1. The straightforward method points out the events to be described from the beginning, without any modification, giving people a clean, bright and full of breath.

2. Description of environment and rendering atmosphere.

3. Deepen the discussion of the theme of lyric point method

4. The suspense method of concern

5. There are two methods: suppressing first and then promoting, and suppressing first and then promoting. The emotional tone of the opening and the emotional tone of the text are opposite or similar.

On the contrary, comparing the article with the beginning makes the article feel colorful, intriguing and artistic.

6. Quotations of famous aphorisms and poems.

7. The specific method of writing the ending:

1. Natural closure refers to the natural closure of the full text after the content is expressed, and there is no need to design profound philosophical sentences or carve rich symbolic forms. This ending is called "natural ending".

2. The end of the echo should echo the beginning, and write a sentence that echoes the beginning, not simply repeating it.

3. The finishing touch is to express the theme clearly in concise language at the end of the article, or to clearly explain the writing intention at the end of the full text.

4. Lyric argument: Ending an article with lyrical argument can express the feelings of the author, arouse the emotional waves of readers and arouse their voices, which has a strong artistic appeal.

If you don't finish directly, you can use ellipsis to inspire readers to think for themselves and give people infinite reverie.

6. Famous aphorisms end with famous aphorisms, aphorisms and poems, which are intended to extend the article and reveal the true meaning of a certain life. In a few words, it expresses profound and thought-provoking philosophical or warning content, which is deeply imprinted in readers' hearts and has the effect of "endless words and endless meanings".

7. Principles to be followed at the beginning of environmental description:

1. centrality. At the beginning, we must closely follow the main content and central idea of the full text in order to highlight the center.

2. simple. Language should be concise, and it is best to come straight to the point.

8. Error-prone ending:

1. gild the lily means that the full text is over, which should be thought-provoking, but the author is still not at ease, determined to shake a few words, explain the whereabouts of people who don't need to be explained one by one, and pierce the meaning that could have been realized.

2. Empty slogans. Finally, in order to show his position and attitude, he shouted something irrelevant to the content of the article, which was a big theme.

3. procrastination. The meaning of the ending is clear, but it is too late to finish, which conflicts with the theme of the article.

2. The composition of "landscape" begins with environmental description and ends with environmental description.

Far away, the stone path is oblique, and there are people in the depths of white clouds, which is a quiet scenery; Tree-lined villages and pale blue in remote mountainous areas are a simple pastoral scenery; The desert is lonely and straight, and the long river sets the yen, which is a magnificent frontier scene ... After enjoying one natural scenery after another, my heart is budding, and my budding thoughts begin to drift away, to places that have never been before and are uninhabited. The scenery in the distance tells me that the scenery in Hanshan in the distance is beautiful, and the spring return at the foot is beautiful, but don't forget that the scenery here is the most beautiful.

Although the mountain is silent, it is not. Mountains have the majesty and charm of mountains. Shan showed the magnificence of his scenery to the world with his stalwart body. It is dwarfed to write the beautiful scenery of other mountains with the heroic spirit of Mount Tai. Use its blood.

All the beautiful scenery is in front of us, plum, orchid, bamboo and chrysanthemum. Don't forget that you are a landscape. Numerous ancient literati and poets are interpreting this truth.

In the desolate North Sea, a flock of snow-white sheep bleated behind them. A messenger waving a sheep whip built a loyal landscape painting. Ren Hu's whip was held high. He devoted his whole life to painting artists. It has become the most beautiful scenery in China for 5,000 years.

The mountains and rivers are broken and the wind is floating, and life experiences are ups and downs. The magnificence of the sea has created the beautiful scenery of "lotus leaves connecting the sky". Dante has a saying: Go your own way and let others talk! The scenery here is very unique.

The wind blows low, and the grassland of cattle and sheep is endless. But don't kill our own scenery yourself. As shabby as grassland overload. We should use our hands to build our own scenery and beautify our home.

For example, Tao Yuanming, who is not familiar with worldly customs, created "Picking Chrysanthemums under the Hedgehog" and leisurely saw the idyllic beauty of Nanshan.

