1. (Beginning) At the end of the city, there are no bustling streets and shining neon lights; at the end of the city, there are only dilapidated shantytowns with people who have experienced the hardships of life; at the end of the city , there is a group of people like them.

(End) The sun rises from the horizon, lighting up the end of the city and their lives.

2. (Beginning) Standing on the banks of the Seine, you can feel the fashionable and elegant pulse of Paris; standing on Fifth Avenue, you can feel the gorgeous and gorgeous atmosphere of New York; walking on the streets of Ginza, you can appreciate Tokyo Ancient and modern culture; staying by the Huangpu River, you can appreciate the inclusive and unique spirit of Shanghai...

(End) I face the city in infinite thinking, touch its shell, and long for it Touch its soul. I hope that one day its inner substance can be as beautiful and moving as the outer shell. I hope that one day those falsehoods and frivolities will become real and solid. I hope that it will be "the clouds disappear and the rain will disappear, and the colors will shine brightly". I hope we can touch it again. The beauty of the city that scales like a flower from the inside out.

Principle 2: Natural restraint

Example:

(beginning) Life is actually a process, many things, many people, have failed and experienced Only then will you understand and mature. When failure comes, don't be sad, but regard it as an opportunity for growth and an opportunity for exercise. If you rush forward, a better and more splendid life will be waiting for you, and you will have a sense of accomplishment; if you retreat and do not move forward, you will only usher in more failures and more regrets in life.

(End) When we are about to finish our life, we will look back on this life, especially those difficulties and failures, and we will feel that perhaps it is because of these that we have enriched our lives and defeated and overcome them. They make our lives more perfect.

Principle 3: The finishing touch

Example:

(beginning) Sad disasters have existed since ancient times. However, throughout history, who has ever seen such inspiring and earth-shaking unity? "Historical Records" says: If the people are of one heart, the family will be safe; if the king and the people are of one heart, the country will prosper. Today, this is the hand in hand of people and people, people and country, country and the world. Why worry about the unrest of the family and the failure of the country?

(End) Together with the green mountains, we have gone through the wind and rain together and are reunited. Perhaps the link that brings people from all over the world together is this expectation: to establish a heart for the world, to establish a destiny for the people, to continue the unique learning of the saints, and to create peace for all generations!

Principles Four: Use poetry

Example:

The flowing light is easy to throw people away, red cherries, green bananas. As you walk down the path of your life, sometimes it’s hard to see if you’ve taken a detour. You might as well jump out and adjust the focus to see the best life.

Principle 5: Use rhetoric wisely

Example:

Although our lives are not like Li Bai’s saying, “To be successful in life, you must have all the joy, and you will come back after all your money is gone.” It is heroic, but ideals make it bright, struggle makes it real, and harvest makes it have a golden poetry.

Use perseverance to break the shackles of fate, live a poetic life, plant your ideals, and work tirelessly. I believe that you will eventually reap the rewards of "the geese lead the sorrow away, and the mountains carry the moon"!

1: Parallel to the topic, take the lead

Life is like wine, either fragrant or strong, because of honesty, it becomes mellow; life is like a song, either high or low, because of trustworthiness, it becomes Become melodious; life is picturesque, bright or elegant, because of integrity, it becomes beautiful.

("Brewing Life with Integrity")

Parallelism can increase the momentum of the article, make it catchy, and make the article full of rhythm and phonological beauty. Used to describe things, it can create colorful scenes; used to narrate, it can be hearty; used to reason, it can be majestic; used to debate, it can overwhelm mountains and seas; used to express emotions, it can be overwhelming.

2: Whole and scattered, dexterously integrated into the title

If I could pick up a handful of moonlight, I would choose the softest one; if I could pick the red leaves of Xiangshan Mountain, I would choose the most gorgeous one; If I could pick the stars from the sky, I would choose the brightest ones. Maybe you will say that my choice is not the best, but I believe in my choice.

("My choice, I like")

The combination of whole sentences can make the sentence patterns flexible, add the melody and phonological beauty of the article, and give people an aesthetic Feel. At the beginning, "moonlight" - "soft", "red leaves" - "gorgeous", "stars" - "bright" are used to form a layout. The colors are bright, with the first "color" to catch people's eyes, and the beauty of music.

3: Quotes into the title, elegant and profound

There is a saying in Zhang Chao's "Out of Dreams" of the Qing Dynasty: "The chrysanthemum regards Yuan Ming as its confidant, and the plum blossom regards He Jing as its confidant. Bamboo takes Ziyou (yǒu) as its confidant. "When facing the sea; facing this blue sky, I can't help but think: Who does the sea take as its confidant?

("Facing the Sea")

Quote the previous writers' sentences, follow the literary style of the quotation, and cleverly introduce the topic.

4: Delicate description and vivid imagery

I once looked at life through the eyes of water, and life was once as gloomy and distant as autumn water. The sun shines through the maple forest, and I look up along the beam, but I seem to see endless fields of japonicas, as white as mist and snow, and as soft as water plants. In the blur, I saw my mother's eyes, and saw the moment when my mother made her choice.

