What do you need most at this time? This is a clear spring. Then this clear spring is the highlight of life.
When you are frustrated, you hide in your room and cry silently, giving up on yourself. What do you need most at this time? It is the understanding of the family.
Then understanding is the highlight of life. I don't think anyone will forget the shocking natural and man-made disaster that happened in the Indian Ocean at the end of 2004! If you are a victim, what do you need most at the moment when the sudden waves wash away tourists and coastal buildings playing by the sea? It's someone else's help
At this time, help is the highlight of life, the highlight of all mankind and the highlight of the world. In the face of this disaster, all mankind is shocked and sad, but more is to lend a helping hand and ignite the bright spot of life.
Individuals, schools, provinces and even countries, donating money and materials has become a social trend, so that everyone can feel a warm current flowing in this early winter season. Everyone uses their enthusiastic heart to rebuild their homes with the victims. The disaster caused countless deaths and injuries and destroyed countless happy families. The family members silently shed tears and were in great pain. The only comfort is that they have received countless assistance and care. Now, countries around the Indian Ocean are beginning to rebuild their homes. In the near future, we will see happy families, smiling faces full of hope, and beautiful seas. I can't help but think of a saying that as long as everyone gives a love, the world will become a beautiful world.
In general, the world needs people's care and help, just like a song goes: we are happy together, we are patient together, and we have the same expectations; We * * * wind and rain, we * * * pursue, we cherish the same love. No matter whether you and I have ever known each other, whether in front of us or in the sky, I sincerely wish you happiness and peace! Some people say that disasters can express a person's will, which is true, but in my opinion, disasters are more about the unity of the whole world, the mutual assistance between human beings and the friendship between countries. These are the highlights of life, the highlights of all mankind and the highlights of the world.
In the bronze mirror, a few glittering golden rays appeared. "Life is a hero, and death is a ghost."
Wujiang River, tears of overlord. The sunset spreads like blood.
Liu Banger's banquet was just released, not because I didn't listen to my father Fan Zeng's good words, but because I was broad-minded and not afraid of Liu Banger's evil. Embattled on all sides, I have no face to face my elders in Jiangdong.
I, Xiang Yu, died today, which made the big fellow "fly in the clouds." Before you leave the cottage, you will know that there are three points in the world.
Nanyang Wolong, three attempts to love Liu Bei. "Feathers fanned with black silk scarves, forcing Lu to disappear in the conversation." A straw boat borrowed an arrow, which was clever. Battle of Red Cliffs is the best in the world. What I regret most is that Liu Bei didn't listen to Kong Ming, and the fire burned 700 Li.
When he was appointed to the defeated army, he was ordered to be in danger. Five days crossing Lugu River, going to the deep barren, seven out of Qishan.
It's hard to put a hand back in the palm of your hand, and eventually, "but before he can conquer, he is dead, and the heroes cry on their coats." Zhu Gekongming's intelligence, Wuhou Temple incense constantly.
Heroes are sad and beautiful. There are no cold women in the historical picture.
"Take care of the city, then the country" is charming, "If she just turns her head and smiles, there are a hundred spells, and what will the powder and paint of six palaces fade into" is elegant. A femme fatale, Zhou Youwang bonfire play princes, make praise si back eternal infamy.
"Riding a princess and laughing in the world of mortals, no one knows that it is litchi" Yang Yuhuan scolded. I don't think so. Yue Nv's beauty is not the achievement of Gou Jian's "three thousand can swallow Wu".
Yang's female generals are not all bluffing. At this time, a "white fairy" appeared in the bronze mirror of history. He is drinking and having a good time. Isn't this the immortal poet Li Bai? Great poet! Why "drown your sorrows in wine"? If I had known that the officialdom was dark, why should I "go out with a smile" and feel "Is my generation Artemisia?" The poet is melancholy, with three points of lofty sentiments and seven points of colorful mountains and rivers in the prosperous Tang Dynasty.
Three points doomed you to be brilliant and arrogant. In the picture of the prosperous Tang Dynasty, it is not the image of the emperor, but your immortal Li Bai! ..... On the banks of the Wujiang River, Xiang Yu's blood will always be recorded; The gurgling river will always be Qu Yuan's tears. The hero of the Three Kingdoms, Kong Ming's cleverness, is always the most striking ... the trace of time, the precipitation of history, the flicker of 1000 years and 10000 years.
