1. Use the method of parallelism to write the beginning of the essay

1 In this golden autumn season, some people have harvested golden grain; some have harvested round fruits; some have harvested heavy hope. But I have gained confidence that money cannot buy!

2 The sun wakes up the birds and makes them chirp; the sun wakes up the earth and makes the earth wake up; the earth wakes us up and makes us get up and work.

3. I came to the garden. There were red flowers, hundreds of flowers, purple flowers, and yellow flowers.

4. Chinese knots can be seen everywhere. At the door of government units; on the necks of children; on the clothes of old overseas Chinese.

I wrote them all myself, and no one else did. My answer is also the same, because they are all mine. If anyone else, please read the date and name clearly!

2. How to write a parallelism or analogy sentence at the beginning of a composition

"Parallelism to build momentum" at the beginning of a composition 1. Tips and tricks for constructing wonderful paragraphs 1: Use metaphors to form parallel sentences 1 .One of the progressive exercises: Love is sunshine, love is dewdrops, and love is greetings.

Love is a white dove, love is a poplar, and love is a guzheng. Progressive Exercise 2: Love is a piece of sunshine, love is a drop of dew, love is a greeting.

Love is a white dove, love is a poplar tree, love is a guzheng. Progressive Exercise Three: ?Love is a piece of sunshine shining in winter, love is a drop of dew falling on the calyx of a flower, love is a greeting floating in the cold morning.

?Love is a white dove flying in the sky, love is a poplar tree standing in the desert, love is a guzheng that sounds in the mind. Progressive Exercise 4: Love is a piece of sunshine shining in winter, making the poor and sick feel warm; Love is a drop of dew falling on the calyx of a flower, nourishing those whose hearts have been dry for a long time; Love is a sentence floating in the cold morning Greetings make the tired people feel warm.

Practical drill: Love is ___ the breeze, which makes ___; Love is ___ the sunset, which makes ___; Love is ___ the nectar, which makes ___. Example 1: Love is a wisp of breeze floating in the sky and earth, soothing the restless people; Love is a sunset hanging in the sky, making people with dim beliefs see hope; Love is a drop of nectar staying in the leaves, making people feel happy. Thirsty people are full of strength.

Example 2: Love is a spring that appears in the desert, making people on the verge of despair strengthen their belief in survival; Love is a bonfire lit in the snow, making people who are confused gain clarity of mood. ; Love is a song floating in the night sky, which brings spiritual comfort to the lonely and helpless people. 2. Appreciation of wonderful passages in metaphorical parallelism sentences 1. Kindness is the umbrella that holds you open in the wind and rain, and kindness is the lamp that lights up for you in the darkness.

Kindness is the helping hand extended to you in times of crisis; kindness is the door open to you when you are desperate. 2. Maturity is a kind of bright but not dazzling brilliance, a kind of mellow but not greasy sound, a kind of calmness that does not need to judge the appearance of others, an atmosphere that finally stops complaining to the surroundings, a kind of A smile that ignores the noise, a kind of indifference that washes away the extreme, a kind of thickness that does not need to be announced, a kind of height that is not steep.

3. Youth is the nectar made with the blood of will and the sweat of hard work, which lasts forever; youth is the rainbow woven with unfading hope and immortal yearning, which is brilliant and brilliant; youth is A copper wall built with eternal persistence and tenacious tenacity is impregnable. 3. How to start a composition with parallelism and then write it? Can anyone tell me the process?

The ending should be mentioned first, followed by the beginning.

Tips for ending a composition If the beginning is compared to "firecrackers", then the end is like "ringing a bell". The ancients said: "A good ending is like chewing dried fruits and tasting fragrant tea, which makes people think about it again and again."

Just like the beginning, the ending is also very important. Wouldn't it be a pity if an article with a clear theme and a novel angle was disappointed by an unfavorable ending at the end? In addition to serving the content and center of the article, the ending must also be restricted by the "beginning", which makes the ending even more difficult to write.

People call the ending of a good article "leopard's tail". From the perspective of high school entrance examination composition, although it is not necessarily required that every article ends with "leopard's tail", the ending is also required to be concise, vivid, and Just right. Generally speaking, the common mistakes students make at the end of their compositions are: ① Superfluous.

Even though the full text has come to an end, it could have been thought-provoking, but the author is still uneasy and insists on telling the whereabouts of the characters that do not need to be explained one by one in a few trembling sentences, and revealing the meaning that could have been understood. ② Shouting slogans in vain.

At the end, in order to express one's position and attitude, one shouts something irrelevant to the content of the article. This kind of ending ruins the theme. ③ Sloppy.

