First, the grammar is unreasonable.
1, subject-predicate consistency error (subject-predicate consistency error)
She is her home. The correct expression should be: She is her home. )
2. Verb tense is wrong.
I went to the movies last night. I went to the movies last night. )
3. The usage of pronouns is incorrect.
He gave her his book. He gave her his book. )
Second, spelling and punctuation are unreasonable.
1. Misspelled
For example: beautiful (the correct expression should be: beautiful)
2. Punctuation error.
For example: I am tired, so I have to go; Go to bed. The correct expression should be: I'm tired, so I'm going to sleep. )
Third, unreasonable expression.
1. The sentence structure is chaotic.
For example: running in the park, the rain began to pour down. It rained cats and dogs while running in the park. )
2. Vague modifiers.
For example, I saw a man with a telescope on the mountain.
3. Lack of logical coherence.
For example: I love pizza. It is raining outside. I love pizza, but it's raining outside. )