the full text has ended, intriguing, but the author is still not at ease, determined to shake a few words, hand over the whereabouts of people who do not need to explain.
Stay, the meaning that could have been realized was broken. Empty slogans. Finally, in order to show his position and attitude, he shouted that it had nothing to do with the content of the article.
Shouting, this ending is a big theme. 3 sloppily. The meaning of the ending is clear, but it is too late to finish, which conflicts with the theme of the article.
From this point of view, the ending of the senior high school entrance examination composition is particularly important. How to write a good ending and improve the quality of exam composition? The following closing technique,
Are commonly used in the composition of the senior high school entrance examination.
1, natural beam. No matter what style the article is, after expressing the content, it is natural to collect the full text without designing the connotation.
A philosophical statement with profound implications is called "natural ending" without carving out rich symbolic forms. Completely avoided gilding the lily.
The end fault of foot moaning without illness is simple, lively and unpretentious, which is widely used in the composition of senior high school entrance examination. The composition atmosphere in the examination room is tense and the competition is fierce.
It is impossible to pay too much attention to "form" and "law" because of fierce competition. As long as you are passionate and comfortable, you can write wherever you want.
It is a good article to express your feelings in different categories, but paying attention to "nature" does not mean arbitrariness and rashness, but nature that develops with literary thinking.
The trend is over. There are many such examples in the learned text, so I won't repeat them here.
2. Echo from beginning to end. The end should echo the beginning, write sentences that echo the beginning, and don't simply repeat. This way of ending is varied.
The common beam acquisition method in this paper. This method can arouse readers' psychological aesthetic feeling and produce a feeling of rounded head and tail. such as
"A Precious Shirt" begins with "At my home, there is a very cool white shirt". At the end, it reads: "In the past four years, this work
Precious shirts, I carefully collect, I am not willing to wear them once. "Praise of Poplar" echoes from beginning to end: "I want to praise Bai loudly.
Poplar! "
3, the pawn Zhang Xianzhi style. This way of ending depends on the content of the full text and puts the theme at the end of the article in concise language.
Express your thoughts clearly, or explain your writing intention clearly at the end of the full text, so this ending method is also called "making the finishing point"
Type ". For example, at the end of Jujube Kernel, it reads: "Changing nationality does not mean changing national feelings. No nation is so attached to its homeland as we are. "
Yes At the end of "Remember a Spinning Wheel", I wrote: "It is a pleasure to struggle with difficulties. -Remember a spinning wheel. "
4. Famous sayings and epigrams. Ending with famous aphorisms and poems is intended to extend the article and reveal the true meaning of some kind of life. It often appears in a scattered form.
At the end of the article, narratives and essays, in a few words, express a profound and thought-provoking philosophy or warning content, which is deeply imprinted on
In the reader's mind, there is an effect of "endless words and endless meanings". At the end of "Pear Blossoms in the Post Road", it reads: "Pears in the Post Road are everywhere."
5. Lyric discussion. Ending an article with lyrical comments can express the feelings in the author's heart, arouse the emotional waves of readers and cause
The voice of the reader has a strong artistic appeal. This way of ending is mainly used for narrative, but also for exposition and discussion.
Writing of literature. There are various forms of lyric discussion ending, which makes the ending more free and a good "lyric discussion" ending.
The ending is bound to give readers a real and full feeling. For example, the end of "Flower Market" wrote: "She stood in a hundred flowers with a smile, too.
Like a flower, like a beautiful and elegant orchid. "Another example is the two natural paragraphs at the end of Memories of Mother, which is a typical lyric argument.
The end of.
The composition should be done in one go, and the ending should be in the same strain as the previous text, which is indispensable. The end of the composition is different from the beginning, but it is also
There are rules to follow. The above ending methods are just some common ending methods, so don't copy them mechanically. The really good ending lies in the exam.
Students' usual solid training lies in the improvisation and "extra-poetic merit" of candidates.
Please look at the end of the examinee's composition:
If life is no longer green, we are still looking for it, why not take action to protect green and the environment, so that we can have green forever. At that time, green will sing: "I come gently, just like you (desert) walk quietly ..." (Anonymous "If Life is Without Green")
Comments: The author naturally thinks of green from the environment, and then starts a topic around "If life is no longer green". Starting with the comparison of "past", "today" and "tomorrow", the article emphasizes that the environment is deteriorating and the green is decreasing, which will naturally lead to anxiety. Then, he skillfully used the beautiful sentence in Xu Zhimo's Farewell to Cambridge, which triggered thinking about life without green, leaving room for imagination. Middle school students' friends, there is no fixed method for writing. Which ending method you use depends on the stylistic requirements and your own preferences, and you can't copy dogma. If some can be discussed, some can be described, some can be suspended, some can be quoted, and so on. Middle school students' friends also need to exercise more and experience more in practice, and try their best to explore in order to achieve the same effect. In this way, I believe that the students will be able to write the ending of "When the bell rings, the reverberation will be around the beam".