The meaning of the ending is clear, but it is still reluctant to end, which conflicts with the theme of the article. From this point of view, the ending of the composition for the high school entrance examination is particularly important. How to write a good ending and improve the quality of the composition in the examination room? The following ending techniques are commonly used in high school entrance examination essays.

1. Natural bandana. No matter what kind of literary style, after expressing the content, the article naturally concludes the whole text without designing profound philosophical sentences or carving out rich symbolic shapes. This kind of ending is called a "natural ending".

It completely avoids the superfluous and innocent ending problems of the article. It appears simple, bright, and unpretentious, and is widely used in high school entrance examination compositions. The composition atmosphere in the examination room is tense and the competition is fierce. It is impossible to pay too much attention to what "style" and what "method".

As long as you are full of passion and express yourself freely, you can write wherever you want, and you can fully express your feelings, which is a good article. However, being "natural" does not mean doing whatever you want, being sloppy, but Follow the natural trend of literary development to end the overall situation. There are many such examples in the texts I have studied, so I won’t go into details here.

2. Echoing from beginning to end. The ending should echo the beginning, and write sentences that echo the beginning but are not simply repeated. This ending method is a very common way to end all kinds of articles.

This binding method can arouse the reader's psychological sense of beauty and create a sense of harmony from beginning to end. For example, "A Precious Shirt" begins with "In my home, I keep a cool white shirt."

It ends with: "For four years, I have kept this precious shirt. Collect it carefully and never wear it once. "The ending of "Praise to the Poplar" echoes the beginning: "I want to praise the poplar tree loudly!" 3. The style of the death chapter.

This ending method is to rely on the content of the full text at the end of the article to use concise language to clearly express the theme idea, or to explain the writing intention when the full text is about to come to an end. It is clear, so this ending method is also called "the finishing touch". For example, at the end of "Jujube Core" it is written: "Changing nationality does not mean changing national sentiments, and no nation is as attached to the homeland as we are."

"Remembering a Spinning Wheel" is written at the end : "Fighting against difficulties brings endless joy. - Remember a spinning wheel."

4. Famous aphorisms. End with famous quotes, police names, and poems, aiming to extend the article and reveal some kind of true meaning of life.

It often appears at the end of essays, narratives, and essays. In a few words, it expresses profound and thought-provoking philosophical or warning content, making it deeply imprinted in the hearts of readers and serving as a "word of speech". It has the effect of "finished, infinite meaning". "The Pear Blossoms on the Post Road" ends with: "The Pear Blossoms on the Post Road are blooming everywhere."

5. Lyrical argumentative style. Concluding the article with lyrical discussion can express the author's feelings, arouse readers' emotions, and arouse readers' cries, which has a strong artistic appeal.

This ending method is mainly used in narrative essays about people and events, and can also be used in expository essays and argumentative essays. There are many forms of lyrical argumentative endings, so it is more free to end in this way. A good "lyrical argumentative" ending will inevitably give rise to true feelings, giving readers a sense of reality and adequacy.

For example, the ending of "Flower Market" reads: "She stood smiling among the flowers, just like a flower, like a tall and elegant orchid." Another example is the ending of "Remembering My Mother" The two natural paragraphs are a very typical lyrical argumentative ending.

The composition should be completed in one go, and the ending should be in line with the previous text and should not be missing. The ending of the composition is the same as the beginning. It is different from chapter to chapter, but there are also rules to follow.

The above ending methods are just some commonly used ending methods. Do not copy them mechanically. Really good endings exist in the candidates' daily solid training, in the candidates' on-the-spot performance, and in the candidates' "Outside of Poetry". Please read the end of one candidate's essay: If life no longer has green, we are still searching for it, why don't we take action to protect green and protect the environment, so that we will always have green.

Only then will the green sing: "I come quietly, just as you (the desert) walk quietly..." (Anonymous "If Life No longer Has Green") Comments: Author Natural He thought of green due to the environment, and then started a topic around "what if life no longer has green". The article begins by comparing "past", "today" and "tomorrow" to highlight that the environment is deteriorating and green is decreasing, which naturally leads to worries. Then, he skillfully used the best lines from Xu Zhimo's "Farewell Cambridge" to elicit thoughts about the lack of green in life, leaving room for imagination.

Dear middle school students, there is no fixed method for writing. Which ending method to use depends on the stylistic requirements and your own preferences. You cannot copy dogma. For example, some can be used in argumentative style, some can be used in descriptive style, some can be used in suspense style, some can be used in quotation style, and so on.

Middle school students also need to practice more and experience more, and work hard to explore, so as to achieve the effect of drawing inferences from one example. In this way, I believe that the students will be able to write the ending of "It's like ringing a bell, and the lingering sound lingers on the beams".

