In order to make contributions to my career, I bid farewell to my wife and parents and went to the western regions alone to work hard, hoping to make contributions to my country and realize my ambitions. However, before I go every night, I always think of Chang 'an and my home that is getting farther and farther away.
Whenever I miss home, I will silently look back, stare at the East, and recall the happy life with my wife, until tears can't help but drip and wet my sleeve. Early the next morning, it was time to start again.
I mounted my horse and galloped forward. In the distance, I saw a man and a horse galloping in my direction.
Near, near, I recognized my old friend's knife. The two of us started talking at once, exchanging cold words with each other. I learned that he was going to Chang 'an as an envoy in Beijing.
I just wanted to write a letter home for him to bring back, but suddenly I realized that I was riding a horse and couldn't write. So I had to ask him to take a message home for me and tell my family that I am healthy and calm now.
Take it.
2. Is there any clever way to write a profound composition? There is a voice everywhere on the earth ―― Spring is coming, spring is coming. ...
Look! The earth revives and everything comes into being. In the corner of the playground, there are footprints of spring; On the branches of that big tree, there is the vitality of spring. People took off their thick cotton-padded clothes and put on spring clothes; Children fly kites. The footsteps of spring have quietly approached people's lives. Her footsteps are light and elegant, and she will be greeted by green wherever she goes. Her character is noble and selfless. She devoted her life to the earth and mankind without reservation. She decorated the earth with green and colors. The flowers opened their mouths and smiled when they saw her. When the grass saw her, it came out shyly, and when the tree saw her, it also put out branches and buds. Looking at the bright moonlight and naughty stars at night will make you feel that the sky is so beautiful and the universe is so mysterious. The moon, like a jade plate embedded in the sky, is beautiful.
Spring is selfless. Once a year, she will bring vitality to the earth, make it full of vitality and make everything flourish. She will also bring joy to people, and people hope that she can exist forever.
The footsteps of spring have gone through every corner of the earth. She touched the earth with her kindness, selflessness and kindness. She decorated the earth into a green blanket with her charm. She used her magic to make people enjoy this colorful season.
I am looking forward to this time next year.
The arrival of spring has refreshed my mood. That's because it drove away the frightening cold wind and invited away the cold and lonely winter snow. I hope it will always be spring.
For people, it is beautiful, just like a jade plate embedded in the sky. It is also because people think in this way, just like sowing seeds, which decorate the earth into a green blanket. Flowering and dead trees grow green branches and leaves, making the earth full of vitality. She decorated the earth with green, and the grass appeared shyly, so that people could enjoy this colorful season! How much vitality she has brought to the earth. That's because it drove away the frightening cold wind, and she used her charm. People should take off their thick cotton-padded clothes and face them bravely. In the corner of the playground, no matter what difficulties, the animals also danced the "Spring Festival Dance". The universe is so mysterious. She used the magic she had. The footsteps of spring quietly approach people's lives. Her character is noble. Wherever she goes, she will be greeted by green. She gave her life to the earth and human beings without reservation, and flowers met her.
Spring is selfless, and everything is born, which makes Mother Earth find colorful colors. The moon has the footprint of spring, and spring also takes away the winter of the four seasons gods; The children flew kites, and as a result, they sprouted successfully.
The footsteps of spring have gone through every corner of the earth. Farmers are busy cultivating land, hoping to have a good start this year. She used her love.
The arrival of the messenger of spring has made my mood look brand-new. Besides, butterflies flap their wings in pairs, which makes spring more interesting. Spring is the beginning of a year, and the earth is moved by it.
I like spring; Transplanting seedlings on the branches of that big tree also symbolizes new hope, re-radiating warm light, opening your mouth and smiling. Looking at the bright moonlight and naughty stars, everything becomes prosperous and has the vitality of spring.
With the coming of spring, she wants to stand out in the dance. Lovely flowers bloom again. Birds sing crisp and tactful songs and decorate the earth with colors. Once a year, she brings life to the earth. She is kind, put on spring clothes, and the beautiful and yellow grassland has regained its green vitality and selflessness. Therefore, spring symbolizes new hope. When the tree sees her, it also sticks out its branches and buds. It invited her to leave.