For example, Wang Wei's heroic spirit painted the majestic beauty of "the desert is lonely and straight, and the long river sets the yen".

For example, Li Suli's dedication has built a sacred landscape of "serving the people".

Such as Fei's space leap, it has put a bright halo on the beautiful starry sky of the motherland and added new scenery to the land of China.

I want to raise my ideal sail, love on the left, love on the right, hold up the balance with my life and build the scenery with my hands. The scenery you cast is the most beautiful.

Wandering again and again, no longer shouting.

No more hesitation, no more hesitation.

Listen to the sound of water and feel the beautiful scenery

That mountain has a quiet majesty. During the day, tourists come in an endless stream, and messy footsteps and laughter come from time to time at the foot of the mountain. At this time, the majesty of the mountain has also become amiable and approachable. When the sunset glides over the shoulder of the mountain, people who have played for a whole day still sit together and light a warm bonfire with great interest. At this time, the songs sung by the stream were faintly audible, and I was attracted to leave.

What a beautiful scenery. I sat on a piece of bluestone polished by gentle water by the stream, letting the gentle voice of the stream moisten my heart, and the softness and delicacy echoed in my heart. The water swept the green velvety moss on grotesque rocks of different sizes.

Quietly, the moonlight melts into the stream, as if everything in the universe is listening to this wonderful sound and feeling this beautiful scenery. My thoughts drift slowly with the current. An unprecedented sadness and beauty are seeping into my breath with the traces of years. In the flashing silver waves, I suddenly forgot what kind of sound the stream made, but enjoyed a feeling of devotion. The stream flows through my heart, and I have understood it in our subtle feelings.

In such a wonderful scenery, the moon is drunk, the mountain is drunk, the water is drunk, and people are drunk. I looked at the clear water, and my heart was occupied by a mysterious emotion. I wonder if all the complexity and fatigue can go with the stream at this moment to listen to and respond to the natural sounds on the other side.

If the sea is a big occasion for Confucianism to enter the WTO in order to rule the country and level the world and pursue success, then the beauty of this stream and this mountain is the work of Taoism, "Being born but not doing things". I am not a saint, and I can't understand its profundity and mystery, but I realize that all the noise and splendor will surely end in a kind of harmony and tranquility.

A chill passed by and I put my hand in my pocket. At this time, the moon has risen into the air. I think I will come here again to listen to the sound of water and feel the beautiful scenery in my hurried life journey, so that I can blend into the harmony of nature unconsciously, whisper to the waves and stand beside the sunset.

The moon is drunk, the mountain is drunk, the water is drunk, the scenery is drunk, and people are drunk. Just drunk for the beautiful scenery, people feel a lot of beautiful scenery.

Listen to the sound of water and feel the beautiful scenery.

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3. How to write the ending skills of the senior high school entrance examination composition If the beginning is compared to "firecrackers", then the ending is like "ringing a bell".

The ancients said: "A good ending is like chewing dried fruit and tasting fragrant tea, which makes people memorable." Like the beginning, the ending is also very important.

It would be a pity if an article with a clear theme and a novel angle was ruined by an ominous ending when it was finished! The ending should not only serve the content and center of the article, but also be restricted by the "beginning", which increases the difficulty of writing the ending. People call the end of a good article "leopard tail". Judging from the composition of the senior high school entrance examination, although the ending of the article is not necessarily required to be "leopard tail", it is also required to be concise, vivid and just right.

Generally speaking, the common mistakes at the end of students' compositions are: ① gild the lily. That is to say, the full text is over, which should be thought-provoking, but the author is still uneasy and determined to shake a few words, leaving the whereabouts of people who don't need to be explained one by one and piercing the meaning that could have been realized.

Empty slogans. Finally, in order to show his position and attitude, he shouted something irrelevant to the content of the article, which was a big theme.

3 sloppily. The meaning of the ending is clear, but it is too late to finish, which conflicts with the theme of the article.

From this point of view, the ending of the senior high school entrance examination composition is particularly important. How to write a good ending and improve the quality of exam composition? The following are the commonly used ending techniques for senior high school entrance examination compositions. 1, natural beam.

