Close? Keys? Words: 600 words in the sixth grade of primary school

Words: 600 words composition

This article applies to: the sixth grade of primary school.

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This composition is about 600 words in grade six of primary school. The title is "Worship Grass as a Teacher". Everyone is welcome to contribute enthusiastically. As soon as winter is over, it will be spring. When the spring breeze blows on your face, everything that has been sleeping for a winter begins to wake up, and the grass also leans out its little green head and looks around. It's very cute. I touched the grass with my hand and couldn't help thinking. The fire once turned them into a wasteland, but in the next spring, just as the spring letter came, they kept popping up again. No wonder Bai Juyi, a poet in the Tang Dynasty, praised them like this: "wildfire never quite consumes them, the spring breeze is blowing high." Confucius once said, "A threesome must have a teacher." In fact, not only people, but also ordinary grass can be my mentor and friend. I appreciate grass, especially ordinary grass. Grass is not as tall as a tree and has no enchanting flowers, but it has its own vitality. Worship grass as a teacher, nature as a teacher, and humbly ask for advice. You will find that there are many hidden creatures who will become your lifelong teachers. From birds, we can feel the strong call of life, which makes us cherish life more; From the dazzling sunshine, we deeply realized the dedication; From the mossy mountain that rises from the ground, we know: "Youth is power!

"Maybe in this nature, there are many creatures who can be teachers!

I would like to bow deeply under the green body of grass. From now on, I will be a student of grass. Teacher's comment: "Worship grass as a teacher" is a thoughtful topic, from which we can also see the young author's admiration and love for grass. "Zi once said,' A threesome must have my teacher.' In fact, not only people, but also ordinary grass can be my mentor and friend. "What a good sentence!

The article is sincere and clear. It not only quotes famous aphorisms as arguments, but also uses rhetorical devices such as parallelism and personification to strengthen them. Well written!

Just "from the bird, we can feel the strong call for life, which makes us cherish life more;" From the dazzling sunshine ... "This paragraph seems irrelevant and redundant. It is suggested to delete this part, because the theme of "worshipping grass as a teacher" has been basically expounded. (Xue Le China: Teacher Mao Liming) 2008-10-1521:10: 00.