Transfer training The ancients said: "A good ending is like chewing. 4. Arrange the articles at the beginning (only the beginning)

Interesting things in childhood There are no taboos in interesting things in childhood, and they often linger in childhood dreams. I really want to sleep like Sleeping Beauty. If I were asked to describe my childhood fun, I would compare it to a flower, a fragrant flower; a box, a box containing many secrets; a grape trellis. , a grape trellis filled with countless grapes, let us enjoy the fairy tale together! The soul is a vast sky that contains everything in the world. ; The soul is a tranquil lake, with occasional ripples; the soul is a snowy field, which reflects a colorful world.

Pain - Pain is the groping in the dark, moving forward. The road is full of ups and downs; pain is the sorrow that no one understands, helpless in the face of all setbacks; pain is the deepest torture of the soul, without tears and unable to express it; pain is an expression that is born with no expression, and is the devil in troubles and stupidity. —— Stupidity is a kind of natural helplessness, a kind of acquired laziness, a self-sown evil fruit, a moth in a good fruit

Lies —— Lies are a worm of the soul. Moths gnaw away people's hearts beyond recognition; lies are a deep quagmire, which makes people unable to extricate themselves; lies are an endless black hole, which makes people fall into the abyss of sin and never recover. A wolf in sheep's clothing, doing hidden deeds; insidiousness is the public enemy of kindness and jealous friend; insidiousness is an iceberg of the soul, which makes people feel the chill through the clarity.

Selfishness - Selfishness is a mirror, in which you can always only see yourself; selfishness is a piece of cloth that covers your eyes and cannot see the pain of others; selfishness is a layer of glass that looks transparent, but always separates each other. The distance. What is family love? It is the needle and thread flying in the hands of the mother on a whistling winter night; it is the banana fan in the hand of the father to repel mosquitoes after a long separation; "It's a fist and kick from my father when he is angry... A greeting card is a warm friendship and a warm wish.

It brings the message of spring, it brings the seeds of love Spread, it conveys good blessings, it conveys the true feelings of the world.

For example: Only with a firm ambition can one be content with the difficult environment of "eating and drinking". ; With broad intellect, one can strategize coolly and win thousands of miles; with extraordinary courage, one can coolly turn the tide and remain calm in the face of danger.

The chicness in my eyes cannot be achieved overnight.

It is a fine wine that needs years of accumulation to be brewed. It is a pearl that needs sand and stone to grind before it can be rounded. That mellowness and roundness are always based on long and even painful accumulation. of. (Chicken and unrestrained) Transition sentences and parallel sentences.

For example: Some people want to become China's Edison-like invention king, but they are afraid of the difficulty of delving into scientific knowledge; some people want to be China's Maupassant, but they are frightened by the hardship of practicing penmanship all year round; He wants to become a music master with a sudden success, but he is too lazy to work on the field of musical notation. With such great ambitions in mind, but on the journey of a sparrow, he can't even catch a small fish, let alone such magnificent ambitions? (Heartbeat and action) Cause and effect sentences and parallelism sentences.

For example: It is precisely because of the heroic spirit of promising a thousand pieces of gold that Fang played the tragic song of Yishui. Integrity - the eternal law of Chinese knights.

It is precisely because of the persistence of each other that we sang the song of dancing butterflies. Integrity - the lingering swan song of Chinese lovers.

It is precisely because of the promise to establish destiny for the world and seek happiness for the people that songs about upright officials pop up one after another. Integrity - the immortal song of Chinese literati.

(Integrity) Ask a parallel sentence. For example: The pond is full of sludge, is it black? black! However, the lotus emerges from the mud and remains unstained.

"The birds and magpies are in their nests and in the altar." Is the state of Chu in the late period dark? black! However, Qu Yuan said, "The whole world is turbid, but I alone am clear." With the eunuchs in power and villains running rampant, was the Ming Dynasty at that time a bad thing? black! However, Yu Qian only left his innocence in the world.

(Those who are close to ink may not necessarily be black) Rhetorical question about parallel sentences. Such as: Will we still be moved? Will children preparing for the college entrance examination be moved by the glass of milk brought by their mother? Will an arbitrary boss be moved by a humble suggestion from his subordinate? Will tourists be moved by the trees that are still strong and upright even though they are covered with bruises? If you can still be moved, it proves that your blood vessels have not hardened and your nerves have not been numb; if you can still be moved, it proves that you can still look at the world and know yourself.

