When I was in the first grade of primary school, my parents divorced for various reasons, which was such a serious matter for me. Since then, I have lived with my mother. Father seldom comes to see me, so the word "father" is not in my dictionary. Although I was young at that time, I also knew that my life was different from other friends. After school, they always go home under the "escort" of their tall father, and I can only snuggle up to my thin mother; When some classmates bully me, they can call my expressive father to school, and I can only cry in my mother's arms. My mother knows my mind, so she always tries her best to meet all my requirements materially, and constantly encourages me to be strong mentally and girls not to cry easily.
Gradually, I grew up and my thoughts became more and more mature. I told myself not to always feel different from others, and always secretly shed tears when something happened. I should be stronger and learn to face everything by myself instead of always relying on my mother. So I learned to wash clothes, cook and wash dishes by myself in primary school ... which most of my peers can't do, so I gained pride and began to learn to discover the hairdressing of life.
The longer people are, the more troubles they have, from the pressure of study and the contradiction between classmates. Especially when I entered junior high school, the new environment made me uncomfortable and at a loss. For all kinds of troubles, I don't cry loudly, but I always cry at my diary.
I once came across an article in which a sentence touched my heart. "A child who grows up in a single-parent family is the highest eagle." Yes, I should be an eagle. I can't forget what I said to myself. I can't lose my pride.
From then on, I learned to face new difficulties, manage my life with heart and make my life full of laughter. So I know how to face life with a smile, that is, face setbacks with a smile and face them calmly. There is always a solution. In the future, my diary will be full of laughter.
I think I can do this because of my special living environment. I grew from a little girl who loves to cry to a big girl who loves to laugh. I saw a smile from tears in my diary, and I cringed from difficulties to strength. All this is taught by my life. To be an eagle that can fly higher and farther, we must learn to smile from "tears".
Comments by famous teachers
From the ideological content, no matter whether students are in prosperity or adversity, they can face the reality bravely, overcome difficulties and learn to be confident, strong and optimistic. This is the mainstream of contemporary middle school students' thoughts and feelings, which is commendable. From the perspective of writing, Zhou Yan and Tang Miao have similar perspectives, and both of them can build up "self-confidence" from the encouragement given by their parents and teachers. But it is different from Cong's point of view. She learned to be strong from the hardships of life and became strong from weakness. This is a unique angle. In addition, students can write from many different angles. Such as: failure-strength, parting-cherish, labor-hardship, life-thinking, frustration-strength. Life-honesty, care-sincerity, and so on. You can find materials related to the topic from what you have heard, witnessed and experienced personally, or describe, discuss and express your feelings, and you will succeed. As a new training method, topic composition will play a good guiding role in middle school students' composition training in the new century.
I learn to be confident from encouragement.
If a person wants to succeed, he must first be confident. How can I make myself confident? I think it is inseparable from the encouragement of others.
I am a lucky girl, living in a happy family. I am timid. From the day I can remember, I never dare to do anything by myself, for the simple reason that I am afraid of failure. My parents are very anxious about it. They don't know what to do to make me confident. Finally, they decided to give it a try.
I like sports very much, especially roller skating. I clearly remember the day when I first put on roller skates. I looked at the eight iron wheels under my feet and was so scared that I thought it was so difficult to skate! I'm sure I can't learn, but I'd better not learn. But then my father came over, took my hand and gently said to me, "Don't be afraid, everything is difficult at the beginning." But dad believes in you, and you have a better talent! It will work! "I looked at my father doubtfully." Can I really do it? " He nodded his head. So I stood up successfully with my father's encouragement and took the first step of wearing roller skates. ...
I have a good voice. When I was in primary school, my teacher wanted me to read on stage, but I refused because I thought there were many people who were better than me. I am just an ugly duckling in front of them, and I can't do it at all. After knowing my idea, the teacher called me to the office and said with a smile, "The ugly duckling is ugly, but it has become a white swan. You have superior conditions. The teacher believes that as long as you believe in yourself, you must be a striking white swan standing on the stage. " I agreed to the teacher's request, and under the teacher's encouraging eyes, I successfully stepped onto the podium. ...
