1. A personal composition that combines narrative and discussion

If I were a flower, my father’s love would be the soil that cultivates this flower; if I were a boat, my father’s love would be the soil that cultivates this flower. Love is the rudder that guides my course; if I were a kite, father's love is the rope that pulls me.

My father was not good at words but very strict. My excellence when I was young was my father's pride. When I grew up, excellence was no longer a perfect score on a test paper. My father's expectations began to become a burden on me, making it difficult for me to achieve. The father began to find that his daughter, who had once made him very proud, always disappointed him in life. His father preached too much at the dinner table, so he was afraid to eat with his father.

In the drizzle, Dad came. I wanted to run away, but Dad pulled me up and cheered me up. We embraced the spring in the rainy season.

When I heard these words, an indescribable heat wave poured into my heart. My heart was originally moist, but in this heat wave of father's love, it was dried by him.

I fell asleep sweetly. In this sweet father's love, I dreamed that the bare tree actually grew green buds. The color was so green and so full of vitality.

I lay quietly on the bed. The moon couldn't bear the loneliness, so it still lifted its veil and sprinkled its light into the world. Just think, maybe she sowed the seeds of love, so the darkness is no longer there. Dad and I must have both received a seed, but Dad’s cultivated one was better, exuding fragrant love.

Perhaps, the father's love is the thorns on the branches, and the children are the attractive roses. With the protection of the thorns, the pain and love of the thorns, the children can be more brilliant and fragrant.

I think that father's love is solid, like a big mountain, you can get close to it and feel its breadth and depth; father's love is warm, like a fireplace, you can lean against it, Feel its heat and warmth. 2. A good composition that combines narrative and discussion, 600 words

"I Really Understand You" I traveled through the time tunnel and came to the banks of the Miluo River. Going upstream, there was an old man on the water side. His forehead covered with wrinkles, his thin body slightly arched, and his face full of confusion - I remembered that he was Qu Yuan who "took a long breath to cover his tears and lamented the hardships of the people's livelihood." On the bank of the cold and windy river, I saw a pair of sad eyes showing a chilling look.

I moved closer to him, holding my breath. A great man of a generation is in my eyes at this moment: "Qu Gong, I came from the 21st century, specifically to find you, and also to save you."

"Save me? No, you can't save me. Me!" he yelled. Suddenly, he looked up to the sky and sighed: "Oh my god! Why do you treat me like this! Holy lord! Why did you listen to the slander and alienate me! In the world, no one understands my intentions!" Two lines of clear tears fell from the corners of his eyes. outflow.

"No, I don't understand!" I shouted, "You have been patriotic and caring for the people all your life, and you are full of hope to benefit the people of the world. However, the villain has slandered you, and the monarch is stupid and alienated you! But," I continued, "With your literary skills and martial arts, how many people in future generations will be able to match you. 'If you are not good at the Tao, you will ride on a raft and float in the sea.' If Confucius did this, why would you hang yourself on a tree!"

"Don't hang yourself from a tree! Hahaha..." He looked up to the sky and smiled. "No, all the monarchs in the world are the same. They are extremely stupid, ignore sages, and love villains. No one understands my heart!" I jumped into the rolling Miluo River...

I want to Crying without tears, trying to help but unable. I could only shout to Jiang Xin and Qu Gong: "I understand! I really understand!"

I left silently. Back to reality, I failed to save Qu Yuan in the end, but what he did for the country and the people will never be forgotten by future generations. 3. How to write a narrative and argumentative essay with the title "Beauty Around You" A 600-word essay

Help you draw up an outline

The first paragraph of the opening paragraph quotes Rodin's famous saying that there is no lack of beauty in life, but the lack of eyes to discover beauty. Let's face it, there are many good things in life. Under this main point, each sub-point is developed.

The following paragraphs can describe the beauty around you from various angles

At home, when my parents come back from work, I help with some housework. If you don’t understand something, ask your dad. Family harmony. This is the beauty of family harmony.

On the way to school, sanitation workers clean and traffic police direct traffic. The breakfast shop is booming. Social order is in order, which is the true beauty of life.

Then look at the difference in words and a paragraph to describe the phenomenon and reveal the essence of beauty. Almost a hundred words. There are three or four paragraphs, and that’s about it.

Finally. Summarize. The beauty in life is plain and simple. Feel it with a normal heart. 4. Write about a person using a combination of narrative and discussion (700 words)

Write about a person using a combination of narrative and discussion:

The first semester of junior high school has passed. I know my head teacher and English teacher very well. Let me introduce his characteristics below:

One of the characteristics - nagging

Before meeting him, I had never seen a man be so nagging, and I became more and more nagging. I'm sure he is the most nagging man in Xiashan District. I remember one time, while he was sending us yesterday's dictation, he criticized us and said that the dictation was so bad that so many people failed. He also said that it was an experimental class and was far worse than the students in the previous class! After finishing the speech, he started a long speech: "You must be able to read, memorize and memorize the words you have learned. You must go back and copy the words you have learned and memorize them again. When you go home, you must first review, then do your homework, and then preview. You cannot Homework is understood as homework..." He talked endlessly, and we listened "with joy". He talked for a full hour. Looking at the people in other classes after school, not only my stomach protested, but my ears also protested. At six o'clock sharp, he finally agreed to let school go. In fact, I know what he said is good, but it would be better if the language was more concise.

