How to improve composition in college entrance examination? It is difficult to get high marks in college entrance examination composition, which requires a lot of reading and writing experience. But it's easier to get an upper-middle score.
This is an argumentative essay. Why do you recommend argumentative essays? Because it is reliable, easy to write and has a high score.
There are many composition books that teach this. Generally, you will know how to write after writing five or six articles carefully.
Arguments, arguments, arguments, arguments, which you usually need to pay attention to and remember. Good, new and thought-provoking examples. For example, it touched the top ten people in China, and everyone abroad joined Van Gogh, Da Vinci and Einstein, and held the Qing Dynasty, the Anti-Japanese War and the Long March of the Red Army at home. Generally, at least 20 good examples should be prepared for the college entrance examination, and they should be detailed. If the argument is ok, you can usually contact the argument, that is, you conceive the composition in your mind. For example, the composition requires writing about nature, and you can expand the argument that nature must be protected and harmonious. Then think about examples, such as land desertification, the harm of e-waste to children in China, dead pigs in Huangpu River, the impact of acid rain on amphibians in cultural relics crops and so on. It is best to distinguish the pros and cons, that is, to cite examples of the benefits of caring for nature and examples of revenge after not caring for nature. Only half of the composition is completed, and the other half is our own argument, which is to summarize the information we need in the example (not protecting the environment has bad consequences) and then lead to our argument (so we need to be in harmony with nature). Finally, to sum up, it is ok to have a positive ending that doesn't annoy teachers.
After doing this, you need some literary things to get high marks, such as parallelism, quoting famous speeches and poems. Echo before and after, pave the way and so on. . . .
If you do this, you will get 85% marks for your composition, but remember that everything you write is rubbish, just for the teacher to run errands, and no one will read it except yourself and the teacher. Real literary creation has little to do with exam composition.
How can I improve my writing ability? Read more writing books and accumulate good words and sentences, so that our sense of language will be improved and materials will be accumulated.
My composition is poor. How can I improve it? Keep writing and keep practicing.
How can I improve my writing? In addition to being a type of composition, generally speaking, the composition should be realistic and targeted, which makes your eyes more acute. So what problems are easy to appear in this kind of composition? For example, the accumulation of phenomena and problems, such as unrestrained complaints, such as superficial and pale reasons, such as weak and naive solutions. We can revisit an old concept: ask questions, analyze problems and solve problems. Hot spots, focal points, problems and shortcomings need to be placed and listed; The most important thing is to think about this phenomenon, that is, why it happens and how to deal with it. Of course, there are some problems that our students can't deeply understand and effectively solve, which requires our candidates to foster strengths and avoid weaknesses, sharp questions to avoid, boring theories to avoid, and negative remarks to avoid; Choose those who have a deep understanding and have enough material to sort out. For example, nuclear radiation, sensitive ethnic conflicts, national interests and professional nuclear issues can all be avoided. You can analyze the sense of responsibility, impetuous mentality of quick success and instant benefit, and the concept of global cooperation.
How to write the part of "connecting with reality" that gives the material a free proposition in the composition?
The "material" listed in the material composition is just a drop in the ocean in the real society. Proposition experts just hope that through the analysis, thinking, discussion and exploration of this material, we can get education and inspiration, so as to find the correct world outlook and methodology to solve this kind of problem in real life. And in order to promote justice, combat evil, eliminate the fog of the soul, coordinate interpersonal relationships, and achieve the goal of building a harmonious society.