The story of the dragon girl (the perfect composition of Jiangxi candidates in the senior high school entrance examination in 2006) is worldwide and colorful; Life on earth is full of care. In our life, there is such a true story (concise writing, to the point. )
One winter morning. In a remote alley, there are many people watching together. Suddenly, a middle-aged man squeezed into the crowd, which highlighted his eagerness to see what happened. )
He found a screaming baby girl curled up on the cold ground. This is an abandoned child. Despite some people's comments, he resolutely dragged the baby girl home.
The word "curl" is used accurately. "I don't care" is about my anxiety, and "I am determined" is about a decisive attitude. )
This middle-aged man is a local vegetable farmer. His family is not rich in economy, and they make a living by selling vegetables.
His wife was surprised when she saw her husband coming back with the children. After listening to her husband's story, she agreed to adopt the poor child. The couple discussed it and named the child "Dragon Girl".
Since then, the dragon girl and her parents have lived happily together. But it didn't last long. A good name didn't bring her a happy fate. Dragon girl 1 1 years old, suddenly fainted on the way to school.
After the parents of the dragon girl learned about it, they rushed to the hospital. (Insert identity and family background to prepare for the treatment of the dragon girl below.
"Being taken aback" is not only a modality, but also a psychology. Telling stories and reflecting the "bright spot" in life-adopting abandoned babies. )
In the hospital office, there was a conversation between the doctor and the dragon daughter's father: "Your daughter has renal failure, and the functions of both kidneys will soon be completely lost, and her life will be in danger at any time. If she wants to cure this disease, she will have to change her kidney. " "In the kidney! ? "Dragon girl's father asked doubtfully, and suddenly said eagerly:" Change, definitely change, even if I want to eat, I will change it for her! " (From "indecision" to "eager for success", the two "musts" can be regarded as a firm attitude.
2. How to write a composition on the topic of highlights In today's society, the word "highlights" is used frequently. The new edition of Modern Chinese Dictionary interprets "bright spot" as: ① metaphor for dazzling people or things; ② The advantages of metaphor are outstanding; What association or thinking does the word "highlight" cause? Please write a composition on the topic of "Highlights". Example: ① The highlight of a flower is its fragrance, so it is remembered; The bright spot of meteors is their high speed and brightness, so they are cherished by people. The highlight of the rainbow is its colorful brilliance, so it is desirable. (2) a touch of sunshine breaks through the darkness, which is the highlight of nature; An eagle, soaring into the sky, is the highlight of the animal kingdom; And we kind-hearted and noble human beings, in my opinion, are the highlights of life ... I can't think of it. I have already offered a reward! O(∩_∩)O~ .
3. Topic composition "Highlights", how to write how to light the stars with a childlike innocence-let the head teacher's heart stay young forever "Twinkling stars, the sky is full of little stars, hanging in the sky, shining like many small eyes …" It can be said that every child has heard or sung this song in childhood, and perhaps every child dreams of finding his place in the vast night sky one day and becoming a unique one. What grass can be without green? What kind of flowers can have no fragrance? Which star can't shine? Every student is unique. They are indispensable in the night sky. They are eager to be discovered and ignited. The sacred duty of our class teacher is to light up every star, let each star emit its own light and heat in the night sky, and make their lives magical because they can shine! So how can we make every student enjoy the color of live high? There is a song that says, "Revolutionaries are always young". Only by having a young mind can we always maintain high fighting spirit and revolutionary enthusiasm. Then, I think our education is the same. The head teacher should always have a young heart, that is childlike innocence.
I have been trying to cultivate and maintain my childlike innocence, and cultivate childlike innocence with childlike innocence. Only when the childlike innocence is immortal can I always observe the ever-changing world from the perspective and vision of students and truly enter the inner world of students like friends. People with childlike innocence must be confident. Self-confidence is a powerful driving force for the growth of life.
I often educate my students that many great inventions of mankind are due to childlike innocence and self-confidence. Edison was curious about any subtle phenomenon because of his childlike innocence and self-confidence, and eventually became the king of invention; Newton thought of a falling apple because of childlike innocence and self-confidence, and found gravity as a result; Because of childlike innocence and self-confidence, the Wright brothers envied the freedom of birds flying in the blue sky. As a result, they invented the plane. Because of the confidence and desire to run, human beings have cars; Because of the confidence and desire to speak, human beings have the telephone; Because of self-confidence and the desire to communicate, human beings have the internet ... I educate students like this just to let the confident sunshine illuminate their hearts. Suhomlinski said, "There are no children who don't want to be good children. From the first day a student comes to school, a teacher should be good at discovering and constantly consolidating and developing all the good things in him. "
I think the mission of education is to care for children's desires and make them curious and confident about everything. There used to be a classmate like this in my class. I remember that time I designed a composition training, the topic was "Counterfeiting". Many students expressed their views on various anti-counterfeiting phenomena in society. One of them, Xu Yibin, with the topic "Falsification begins with teachers", strongly questioned all kinds of falsifications in the process of teaching and educating people, and quoted a lot of famous sayings and facts to prove the harmfulness of teachers' falsifications. ...