("Let the eyelashes bring love, bring happiness")

The descriptive language in it is often easy to become stereotyped and plain, but if the candidates can cleverly grasp the characteristics, pay attention to reference , flexibly innovating can break the rigidity of description and the dullness of narrative, allowing the description of the image to express a heart-wrenching poetic feeling

5: The aphorism emerges and enlightens the title

Life is accidental, death is inevitable. Life and death, apart from a few cheers and a few bursts of crying, there is nothing else. So, what about life between life and death?

("What is Life")

The aphoristic opening is eye-catching. "Life is accidental, death is inevitable, and between life and death is life." Concise, simple, profound and incisive.

6: The opening of the dialogue is fascinating

Master Hongyi, a great monk of the generation, said to his disciples before his Nirvana: "Look at my teeth, what do you think?" "All of them have fallen out." ""What about the tongue? Is it still there?" "It's still there." "So, tough things are always better than hard things."

("Tenacity - The Character I Pursue")

A profound Zen dialogue leads to the connotation of "tenacity" and introduces the point of view of the article

7: Beginning with an example, concisely presented

Choice is difficult, let alone the choice of the soul. Gao Jianli chose to die for Jing Ke; Ma Benzhai's mother chose to sacrifice for the revolution; Zhu Yingtai chose to transform into a butterfly for true love. This is how they choose between friendship, family and love.

("Between Life and Death")

The article begins with a concise explanation of the deeds of famous people: Gao Jianli chose death for friendship, and used his own head to defend the principle of "a man who knows himself will die" The words of wisdom have become the most famous people of all time; Ma Benzhai’s mother chose to devote herself to sacrifice for the righteousness of the world with her deep maternal love, setting up a monument of personality for her son and future generations; Zhu Yingtai chose to transform into a butterfly and use her own The soul sublimates Liang Shanbo's love and sets an example for lovers to last forever.

8: Symmetrical opening, neat and clear

In the eyes of the butterfly, the flower is an angel, because the flower gives her the nectar of life. In the eyes of the flower, the bee is a close friend, because the bee gives her the nectar of life. The continuation of life.

("Learning to Observe Historically")

The article begins with a set of symmetrical sentences to give the temperament of butterflies, bees, and flower people. Through vivid and appropriate personification techniques, the form and The content achieves perfect unity. It reflects the candidates' superb language skills.

9: The beginning of the poem highlights the background

"Continuous cutting and confusion are the sorrow of separation, but there is a feeling in the heart." This is the sentiment of Empress Li;" I can't help but feel ecstasy, the west wind blows behind the curtain, and people are thinner than yellow flowers. "This is Li Qingzhao's feeling; "I left gently, just as I came gently, I waved my hand gently to bid farewell to the clouds in the western sky." This is Li Qingzhao's feeling. Xu Zhimo's reluctance; "People have joys and sorrows, separations and reunions, the moon waxes and wanes, and this has never been the case in ancient times." This is Su Dongpo's magnanimity...

("Beautiful Farewell")

10: Lyrical discussion, extraordinary momentum

In fact, tranquility is that simple. A shallow smile, a thoughtful word, a heart that can contain everything, is enough to make a tense face Relax your face and let the smile bloom gently on people's faces. The smile is like the clouds wandering in the horizon, gently dotting the blue sky, fresh and natural,

(Select Since the full score essay "Thoughts from the Sky" in the Guangzhou High School Entrance Examination)

Spring is like the sea and youth is like flowers. Youth is beautiful, and beautiful youth lies in struggle and hard work. I hope that people all over the world can let their youth bloom with the fragrance of flowers!

(Selected from the full-mark essay "In the Mood for Love" in the Jilin Provincial High School Entrance Examination)

Technical tips: These two paragraphs are written from the heart and out of emotion, using parallelism, metaphors and rhetoric to express them beautifully. The words express the true emotions in the heart, and are coupled with appropriate discussions, making the end of the article powerful and powerful.

11: The scenery contrasts and the scene merges into one

The wind stopped, the rainstorm ended, the sun smiled again, and the glass of two generations was melted by the setting sun. . The sun gradually faded in the distance and disappeared into the sunset. The two merged into one, without any distance.

(Selected from the full-mark essay "Reading in the Rain" in the Guangzhou High School Entrance Examination)

Technical tips: The characteristics of the ending of this paragraph are very prominent, and the effect of the scenery is also obvious. The author uses the rain to The description of the scenery behind suggests the disappearance of the emotional gap between the two generations, and the organic combination of emotion and scenery. Subtle and timeless. Endless aftertaste.

At this moment, a ray of sunlight shines into the ward from the outside, and I feel like a wounded tree bathing in it. Oh, although there are unpredictable circumstances on the road to growth, the sunshine is good after all! I think.

(Selected from "Growing Up in the Sun", a full score essay for the high school entrance examination in Xiantao City, Hubei Province)

Tips: The ending of this paragraph highlights the role of sunlight and combines sunlight with growth. It implies that although the road to growth is not smooth but full of sunshine, it expresses an optimistic mood. It not only responds to the theme, but also appears to be deeply emotional.

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