In this way, with the encouragement of my parents, teachers, relatives and friends, I grew up slowly, from that little girl who lacked confidence to a girl who was full of confidence. My self-confidence has won me many opportunities and made me successful today. A month ago, I attended the 9th Kunming Student Union Meeting on behalf of Dongchuan No.2 Middle School. At that time, I happened to meet my grandmother's death. My family is too busy to take care of me, and I am not as timid as before. After I packed my bags, I set off. I am facing a new environment, and there is no one I know among hundreds of people. But I am confident enough that I can successfully complete the four-day meeting and meet friends from all directions. ...
In the past sixteen years, I have received countless encouragements and gained my self-confidence, which I believe will lead me to success.
I learn to be confident from encouragement.
Madame Curie once said, "One should have perseverance and confidence." The greatest feature of those world-famous scientists is that they have strong self-confidence. Although each of us may not be a great man, I believe that self-confidence is a prerequisite for our success.
When I was a child, I asked my father for advice whenever I met a problem I couldn't do. Dad touched my head and smiled and said, "If you think about it carefully, you can do it." So, under the words of my father's encouragement, I carefully analyzed and quickly overcame the difficulties. At that moment, I found a bright smile on my father's face. In the fourth grade of primary school, I participated in the national composition competition for primary school students. I wrote an article "Little Oil Lamp" with sincere feelings. I wrote about the little oil lamp that my father gave me, and I ignored it because I hated it. I wrote about its contribution to an unexpected power outage, and then I sublimated it into a teacher who worked hard in education. As a result, my article "Dried Bean Curd" won the second prize in the National Composition Competition for Primary School Students. When I proudly showed my father the certificate, I found a comforting and encouraging look in his eyes. I know he must be saying, "Don't be proud, keep trying."
In fact, in life, we are not all smooth sailing. My scores in several exams were not satisfactory. Just when I was sad, my teachers and parents encouraged me to continue to work hard and strive for the next time. When my parents tasted my cooking with me for the first time, they didn't say it was terrible, but praised me for cooking delicious. Father smiled, mother smiled, and I smiled. I know, it's also an encouragement to me. With encouragement, how can I lose confidence?
In the third grade, I participated in the chemistry competition for primary and middle school students in Kunming and got a good ranking. When I stood under the five-star red flag hung by the school to receive the prize and gave warm applause to the teachers and students of the school, I was more confident, but I was never proud. ...
I have only taken a few steps in the long road of life, and the road behind me is still very bumpy and difficult. I will make positive progress, continue to struggle and move towards success. Let's all build up self-confidence, and let every confident person have the joy of success.
In 2008, Jining got full marks in the senior high school entrance examination.
Original title of senior high school entrance examination
Write a composition on the topic "Footprints of Growth".
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Growing footprint
When I was a child, under the influence of my father, fighting between squares in chess would make me uneasy, but my father was good at chess, but he never let me. So after repeated failures, I complained to my mother with tears in my eyes, and her mother said, "Leave her alone!" "
The child is still young. "My father said," Son, unless you struggle, nothing means anything. Before you succeed, you must accept failure. "Although I didn't understand his earnest words at that time, I knew it was very important. Oh!
When I grow up, teach me to accept failure!
After school, although I am sensible, my mother always looks at me and says, "Hey, when can I grow up?" It was not until this happened that my mother looked at me with a smile-because when I was 9 years old, children of my age had learned to ride a bike, and I wanted to learn. My mother firmly opposed it, saying that I was young and afraid of hurting me. Under my stubbornness, my mother agreed. Finally, in the "lullaby" where I taught myself to ride a bike, an old nurse with silver hair was knocked down by me. When I sent my grandmother home with guilt, I realized that she was a lonely old man. I said, "I will come to see you often in the future." I did, and until now, my mother looked at me with confidence. Oh, grow up and teach me what responsibility is.
In fact, growth is like this, full of colorful sunshine, happiness of success, plain sureness, passion of struggle and boundless romance.
Growth is not as colorful as the writer described, and the road to growth is not smooth. Growth is the intersection of ups and downs. We are looking for new sweetness in the alternation of these four intersections, and may also inject new bitterness, but we firmly believe that "there is no eternal night in the world, and there is no eternal winter in the world"!
Last summer vacation, I was lucky enough to go to Qingdao. On the soft beach, I rolled up my trouser legs barefoot and walked for a long time. Looking back, I suddenly found footprints behind me, horizontal, vertical, oblique, straight and deep. ...
