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How to write a composition that begins and ends with the word "I"

1. How to write the beginning and end of an essay

A perfect example of the beginning of a full-score essay 1. Quoting famous quotes ① Asking what love is in the world can teach you how to make love between life and death.

Yuan Haowen is indeed easy to ask and very good at asking questions. His question can be said to be a question for the ages.

Over the years, how many people have been lingering on this issue, and how many people have made the final answer in life after paying a huge price. But each family's words are as different as each person's face.

Xi Shi said: "Love is a tool..." ("Asking What Love Is in the World") ②In a church in the Middle Ages, a saint began his speech: "The reason why I became Saint, because I have seen through money, and what is mine belongs to everyone."

Time passes with a snap of the finger. In a prison across the century, a thief began his life monologue: "The reason why I became a thief is because I have seen through money, and what belongs to everyone is mine."

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("The Saint and the Thief") ③ Rodin, the master of aesthetics, once said: "Beauty is everywhere. For our eyes, it is not a lack of beauty, but a lack of discovery." Today, this rich man is inspired by Inspired by innovative scholars, I want to say: "The answer is universal. For our heads, it is not a lack of thinking, but a lack of perspective."

Many times, we are confused by the incomprehension of the problem. Or you are wandering at the crossroads of multiple choices, and you have doubts about which way to go. You are often hesitant and hesitant. At this time, it is necessary to consider from a different angle, which will give you more opportunities for success. ("Spinning the Kaleidoscope") 2. Clever use of letter format ①Dear Grandpa Confucius: Hello! I am an ordinary descendant of yours, and I have the courage to write to you after thousands of years, not only to send you my respectful greetings, but also to urgently await your advice on several difficult questions.

("A Letter to Confucius") ②Hateful standard answer: When I see you, I am really filled with righteous indignation. So, driven by the flames of anger, I write this letter to denounce you.

The answers are rich and colorful, but you have to wear the "standard" hat. You know, just because of the word "standard", countless tragedies have happened.

The following are your three major crimes ("A Letter to the "Standard Answer"") 3. Borrow the writing style of the Zhanghui novel ① "It is said that the general trend of the world must be united if it is divided for a long time, and it must be divided if it is united for a long time." At the beginning, Wei, The era of the three kingdoms of Shu and Wu no longer exists. The great river flows eastward, and the waves wash away all the heroes of the past.

And Adou, the former heir to the Kingdom of Shu, has also become "lucky about Shu", and the world has become the world of the "Sima clan". ("Meeting of Heroes of the Three Kingdoms") ②The Juyi Hall in Liangshanbo is now brightly lit and full of people.

A hundred and eight heroes gathered here, and everyone was quarreling. What are they arguing about? It turns out that Liang Shanbo will be selecting tiger fighting heroes recently.

This honorary title is a big deal. Whoever wins it can take the second place in Liangshanbo. So all the heroes gathered here and argued endlessly.

("Who is the Tiger Fighting Hero") 4. Clever use of rhetoric ① "Bang!" With the sound of a hammer, Mr. Question Mark cleared his throat and said, "The space-time discussion will now officially begin. Our theme today is 'What is Beauty', and we invite scholars from different eras and countries to speak actively." ("What is Beauty") 5. Use fables skillfully ① The Yugong family has lived in the country for generations. Here, two big mountains, Wangwu and Taihang, block the way. Life is hard! This place seems to be isolated from the rest of the world. Whatever new things happen in the city have become old news here. This kind of life really needs to change.

Yu Gong thought: He must find a way to move Taihang and Wangwu mountains.

("The Story of New Yu Gong and Zhi Sou") ② Magpie posted a large advertisement: "In order to adapt to the needs of the times, our school will promote all-round quality education, learn everything and teach everything, ensuring that your children become everything The incompetent generalists remain invincible in the competition.

Tuition fee is 3,000 yuan per semester; training fee is 5,000 yuan; sponsorship fee is 15,000 yuan. "("All-round School") ④ What is it? It comes quietly and leaves no trace, but it stirs up all the colors to dance lightly? What is it that leaves no trace and comes quietly, but can leave behind a passionate song that lasts for a season? What is it that comes quietly and leaves quietly again, leaving behind the hanging golden color in the harvest season? What is it that quietly leaves and comes again, spinning white dreams for the silent earth? The philosopher smiled at the blue sky: "It's time."

The child held the kite and clapped his hands: "It's the wind." The wanderer said: "It's nothing, just a dream."

