A good composition should start with simplicity, novelty and beauty.

Jane means to be concise at the beginning and not to repeat it. For example:

Everyone has a home, some are happy, some are happy and warm, some are United and harmonious, and some are indifferent and lonely. Similarly, I have a home, but my home is different from other homes. My family pays attention to democracy and loves science. I have such a home.

If you want to ask me what kind of home I have, I can answer you in one sentence. I have a family that values democracy and loves science.

What could have been written clearly in one sentence, but there are so many long-winded narratives in front of it, which makes the beginning seem very slow. Cut all the nonsense, be straightforward and clean.

The so-called new is that the beginning is unconventional, novel and unique.

The so-called beauty is that the beginning can give people a sense of beauty.

First of all, we can use images to describe, for example:

1. Through the window, I saw the Sophora japonica blooming again. Still so white, crystal clear and fragrant. bud of Chinese scholar tree

Finally, under the dim light of the road, the bloated body of 5 1 bus appeared. People who waited for more than an hour at night began to get active. Crowd car

Secondly, appropriate rhetoric can be used to quote poems. For example:

1. Motherly love has a long history like a long river and is as fresh and sweet as a mountain spring. I am also the lucky one bathed in the sunshine of maternal love. Endless love

2. "Nothing to do, it seems that I have met Yan." Every time I think of this poem, I can't help but see the round face, the elegant letters and the unique spoken money. advisor

Common composition opening methods

First, cut to the chase and get straight to the point.

Don't beat around the bush at the beginning, just get to the point. Narrative written mainly by characters can directly explain the characters or directly explain the topic through a brief introduction to the characters; Narrative narrative can point out the time, place and related background of the event from the beginning. For example:

1. The sky is dark and the sky is high and the clouds are light. Summer is coming ... Summer.

Several crosses show the characteristics of summer incisively and vividly, go straight to the theme and be fascinating.

2. Outside the window, the rain hits the banana; Within the curtain, Yi Deng is like a bean. Grab a cup of tea, hold a good book and keep a quiet night alone. a dirty night

Only two sentences were used at the beginning, which was concise and endless.

3. Wang Jing, I am the monitor of Grade Two. Although we have been apart for more than a year, the anecdote of the monitor is still vivid and unforgettable. With such a good monitor

Second, description and rendering, showing literary style

At first, people wrote landscapes and played up the atmosphere to set off the characters and tell stories. For example:

1. In the flowering season, there are scents everywhere, but I have no intention to watch them, because at this time I lost my old friend-Qiang. Classmates and friends

2. The summer night is deep. Occasionally, frogs in the water and cicadas in the trees come, and the breeze blows, bringing coolness. I can't sleep for a long time. By chance, my first novel was published in the newspaper. I was so happy that I even forgot everything. I am ecstatic. It was not until tonight that I realized that I seemed to be missing something. repent

Third, parallelism, metaphor into the topic, brilliant literary talent (this method is often used in topic composition)

The combination of parallelism and metaphor can increase the momentum of the article and make it catchy, rhythmic and rhyming. Used for objects, which can be colored; Used for narration, it can be hearty; Used for reasoning, it can be magnificent; Used for debate, can be overwhelming; Used for lyrical and wanton expression.

1. If I can hold a handful of moonlight, I will choose the softest one; If I can pick the red leaves of Xiangshan, I choose the most gorgeous one; If I could pick all the stars in the sky, I would choose the brightest one. Maybe you will say my choice is not the best, but my choice, I like it. ("My choice, I like it")

2. What is happiness? Happiness is the face of fruit farmers looking at the fruits in the orchard. Happiness is the smiling face of the students in the classroom looking forward to the future. Happiness is the forehead of scientists who have found new things in the laboratory ... Happiness is the crystallization of struggle. What is happiness? 》

Fourth, the opening of the dialogue is fascinating.

The advantage of this form is to hear people's voice before meeting them.

Mother's nagging is music that I can hear every day.

Early in the morning, when the "Tintin" of the alarm clock hasn't rung. Mother began to nag, "Are you up? Why isn't the light on? " ? Stay in bed any longer, and you will be late. ""Wash your face with hot water ""Fold it and don't be lazy. "Every day, she never tires of nagging. As a result, I had to turn on the light with my eyes closed and try to answer my mother's nagging. Don't get up, stay in the quilt and get dressed quickly. Mom's nagging is really annoying! But think about it carefully, without these nagging, how can I bid farewell to my sweet dream on time? ..... "Mother's nagging"

Give examples and be clever (this method is often used in topic composition)

It is difficult to choose, let alone the choice of the soul. Gao Jianli chose to die for Jing Ke; Ma Benzhai's mother chose to sacrifice for the revolution; Zhu Yingtai chose to become a butterfly for her sincere love. In this choice between friendship, affection and love, they do this-(Life and Death)

Six, symmetrical opening, neat and lively

In the butterfly's eyes, flowers are angels, because flowers give her the dew of life; In the eyes of flowers, bees are close friends, because bees give her a continuation of life. (dedication)

Seven, wonderful quotations of famous poems and sentences, highlighting the inside story!

