Second, either? Outstanding? Or? Get out. Be outstanding or out.
Third, efforts can only pass, and efforts can be excellent. Hard work, only through, hard work, can be excellent.
Don't temper yourself at the age of writing. Don't be tempted at the age of writing.
Fifth, aspiring teenagers seek to learn before they love. Aspiring teenagers study first, then courtship.
Take hard work as a habit, not a temporary passion. Efforts should be regarded as a habit rather than a temporary passion.