I look forward to this time next year, students will prepare school supplies and make selfless contributions. She will also bring joy to people and make the flowers and trees in the forest flourish. At night, people hope that she can exist forever, and spring has come. ...
Look, there are voices everywhere on the earth ―― spring is coming! The recovery of the earth will make you feel that the sky is so beautiful.
3. How to skillfully use poetry to add literary talent to college entrance examination composition? The ancients often said that "there are poems in the belly".
Classical poetry contains profound cultural background and emotional resources. The clever use of ancient poetry can activate language expression, highlight the background of the article, and make the article exude a strong bookish and cultural atmosphere. This is undoubtedly an effective and convenient way to "shine" and "innovate" the college entrance examination composition.
Then, how to use ancient poetry to add luster to your college entrance examination composition? First, the wonderful quotations of famous ancient poems and sentences are the most common way in college entrance examination composition. Quotation can be divided into partial quotation and full quotation. 1. Local quotation refers to quoting famous sentences of classical poetry in local positions of an article, such as the title, inscription, opening paragraph and ending of the article.
These places are located in prominent positions, which are easy to attract readers' attention and leave a good impression on readers. Quoting ancient poems and famous sentences at the title of the article can make the topic look elegant, full of literary interest, dazzle people and promote reading.
For example, the Fujian examinee's A Storm in Ren Pingsheng quoted Su Shi's Ding Fengbo as the title, which is not only closely related to the selected historical figures. Appropriate conciseness also shows the theme of the article and shows Su Shi's open-mindedness and detachment.
It can be described as "killing two birds with one stone." Embedding poems at the beginning of the article can make the language concise and incisive, let commentators immediately "peek" at the author's cultural accumulation and humanistic accomplishment, and leave a better first impression.
For example, in 2004, Shaanxi examinee "Looking for a Happy and Beautiful Life" began: "Walking on the path of falling leaves in autumn. I can't help singing:' There are endless leaves rustling and endless sadness rolling in'.
Lament the sadness and misfortune of fallen leaves. In fact, the life of falling leaves may be like this, just asking for spring and colorful autumn colors.
Change your way of thinking. Gong Zizhen once said,' Falling in love is not heartless. Turn into spring mud to protect flowers! We should rejoice and enjoy the colorful autumn scenery. "
The beginning is from the scene. Du Fu's "fallen leaves are like waterfalls, but I think the long river always rolls forward". Naturally leads to the association of fallen leaves, and then quotes Gong Zizhen's famous sentence, which appropriately explains the connotation of the philosophical topic "Happiness and our way of thinking".
This treatment makes the article appear profound and poetic from the beginning, thus avoiding the boring "straight to the point" reasoning. Quoting classical poetry at the end of the article has the effect of making the finishing point, enlightening people, subliming the theme, and receiving endless expression effects, which makes readers hide their thoughts and have endless aftertaste.
For example, in 2004, Fujian examinee "Looking at the sea and relying on the sky" ended: "Have you seen how the water of the Yellow River moved out of the sky and into the ocean, and never returned? Have you seen the lovely hair in the bright mirror in the high room, although it is still silky black in the morning, it turns into snow at night?
Time flies like water, time flies like electricity. Perhaps, only history can make the inscription on the tombstone full of words. Perhaps, only history can best interpret the sentence that Zeng Guofan wrote when he added his body to the sky: relying on heaven to shine on the sea, countless flowers bloom in the mountains, and flowing water knows itself. "The three quotations are appropriate and natural, which makes the article full of literary talent and profound dialectics. 2. Full-text citation refers to both the whole paragraph and all paragraphs of the full text.
Due to the profound cultural accumulation of classical poetry, a large number of allusions from many places will greatly enhance the cultural taste and aesthetic taste of the article and enrich the inside story of the article. The whole passage is quoted from the excellent composition "The Meaning of Loneliness": "What is loneliness? Once upon a time
There is Li Bai "until, holding up my cup, I asked the bright moon to bring me my shadow and make the three of us". Perhaps, loneliness is the feeling that the moon is in the sky, the wind is like water, and everything is silent! Once upon a time, Li Houzhu felt speechless and went to the West Wing alone.