On the road of life, each of us has left our own footprints. Whether it is clear, vague or crooked, it is a record of our growth. And everyone's footprints are different. Some are deep, some are shallow, some are crooked, and some are neat. In these twelve years, I have gone through hardships, bitterness, tears and laughter.
difficulties and hardships
My English ranks first in my class, but I don't study in bilingual classes. Compared with the students in the bilingual class, my English is much worse. On weekends, I sacrifice my play time to learn English. However, I don't get more than 70 points in every training exam. It's hard for me to walk.
heart-broken;grieving
My olympiad has been bad, and my grades have been unsatisfactory. In the training class, my exam results are poor almost every time. Although there are usually Olympic math classes on weekends, my brain is not flexible and there is not enough time for each exam. There are often many vague questions. This makes me very sad.
tears
At home, I often make mistakes and make my parents angry. My parents often scold me for it. Every time I was scolded, I shed tears of disappointment. Tears, on the road of my growth, often accompany me.
Growing footprint
Fifteen spring, summer, autumn and winter condensed the essence of life. When I looked back and savored the footprints I had walked, my heart was filled with emotion.
The footprint of growth is full of family care. Unforgettable childhood childishness in memory. Ride on my father's neck and count the stars on my mother's lap. While sleeping, I pestered them to tell stories about wolves. I was woken up in the middle of the night, got into my mother's bed, and let my mother hug me tightly for fear of being carried away by it. I will never forget that when I was sick, someone gave me a piece of medicine, a cup of boiled water and a greeting, which was the careful care of my classmates. More importantly, I won't forget that when I got grades, my teacher gave me a look of relief and approval, and when I failed in the exam, she gave me a look of encouragement, which increased my courage to fight setbacks. All the people who care about me laugh and breathe with me.
There are also lingering and inexhaustible juvenile troubles in life. I hope to be a young eagle with wings spread and fly in my own free world. When I proposed self-reliance, I was greeted by my parents' words "You are still young, wait until you grow up". Helpless, I look forward to mature hope in repeated rejections. The heavy study life makes me breathless. I really want to give advice to the teacher to reduce the burden, but I dare not. The arm can't twist the thigh. How to twist a powerful teacher when you are young? I want to resist, but I can't resist. Trouble, loneliness and not being understood always bother me.
My footprint is also full of difficult choices. Time is really precious, but it's a pity to waste a few years. When I was in middle school, my classmates had already understood the truth that "an inch of time is worth an inch of gold" and they were all studying hard. Only I am still wasting my good time and spending my hard life in Jin Yong's rivers and lakes and games every day. The result is fair to everyone. When my classmates were holding heavy fruits, I hid in the corner and shed tears, then regretted it and felt depressed. The teacher told me: "Diligence is good at diligence, but not good at play." Only by giving, can you gain. If you fail, get up and be a strong man in life. "I understand this truth, so I rejoined the ranks of students, and my excellent grades made me regain my confidence. The right choice made me understand more. You can't fall in the same place for the second time, or you will fall even worse.
Sweet and sour, this is the footprint of growth. She accompanied me to maturity and walked through the four seasons of youth.
Composition of Rizhao senior high school entrance examination in 2008
Original title of senior high school entrance examination
Composition topic: I am still.
Requirements: Please complete the topic, the style is not limited, not less than 600 words.
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I still love you.
Mountains, like sages, are calm and sincere; Water, like a woman in her prime, is smart and intelligent. Mountains and rivers create the beauty of human life.
Some people live in the south of the Yangtze River, where green willows are like shadows, but they yearn for the scenery of the north, where thousands of miles are frozen and Wan Li is snowing. Some people live in the vast and magnificent seaside, but they look forward to seeing the beauty of camels walking in the desert and the sunset in the long river; Some people live in pine forests in the moonlight and crystal stones in streams, but they long for colorful city life. Life is not a lack of beauty, but a lack of eyes to find beauty. People in life often ignore the surrounding scenery. When they meditate, they will find that the scenery here is unique.
My hometown is in Rizhao, and the green mountains and green waters will always be in my memory.
In my hometown, there are many stones with different postures on the mountain. Some of them depend on each other, like whispering and look like shy girls. Others stand tall and look up, as if to shout at the sky and express their passion; What is more interesting is the urchin-like rocks, which are piled here and there, as if playing hide-and-seek games. Spring has come, and the mountains are full of flowers and colors. In summer, the trees are shaded and the cool breeze blows gently ... this is really a charming scenery.