(Moving) A collection of excellent parallelism sentences. Love is a sweet spring water that makes unfortunate people forget the bitterness of life; love is a beautiful song that makes people with boring lives feel the joy of life. ;Love is a gurgling spring water that makes hungry travelers feel the sweetness of life's journey; love is a beautiful song that makes lonely people feel the beauty of life; love is a spring water flowing in the heart. , makes people immersed in pain feel the sweetness of the world; love is a song that echoes in the ears, making lonely people feel the warmth of the world; love is a stream of spring water that breaks the ice gate, shocking the stone heart ; Love is a lighthouse that shines in the dark night, allowing lost ships to find a harbor; Love is a drizzle of light rain in spring, so that lonely and lonely people can enjoy the nourishment of the soul; Love is a clear spring with tears flowing in the summer night, soothing the hot summer night. People who are sleepless appreciate the poetic tranquility; love is a small umbrella held up on a rainy night, so that people who wander in a foreign land can get the shelter of family affection; love is a rainbow flying in the sky, so that people with gloomy eyes can see the world. The beauty of love; love is a cup of ice water poured on the head, so that people who are dizzy with high fever can think calmly; love is a piece of milk candy held in the mouth, so that people who have drank coptis for a long time can taste the sweetness of life. Care is a look, giving students a silent blessing; care is a ray of green wind, giving students physical and mental comfort; care is a spring rain, giving students inner nourishment; care is a greeting, giving students the warmth of spring.

Gratitude If love is the pattering spring breeze in March, gratitude is the fresh green of the grass; If love is the vibrant sunshine of early summer, gratitude is the rich green of the growing trees; If love is the whiteness of winter Snowflakes, gratitude is like wheat with full grains; praising you is not rain and dew, but it brings the hope of new life; you are not spring water, but it brings the sweetness of life; you are not the sun, but it brings the warmth of the world. You are like a stream without the rushing waves of a river. 5. The beginning of the essay written in parallel style

Teacher:

Teacher, you are like a hard-working gardener, nurturing our little flowers; Teacher, you are like our mother, giving We care; teacher, you are like a great architect, you have built a bridge for us in the school; teacher, you are like a guiding light, lighting up the future for us.

Teacher, you are like a candle, burning yourself to illuminate us. Teacher, you are like a lighthouse, standing for a long time, just to point us in the direction. Teacher, you are like chalk, which shrinks every minute, but becomes Teacher, you have accumulated our knowledge like a mother, and your care for us is no less than that of a mother.

Teachers are the kindling that ignites the fire of students’ hearts; teachers are stone steps, which bear students’ steady climb up step by step. The teacher is like a candle. Although it is thin, it has some heat and some light, illuminating others and exhausting itself. This selfless dedication will never be forgotten.

The language of your lectures is as sweet as a tinkling mountain spring, as friendly as a gurgling stream, and as exciting as a rushing river... Your love is as warm as the sun, as warm as the spring breeze, and as sweet as the clear spring.

Your love is more serious than father's love, more delicate than mother's love, and more pure than friendship. You, the teacher's love, is the greatest and most pure in the world 6. Articles that start with parallelism

Soul - The soul is a vast sky, which contains everything in the world; the soul is A tranquil lake with occasional ripples; the soul is a snowy field that reflects a colorful world.

Pain - Pain is groping in the dark, and the road ahead is full of ups and downs; Pain is the sorrow that no one understands, helplessly facing all setbacks; Pain is the deepest torture of the soul, without tears And it cannot be said directly; pain is an expression that is not born, and it is the devil in troubles. Stupidity - Stupidity is a kind of natural helplessness, a kind of acquired laziness, a self-sown evil fruit, a moth in a good fruit.

Lies - Lies are a worm in the soul, eating people's hearts beyond recognition; lies are a deep quagmire, which makes people unable to extricate themselves; lies are an endless black hole, which makes people unable to extricate themselves. People who fall into the abyss of sin will never recover. Insidious - Insidious is a wolf in sheep's clothing, doing hidden deeds; insidious is the public enemy of kindness and jealous friend; insidious is an iceberg of the soul, which makes people feel the chill through the clarity. .

Selfishness - Selfishness is a mirror, in which you can always only see yourself; selfishness is a piece of cloth that covers your eyes and cannot see the pain of others; selfishness is a layer of glass that looks transparent , but they are always separated from each other. What is family affection? Family love is the needle and thread flying in the mother's hand on a winter night when the wind is whistling; it is the banana fan in the father's hand to repel mosquitoes on a scorching summer day; it is the ordinary question "I'm back" from a relative after a long separation; it is the father's rage. A fist and kick... A greeting card is a warm friendship and a warm wish.