("Happiness with Answers" 6. Clever use of inscriptions to reveal the theme ① There is no majesty of trees, but you can have the greenness of grass; there is no beauty of peonies, but you can have the freedom and ease of small wild chrysanthemums... Life does not have to be brilliant, But it must be great! ——Ti Jidie was once a beautiful girl who was good at dancing. Her long hair and graceful dancing brought her thunderous applause and countless flowers. She was once praised as China. Duncan in the future... However, everything ended, and the God of fate pressed her into a wheelchair forever.

Life became dim and silent, and the "white swan" became an ugly duckling that no one cared about. This time, she dreamed that she put on glass slippers and continued her pursuit, but when she woke up, she only heard the "miserable" cold autumn wind

("Star Night Talk") ②If. If you lose your money, you only lose a small part; if you lose your health, you only lose a small part; if you lose your integrity, you are almost penniless - What is "integrity", honesty, and poverty? Keeping one's word is also true.

Throughout history, the word "integrity" has been soaked in the blood and tears of many people ("Who is praising the emperor's new clothes") 7. Use the problem-solving method skillfully. I once had a friend. , ingeniously asked me this question: Which of the following beautiful scenery do you like best? A. A piece of pure white feathers, falling leisurely in the shining golden sunshine.

B. . A falling red petal, whirling and floating in the quiet and deep water. C. A shooting star, passing by in the dark blue sky.

D. A drop of crystal clear dew, in the blue sky. The tips of the tender green grass slipped quietly. After reading this question, I was stunned. The ever-changing nature, the rising and setting of the sun, the rising and falling of the tide, how many beautiful scenery are heart-pounding and leisurely.

...("Infinite Possibilities and Infinite Beauty") 8. Use famous people to answer questions ① Someone asked: What is happiness? The answer is Feng. 2. How to write the beginning and end of an essay

The ending is mentioned first, followed by the beginning.

If the beginning is compared to a "firecracker", then the ending is like "ringing a bell". The ancients said: "A good ending is like chewing dried fruit." , tasting the fragrant tea, it is memorable again and again. ”

Just like the beginning, the ending is also very important. If an article with a clear theme and a novel angle is read to the end, it will be swept away by an unpleasant ending. What a pity! In addition to serving the content and center of the article, the ending must also be restricted by the "beginning". In this way, the ending is even more difficult to write well.

The end of the article is "Leopard's Tail". From the perspective of high school entrance examination composition, although it is not necessarily required that every article ends with "Leopard's Tail", the ending is also required to be concise, vivid and just right. Generally speaking, the common mistakes students make at the end of their compositions are: ① Superfluous.

Even though the full text has come to an end, it could have been thought-provoking, but the author is still uneasy and insists on telling the whereabouts of the characters that do not need to be explained one by one in a few trembling sentences, and revealing the meaning that could have been understood. ② Shouting slogans in vain.

At the end, in order to express one's position and attitude, one shouts something irrelevant to the content of the article. This kind of ending ruins the theme. ③ Sloppy.

The meaning of the ending is clear, but it is still reluctant to end, which conflicts with the theme of the article. From this point of view, the ending of the composition for the high school entrance examination is particularly important. How to write a good ending and improve the quality of the composition in the examination room? The following ending techniques are commonly used in high school entrance examination essays.

1. Natural bandana. No matter what kind of literary style, after expressing the content, the article naturally concludes the whole text without designing profound philosophical sentences or carving out rich symbolic shapes. This kind of ending is called a "natural ending".

It completely avoids the superfluous and innocent ending problems of the article. It appears simple, bright, and unpretentious, and is widely used in high school entrance examination compositions. The composition atmosphere in the examination room is tense and the competition is fierce. It is impossible to pay too much attention to what "style" and what "method".

As long as you are full of passion and express yourself freely, you can write wherever you want, and you can fully express your feelings, which is a good article. However, being "natural" does not mean doing whatever you want, being sloppy, but Follow the natural trend of literary development to end the overall situation. There are many such examples in the texts I have studied, so I won’t go into details here.

2. Echoing from beginning to end. The ending should echo the beginning, and write sentences that echo the beginning but are not simply repeated. This ending method is a very common way to end all kinds of articles.

This binding method can arouse the reader's psychological sense of beauty and create a sense of harmony from beginning to end. For example, "A Precious Shirt" begins with "In my home, I keep a cool white shirt."

It ends with: "For four years, I have kept this precious shirt. Collect it carefully and never wear it once. "The ending of "Praise to the Poplar" echoes the beginning: "I want to praise the poplar tree loudly!" 3. The style of the death chapter.