No matter what style of article, after expressing the content, it naturally closes the full text, instead of designing profound philosophical sentences and carving rich symbolic forms. This ending is called "natural ending". It completely avoids the ending fault of gilding the lily and moaning without illness. It is concise, simple and unpretentious, and is widely used in the composition of senior high school entrance examination.

The composition atmosphere in the examination room is tense and the competition is fierce.

4. How to write the ending skills of the senior high school entrance examination composition If the beginning is compared to "firecrackers", then the ending is like "ringing a bell".

The ancients said: "A good ending is like chewing dried fruit and tasting fragrant tea, which makes people memorable." Like the beginning, the ending is also very important.

It would be a pity if an article with a clear theme and a novel angle was ruined by an ominous ending when it was finished! The ending should not only serve the content and center of the article, but also be restricted by the "beginning", which increases the difficulty of writing the ending. People call the end of a good article "leopard tail". Judging from the composition of the senior high school entrance examination, although the ending of the article is not necessarily required to be "leopard tail", it is also required to be concise, vivid and just right.

Generally speaking, the common mistakes at the end of students' compositions are: ① gild the lily. That is to say, the full text is over, which should be thought-provoking, but the author is still uneasy and determined to shake a few words, leaving the whereabouts of people who don't need to be explained one by one and piercing the meaning that could have been realized.

Empty slogans. Finally, in order to show his position and attitude, he shouted something irrelevant to the content of the article, which was a big theme.

3 sloppily. The meaning of the ending is clear, but it is too late to finish, which conflicts with the theme of the article.

From this point of view, the ending of the senior high school entrance examination composition is particularly important. How to write a good ending and improve the quality of exam composition? The following are the commonly used ending techniques for senior high school entrance examination compositions. 1, natural beam.

No matter what style of article, after expressing the content, it naturally closes the full text, instead of designing profound philosophical sentences and carving rich symbolic forms. This ending is called "natural ending". It completely avoids the ending fault of gilding the lily and moaning without illness. It is concise, simple and unpretentious, and is widely used in the composition of senior high school entrance examination.

The composition atmosphere in the examination room is tense and the competition is fierce.

5. There are descriptions of the environment at the beginning and end of the composition. What are the advantages of writing like this? Expressing feelings with things, conveying feelings with things, and setting off artistic conception. Example: 1\ Life is like a poem, full of poetry; Life is like tea, and the fragrance of tea is full of affection; Life is like a song, which is hard to stay in the depths; Life is like wine. When you are drunk, wine will make you laugh ...-(Wuxi Wonderful Scene) 2. Life is an ocean of love, and everyone is breathing and feeling love.

Life is like the night sky, in the wonderful moment of the meteor, people feel magnificent beauty; Life is like a trickle, in the wonderful moment of wearing a stone, people feel the beauty of persistence ... but the most beautiful thing in the world is love. -(the wonderful moment of Wuxi) 3. I can't finish sprinkling acacia blood and tears on red beans, and I can't finish sprinkling willow flowers all over the floor. I can't sleep well. After the storm, I can't forget my new troubles and my old ones. I can't open my eyebrows and I can't see a clearer picture. Just like a castle peak that can't be covered, endless green water, faint ...-(Fuyang spoony scenery on the heartstrings) 4 I miss the homesickness of the wanderers living on the bridge, touching my young thoughts and plucking the homesickness strings in my heart; I realized that the silence of "sunrise is like fire, spring is like blue" caressed my young and arrogant thoughts and gave me a calm mind.

-"Xiamen" shore? Running water? Bold and unrestrained) 5. The flowing water is clear, rippling with the rhythm of sound and color, and flowing with the brilliance and brilliance of life. The flowing water is soft, it spreads the tenderness of emotion and the spring dew of love.

Running water is bitter fleabane, which inspires the symphony of strength and beauty and shows the tenacity of the soul. 6. When Dongpo lay man sang under the surging Red Cliff: "The great river east lost all waves, and the romantic figures of the ages …".

We think this is an exciting and magnificent scenery. When Yi 'an lay man sang in a low voice under the falling red, "Cherry is red, banana is green, and the window lattice is wet with rain."

