Wang Class 6, Moling Central Primary School, Jiangning District, Nanjing City, Jiangsu Province (1)
"The person who has the deepest influence on me" is not my relative or my friend, but my current Chinese teacher-Pang Changxing.
Mr. Pang is very handsome. He is of medium height, about thirty years old (maybe only a little to the left). Mr. Pang has heavy eyebrows and a pair of black-rimmed glasses on his high nose. The teacher has a small mouth. When she smiled, she only showed her neat white front teeth.
What influenced me the most was a sentence from Mr. Pang. Remember, there was an essay contest in the city, and Mr. Pang asked everyone in our class to write a composition entitled Autumn. This is the first time I have the opportunity to show it in front of such a new teacher. I am extremely happy, because the "good sentences" and "good paragraphs" in my family's "Good Words, Good Sentences and Good Paragraphs" are put together, and then copied down, and I added a few words of my own writing to make a composition. I felt quite satisfied myself, and I handed it over to the teacher the next day.
Teacher Pang read my composition and frowned and said, "Although you used many good words and sentences, what you wrote is not very true. Only true can be considered a good article. " The teacher looked up at me, pointed to the first sentence at the beginning of each natural paragraph of the article with a pen, and said heavily, "You see, the first sentence at the beginning of each paragraph has no order." After that, I opened my Chinese book and turned to a text to show me. Sure enough, the first sentence at the beginning of the natural paragraph of this text uses time words, and the time words are well organized. Seeing this, my face turned red, because I already knew that the teacher knew that I had copied this article.
After listening to Mr. Pang's story, I was both sad and happy. I am sad because I was criticized for "getting something for nothing". I am happy because I understand the true meaning of writing "What is true is beauty". Out of the office, a person seriously looked at autumn scenery on campus, the real autumn is really not as gorgeous as I wrote. When I got home, I locked myself in my study, carefully recalled what I saw and heard all day, and moved my head well. It took me more than an hour to finish my composition. I gave it to the teacher again, and the teacher said that this article was good, but there were several points that needed to be revised. I jumped three feet happily, because the teacher once said that nine times out of ten the articles he recommended could be published. Yeah!
It is teacher Pang's phrase "Only truth is a good article" that makes my composition more true and less false; There are more attractive places and less "running accounts". I was surprised by the composition score in this Chinese unit exam. I got a perfect score that I had never got before. I think this may be because of the teacher's words!
426 words in the second grade of junior high school
Mother's influence
My mother is a gentle, considerate and amiable person. She is anxious about all other people's worries, and would rather suffer than let others suffer.
What affects me the most is that she especially likes to help others. Every time she takes a bus with me, she will stand up and give her seat to the frail old man and pregnant woman.
On one occasion, my uncle wanted to go to Hangzhou, saying that it was too difficult to make money in Qiqihar, and he wanted to go out and take a break. However, I have never succeeded because I don't have enough money on hand. Seeing that my uncle had difficulties in his heart, my mother was embarrassed to speak, so she took the initiative to remit him money from 500 yuan. This made my uncle full of gratitude. A few days later, Big Uncle got on the train to Hangzhou.
The 30th day of the first month is the birthday of Lao Muye. In order to make his old man happy, my mother and my father discussed celebrating his grandfather's birthday at my house. My mother said grandpa worked hard all his life. After retirement, his family was riddled with trivial matters and it was very hard. Every time everyone gets together for a party (dinner), grandpa cooks for himself. He never lets others reach out and always takes care of everything by himself.
We are all afraid that he will be tired, and that his mother will feel distressed. Every time he goes to his house, he always rushes to work with his grandfather. This time, mom must let grandpa enjoy his birthday.
This is my mother. She is always considerate of others. Always think of others. If I can help others in the future and share the joys and sorrows for others, it is closely related to my mother's influence.
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The influence of books on me
Books are the ladder of human progress, which is Gorky's famous saying. I love reading, I like to soar in the ocean of books and enjoy the dew of knowledge. When I watched Snow White as a child, I was moved by the kindness of the princess, loved by the seven dwarfs, and resented by the queen. It was very comfortable to see the perfect ending of the princess and the prince. Gradually, when I grew up, I began to read some popular science books about who is who for five thousand years. From it, I learned the great rivers and mountains of the motherland and the truth of dealing with people. It was books that taught me how to be a man and how to learn knowledge. It is books that let me know how boundless the ocean of knowledge is.
When Marx was reading, there were two deep footprints under his desk. Maybe I can't reach that level, but I'm determined to take it as the starting point of my study. When reading, I like to share joys and sorrows with the protagonist in the book and give the protagonist's thoughts and feelings to myself. So you have a different life experience. This will help you distinguish between good and bad, and make you do better in your daily life.
I like reading at night and turning on the lamp. The sound of the listener turning pages is like a touching piece of music. You may clap your hands and cry when you read your mind. Share the hero's mood swings with the moon.
I like reading, so an old friend said, "Books have their golden houses, and books have their Yan Ruyu". The knowledge of a book is far beyond your imagination.
The influence of a book on me is infinite. He is a thing with soul, vitality and vigor. He can wash your mind and is the key to your treasure house of knowledge.
More, you can go to the website "Looking for Composition" (Baidu search "Looking for Composition") and search for the word "influence" yourself.