But I really don't think so. I think children can trust their teachers when they say these words in their compositions. Maybe he is still smug about his unique views and remarks! So I read this composition aloud in the classroom, and many students whispered at the bottom: "He is simply crazy!" " "As I said, Xu Yibin is not crazy. He just feels particularly confident in his observation and ability to analyze problems. Is it wrong to tell the truth because of his confidence? Many of his requirements for teachers are what teachers have been trying to find. Now Xu Yibin has helped the teacher find it, and the teacher here expresses his deep gratitude to Xu Yibin. At this time, I saw Xu Yibin's anxious eyes, which were worried about being scolded by the teacher, flashing the light of the teacher's affirmation and appreciation. He sat straighter and straightened his chest. I understand that he is more confident than before. He will use his keen observation to discover more things in life and tell more truth in the future.
At the same time, there will be more students in the class who dare to tell the truth and express their true feelings! Children's childlike innocence is the patron saint of dreams, pure and fragile. It requires us educators to be careful and light at all times. A good teacher can make students feel the beauty of human nature from an early age, but an incompetent teacher can make children see and accept the ugly side of human nature prematurely, and even ruin a child's life.
There is a little story about a dream: a little boy buried grapes in a flowerpot while eating them. He was told that grapes should be planted with vines, but grapes can't be planted. The boy said he just wanted to create a miracle. Seeing that he didn't listen to advice, his father still observed whether the seeds germinated every day and told him to buy soy sauce. He didn't even hear a few phone calls. As soon as he got angry, he hit him, broke the flowerpot and the boy cried.
One day, the boy saw a girl planting grape stones and told her that grape stones could not be planted. The girl said that she wanted to create a miracle. A few days later, vines really grew in her flowerpot, and the girl was very happy. But the boy cried, because he saw that the vines were smuggled in by the girl's father.
The two fathers in the story played two different types of educators. The former uses the utilitarian and sophisticated mentality of the adult world to measure children's naive ideas and cruelly destroy their dreams of creating miracles. The latter, however, uses childlike innocence to perceive children's dreams, guides them according to the situation, and cares for a pure childlike innocence. Contact yourself, as a warrior in the main battlefield of class teacher education, we can't help asking ourselves: What role did I play in front of the children? Is it the destroyer of cruel dreams or the patron saint of childlike dreams? We should bear in mind that any form of simple and rude denial and indifferent corporal punishment in disguise are wanton trampling on children's beautiful and fragile hearts and immoral educational behaviors.
Children's childlike innocence must be handled with care! Teachers can play many different roles in front of students: strict father, loving mother, brother, relatives, friends ... I am willing to play with childlike innocence.
4. How to write a composition to create a bright spot The college entrance examination composition has always been known as "half of the country" in the Chinese volume. As a "competitive sport", whoever has outstanding skills and comprehensive skills will qualify until he wins the championship. How to improve the grade of composition and attract the attention of marking teachers? This is a topic that everyone cares about. The answer is the "highlight" of the article.
Highlight 1: the idea of defeating others
Intention is a key step in composition. If the intention is better than others, the article will be better than others. The superiority of conception inevitably requires that conception should be innovative and highly accurate.
If you want to have a new idea, you must be good at capturing typical and meaningful materials from ordinary life and excavating important and meaningful themes from daily trivia and common situations. Be ambitious. To write people, we should reveal the mental outlook and see through the personality and soul; To write a scene, there must be feelings in the scene and the scene blends; When writing, we should uncover the phenomenon and see the essence. You should avoid "the first thought" when writing in the examination room, because the first thought is often "great minds think alike" and it is very likely to crash with others. In order to avoid collision, we should adopt a second or even a third idea. This requires candidates to consider several angles and choose a relatively novel and profound idea to improve the grade of the article.
Highlight 2: The content is fresh and rich.