This ending method is to rely on the content of the full text at the end of the article to use concise language to clearly express the theme idea, or to explain the writing intention when the full text is about to come to an end. It is clear, so this ending method is also called "the finishing touch". For example, at the end of "Jujube Core" it is written: "Changing nationality does not mean changing national sentiments, and no nation is as attached to the homeland as we are."

"Remembering a Spinning Wheel" is written at the end : "Fighting against difficulties brings endless joy. - Remember a spinning wheel."

4. Famous aphorisms. End with famous quotes, police names, and poems, aiming to extend the article and reveal some kind of true meaning of life.

It often appears at the end of essays, narratives, and essays. In a few words, it expresses profound and thought-provoking philosophical or warning content, making it deeply imprinted in the hearts of readers and serving as a "word of speech". It has the effect of "finished, infinite meaning". "The Pear Blossoms on the Post Road" ends with: "The Pear Blossoms on the Post Road are blooming everywhere."

5. Lyrical argumentative style. Concluding the article with lyrical discussion can express the author's feelings, arouse readers' emotions, and arouse readers' cries, which has a strong artistic appeal.

This ending method is mainly used in narrative essays about people and events, and can also be used in expository essays and argumentative essays. There are many forms of lyrical argumentative endings, so it is more free to end in this way. A good "lyrical argumentative" ending will inevitably give rise to true feelings, giving readers a sense of reality and adequacy.

For example, the ending of "Flower Market" reads: "She stood smiling among the flowers, just like a flower, like a tall and elegant orchid." Another example is the ending of "Remembering My Mother" The two natural paragraphs are a very typical lyrical argumentative ending.

The composition should be completed in one go, and the ending should be in line with the previous text and should not be missing. The ending of the composition is the same as the beginning. It is different from chapter to chapter, but there are also rules to follow.

The above ending methods are just some commonly used ending methods. Do not copy them mechanically. Really good endings exist in the candidates' daily solid training, in the candidates' on-the-spot performance, and in the candidates' "Outside of Poetry". Please read the end of one candidate's essay: If life no longer has green, we are still searching for it, why don't we take action to protect green and protect the environment, so that we will always have green.

Only then will the green sing: "I come quietly, just as you (the desert) walk quietly..." (Anonymous "If Life No longer Has Green") Comments: Author Natural He thought of green due to the environment, and then started a topic around "what if life no longer has green". The article begins by comparing "past", "today" and "tomorrow" to highlight that the environment is deteriorating and green is decreasing, which naturally leads to worries. Then, he skillfully used the best lines from Xu Zhimo's "Farewell Cambridge" to elicit thoughts about the lack of green in life, leaving room for imagination.

Dear middle school students, there is no fixed method for writing. Which ending method to use depends on the stylistic requirements and your own preferences. You cannot copy dogma. For example, some can be used in argumentative style, some can be used in descriptive style, some can be used in suspense style, some can be used in quotation style, and so on.

We also need middle school students to practice more and experience more, and work hard to explore, so as to achieve the effect of drawing inferences from one example. In this way, I believe that the students will be able to write the ending of "It's like ringing a bell, and the lingering sound lingers on the beams".

Transfer training The ancients said: "A good ending is like chewing. 3. Write the beginning and end of my composition. The beginning and end should be an article.

Although the air in April is still It's a bit cold, but spring is slowly unfolding before my eyes. Roughly speaking, it has been nearly two years since I came to the university, and I should be familiar with this kind of spring. On a warm spring day, I stood on campus. Under the big ginkgo tree, it seems that I have returned to that familiar spring, and it seems that I have entered the cycle of seasons...

Last year, on the same bright spring day, I walked past this big ginkgo tree. , wandering around the campus of DTU, looking for the warmth of spring. The magnolia flower bloomed quietly. It was always the first among the flowers to bloom. She couldn't even wait for the white, porcelain-like jade leaves to grow. The petals stretched freely against the almost transparent blue sky, with a kind of beauty that was not hidden or scrupulous. At that time, I had just started my second semester of college life, and the dreams in my heart were accumulating bit by bit. I always felt that it was beautiful. There are too many things that need to be realized, but there is hesitation in the heart. The blooming of magnolia contains the accumulation and expectation of the whole winter, just like the process of a person's accumulation and accumulation; for the most beautiful moment, he does not hesitate to give it all. All. When the campus is full of fresh green and the fragrance of flowers, I also gain full confidence.