Feature 2 - Doing it yourself

Once, three students on duty forgot to sweep the floor, so every corner of the classroom was covered with garbage. When he saw it, he picked up the broom and started cleaning with a garbage shovel. After cleaning, criticize the three students and punish them to clean again for a day. I think it's a bit strange, because few teachers do this. They usually criticize students first and then let them do it. 5. Write an essay about the person I admire the most using a combination of narrative and argumentative expressions

The fish said: "No one knows that I am crying, because I live in water."

Water said: "I know you are crying, because you live in my heart." I followed my dream and sailed far away, "flying across the mirror lake and the moon all night", "wearing Xie Gong's clogs" and "climbing the Qingyun Ladder"... just in time When I was "fascinated by the flowers and leaning against the stone, it was suddenly dark", a handsome man in white clothes, sitting on a white deer, slowly came over.

Oh, it’s him, the poet Li Bai! His face was pale and full of depression, and he drank wine and sang loudly: "An Neng is able to bend his eyebrows and bend his waist to serve the powerful, which makes me unhappy! I understand, I really understand. Li Bai loved the country and the people throughout his life, full of ambition, and full of hope that he could get an official position. He made decisions for the people, but was harmed by villains. The emperor was stupid and listened to the slander. He banished Li Bai and alienated him, alienating a great and outstanding patriotic poet.

Your Majesty, you are innocent and deceived. , What a wrong understanding it caused, and it ruined a generation of romance... I cried silently in my heart, and I could feel Li Bai's misery. I was speechless, and I just shouted hysterically in my heart: The road to Shu is so difficult. Go up to the sky! Downstream, there is an old man on the side of the water.

His wrinkled forehead, his slightly hunched body, the confusion on his face as he meditated by the river... I recall. Oh, he! Qu Yuan, who "suffered a long breath to hide his tears, mourned the hardships of the people's life" was wandering by the river... Suddenly, he looked up to the sky and sighed: "Oh my God!" Why do you treat me like this? ! Holy lord? ! Why did you listen to the slander and alienate me? ! The world is so big that no one understands my thoughts! "I jumped into the rushing river... I wanted to cry but had no tears, and I was helpless.

I can only shout to Jiang Xin and Qu Yuan: "I understand! I really understand! Qu Yuan sacrificed his life for the country and the people. This sincere and strong feeling will be engraved in the hearts of future generations forever. I will never forget...The villain is in power and the ruler is incompetent.

Qu Yuan was full of passion and desire to serve the country, but in exchange for it, "all the women were jealous of Yu's beauty, and there were rumors that Yu was good at lewdness." How sad! How sad! Qu Yuan was helpless and extremely angry, shouting: "I have not changed even though I understand, how can I punish you?" "He expressed his loyalty to the country and the people with his death.

Looking back on the past, the villains slandered and the monarch was fatuous, which caused the sages to be alienated and the villains to be favored. This resulted in the wrong understanding of the saints, and also caused the misunderstandings of Li Bai, The tragic fate of Qu Yuan and others... Ouch! But what they have done for the country and the people will never be forgotten by future generations! ... "The soul suddenly palpitates and the soul starts to sigh. "Only the test paper of time, Li and Qu who have lost their way... a dream... [Comment] The author, as a sleepwalker, "visited" Li Bai who was wandering by the Yangtze River and wandering in the Miluo River across time and space. Qu Yuan, who was nearby, was abandoned and alienated because the emperor listened to the villain's slander, and committed suicide in the river.

The article believes that it was precisely because of the emotional closeness of the emperor at that time that the two great poets fell apart. Died one after another. It is consistent with the meaning of the question, and the materials are appropriately cited. 6. I am looking for a composition that combines narrative and argumentative techniques. A 600-word junior high school composition with the title of That smile gave me.

That smile gave me. Confidence

Touch is a smile, a look, a blessing, a word of advice. It can also be a ray of dawn, a green leaf, a dewdrop, or a clear spring. Touching often comes from the ordinary little things in life. .

It was a very hot summer, and the sun lost the gentleness of spring and became cold. The glutinous rice balls burned the cheeks of passers-by, cracked the earth, and splashed on the ground. Basin of water, the earth is like a thirsty child, sucking up every drop of water.