The moon is like a hook, and the solitary phoenix tree locks the deep courtyard in the clear autumn. Perhaps, loneliness is the courtyard of the palace. Let us worry about our country and our family. Once upon a time, Chen Ziang lamented: "Before me, where did all those lost times go?" ? Behind me, where are the future generations? I think of heaven and earth, there is no limit, there is no end, I am alone, tears fell down. Perhaps, loneliness is an empty state of mind with the same grass and the same horizon. So ... I asked the moon. Chang 'e of Guanghan Palace told me. Loneliness is the "blue sea and clear sky night heart" of "the mica screen is deep and the long river is gradually falling."
What is loneliness? I can't answer this question. Quoting five famous sentences in a paragraph, as the carrier of sentiment and meaning of the article, makes "loneliness" have profound cultural connotation, which not only adds bright colors to the article, but also enhances the persuasiveness and appeal of the argument, making the article rich in connotation, full of elegant poetry and rich humanistic atmosphere.
And the whole article quotes. Sichuan college entrance examination excellent composition "Only Being in this Mountain" is a model.
Based on Su Shi's famous sentences, this paper interprets the topic of "Cognition of Emotion and Things" in the composition very aptly and implicitly. Then quote Cui Hu's poem "Last year today, at this gate, peach blossoms set each other off. People don't know where to go. Peach blossoms still smile at the spring breeze. " Naturally, it leads to the understanding of the relationship between "emotion and cognition" and establishes the main idea of the article: then follow the first paragraph.
Li Qingzhao's Dream. Last night, the rain suddenly blew, Du Fu's The Hut was Blown by Autumn Wind, Su Shi's Niannujiao? "Red Cliff Nostalgia" and Du Mu's "Red Cliff" further elaborate the main idea from several angles, which are vivid and rational: At the end, the full text ends with Su Shi's "I don't know the true face of Lushan Mountain". Look at the full text, just quoting and embedding classical poems.
It makes philosophical thinking and emotional expression profound and profound, and makes the article have a high cultural taste. Second, cleverly set up the structure of ancient poetry. The ancients were very particular about the rules when they wrote poetry and writing.
Every poem has its complete writing structure and writing context. Coupled with the simplicity and richness of ancient poetry itself, using ancient poetry to lay the writing structure of the article can not only make the article coherent and clear, but also give people an elegant and beautiful feeling and impress readers in the shortest time. This.
Hunan college entrance examination excellent composition "Pipa Star's parents have feelings" made a good demonstration. This composition directly applies the structure of the white poem, directly extracts the poems about music description from Pipa, and weaves the structure of the full text: "... she turned the tuning pin and tested several strings, and we can feel her feelings. Even before she played," Guan Yingying's words were slippery at the bottom "and" big strings hummed like rain, and small strings whispered like secrets ".
4. Can there be too many poems in the composition (this article is taken from the magazine Composition Solo, please pay attention to Composition Solo for more exciting content).
Zhang from Lianyungang, Jiangsu: Now many students embed poems in their compositions to write articles. Sometimes in the article, sometimes at the end of the article, some teachers think that such writing language is beautiful and will get high marks, while others tell us that points will be deducted because of poor writing style. I feel that there is no uniform standard. Can we write a composition like this?
Expert in this issue: Zhou Hong
Expert File: Mr. Zhou Hong is a senior Chinese teacher in high school attached to hunan normal university, a member of Changsha Writers Association, and a special editor of the high school edition of Innovative Writing in and out of the classroom. He has published many essays and teaching papers, and the editor-in-chief has participated in more than 20 supplementary readings, among which Composition for Monthly Examination, Composition Guidance for College Entrance Examination, Composition Express for College Entrance Examination, and Composition Grade Improvement for College Entrance Examination have great influence. More than 200 articles about students have been published in various newspapers and periodicals.
Zhang's question reflects a common phenomenon in reality, that is, middle school students like to quote ancient poems in exams. This is a bad style of writing. Almost none of the famous articles we read quoted ancient poems from beginning to end. College entrance examination compositions like to quote ancient poems. First, because there is "literary talent" at the development level, you can win the upper limit of this item if you use it well; Second, after some perfect compositions quoting ancient poetry were spread by the media, candidates competed to imitate them, first the college entrance examination and then the senior high school entrance examination.