We think this is a quiet and indifferent landscape. When the stars on the moon are scarce, the violet lay man sings to the sky: "The world is full of powerful people, and they will never suffer from getting a sincere face."

We think this is a helpless and distant landscape. Many beautiful landscapes constitute our vast territory, and many human landscapes constitute our splendid and rich history.

-(Fuyang City, "Harmony of Mind") 7. At night, it is so quiet, and the soft moonlight shines everywhere; Night, so deep, my father's snoring echoed all night like a moving moonlight song. Looking at the sleeping father's face, my thoughts also floated to the holy night sky ... (Jinhua City, "Remembering Father's Old Face") 8. "The wine to the song, life geometry.

For example, it is more bitter to go to Japan in the morning dew ... "Prime Minister Cao Hengyun wrote a poem lamenting that life is too short. Lieyukou walks against the wind, detached and free; Zhuang Zhou is not afraid of worldly fatigue; Li Bai gained both fame and fortune, leaving an eternal story.

On the other hand, people like Zhou Xing and Lai Junchen are greedy for money and lead a restless life. Wei Qing had made great contributions to Huo Qubing's resistance to Xiongnu, but he killed Li Guang for fame, and he himself died of depression. Be kind to people in life, but those who pursue fame and fortune by hook or by crook will have a bleak life.

Although everyone appreciates the philosophy of life that "life is precious, love is more expensive, and if it is free, both can be thrown away", life is a person's first wealth. Only the existence of life can make it possible to talk about others.

-(Nantong "Be Kind to Life") 9. If spring is a group of cheerful seasons, then sunshine is the rhythm of smart jumping. Spring, the messenger of green and the symbol of hope; Sunshine, gentle angel, a symbol of light.

With spring, it is full of vitality and flowers; With sunshine, people will feel warm and comfortable. -(Jiangxi "Let me hold my chest and bathe in the spring sunshine") 10, what is "holding my chest"? Is it self-reliance, self-sufficiency, and not colluding with the secular? Is it bloody, would rather die than surrender, and die for justice? Is it elegant and free and easy, showing off personality, and not flattering dignitaries? How many famous people with lofty ideals in history have explained the meaning of this word to us again and again with their actions and even their lives ...-(Hold your head high, Jiangxi) 1 1, spring, pick a spring breeze, put it in your heart, and let it blow my happiness; In summer, hold a touch of sunshine in my heart and let it illuminate my warmth; Autumn, pick a red leaf, put it in my heart, let it harvest my mood; In winter, I put a sunshine in my heart and let it purify my mind ... I cherish every inch of my life, I long for beauty, I enjoy life, so I will always have a good mood! -(Changzhou "Let Good Mood Lead Us to Success") 0 1. Balzac said: "misfortune is the ladder of genius, the baptism of believers, and the bottomless abyss of the weak."

After the storm, it will be the color of Tianshui where seagulls swim; Out of the thorns, the road ahead is covered with flowers; When you climb to the top of the mountain, there is a misty sky under your feet. In this world, a star falls, the starry sky cannot be dimmed, a flower withers, and the whole spring cannot be deserted.

Try your best to get through every level of life, and don't give up easily no matter what difficulties you encounter. Face the suffering ●02. Standing on the coast of history, I trace back to the ditch of history: Dr. Chu hesitated on the Ze River, and he did not regret his death; Wei Wudi pointed the whip to the east with great courage; Tao Yuanming carefree Nanshan, drinking and picking chrysanthemums ... they chose eternity, even if they flatter and slander, they don't follow, which is a persistent choice; Even if the horse dies, it is only a hero's choice; Even if you are poor and have no food all day, you are willing to take pleasure in it and devote yourself to farming. This is an elegant choice.

Some choices, emperors will become their great achievements, and sages will touch guests and become their eternal articles. Only when we set out will we reach our ideal and destination. Only by working hard can we achieve brilliant success. Only when you sow will you reap.

Only by pursuing can we taste honest people. ●04. Although you are still a seedling.