At that time, I was preparing to take the general exam outside the English cram school. It is very important for me. It is related to whether I can pass the general level. If I fail, I will have to re-study for another semester. There is still a little time before the exam, so I thought to myself: I might as well pick up the book and read it. It’s just right. I still haven't memorized a few words. At this time, I realized that I had forgotten to bring my English book. What should I do if I didn't bring my English book? When I was blaming myself and thinking of a solution, the elder sister next to me seemed to see what I was thinking and said to me: "Little sister, what's wrong? Did you forget your English book? "Well, I still haven't memorized a few words, but I forgot my English book." "As I spoke, I was so sad that I almost cried. "Take it! I'm on the same level as you, but I'm in the third game. You can take it and watch it first! "The eldest sister said to me gently. "But you..." "Don't be so, you take the test first, and I will take the test later. You can read it first, and I can take it later! "The corner of the eldest sister's mouth raised a smile. "Yeah! "

I picked up the book and looked happy, and the sadness I felt just now disappeared. After a while, the announcement rang, and I was about to enter the examination room. The eldest sister smiled and said to me: “Come on! ""The same to you! "As I was about to enter the examination room, I looked back. My eldest sister looked at me with a bright and confident smile. It was because of this smile that I became more confident!

"Stop writing! carry out an assignment! "I looked at the paper with satisfaction, stepped forward confidently and handed it to the teacher, with a confident smile on my lips.

The next day, the results came out, and the general-level list was posted in the cram school. In front of the door, I took a look and thought: I hope there is me! "YES!" Very good! Common level! I almost jumped up with joy, "I wonder if that big sister has reached the common level?" If it weren't for that big sister, I wouldn't be able to pass the level. But I don't even know her name. I really hope she can pass the level. "I murmured to myself.

Sometimes when you are not in life, the touch is just a smile.

Just like a big sister, her smile gives me confidence! I was touched by her help! I can't forget her! 7. Use narrative and argumentative techniques to write a paragraph expressing maternal love

Maternal love is gazing. During my childhood, it gazed at my growth; during my school days, it gazed at me coming home from school at night. Maternal love is gazing, it is A kind of silent gaze. It cannot be described in words, but it can be felt with the heart and expressed with actions. Mother's love is gaze. She uses her love to inspire my deep dreams and fighting spirit. Her gaze makes me fly bravely. Wings. ---------- My mother, my mother who has endured all kinds of hardships, my ordinary but great mother, how can I, a tiny little grass, repay your three springs? If I can learn a little bit of good temper, if I can learn a little bit of kindness in dealing with others, if I can forgive people and be considerate - I have to thank my loving mother. ----------- Looking back on the past , Mother has done countless things for us, but what we really do for mother is very little. What we can do for mother now is to live well, well, so that mother will have one less worry and one less concern. I miss my mother She will still stand at the highest point of my life, silently guiding me on the path of life. Through my mother’s guidance, I learned to examine the height of life, the height of mother. Great love is speechless, maternal love is like water, this kind of love, Gentle and deep. 8. Writing methods of narrative and argumentative essays

There are three main expression forms of narrative and argumentation: First, discuss first and then narrate (summary type). At this time, the discussion often appears in the text of the article. First, the main function is to prompt and highlight topics. The second is to narrate first and then discuss (summary type). The discussion at this time often appears at the end of the article or a paragraph, and its function is to summarize the full text, deepen the theme, add the finishing touch, enlighten thinking, etc. Three It is narrating and discussing at the same time (inclusive style), that is, narrating facts and discussing at the same time to express opinions on the narrated facts. It cannot be written that oil is oil and water is water. Narration and discussion cannot be combined organically and orderly. The key points can be summarized as the five-step method of "introduction, analysis, point, connection and conclusion". Specifically, it is: 1. Quoting from the beginning of the article: extract the best point of view, argument or the best extension and development from the material. Introduce the central sentences and key words into the article. Either full quotations, excerpts, or paraphrases, so that the content of the article becomes a "source of water" and a "rooted tree", so that the discussion can be carried out closely based on the supplied materials. 2 Analysis The quoted materials are divided into two dialectical analyzes from different angles - either pros and cons, present and past, Chinese and foreign, praise or criticism, in order to present the arguments. However, the analysis should not be too much or too long to avoid Discuss the matter on the matter, and focus on the guest. 3. On the basis of analyzing the quoted materials, the refined arguments will be presented in a natural and logical way. Connect the previous to the next, transition to the connection with society, life, and ideological reality, and use arguments to demonstrate the arguments. The arguments should be clear and clear. Profound, the sentences strive to be summarized and concise. 4. The couplets should be closely linked to the arguments and reality, using typical arguments, giving examples, reasoning, and using the best argumentation methods, positive and negative contrasts, metaphorical proofs, metaphors, or layers of arguments. Progress step by step, and demonstrate the arguments. 5. Summarize the content of the paired argumentation process in an outline and draw a conclusion. It should not only conform to the main purpose of the supplied materials, but also closely follow the arguments extracted from the supplied materials.