There are beautiful mountains and ethereal water. There is a canal on the mountainside, and the crystal clear river flows all day and flows into the distant river. The river is like a mirror, clearly reflecting blue sky, white clouds, red flowers and green trees. The river is alive, layers of sparkling waves rise with the wind, chasing and playing with the jumping sunshine and my heart, and occasionally small fish play freely in the river; The river is soft, the breeze blows, and it ripples like silk dancing with the wind; The river is hard, like a flawless jade, shining with beautiful luster. I often walk by the river, wander by the quiet river, occasionally throw a pebble, or put a small paper boat in the river to float gently with the river. It is this vibrant water that has created beautiful mountains, moistened flowers and trees and moistened my heart.
You don't need to go to famous mountains and rivers, nor do you need to go to the desert of the sea. I have a sincere heart and a pair of eyes that are good at discovering. No matter how things change, no matter where I go, I still love you, the mountains and rivers of my hometown.
Comments by famous teachers
This paper has two advantages: a small starting point. Landscape prose often describes the magnificence of the motherland's mountains and rivers. The author does not focus on the magnificence of the mountains and rivers of the motherland, but starts with the mountains and rivers of his hometown, writes his love for the mountains and rivers of his hometown, and interprets the theme well. The language is very clever, the author's basic language skills are solid, and the author's writing is elegant. Pay attention to the use of rhetoric, so that the article can see the connotation in the smart and the philosophy in the image, which is a good work.
I still fly
Even if the wings are broken, the heart will fly.
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Endless night eroded my endless worries, surrounded by terrible silence, I got up and went to the window.
The wind was so cold that it bypassed the undulating curtains and pierced my numb nerves. I shivered and shrank my neck. The lights outside filled the whole yard with sunlight, the semi-bald trees trembled in the rustling autumn wind, and a few yellow leaves stubbornly stuck to their posts, but in the end they couldn't hold on, falling headlong on the cold concrete floor.
I sighed, ashamed of my life that disappeared quietly, and even more ashamed of my achievements. I don't understand why when God gives people the gift of victory and joy, it is always tied with failure and bitterness. I can't get rid of the bite of the failed hand, just like a lily crying in the wind and rain, which weakens my desire for sunshine and lasting pride in my heart. How many times I searched hard, how many times I was at a loss. My dream is to imagine an elf floating in the snow. My heart is cold and my mind is confused. ...
The wind in the middle of the night feebly tossed the dead leaves lying on the ground, turning and turning until it reached the root of the big tree, which was a tree with leaves. I suddenly understood: loss means new gains, and decline means a new beginning. A yellow leaf withered, rotted, eroded and frozen. When spring blossoms, it will be a layer of shade. Seeing this, I am relieved.
Failure is the factor of success. Without it, the alarm clock won't ring in your ear. Failure is also a burden of life. Carrying it for a long time will grind out several unnecessary blood bubbles on the trudging feet. In the darkness, I felt the sunshine after the storm. "Confidence in life for 200 years will be like hitting water for 3,000 years"! Let the free and easy walk with the wind and rain. As long as my youth is still there, I won't be sad. As long as the sun is still there, I will not be lonely and will not stop. Even if I am trapped in the vast desert, the oasis of hope is still there, and my heart is still flying. Thought of here, I can't help laughing.
Looking up, I don't know when a pair of blinking eyes appeared in the sky. After the darkness comes the dawn, when the haze disappears, it is still a rainbow. When you run out of crazy sand, raise your confident sail and face difficulties, you will get gold! Don't bid farewell to the field of the soul because of the temporary desolation.
Start with a smile, even if the wings are broken, the heart will fly.
Comments by famous teachers
Because the author failed in the exam, he stayed up all night and saw the scattered autumn leaves, which refreshed him. He realized the true meaning of success and failure, and constantly encouraged himself. Finally, he was full of confidence. "Even if his wings are broken, his heart will fly." The inscription made the article profound. Life is not smooth sailing, and it may be full of setbacks and bumps. In the face of all kinds of challenges in life, we should face them bravely and not be carried away by victory or intimidated by failure. These are all spiritual inspiring forces, and reading them will make us feel more powerful. The title of the article is novel, followed by the title at the end, and the language is vivid.