In view of this, high-quality material compositions always take vivid realistic contradictions as the breakthrough point, discuss current politics, grasp the key points, be concise, vivid and profound, thorough, convincing and irrefutable, and most of them become universally applicable classical theories to guide people's practice. This article, with theoretical guidance and high-rise buildings, is like a fairy in another village leading the way, which makes people shine, sweep away the haze and walk alone to the high-rise buildings. In the revolutionary war years, these articles were full of pertinence, agitation and initiative, and they were bright red flags, horns and battle speeches. They are more deterrent and influential than atomic bombs. They are the sun in people's hearts and nourish people's hearts forever. In the last century, many programmatic documents written by Chairman * * * under the guidance of China's revolution and construction at various stages were all written according to the difficulties and problems that needed to be solved most at that time. They have well practiced the creative concept of "combining articles with the times, combining songs and poems with phases" and used these classic masterpieces to guide the realistic struggle. China's revolution, from small to large, from weak to strong, won one victory after another, and made a batch of clothes. More importantly, the speech at the Yan 'an Forum on Literature and Art clearly pointed out the creative policy of proletarian literature and art "serving the people and socialism". As far as our writing materials and compositions are concerned, the two "services" here are to make our articles serve for solving realistic contradictions and finding the correct methods to solve problems in time, that is, the paper should clearly point out the solutions and measures of "what should be done specifically". To put it bluntly, it is necessary to closely "connect with reality." If you can't do this, then the most beautiful material composition must be "orchids that have lost their roots, autumn grass that floats, and dandelions that are scattered by the wind." Beauty is beauty, life is not long. What vitality will there be?
Generally speaking, most material compositions require argumentative writing. In addition to the general characteristics of argumentative writing, it also has its own characteristics in structural mode. The basic patterns usually adopted can be summarized into four words: quotation, discussion (or comment), connection and summary. The following are explained separately:
(1) Citation-refers to citing materials as a topic, revealing arguments or asking questions. Part of the "Introduction". It is best to start from the need to put forward an argument, grasp the main idea of the material and quote it accurately in concise language. Generally speaking, different materials have different citation methods: narrative materials with more words should be summarized, incisive famous sayings and aphorisms should be repeated, words with profound meanings and rich connotations should be expounded, and cartoon materials should briefly introduce and explain pictures.
(2) Discussion-Make necessary analysis on the materials. We should not only make a brief analysis of the above-mentioned materials, but also do something for the following discussion, broaden our thinking and connect with practice. This is a transitional text from "introduction" to "theory", which has the function of connecting the preceding with the following.
(3) contact-that is, contact with reality, analysis and demonstration, which is the key to the success or failure of the article. We should pay attention to the following points: we must make the argument substantial and rigorous; Choose typical and convincing facts as arguments; It must be analyzed from the outside to the inside, so that it is reasonable and well-founded.
(4) Conclusion-that is, summarizing the arguments of the whole paper. Pay attention to the following points: take care of the materials and echo the topic or the beginning; To deepen the argument, or call, or put forward ways to push the argument to * * *.
We can also simplify the basic mode of material composition through graphic representation:
/overview materials-don't go into details when summarizing.
Theme introduction (omitted)
Make your point-clear/
/expand the analysis-rational and not chaotic
Full score composition for college entrance examination (reference)
On the other side, the lights are dim (1)
On the other side, our mulberries bend here with green threaded branches, and Swallow grass is beautiful silk. Or you can load a boat with autumn colors, spread out the lake for ten miles, and see the round water surface clearly.-The wind and the lotus hold it up, close your eyes, and you can dream of entering Furong Pu in a small canoe.
Mr. Changli said, "The rain is crisp and the grass is not close." So, my friends, let all this be in your hearts, please don't try to board the other shore, because:
Beauty is the distance that makes you.
There is a small town called Pu Jie in Alaska, USA. Tourism is very prosperous. There is only one scenic spot in this town, which is an island in the middle of the lake. Its way of visiting is very strange: "only tourists are allowed to stand on the shore and look out, not allowed to travel on the island." From a distance, the island is shrouded in a piece of Xia Zi. The wind is blowing, and ten thousand vines are dancing. It is so beautiful that many tourists linger. In fact, it is just a desert island full of wild plants. Americans use distance to create its beauty.
In fact, Americans are like this. Why don't we in China know this?
"The moonlight in the atrium is clear, and countless flowers pass through the shadows." Zhang Xian also knows that the fallen flowers must have a moonlight distance to show faint beauty.
"The thin shadow is horizontal and shallow, and the fragrance wafts in the dusk", so Lin Hejing also understands that only through dusk can we appreciate the hazy beauty.
"Before the white lotus blooms, the willow on the other side is like frost", that is, the implicit beauty must be more graceful through Chanjuan.
On the other side, the lights are always dim.
But what if we try to go to the other side?
Two hedgehogs in love want to get closer and appreciate each other, but they are scarred by each other's thorns. As the distance becomes smaller, the beauty becomes smaller.