Nowadays, middle school students are more narcissistic than others and pay attention to social inadequacy. In order to have fresh content in their works, they must pay attention to life and society. Rich content comes from the author's rich accumulation and broad vision. That's what the so-called "studying in thousands of books and traveling on Wan Li Road" means. Reading thousands of books can make our articles full of books and rich in cultural connotations, and we can learn from other people's experience, so as to be "poetic and complacent". Walking on Wan Li Road can make us well informed and broaden our horizons. Our motherland is in my arms and the world is in front of my eyes. Vivid content comes from the fiery life and the rich reality in front of us. "Ask how clear the canal is, and there will be flowing water at the source", and life is an inexhaustible source. Only in this way can we "think about the Millennium and see through Wan Li". For example, on the topic of "smile", some candidates wrote that a middle-aged woman picking up garbage smiled at the people around her and wrote that she was calm and satisfied with life; For example, on the topic of "Rereading Father's Love", some candidates wrote that the father took his daughter home after the evening self-study, and her daughter was riding a bicycle while her father was running, showing a true and touching father's love.
Highlight 3: Good language.
The composition in the examination room should strive for the individuality of language. Although middle school students don't form a certain language style like writers, they are at least good at using languages, some are simple, some are gorgeous, some are humorous, some are peaceful, some are smooth and some are subtle. These languages highlight their individuality and have a good texture.
200 1 The author of the excellent composition "The Death of a Red Rabbit" in the National College Entrance Examination skillfully used the ancient vernacular, and it was written "not deep but not vulgar", much like the language style of Romance of the Three Kingdoms. This kind of language can be seen everywhere in the article, which gives people beautiful enjoyment when reading it. Personalized language touched the marking teacher and got full marks for the composition.
The pursuit of personalized language should make good use of rhetoric. Consciously use some figures of speech in the composition, such as metaphor, personification, parallelism, duality and so on. , make the language lively. In 2005, there was a passage in the full-page composition "Pentium Ocean" in Hunan Province: "There is only the idea of ideal Pentium in the heart of water, but the face of the sky, the expression of mountains and the call of branches are ignored." The article boldly uses personification and the language is vivid and powerful.
Fourth, highlight four: pleasing to the eye
Good writing can make the marking teacher "fall in love at first sight" and put it down. The pleasing words are an important means to strengthen the content of the article; The clumsiness and disorder of words are often a manifestation of the ambiguity of the content of the article. The marking of college entrance examination puts forward more clear requirements for writing: the first type of papers requires "neat font", the second type requires "clear handwriting" and "scrawled handwriting" is divided into four types of papers. It can be seen that writing is not a "festival" and cannot be taken lightly.
When it comes to tattoos, you can't help but talk about typos. The typo is the killer of composition in the examination room. Since 2008, the college entrance examination composition marking has implemented a new typo deduction scheme. With the help of the baton of the college entrance examination, the rising trend of typos should be fundamentally changed, and one point should be deducted for each wrong word, with the aim of standardizing the language and writing.
5. How to make the composition better The first trick: diligently collect and accumulate wonderful words, phrases, sentences and chapters, and enrich your writing warehouse. There are two ways to collect accumulated materials: one is from newspapers and books. You can circle the materials that are beneficial to you directly in newspapers and books, you can cut newspapers, extract them, or feel after reading them, take other people's things for yourself, just like bees make honey, and collect a certain amount of pollen first. The second is from life. People who are willing to live and observe the world with a pair of discerning eyes will find that social life is rich and colorful, and all kinds of people and things in society are good writing materials: small to the people around them; Major events at home and abroad can be the content we collect and accumulate. In order to achieve better writing effect, we need to devote ourselves to life, experience the ups and downs in study, life and work, and then let these ups and downs naturally flow into the pen and become real and touching articles.
The second trick: strengthen writing practice. Writing often begins with keeping a diary. If we regard the diary as a bosom friend, as an object to talk about, and tell our personal joys and sorrows in the diary to the fullest, over time, the diary will accumulate more and more thick, and before we know it, we will find that the length of the diary has become longer, the expression of words has become clever, and our observation and adaptability to life have also been enhanced. Keep an army for a thousand days-keep a diary, use troops for a while-write a composition, and it will come naturally!
The third measure: keep brewing-conceiving, looking for a breakthrough-inspiration, and then write it down. Collecting accumulated materials, such as a pile of dry wood, needs the spark of inspiration to ignite; Collecting accumulated substances, such as a lot of pollen, must be brewed by bees to become honey; The materials collected and accumulated are also like a bag of rice, which must be processed by a clever woman to become delicious rice. Therefore, the process of brewing-conceiving is the process of sorting out, selecting and integrating materials. When the conception is mature, it will naturally generate inspiration-the feelings that have been accumulated in the chest for a long time urgently need to be vented, and the unpleasant instantaneous impulse will not be unpleasant. People who care seize this fleeting moment and write it down.