"It's sad to keep cutting, but it's chaotic, and I have a special taste in my heart", which is Li Houzhu's sentiment; "Don't get carried away, the curtain rolls west wind, and people are thinner than yellow flowers", which is Li Qingzhao's feeling; "I left gently, just as I came gently, I waved gently and bid farewell to the clouds in the western world", which is Xu Zhimo's disappointment; "People have joys and sorrows, and the moon is full of rain and shine. This matter is hard to bear." This is Su Dongpo's generosity ... ("Beautiful Parting")

Eight, lyrical discussion, emotional introduction

Use a few short comments and affectionate pen and ink to start the article, or infect the reader, or point out the main idea and lead to the following. For example:

1. Whenever night falls, the clouds in the western sky will touch the wings of my heart and lead my confused thoughts to fly to that vast and distant place to find my father. ...

Dad, can you see me? You are alone, floating in heaven. Can you take care of yourself? My sister and brother are fine now, but my mother is hard at home. "Dad, I tell you ..."

The author's true feelings bring readers into the author's emotional world and create a sad atmosphere for the article. Let readers follow the author's ideas to taste the hardships of the mother after losing her father, the strength of the mother, the loneliness of the mother and the sincere feelings that make people cry.

Grandpa, you are my favorite relative. I spent my childhood beside you. You held my hand and taught me to walk; You have taught me a lot since I was a child. Grandpa, you are a crutch for my childhood growth. grandpa

Nine, set suspense, fascinating

Setting suspense is a way to start, deliberately leaving a mystery and stimulating readers' psychological expectations. Setting suspense at the beginning can catch the reader's heart at once, stimulate people's thinking and produce fascinating results. For example:

1. I think I will never forget the warm smile on that rainy day ... "That rain, that smile"

Where is the particularity of that rain, that day and that smile? It has a strong attraction and appeal.

2. The wall clock walks in a leisurely and rhythmic way. "Tick-tock, tick-tock ..." It's almost 4 o'clock. Why hasn't mom come back yet? worry

10. Use the inscription skillfully to reveal the theme.

Setting a meaningful inscription can often get unexpected results. Inscriptions play an important role in outlining articles. Concise, meaningful or full of philosophy or literary talent. It makes people like to eat Gan Guo and drink cold spring. For example:

1. Standing on the coast of history, I strolled back to the ditch of history: Dr. Chu meditated on the river, and he did not regret his death; Wei Wudi pointed the whip to the east with great courage; Tao Yuanming carefree Nanshan, drinking and picking chrysanthemums ... they chose eternity, even if they flatter and slander, they don't follow, which is a persistent choice; Even if the horse is buried, the soul will return to smoke, no regrets. This is a heroic choice; Even if you are poor and have no food all day, you are willing to take pleasure in it and devote yourself to farming. This is an elegant choice. Some choices, emperors will become their great achievements, and sages will touch guests and become their eternal articles.

2. Yingying moonlight, I scooped the clearest cup; After sunset, I hold a wisp of the warmest; Burning red leaves, I picked up the hottest one; I picked a bunch of the most colorful herbs; Long life, I want to pick the most important thing in the world-perseverance.

Russian writer Chekhov said: "There are big dogs and puppies, and puppies should not be disturbed because of the existence of big dogs. All dogs should bark and let him use the voice God gave him. The most important thing for people is to value themselves.

Her name is Wang Qianqian, and I am the monitor of Grade Two. Although we have been apart for more than a year, the anecdote of the monitor is still vivid and unforgettable. ("With such a good monitor")

5. The morning sun came out and the lake clothed it; The new moon has come up, with the stars as companions; Spring blossoms, green leaves set it off; Birds sing, crickets play the piano for them ... Everything in the world tells us the story of love. (Forever Love)

6. "Mom, you are a lotus leaf and I am a red lotus. The raindrops in my heart are coming. Except you, who is the shadow of my unobstructed sky? " Every time I read this passage of Bingxin's eulogizing mother, I can't help but think of my short and thin mother who is responsible for family life alone. (Boundless Motherly Love)

Tip 1: echo from beginning to end and highlight the main idea (this ending method is suitable for writing articles about people, taking notes and writing scenery. )

(1) It is said that the ship of life can't live without an ideal sail. It is said that the ideal of life is for the ideal life, and the happiest time in the ideal life is the flower season of dreams.

At the end of the flower season, I hope I can always remember the good words of the sages: the ship of life cannot be separated from the ideal sail. The ideal of life is for the ideal life. (Selected from the full text of "Flower Season with Dreams" in Huzhou and Jingzhou senior high school entrance examinations)

Echo from beginning to end is one of the most practical methods in examination composition. Generally, the author first puts forward the center of the article at the beginning, and then emphasizes it again at the end, taking care of the beginning and making the center of the article stand out clearly. You see, in the above example, the little author used the way of echoing from beginning to end, and highlighted the theme of the article with beautiful poetic language-the happiest time in an ideal life is the flower season of dreams.

Tip 2: Speak from the heart and appeal for the sake of appeal.