When such fresh green clusters become the shade of summer, they will also attract the envy of classmates from other schools. They say that this naturalness and generosity reflect the deep charm of the university. The big ginkgo tree in front of the main building is my favorite place. Such a ginkgo tree seems to appear in a fairy tale dream, and he is as happy as an old grandfather. Hehehe looked at the people enjoying the shade. I once sat in a daze on the stone bench under the tree for a long time, watching the leisurely pigeons and magpies; I once chatted endlessly with my good friends here, and suddenly I found a man who had just learned to walk. The children wandered over crookedly and babbling... Every time I came here, I was happy, and the corners of my mouth would inadvertently turn up, remembering the comfort of the past.

My impression of last autumn is that I learned photography. During the class, everyone collected bits and pieces of the campus. The campus in the lens is a bit strange, but we are actually living in it. During the day, we like to ride a folding bicycle on the path and breathe in the sea breeze blowing in the distance. I like the tranquility after the strong wind, on moonlit nights, stepping on the thick ginkgo leaves that cover the entire road; I like walking through the woods hiding magpies, climbing up Niujiao Mountain, and gazing at the autumn sun in the distance The maturity of the campus.

When talking about shelter from the cold, the first thing that comes to mind is the large classroom in the Octagon Building.

Maybe the sun also likes this place, otherwise it would spread a precious warmth in winter here. The sunlight not only reflects its spaciousness, but also depicts its antiquity. There is no way of knowing how many people have attended classes here and how many people have enjoyed the sunshine here, but there must be many people like me who miss the warmth here. The rounded and shiny tabletop records its history, but cannot tell its story. Holding a cup of hot tea, taking out the book I brought, I was greedy for my own time, and gradually I forgot what season it was and where I was.

A campus should never be a simple splicing of buildings, nor should it be a simple transfer of knowledge. Each of its trees, flowers, and stones should have its own story, a different story. This is not only a place for us to study, but also a place to retain our youth. It is an eternal memory deep in our hearts. 4. How to write the beginning and end of an essay

Start with key points and end with a summary. Use famous quotes and poems at the beginning to attract the attention of the marking teacher.

Write the beginning and end of the article.

(1) Write a good beginning. As the saying goes: "A good beginning is half the battle." An appropriate and novel beginning can not only make your writing more colorful, but also increase your literary talent and attract readers.

①Explain the four elements of starting method. That is, the beginning briefly explains the time, place, people and events.

② Start straight to the point. That is to say, at the beginning of the article, do not beat around the bush or go around in circles, but directly lay out the main people, things or things to be described and introduce them into the main text. Directly express the author's point of view, point out the center, and guide the entire text.

③How to describe the beginning of the scenery. That is, at the beginning of the article, the people, objects, and scenery are described to exaggerate the atmosphere, giving readers an immersive feeling, and paving the way for highlighting the characters and touching the scenery.

④ Ask questions to start. That is, at the beginning of the article, you first ask a question to make people think, so as to attract the reader's attention and interest.

⑤Flashback opening method. That is, at the beginning of the article, write the result of the matter first, and then the cause and process of the matter to create suspense and enhance the attractiveness of the article.

⑥The beginning of expressing feelings. That is, the author's personal feelings, thoughts and feelings are expressed at the beginning of the article.

⑦Reveal the central opening method. Some articles summarize the content of the entire article at the beginning and directly point out the center of the article.

⑧Introduce the background opening method. According to the content of the article, in addition to introducing the time and place where the incident occurred, the situation before the incident and related circumstances are also introduced. The outline is always changing, so reading more and writing more will naturally make you happy.

(2) How to write a good ending to an article

①Natural ending method. That is, the outcome of the matter is used as the end of the article. After the description of the matter is completed, the article ends.

②The ending method of the question. This is a common ending. Pay attention to: how to summarize the full text, how to refine the central idea of ??the article, and avoid repeating the basic content of the article, or repeating the beginning, etc.

③How to end the question. That is, the question is raised in the form of a question (rhetorical or hypothetical question) at the end. This ending method is suitable for narratives that focus on writing about people. When students write essays, they should pay attention to asking questions. The purpose of rhetorical questions is to express true feelings and not to be far-fetched.

④The ending method to express emotions. That is, at the end, the author expresses his true feelings about the things described and is full of praise. When writing, you should pay attention to express your feelings and express your feelings, and don't write without illness.