However, as long as you persevere, you will eventually become a towering tree; Although you are only a trickle now, as long as you persevere, you will eventually embrace the sea; Although you are only a young eagle now, as long as you aim high and fall a few times, you will eventually occupy the blue sky. ●05, Bing Xin said: "Love is on the left, sympathy is on the right, walking on both sides of life, sowing at any time, blooming at any time, embellishing this long journey with fragrant flowers."

6. How to write the environmental description at the beginning of the writer? First, write about the beautiful environment of the small courtyard, and then lead to the character of Grandpa Wang. 3. Language action, because the writer's composition is centered on the characters, showing the characters' ideological and personality characteristics, which leads to the narration and description of the characters.

Ding started after school, and I walked briskly along the embankment of Freedom River on my way home. Listen to the sound of the river beating against the riverbank and watch the old man and children playing on the riverbank. From time to time, I heard the chirping of seagulls and looked up at several seagulls flying in the blue sky, which brought me into a world of reverie. Suddenly my head was hit by a foreign body, which pulled me back from my reverie. What do I want? Is it space food? Out of curiosity, I touched it with my hand The weather is very warm. At first glance, there is green in black and black in green. A foul smell went straight into my nose. "Gull shit!" I gave a cry. I quickly took out a wet towel to wipe my head, but the stench didn't mean to leave my body. I picked up my schoolbag and rushed home with my head covered for fear of being seen. I rushed into the bathroom and washed my hair four or five times before the stench completely dispersed from my head. After a while, dad came back. I quickly introduced this seagull to my father and told him all kinds of crimes, but my father said, "This is not a bad thing. Seagulls are particularly clean animals. This river used to be a stinking ditch, and there were no seagulls at all. Now that the seagulls are here, it shows that the environment has improved. " For a better environment, I generously forgave this seagull.

If it is considered lucky to improve the environment and narrow the distance between people and animals, it is really my luck and the luck of mankind.

I want something.

"Ding" started after school. Curious, I touched it with my hand. It was green and black. Listen to the sound of the river beating against the bank. Seagulls are particularly clean animals. This river used to be a stinking ditch, and there were no seagulls at all. This is really my luck. If people and animals are close, it will be luckier for the earth. "Gull shit." For a better environment, I generously forgave this seagull. After a while, my father came back, which is the luck of mankind.

People are usually very happy when they hear the word lucky. When I saw this black and green thing, I walked briskly along the embankment of Freedom River on my way home! "I gave a cry. Suddenly my head was hit by a foreign body, which pulled me back from my reverie. I quickly and solemnly introduced this seagull to my father and told him all kinds of crimes, but my father said it showed the character's ideological and personality characteristics. I hear seagulls chirping from time to time: "Isn't this a bad thing? Is it space food, afraid of being seen? Now that seagulls have come, it shows that the environment has improved, but the stench has not left my body. I rushed into the bathroom to wash my hair four or five times, and the stench was completely dispersed from my head, and then I brought out the words and words of Grandpa Wang. Another stench rushed into my nose, and this mass was warm.

If the environment is improved. I quickly took out a wet towel to wipe my head, took me into the world of daydreaming, and drew figures. Looking up, I saw some seagulls flying in the blue sky. I picked up my schoolbag and rushed home, covering my head. At the beginning, I wrote about the beautiful courtyard environment, watching the old people and children playing on the river bank.