After Jesus got the word, he returned to his hometown to preach. Many people came from all directions and became his faithful followers. People regard him as the son of God. But later, when someone recognized him as the carpenter's son, the disciples dispersed in a hubbub. Because of losing the barrier of distance, people's awe of beauty is gone.
Now many people are studying the prototype of Mona Lisa. But I want to ask, if people know the prototype, is Mona Lisa's smile still so charming? If people knew the cause of the broken arm, would Venus still be so red? If everyone knows, is the ancient country of Loulan still so wonderful?
Beauty is the distance that makes you. On the other side, the lights are dim.
Each has his strong points (2)
"Jiangshan generation someone out, each collar * * * for hundreds of years"
In short, it tells the truth that each period has its own unique and splendid culture.
In the Spring and Autumn Period and the Warring States Period, a hundred schools of thought contend. Although scholars are in a turbulent world, their thoughts have leapt out of unprecedented dazzling light. Confucianism, Buddhism and Taoism and Law ...
All kinds of ideas are exchanged in collision and used for reference in argument. They are the bright flames in troubled times, illuminating the way forward for China and creating the brilliance of a hundred schools of thought contending.
People often feel out of place and expect to return or fly to a certain time and space in the past or the future, but never think that each era has its own unique and unparalleled coincidence, which leads to the uniqueness of unrepeatable descriptions, such as the Spring and Autumn Period and the Warring States Period, and modern China.
Modern China was invaded by foreign powers, and the intellectuals' sense of national responsibility and lofty vision created the incomparable shock of "new literature" in the New Culture Movement. The fusion of Chinese and western cultures, vernacular novels such as The True Story of Ah Q and other new literary works have stunned people and awakened the numb souls and scattered will to struggle of Chinese people. We will also praise this era, admire these patriots, or yearn for the cultural crystallization of blood and tears.
Every time and every place has its own unique history, each with its own merits. China is like this, and so are foreign countries.
The quiet and vast sea gave birth to the splendid civilization of ancient Greece. Exquisite sculptures, wonderful myths, shining philosophical light ... are fascinating, and everyone wants to live in that beautiful harmony, but some people want to live in the "* * *" era like the European Renaissance.
During the Renaissance, the bourgeoisie opposed feudalism and sought democracy, drawing the essence from ancient Greek literary classics. Petrarch, the father of humanism, said: "I would like to return to the democratic era of ancient Greece, but I prefer to live in the present and shoulder the responsibility of continuing humanism to this day."
Indeed, the achievements of civilization in different periods have their own merits. We can only choose what we like or prefer, but we can't be divorced from our times. However, the sense of cultural responsibility makes people willing to open up a new world of human spirit in this era. We don't know whether the times created people and culture, or whether people and culture created the times. Even if we yearn to be born in a certain period because of our own preferences, complaining blindly because we live in the present will eventually dim the light of this era. We should not live in fantasy, but try our best to make our times shine.
"Once said weeks.
Everyone has his own The Way, and everyone's lonely road constitutes the spiritual home of this era. "Everyone's yearning is different, just as the historian Toynbee loved Xinjiang in the first century. A century ago, Madame Curie's niece Hannah loved Xinjiang alone, but Irene was willing to be born in the next century ... Although people are" different in taste and different in calmness ",this era will also have a beautiful world if they turn their yearning into a driving force to create cultural glory of the era.
In the Spring and Autumn Period, each generation has its own merits.
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This article is an argumentative essay on the relationship between culture and the times based on the materials given in the title of the article. The whole paper revolves around the fact that every time and every place will have its own unique culture.
This theme has been rigorously and meticulously demonstrated. The author is active in thinking, broad in vision and full of speculation. The blood and tears culture from the Spring and Autumn Period to modern China, and the western culture from ancient Greece to the Renaissance, not only have the recognition and yearning for various cultural forms presented by various countries and times, but also have deep concern and reflection on the twists and turns of cultural development.
The whole article is well-structured, within 1000 words, and the author's strategic layout. In the discussion of grasping the dialectical relationship between culture and the times, the author shows his unique understanding everywhere, which is commendable for high school students. The author's language expression ability is very strong, and his words are concise and calm, especially at the beginning and end of the article, which echoes before and after, making the finishing point, and a few strokes.
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