It brings the message of spring, it spreads the seeds of love, it conveys beautiful blessings, and it conveys the true feelings of the world. Only with a firm ambition can we be content with the difficult environment of "food and drink"; with broad intellect can we be able to strategize and win thousands of miles; with extraordinary courage can we be able to turn the tide and remain calm in the face of danger. .

Some people want to be China’s Edison-like invention king, but they are afraid of the difficulty of delving into scientific knowledge; some people want to be China’s Maupassant, but they are daunted by the hardship of practicing penmanship all year round; some people want to be a blockbuster. He became a music master, but he was too lazy to work on the field of musical notation. Integrity - the eternal law of Chinese knights.

It is precisely because of the persistence of each other that we sang the song of dancing butterflies. Integrity - the lingering swan song of Chinese lovers.

It is precisely because of the promise to establish destiny for the world and seek happiness for the people that songs about upright officials pop up one after another. Integrity - the immortal song of Chinese literati.

Love is a sweet spring water that makes unfortunate people forget the bitterness of life; love is a beautiful song that makes people with boring lives feel the joy of life; love is a gurgling flow at a glance. Spring water makes hungry travelers feel the sweetness of the journey of life; love is a beautiful song that makes people walking alone feel the beauty of life; love is a spring water flowing in the heart, making people immersed in pain People feel the sweetness of the world; love is a song that echoes in the ears, making lonely people feel the warmth of the world; love is a stream of spring water that breaks the ice gate, shocking the stone heart; love is a tower that lights up in the dark night A lighthouse that enables lost ships to find a harbor; Love is a drizzle of light rain in spring, allowing lonely people to enjoy spiritual nourishment; Love is a clear spring with tears flowing in summer nights, allowing those who are hot and sleepless to appreciate poetry The tranquility; Love is a small umbrella held up on a rainy night, so that people who wander in a foreign land can get the shelter of family affection; Love is a rainbow flying in the sky, so that people with gloomy eyes can see the beauty of the world; Love is a cup of splashing water The ice water on the head enables people who are dizzy with high fever to think calmly; love is a piece of milk candy held in the mouth, which allows people who have drank coptis for a long time to taste the sweetness of life. Care is a look, giving students a silent blessing; care is a ray of green wind, giving students physical and mental comfort; care is a spring rain, giving students inner nourishment; care is a greeting, giving students the warmth of spring.

Gratitude If love is the pattering spring breeze in March, gratitude is the fresh green of the grass; If love is the vibrant sunshine of early summer, gratitude is the rich green of the growing trees; If love is the whiteness of winter Snowflakes, gratitude is the wheat with full grains. Praise to you is not rain and dew, but it brings the hope of new life; you are not the spring water, but it brings the sweetness of life; you are not the sun, but it brings the warmth of the world. You are like a stream, without the rushing waves of the river or the majestic waves of the sea, but the little jingling between the rocks is your cheerful melody.

You are like a star, without the dazzling light of the sun or the charming romance of the moon, but the light in the night sky is the flash of the value of your life. You are like gravel, without the majesty of mountains or the leisureliness of streams, but the little paving between mountains and rivers is your silent contribution.

Your smile is the warmest spring breeze in the world, your tears are the most precious pearls in the world, your wrinkles are the marks of hard years, frost, snow and rain; your portrait is brave and tenacious. Symbol; your care allows us to feel the love of our elders; your encouragement allows us to raise the sail of struggle; your profound knowledge allows us to bathe in the sunshine of knowledge; your dedication allows me to appreciate the virtues of teachers. style. 1. Love: Love is a piece of sunshine shining in winter, making the poor and sick feel the warmth of the world; love is a spring that appears in the desert, making people on the verge of despair see the hope of life again; love is a A song floating in the night sky brings solace to the lonely and helpless people.

2. Beauty: Still life is the beauty of solidification, and moving scenery is the beauty of flow; straight lines are the beauty of smoothness, and curves are the beauty of gracefulness; the noisy city is the beauty of bustling, and the quiet village is elegant. beautiful. There is beauty everywhere in life, as long as you have a pair of eyes to discover beauty and a heart to appreciate beauty.

3. Accumulation: An old saying goes: "If you don't accumulate small steps, you can't reach a thousand miles; if you don't accumulate small streams, you can't become a river." Anyone who makes a name for himself in the world starts from a small place, so pay attention. Accumulate bit by bit, consciously cultivate your own moral talents, and constantly improve yourself.

Without the perseverance to listen to the chickens dancing every day, how could Zu Ti make the Northern Expedition to the Central Plains and become famous throughout the ages! How could Wang Xizhi be able to paint the pond water without years of hard work in using pen and ink to dye the pond water?