7. You need a good beginning and ending. (Narration) It is best to describe the environment, and don't copy 0 1. Balzac said: "misfortune is the ladder of genius, the baptism of believers, and the bottomless abyss of the weak." After the storm, it will be the color of Tianshui where seagulls swim. Out of the thorns, the road ahead is covered with flowers; When you climb to the top of the mountain, there is a misty sky under your feet. In this world, a star has fallen, nor can it dim the starry sky, nor can a flower wither and ruin the whole spring. We should try our best to go through every level in life, and we can't give up easily no matter what difficulties we encounter. Standing on the coast of history, it can be traced back to the ditch of history: Dr. Chu thinks about rivers, and he does not regret his death; Wei Wudi pointed the whip to the east with great courage; Tao Yuanming leisurely Nanshan, drinking and picking chrysanthemums? They chose eternity, even if they flatter and slander, they don't follow it, which is a persistent choice; Even if the horse dies, it is only a hero's choice; Even if you are poor all day, you are willing to take pleasure in yourself and devote yourself to farming. This is an elegant choice. Some choices, emperors will become their great achievements, and sages will touch guests and become their eternal articles. Only when you set out will you reach your ideal and destination. Only by working hard can we achieve brilliant success. Only when you sow, you will reap. Only when you pursue it can you taste decent people. ● Although you are only a trickle now, as long as you persevere, you will eventually embrace the sea; Although you are only a young eagle now, you will eventually occupy the blue sky as long as you are ambitious and fall a few times. ●05, Bing Xin said: "Love is on the left, sympathy is on the right, walking on both sides of life, sowing at any time, blooming at any time, decorating this long journey with fragrant flowers, so that pedestrians wearing branches and brushing leaves can step on thorns without feeling pain and tears. An optimist conquers himself before conquering life. Pessimists have limited pain and limited future. An optimistic person has suffered a lot and has a bright future. In the eyes of pessimists, what is possible may also become impossible. In the eyes of optimists, the impossible may become possible. Pessimism can only produce mediocrity, while optimism can create Excellence. From excellent people, it is not difficult to find an optimistic spirit; From mediocre people, we can easily find gloomy shadows. Yesterday's persistence is called foothold, today's persistence is called enterprising, and tomorrow's persistence is called success. ●08. If you only see the black spots of the sun, then your life will lack warmth; If you only see the shadow of the moon, it is difficult to find light in your life; If you always find the shortcomings of your friends, it will be difficult for you to find a bosom friend in your life journey; Similarly, if you always want to be perfect, assuming that your wish has really come true, then your biggest shortcoming is that you have no shortcomings. ●09, the Himalayan mountains go straight into the sky, but there are climbers' flags on them; The Sahara desert is endless, but there are footprints of hikers inside; There are thousands of cliffs in the Alps, but there are explorers among them; The Yarlung Zangbo River is swift and mighty, but there are stories of brave people in it. ● 10. Gone days are like withered leaves and petals, but the innocence and romance of youth are gone. I don't remember how much rain floated in my chest and how much wind rang in my ear, but I only know that vicissitudes of life have already climbed my face. When a person walks with the pursuit, ups and downs are companions, and hardships are also companions. People have joys and sorrows, and life is ever changing. Every year, there are four seasons. In the long night, you can see the dawn, suffering and happiness. After the cold winter, you don't have to squat and you can look forward to the Spring Festival. ● 12, without the depth of the blue sky, there can be the elegance of white clouds; Without the magnificence of the sea, there can be the elegance of the stream; Without the fragrance of Yuan Ye, there can be green grass. There is no place for a bystander in life. We can always find our own position, our own light source and our own voice.

8. Can you help me revise my composition? The environmental description between the main beginning and the end is about to take the senior high school entrance examination. I am very caring, and winter is no longer winter. -Inscription begins: There is no snow this winter, and the cold is biting. The broken gloves didn't keep my hand after all, and they turned red in an instant. Now the teacher likes to cut to the chase, and the language is concise. ) ending: gloves are still not so delicate, not so. Even thin. But this is different. This is a unique glove, sewn with love as the thread and heart as the needle. I took the gloves, but I couldn't say thank you. The cold wind outside the window finally began to snow, indicating the coming of winter, but my heart was warm as spring. Like a year when grass grows and warblers fly. It's not snow but spring rain, except spring rain. Read that answer and add something about that night. The light is dim and I can't see the scene in front of me clearly. It seems that someone is waving something, but I don't like it. I vaguely saw the busy hand. It's my mother, right? It's so late. What is she going to do? I was about to speak when I saw the gloves, which were carefully designed. Twilight enveloped her, dark and hazy. I couldn't hold back my sobs any longer, for fear that she would find me back to my room too early. I seem to be in this dusk, and she seems to be polished. Personally, I think it's better not to write about the cold in winter, but to focus on the warmth your mother gave you.

Sister, I will soon set foot on your point of no return.