Successful compositions are all successful: some people skillfully use ancient poems to write titles, some skillfully use ancient poems to write titles, some skillfully use ancient poems to write the beginning, some skillfully use ancient poems as arguments, and some skillfully use ancient poems to write the end. There are not many ancient poems embedded in the whole article. The key is to quote skillfully, without appearing awkward or leaving axe marks. "Literary talent" refers to language expression, including the use of words, the choice of sentence patterns, the flexible use of rhetorical devices and the expressive force of sentences. There are too many poems embedded, and the marking teacher may not appreciate them. A clever teacher will think carefully to see if the author's quotation is appropriate That's why you said "there is no uniform standard". In fact, the composition should be combined with reality, which is too empty. Without facts and details, there is no flesh and blood, which is often untenable.
5. How to write ancient poems with famous articles is the essence of China culture. It is a literary genre that reflects social life and expresses thoughts and feelings with highly concise language, rich imagination, strong sense of rhythm and rhythmic beauty.
It is the oldest and most basic literary form in the world. Famous sentences in ancient poetry are widely circulated and are outstanding literary essence.
Ancient poems and famous sentences that can be widely circulated from ancient times to the present are all cultural examples that have been honed, stood the test and accepted by people through the long river of history. The reason why it is enduring is not only because of its concise language and beautiful phonology, but also because it is worth learning from in terms of material selection, writing and skills.
From the content and materials, it can be divided into narrative, scenery description, lyricism, ambition and reason ... from the writing methods and skills, it can be divided into metaphor, emotional expression, exaggeration and realism ... It has its own characteristics and is not the same. In a sense, a poem is an outline of an article.
Therefore, the systematic training of ancient poetry and famous sentences is to contact and accumulate all kinds of writing materials and learn to master all kinds of writing methods and skills. The improvement of students' writing ability can be seen.
First, reading ancient poems and famous sentences, accumulating material articles, lack of nutrition and dryness are common problems of most modern students. The reason is that students lack accumulation.
You cannot make a silk purse out of a sow's ear. How can a student write beautiful articles without ink in his stomach? As the quintessence of ancient literature —— Famous ancient poems and sentences. Language has not only experienced many storms, but also has gorgeous rhetoric and rich content, such as writing scenery, taking notes, reasoning and so on.
It is the best material for students' language accumulation. With rich accumulation, there will be something to say and feelings to express.
As the saying goes, accumulation can make you rich. So I take advantage of the position where students collect honey books, and ask students to copy ten famous ancient poems and sentences every day for students to read and recite.
After a period of time, students have accumulated many famous sentences, laying a good foundation for practice. Second, the exchange of poetry and prose has been accumulated by students who practice writing. If they can't express and use it, it is equivalent to a blank sheet of paper, which has no meaning.
How to let students learn to express themselves? First of all, let the students understand the meaning of the famous ancient poems they read. In order to make students better understand the contents of famous ancient poems and sentences, teachers should expand the relevant contents of famous ancient poems and sentences, such as the author, writing background, the poet's mood at that time, allusions about famous ancient poems and sentences and so on. After students deeply understand its meaning, they can carry out multi-angle training.
1, the images in ancient poems and famous sentences are well-defined, but there are few descriptions of images, and there are still many gaps, including images and emotions. This provides rich writing materials for students' practice.
Teachers can use this as an organic supplement to students' compositions and practice writing selectively. When practicing writing, in order to make students understand poetry more deeply, teachers can provide students with rich information about famous sentences.
After students understand the connotation of poetry, let them practice, expand, rewrite and write their thoughts on a poem from various angles, so as to give students the freedom to exert their imagination. To some extent, it solves the problem of what students write.
In addition, it is necessary for students to expand the famous sentences of ancient poetry, which also reduces the difficulty of writing and avoids the phenomenon that students' sentences are not fluent. After long-term training, students will fly their imagination, be full of interest, enter the realm of poetry, feel their feelings and write beautiful articles.
2. Give the students a paragraph and let them sum it up with a famous ancient poem that they have accumulated. The coverage of students' exercises is getting wider and wider. It is difficult to adapt to the practice of other genres if we only stay on the basis of expanding the famous sentences of ancient poems.
To improve students' writing level and Chinese literacy, students should not only accumulate a large number of good words and sentences, but also learn to use them on the basis of understanding. Let the students sum up a period of training with the ancient poems they have learned, so that the students can understand how to use them.