⑤Heuristic ending method. That is, the ending gives people some kind of education or inspiration. The author's use of appropriate words can make readers think and ponder, giving people a feeling that "the words have been exhausted, and the meaning is endless." This ending method is generally suitable for articles about people, events, and scenes. When writing, students should pay attention to the fact that the description should serve to highlight the center, and avoid description without purpose or for the sake of description.

⑥Looking forward to the future ending method. That is, after describing the current situation, the ending looks forward to the future, inspiring and inspiring.

When writing, please note that if the beginning of the article is to point out the center, the end is usually to show the future. At the same time, the content of the outlook must be related to the central idea of ??the article, and avoid copying it mechanically. No matter what method you use to end, it should be concise and clear. If it is too long, it will dilute the main text, take over the main topic, and give readers the feeling of "adding superfluous words to the story." The appeal of the article will be greatly weakened. I hope that students can read excellent articles carefully, be inspired by them, and gradually master the methods of beginning and ending of compositions. 5. How to write the beginning and end of a composition

Students who rarely practice composition often feel at a loss at first. Every composition has its central meaning, which is a frequently mentioned theme. Commonly used words at the beginning of compositions It is a "straight to the point" writing method, going straight to the topic without beating around the bush. For example, "The Character of Xiaocao" can start like this:

Every spring, when the branches begin to sprout, the weeds on the roadside also begin to show their light. The tender green, this is the grass that is often not noticed by people.

This is the writing method of going straight to the topic. It is relatively simple to introduce the main topic in three or two sentences. As long as you do composition exercises regularly or keep a diary every day, writing is often not difficult.

The concluding paragraph is generally a summary of the central meaning of the composition. Try to refine the language and respond to the theme. This is what we often call "echoing the beginning and the end", leaving a deep impression on the reader and stimulating the reader's imagination.

Attached is "The Character of Xiaocao"

"The Character of Xiaocao"

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Every spring, After several strong winds, the south wind blew slowly. Inadvertently, I discovered that the branches gradually sprouted new buds, and the grass gradually gained new green. The weeds on the roadside suddenly caught my attention. How could the grass tenaciously come out of the solid land? Wherever there is soil, there are weeds.

What is incredible is that throughout the summer, no matter how much wind and rain, how much heat, the grass is growing tenaciously. All hardships and hardships become insignificant in front of them, they are fearless. Just like the growth of a tree, as soon as spring comes, it will take root and sprout. This made me suddenly feel that the grass is so cute, so lovable, so tenacious and unyielding.

Looking at them carefully, it turns out that there were only one or two emerging at first, then a group, and within a few days, they were connected into a film. They are the ones decorating the green of spring. Soon after the vast grassland turned green, wild flowers of various colors also bloomed. I suddenly realized: without grass, flowers look boring; without flowers, grass looks monotonous. Only the grass everywhere and the flowers dotting it are the most beautiful. They complement each other and are really masterpieces of nature.

Unknowingly, I formed a habit. Every spring, I like to watch the budding branches and the tender green of the wild grass. It is the grass on the ground that tells me this truth: life and the earth are natural, and life shows its greatness in its struggle with nature. Going through ups and downs and remaining unyielding is the original meaning of life.

6. How to write a good beginning and end of an essay

You have to look at what kind of article it is. Generally speaking, the articles written by students are nothing more than argumentative essays, narrative essays, and I will tell you about each one for your own reference

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For me personally, the beginning of an argumentative essay is to quickly name the topic of discussion and then discuss it after getting to the topic. This way, the teacher and the teacher can know your point of view at the beginning of the article, so as not to think that your point of view is vague or something. In the penultimate paragraph of the article, I will habitually use parallel sentences. That is, a paragraph is full of parallel sentences to explain your point of view and the topic of discussion. I would like to remind you to use Chinese first and then foreign. As for the last paragraph, of course it is a summary. But don’t be too wordy and write about the topic of discussion, so that the article will appear to be clearly layered

The main purpose of a narrative is to clearly describe the beginning and end of something, and it is best to have a narrative in it. The *** part can attract other people's attention and make people remember your story, so *** you must write a wonderful narrative at the beginning. Of course, it clearly explains how things develop, the background, etc., and you can also use the description of the scenery. To set off something you want to appear in the article, the scenery can be the main line of your mood or other ending parts. I think it is best to have an emotional sublimation. A simple narrative will definitely not get high marks unless it is ideological. An improvement depends on what you are talking about