Migration training
The ancients said: "A good ending is like chewing dried fruit and tasting fragrant tea, which makes people memorable." Like the beginning, the ending is also very important. It would be a pity if an article with a clear theme and a novel angle was ruined by an ominous ending when it was finished! How to make the ending profound and powerful, lingering and memorable is the key for us middle school students to practice ending writing. The following are several training questions for students to learn from.
Segment training questions:
1. Write a composition on the topic of "reading".
Writing Tips: "Books are the nourishment of human beings" and "Books are the ladder of human progress". The master said that books are the crystallization of human wealth and wealth, and they are also our teachers and friends. We students must have something to say about this broad topic. How to do it better, we should also pay attention to the following points: ① The angle should be new and small, and the story of reading a book and a problem in reading will be written deeply and thoroughly because of the small angle. (2) Write your own experiences and feelings, write real feelings, do not write false and empty content, and do not write cliches. (3) Give priority to one expression, and avoid disunity in style. At the end of this composition, you only need to summarize the full text and ask questions at the end of the article. At the end of the article, for example, life tells me that only those who can really read "extracurricular books" are outstanding children of the times! I seem to feel the wind of the times passing by my ears, leaving a sentence: be careful! I would also like to advise thousands of colleagues in Qian Qian: read more carefully and distinguish carefully! For our beautiful tomorrow! ("I watch extracurricular reading")
2. Lyrics writing skills in winter: An article can express strong feelings, soft feelings, deep feelings and light feelings. The key is from what angle the author writes. This lyrical article. When writing, we should inject the author's true feelings, so that the article can have life and vitality. We encourage students to write stories and express their true feelings, so that the ending can naturally play a finishing touch and sublimate their feelings. Otherwise, the empty lyric at the end will only make people feel like a poster posted casually, which is very uncoordinated.
Example at the end: "If winter comes, can spring be far behind?" This famous poem has been quoted repeatedly for decades and is nothing more than a symbol of hope. In this transparent winter, people can clearly understand the road under their feet with a clear head. Walking step by step, lying still or taking detours will delay the realization of hope.
3. Write a composition on the topic of "window" from your own point of view. Except poetry, the style is not limited, and the topic is self-made
Writing Tip: Building projects must have windows. The human eye is called the window of the soul ... There are too many connotations attached to the window and too many extended meanings, which are worth exploring. As a topic, there are many ideas to elaborate. Write from a familiar angle according to your own feelings. At the end of this kind of composition, you can use the finishing touch. The ancients compared the ending to a bell in order to produce the artistic effect of lingering sound. If the ending can leave readers room for imagination, it will be memorable and will undoubtedly add luster to the article.
Not long ago, grandma left, taking away laughter, greetings, windows and my heart. I know, that window is the most beautiful memory in my life ... ah! Old people, true feelings, small windows ... ("Grandma's Small Windows")
Fan Wenxuan analysis
Ruthless character
Reading Zhu Ziqing's back reminds me of my parents' back. But it's not completely different, because Zhu Ziqing's article shows his father's concern for him, and my parents' back leaves me only ruthless regrets. When I was five years old, I was taken to court, and my grandmother held me in a chair. When I saw my parents, I called them loudly, but they ignored me. My father and mother argued endlessly in court. Finally, I heard that it was awarded to my mother, and my father left the court. I shouted "Dad-",but the "shadow" left me without looking back. Since then, I have lived with my mother and grandmother.
But a few days later, my heartless mother also left me. Grandma wanted to leave me, but she couldn't bear it, so she left me, so I was like a child without mom and dad, living with her all day.
In the days when my grandmother accompanied me, I often remembered the scene of living with my parents: my father rode a car, took me to play in the street and took me fishing by the river; My mother took me shopping and bought me clothes. I can't stop crying when I think about it.
Later, my grandmother sent me to school, and the tuition was provided by my uncle. When my classmate invited me to his birthday party, I really envied seeing other people's parents give their children beautiful gifts and make wishes in front of candles. I thought about my birthday more than once. I don't want that sweet and delicious cake, and I don't want that exquisite gift. I just want my parents to make up and wish me a happy birthday, but I've been looking forward to today, but I haven't.
When I learned from my uncle that my mother remarried and my father got married, I cried bitterly. Grandma came over and said, "Don't cry, son. They are heartless things. They don't deserve your grief. You should study hard and do something big for them. " At this time, grandma's tears flowed down unconsciously.
Dad, mom, I want to have a home, a warm and happy home, I want to have the love of my parents, but I can't get it. Dad, mom, you know, your departure has brought me infinite sadness and resentment, made me feel the pain of losing my loved ones, and made me a child with parents but not caring for them experience many ups and downs in the world! Once again, I call from my heart: "Dad, Mom, have pity on me and marry again ..." However, all I can answer is the echo and the shadow that is getting farther and farther away from me and getting smaller and smaller in my eyes. ...
Final comment: Parents' divorce has brought indelible trauma to children's minds. The little author expressed his yearning for his parents in the article, especially at the end, which was touching and tearful. The real call for parents to remarry seems to haunt us for a long time, leaving endless thoughts and aftertaste.