Summarizing a passage from real life is actually telling students that we can use this famous saying under such circumstances. Over time, when students describe a picture, they will naturally think of this ancient poem sentence, avoiding lengthy and tedious narration and making students' exercises clear and concise.
3. The infiltration of methods can lead famous sentences in ancient poetry to be widely circulated, not only because of gorgeous and concise rhetoric and bright ideas, but also because of the author's superb writing methods and skills, which directly affect the charm of ancient poetry and the development direction of China literature. How to teach composition under the new curriculum, how to teach composition for the sake of teaching composition, how to let students "express freely" and how to let students express freely.
Writing methods and skills are indispensable. Every famous sentence in classical ancient poetry has its own unique expression.
A sentence is the unit of an article. It is of positive significance for students to carefully ponder the writing rules and skills of famous ancient poems and sentences and apply them to their own compositions. For example: 1, holding something to express your ambition "Once you climb to the top of the mountain, you will see that other mountains look short under the sky."
This poem comes from "Looking at Yue" written by Du Fu when he was about twenty-five. At that time, he was broad-minded and broad-minded.
Being at the foot of Yuelu Mountain and climbing to the top of Yuelu Mountain, his writing style is even more powerful. Although there is no "peak", the true colors of Mount Tai have fallen into the eye.
It expresses the poet's ambition to climb upward without fear of difficulties, and shows his indomitable character and lofty political ambition. Through learning, students can understand that they can express their aspirations and ambitions under the guise of things, which is very helpful to solve the disadvantages of students' straightforward composition and lack of implicit beauty.
2. Write a landscape: "The red river wins the fire at sunrise, and the riverside is as green as blue." This sentence vividly interprets the spring scenery in the south of the Yangtze River, highlights the bright colors of the river flowers and red and green rivers, and gives people a dazzling impression.
Among them, there are contrasts between the same color and different colors, which fully shows the author's good coloring skills. It can be seen that the article describing the scenery should grasp the characteristics of things, choose appropriately, and grasp the bright colors, which can be compared or contrasted, thus setting off the beauty of the scenery.
3. Lyricism by scenery often tells students that the description of the environment is a portrayal of the state of mind, and the feelings of * * * can be expressed with the help of scenery. But when students operate by themselves, it is the return of feelings and things. But there are promises in ancient poems and famous sentences.
6. How to use Chinese poetry skillfully in composition? First, use poetry.
The so-called adaptation is to intercept a certain part of poetry and directly turn it into our composition language or interpret the artistic conception of poetry in our own language. For example, the following paragraphs: optimism is a line of egrets, heading straight for the blue sky; Optimism is 10 thousand white sails beside the shipwreck; Optimism is the lush grass floating in the wind on Nautilus Island. Optimism is something that turns into spring mud to protect flowers.
-Topic "Optimism" fragment In the numb air where everyone is intoxicated, you choose to be awake; In the evil world where everyone is turbid, you choose innocence. Fade the gaudy clothes, and you choose the clothes with flounces; Out of Beijing, you chose the waves of the Miluo River.
-The fragment of "Facing the Choice" comes from the sincere choice of the heart, so that the lush grass on Nautilus Island can be outlined, the breeze and bright moon on the 24 th Bridge can be touched, and the sunshine and purple smoke between the incense burner peaks can be rendered. -"A Good Time" fragment Yes, without glitz and carving, we are like a hibiscus from clear water, emitting charming fragrance.
-"Simple" fragment A cloud is floating in the sky, faint and free, you feel good, this is the language; The rising sun shines brightly, and you feel full of vitality. This is Chinese. The bloody sunset reflects half the sky, which makes people feel infinite nostalgia. Don't forget that this is also a language. Language is the majestic Kunlun Mountain, the dew that has refused to drip on the grass for a long time, and the peony that is the old capital of the ancient city. Language is the silent Leng Yue, the quiet lotus pond, the fishing boat in the monstrous white waves outside Qinhuangdao, the egret in the blue sky, the 10,000-point white sail beside the sunken ship, and the bright future of the mountain after heavy water recovery.
-The words "Cold fragrance flies away" do not directly quote the poems of Du Fu, Liu Yuxi and Gong Zizhen. Instead, the image in the poem is regarded as an integral part of his composition language or the author boldly describes the artistic conception of the poem in his own language. This kind of passage reminds us of the artistic conception of poetry, and brings us into the poetic artistic conception of deja vu, but we can also feel the composer's voice.