Generally speaking, if the prose is well written, it will get a high score. If it is not well written, it will be super low fractal. This is what I personally think it refers to. The author's state of mind. What do you want to express in this essay? For example, if you want to write an essay to express maternal love, you can ramble on. You can talk about the jujube trees planted by your mother in the yard or about the food your mother cooks for you. Anything is fine, but it must be We need to come back to the aspect of maternal love. This is the role of the last few paragraphs. I don’t like to scatter the last few paragraphs of prose, but to move closer to the theme. This way the teacher can understand why you wrote this prose poem, and prose is more important than words. The requirements are relatively high. It is recommended to write more famous articles before writing, otherwise it will be difficult to write well

I hope what I said will be helpful to you. 7. How do primary school students write the beginning and end of a composition

The beginning and end of the composition are important places for the marking teacher to read, so creating a wonderful beginning and end will make the article "highlights", thereby attracting the marking teacher's attention and improving the score of your composition.

Write a wonderful beginning and fall in love at first sight:

The ancients called the beginning of an article "crested", which means that the beginning should be beautiful, exquisite, novel and appropriate, creative and shocking. , attractive, let the marking teacher fall in love at first sight, and have a feeling of wanting to read it quickly. Therefore, before writing, you must carefully conceive and think over it repeatedly to ensure precision work.

(1) Design an inscription to attract newcomers

For example, there is an article "Friend, I want to say thank you", which begins like this:

Fate made me meet you in September when the sweet-scented osmanthus bloomed; dream made me part with you in June when the sun was burning. My friend, in the four spring and autumn days I have spent with you, your friendship has made me cherish it even more. It is you who make my bleak days become wonderful, it is you who make me discover the beauty of life, and it is you who make my proud heart controlled by humility. Everything, let me trace the footsteps I walked with you.

In this article, the candidate ingeniously set up an inscription in front of the text, which not only exaggerated the strong atmosphere and set the lyrical tone for the whole article; at the same time, it also implicitly explained "I want to The reason for saying "thank you" cleverly explains the title of the article. Moreover, the sentences are neatly structured, full of literary talent, and very contagious and attractive.

(2) Saying the other means the same thing, and the winding path leads to a quiet place

For example, the beginning of the essay "Beautiful Life" with a perfect score in the high school entrance examination:

Some people like to put life into perspective Comparing it to a road, some people like to compare life to a glass of wine, and some people like to compare life to a ball of numbness. But I like to compare life to flowers.

After laying out other people’s various understandings of life, the young author changed the subject and expressed his own point of view: "I like to compare life to flowers." The main part that comes from this can be said to be Saying one thing means another, trying to catch it but letting it go, the winding path leads to the secluded place, and the charm is long.

(3) Lay out the parallels and prepare for the move

There is an article titled "Gate" that begins like this:

Green pushes forward spring. The door of summer

The thunderstorm opened the door of summer

The fruits opened the door of autumn

Ruixue opened the door of winter

Books open the door to knowledge

Wisdom opens the door to ideals

Ideals open the door to success

Listen, doors are opening everywhere Sound...

At the beginning, the author used 8 sentences with the same structure and meaningful meaning, giving "door" a unique meaning from different angles, which not only revealed the rich connotation of "door", but also formed It creates a progressive and unstoppable majestic momentum, which naturally leads to the theme of "opening the door to life" below.

(4) Carrying things to get up, secretly crossing Chencang

I once saw a beautiful composition titled "Caring for Forever", the beginning left me with I was deeply impressed:

The morning sun came out, and the lake dressed it up; the new moon came up, and the stars kept it company; the spring flowers bloomed, and the green leaves set it off; the birds were singing, and the crickets were singing. It accompanies...everything in the world tells us the story of love.

In the article, the author starts from natural phenomena and uses objects to explain the deep "care" between many things in nature. He also uses anthropomorphic techniques to make these things humane. You don’t need to look at the next step to know that it will definitely transition to the related theme of "there should be care between people", such as being popular on the water, and it will naturally become a document.

(5) Raise questions and make people think deeply

There is an excellent composition "Simple and Not Simple" by middle school students, which lists various phenomena and analysis of "simple and not simple"

After analyzing the dialectical relationship between "simple and unsimple", at the end of the article, the author writes:

Each of us has simplicity and unsimpleness at the same time. The question is, should we What kind of simplicity and simplicity are you pursuing?

Friend, what do you think?

Here, the author cleverly puts forward the important proposition of "what kind of simplicity and simplicity should we pursue?", triggering readers' deep thinking, and inspiring people to make the right choice and pursue a meaningful life. . Although the author does not say it clearly, it is thought-provoking and alarming.