The fourth measure: humbly ask for advice and constantly revise. Good article revision. After writing a good composition, you are not satisfied, but you can't see where there is a flaw. You must find someone else to guide you. After listening to praise, it should be regarded as encouragement to yourself; After listening to criticism, change it if you have it, and encourage it if you don't. If you do this often, you will continue to improve your writing. However, it is not a long-term solution to completely rely on others to revise your composition. Learning to revise your own composition is the key to writing a good composition.
The fifth measure: write a composition with confidence. Many students report that after reading articles in newspapers and books, they feel unattainable and lose confidence in their composition, thinking that they can't write well all their lives. In my opinion, this idea is caused by inferiority and utilitarian psychology. They don't know how hard the author and editor have worked to publish an article. If you spend so much effort to write your composition and polish it by editing, you will definitely reach the level of publication. In addition, writing a composition is not for publication, but to improve your writing ability, so a well-structured article is a good article. We don't have to use those published articles to measure the quality of our composition, and we don't have to affect our writing mood.
The sixth trick: organize and collect your own diaries, weekly notes and compositions. Diary, weekly diary and composition are all the results of your own efforts. If the diaries, weekly notes and compositions of primary schools, middle schools and universities can be classified and bound into several "books", these "books" are the history of personal struggle and a lot of wealth in life. You can look through your own exercises at any time and learn from your own writing experience and lessons. The exercises you write can be better than others.
6. How to make the composition more vivid? 1. The viewpoint is correct, unique and eye-catching. Write it in the first sentence. It's called an opening surprise.
2. Reasonably speaking, properly using the contrast between positive and negative examples, comparing natural phenomena such as fire, water and wind, and quoting famous sayings of Confucianism, Buddhism and Taoism can add a lot of color to the article. To give an example of a small matter of a great man, the second is to pay attention to the unity of words and deeds, and the third is not to be novel for the sake of novelty.
3. Remember not to use sophistry such as playing concepts. Playing with concepts, such as Wang Anshi's "The Scholars", gave the scholars a new concept, just like Xunzi's talk about insects and crabs sleeping. If it is the other way around, it will not be established.
The discussion should be carried out layer by layer, or deepened layer by layer. It's best to have both. For example, in the Book of Filial Piety, Zhan Ping takes the filial piety of all virtues as the first topic to describe all kinds of "firsts". In-depth interpretation of filial piety, filial piety, filial piety, filial piety and so on.
5, reverse the point of view. Zhuangzi ("Happy Travel") Dragon Tree Bodhisattva ("Barter") all used it.
6. Pay attention to the unity of language style and literature. Concise and smooth, not refined.
7. The casual ending seems to be not solid. It's called surprise.
7. Write a composition with highlights at the beginning and end 1. Beginning: Through the pupil of history, let dignity whisper to you, tell the immortal spirit in dusty memory, tell every touch, tell the true feelings of every cost, and tell the dignity that never dies behind history.
End: Standing in history, listening to the low complaint of dignity, I finally understand: in the cold wind, it is the flag in the hands of soldiers that cannot fall; In the ice and snow, what can't be frozen is patriotism; In the billowing black smoke, what remains unchanged is the peace and dignity of the people of the world! Comments: At the beginning, the dignity is pointed out from the unique perspective of history pupils, and the three-row ratio is very imposing; The ending rose from individual soldier to country and then to the world, which sublimated the theme. 2. Beginning: God made us have eyes and feel the light; Have ears and listen to beautiful voices; Have a mouth, pour out the love in your heart; Feel the warmth and coldness of the world with your heart.
God also gave us thinking, but didn't tell us what love is! Conclusion: Although God didn't tell us what love is, he gave us a note to prove the power of love: write everything God gave us first, but didn't tell us what love is, so as to attract readers to continue reading; Finally, I wrote that God gave us the ability to interpret love. I pointed out that love is around us and we have love. Even if God doesn't give it to us, we will prove it with actions. 3. Beginning: Gu Long once said: When smiling, you can cope with all the expressions-indifference, enthusiasm, ridicule, hatred, concern, success, failure ... Indeed, smiling can solve all difficulties and is a force that inspires people to succeed.