It can also increase the literary grace of the article. Of course, the most important thing in writing such a passage is the author's ability to analyze, comprehend and summarize poetry.
If you don't understand the artistic conception of poetry and apply it casually, you will "draw a tiger and not be a dog." The first is to imitate poetry.
This method is that the author writes another poem in the same form in his own language according to the form of the poem, so as to express his feelings. For example, there is a passage in an essay entitled "Home": I dreamed of coming home suddenly at night, watery and busy fishing.
There is no sound everywhere, only the fragrance is cool. It is expected that when I feel homesick every year, on a moonlit night, in Weixi.
This composition is a good imitation of Su Shi's poem "Jiangchengzi": I dreamed at night and suddenly went home, dressed up at the Xiao Xuan window. Care for each other without words, only a thousand lines of tears
It is expected that the heartbroken place will be broken every year, and the moonlit night will be short and rambling. Su Shi's "Jiangchengzi" expressed his thoughts on his dead wife, recalled the good old days and looked at the bleak dwarf pine mountain. Only he is "inseparable", how can he not make people think a lot and make people angry! And the yearning for "home" is not the case? Compared with the "four silences" around us, the busy figures and lively labor scenes of hometown folks only have infinite thoughts! It can be said that imitation poetry can not only guide readers into the artistic conception of the original poem with the help of poetry, but also show the author's ability to "apply what he has learned" in writing and make the article brilliant.
Not only classical poetry is suitable for imitation, but modern poetry can also be borrowed from "attacking jade". For example, the fragment of the composition "Responsibility" is copied from the poet Haizi's "Spring Flowers Face the Sea", and the end of the article is beautifully written: The poet Haizi said in "Spring Flowers Face the Sea": From tomorrow on, be a happy person | Feed horses, chop firewood and travel around the world | From tomorrow on, care about food and vegetables | Me.
Facing the responsibility, I want to say: from today, be a responsible person, faithfully perform your duties, stick to your post, and care for the environment and others from today. I have a sincere heart, face the responsibility, and the seasons are like spring. Some people say that if your article can't shine like the sun, let it shine like the moon; If you can't have the brilliance of the moon, let it shine like a star; If you can't shine like a star, at least raise a few fireflies to illuminate the article.
I think poetry is a firefly. If you make good use of this song "Firefly", I believe it will definitely add gorgeous colors to your composition, illuminate your profound cultural thinking and illuminate the "tired" eyes of reviewers. [Recommended reason] Wonderful language and profound cultural thinking are the main reasons for the success of most articles. Clever use of poetry in composition can increase literary talent, improve composition scores and even hold high traditional excellent culture.
The composition of the college entrance examination is wonderful. The ancients often said that "there are poems in the belly". Classical poetry contains profound cultural background and emotional resources. The clever use of ancient poetry can activate language expression, highlight the background of the article, and make the article exude a strong bookish and cultural atmosphere.
This is undoubtedly an effective and convenient way to "shine" and "innovate" the college entrance examination composition. Then, how to use ancient poetry to add luster to your college entrance examination composition? First, the wonderful quotations of famous ancient poems and sentences are the most common way in college entrance examination composition. Quotation can be divided into partial quotation and full quotation.
1. Local quotation refers to quoting famous sentences of classical poetry in local positions of an article, such as the title, inscription, opening paragraph and ending of the article. These places are located in prominent positions, which are easy to attract readers' attention and leave a good impression on readers.
Quoting ancient poems and famous sentences at the title of the article can make the topic look elegant, full of literary interest, dazzle people and promote reading. For example, in 2004, the Fujian examinee's A Storm in Ren Pingsheng quoted Su Shi's Ding Fengbo as the title, which not only closely followed the selected historical figures,
Appropriate conciseness also shows the theme of the article and shows Su Shi's open-mindedness and detachment. It can be described as "killing two birds with one stone."
Embedding poems at the beginning of the article can make the language concise and incisive, let commentators immediately "peek" at the author's cultural accumulation and humanistic accomplishment, and leave a better first impression. For example, in 2004, Shaanxi examinee's Looking for Happiness.