Outcome: in a smile, summon up courage and face setbacks; In the smile, strengthen confidence and overcome difficulties; In a smile, extend a hand of friendship, help others, and in a smile, strive for progress and surpass yourself. Is it still difficult to succeed with a smile? Comments: Quote Gu Long at the beginning and write about the influence of smile.
At the end, I used parallelism to say that smiling in the face of difficulties will overcome all difficulties, and revised Shelley's famous saying and wrote, "Is it still difficult to smile successfully?" It highlights the theme and is interesting. 4. beginning: when the last affectionate red leaf is sent away in autumn, when the gorgeous silver dress fades in winter, I count the palm prints of time ... end: after going through 2008, I gained a joy and a maturity.
Comments: The beginning and the end are short, the palm print of time is artistic, and the beginning and the end are harmonious. 5. Beginning: If you don't sweep a house, how can you sweep the world? Those who don't stick to "details" are good at going their own way or enjoying themselves alone, so that the frank ladder is suspected of being built on other people's walls. If they are not careful, they will cover up the big "jade" because of small "flaws"; Great people become great people, not naturally, but because they pay attention to details.
End: A drop of water sees the sun, and a glimpse of the whole leopard. A section is equivalent to a test paper, which can measure a person's quality and realm.
Everything you say and do may be a radical part of fate. Comments: I can write from beginning to end, and I have a deep literary foundation. It is appropriate to sweep the house and sweep the world and write details to determine success or failure. Writing details at the end is the side of fate.
6. Start: Growth is the only way in a person's life, which can lead to maturity and success; Growth is a colorful dream, so beautiful and so real; Growth is like all kinds of dishes on the table, ups and downs; Growth is a tear in pain, and it is also the first taste of the sweetness of success. End: The road is at our feet, and our only choice is to go on, just as we grew up from a baby to ourselves now.
Let's take a step of growth! Comments: The beginning is a parallel prose, vivid and intriguing; The ending is very infectious, calling us to take the pace of growth and walk out of a vast world of our own. 7. The beginning: "I am in my mother's arms, my mother is on the boat, and the boat is in the moonlight sea."
There is a harsh smell in the light, which is the love my mother gave me. End: unfold the long scroll of history, stir up the dust of history, and interpret the lingering of maternal love. At that time, the wandering soul found its home ... Comments: I started from the topic and wrote about my maternal love. At the end, I wrote a long and touching maternal love with three verbs, which is the dependence and sustenance of the soul.
8. Beginning: After the storm, it will be the color of Tianshui where seagulls swim; Out of the thorns, the road ahead is covered with flowers; When you climb to the top of the mountain, there is a misty sky under your feet. The end: In this world, a star falls, the starry sky can't be dimmed, a flower withers, and the whole spring can't be deserted.
Try your best to get through every level of life, and don't give up easily no matter what difficulties you encounter! Comments: first look at the beautiful scenery with wind and rain, then look at the road with thorns, and then look at the scenery with mountains. Writing down setbacks is the secret of success; Don't give up easily as long as you can stand the test of difficulties. 9. beginning: love is the wind, "it is good for the poor to hear the wind."
Love is rain, "Love peony contains spring tears". Love is soil, you can dig it out by bending down. Which soil has no blood and sweat of ancestors and no green dream of future people? Love is a cloud. When you look up, you can see one. Which cloud has not seen the yearning of children and the memory of old people? End: Because of love, we are grateful, because of love, we are full of grief and indignation; Because of love, we are willing to be indifferent to quiet days; Because of our love, we dare to wear boots to meet them.
A life of humiliation, life is love; Deserve the righteousness above family, death is love; Clear and refreshing, live seriously, living is not love! Comments: Both the beginning and the end are parallel paragraphs, which are very rhythmic. The metaphor at the beginning is vivid and appropriate; Finally, it is a kind of love for life to set off a serious life with the love of life and death! 10. beginning: lavender wind chimes hung in front of my window, gently pulling out a sound as clear as nature.
It filled the whole room and brought my thoughts to a bright and wonderful place. The past is like clear water, flowing quietly there.
End: There is another breeze, and the wind chimes jingle. I nodded and meditated, and the sweetness was gone.
Comments: The beginning and the end are beautiful and artistic. Use the bell of wind chimes to draw my beautiful thoughts and fall into deep memories. The ending echoes the beginning, and once again use wind chimes to continue sweet memories.
I don't know if it will help you, but I tried my best. Excerpts at the beginning and end, with some modifications.
I hope it helps you.