Let's all take action to bring love to others, to those children who are out of school, to those lonely old people … to everyone around us. When you give your love to others, you also get great happiness. I believe that as long as everyone gives a love, the world will become a beautiful world. (From the full text of "Bringing Love to Others" in Jingzhou, Hubei Province)

2 1 century, we are the spring of the motherland, and enthusiasm is our character. We don't need to follow those rules. Laugh as much as you want, cry hysterically if you want, don't suppress yourself, don't let old ideas bind you, and don't change yourself casually. Please remember my famous saying: "I am who I am." Give me a little sunshine and it will be so brilliant. " (Selected from the full text of "Give a little sunshine so brilliant" in the senior high school entrance examination in Fujian Province)

The composition in the examination room pays attention to the true feelings, and it is necessary to write your own call for truth, goodness and beauty, and lash out at the false, evil and ugly. This kind of emotion is not limited to oneself, but also can be a sincere call at the end of the article, calling on everyone to pursue truth, goodness and beauty together and lash out at the false, evil and ugly together. The above little author sincerely calls, and every word is heartfelt, which shows his yearning for a better future. In the second paragraph, the little author spoke enthusiastically, with full personality and undisguised expression. He issued a sincere call to all his peers, effectively highlighting the theme and giving readers a strong spiritual shock.

Tip 3: Ask questions skillfully and make people think.

Natural color, natural fragrance, natural taste and natural beauty all come from nature. Nature is great. It's amazing. It is so close to life, so tight. Tasting nature is not the same as tasting life.

A good article should be rich in words, meaningful, philosophical and enlightening. Just like enjoying a beautiful piece of music, although the music is over, the lingering sound leaves people with endless charm. You see, in the above paragraph, the author skillfully asks questions at the end, which makes readers think and deepens the meaning of the article. It embodies the profundity and uniqueness of the author's thinking.

Different words have different influences, different angles have different horizons, different ha ha mirrors have different images, different flowers have different fragrance and appearance, and different evaluations make children have different fates. Why do you want to let your narrow perspective unfairly evaluate and hurt a person, why do you want to put out the candlelight in the wind, and why do you want all children to become a model without personality carved in a mold? (selected from the full text of the senior high school entrance examination in Hubei Province, "I in the Haha Mirror")

At the end of this paragraph, I would like to express my views on the teacher's comments. First of all, I use the form of parallelism to explain that every student has his own personality, and the teacher doesn't have to kill the students' personality. Finally, it ends with a question to inspire people to think and deepen the connotation of the article.

Tip 4: Quote good sentences and be colorful.

"Wild incense is fragrant, beautiful wood is cloudy, wind and frost are noble and clean, and the water comes out." In the past 15 years, life taught me to give up! For my ideal, for more people to learn, I must give up! (Selected from the full text of Guangzhou senior high school entrance examination "Thinking from the sky")

The song of tomorrow says, "Tomorrow follows tomorrow, and tomorrow follows tomorrow. I waited for tomorrow, and everything was in vain ... "I hope everyone can seize today and create a better tomorrow. (From the full text of "Creating a Better Tomorrow" in Neijiang, Sichuan)

There are many famous sayings all over the world. At the end of the composition, if you can quote skillfully, it will definitely add a lot of color to the article. Here are a few examples, quoting poems and famous sayings respectively, which not only increases literary talent, but also deepens the artistic conception of the article. The effect is very good, and students should learn from it. In addition, the range of quotations can be wider, such as proverbs, proverbs, popular lyrics and so on.

Tip 5: Lyric discussion, point out the theme.

Is to explain your feelings in simple words. Lyrics comments are acceptable.

In fact, peace is that simple. A shallow smile, a thoughtful word, and an all-inclusive heart are enough to relax the tight face and let the smile bloom gently on people's faces. That smile is like a cloud wandering in the sky, lightly dotted with the blue sky, fresh and natural.

Spring is like the sea, and youth is like flowers. Youth is beautiful, and beautiful youth lies in struggle and struggle. May everyone in the world let their youth bloom as fragrant as flowers! (selected from the perfect composition "In the Mood for Love" in Jilin Province)

These two paragraphs are from the heart, out of emotion, using parallelism and figurative rhetoric to express their true feelings with beautiful words, and with appropriate comments, the end of the article is extraordinary and powerful.

Tip 6: Set off the scenery and combine the scenes.

The wind stopped, the rainstorm ended, the sun smiled again, and the glass of two generations was melted by the sunset. The sun fades away in the distance and disappears into a sunset glow. The two are integrated and there is no distance. (selected from the full text of Guangzhou senior high school entrance examination "Reading in the Rain")

The characteristics of this ending are very prominent, and the role of scenery contrast is also obvious. Through the description of the scenery after the rain, the author implies that the emotional barrier between the two generations has disappeared and emotion and scenery are organically combined. Implicit and meaningful. The aftertaste is endless.

At this moment, a ray of sunshine enters the ward from the outside, and I feel like a wounded little tree bathing it. Oh, on the road of growth, although things are unpredictable, the sunshine is good after all! I think. (Selected from the full text of "Growing in the Sun" in the senior high school entrance examination in Xiantao City, Hubei Province)

This ending highlights the role of sunshine, combining sunshine with growth, implying that the road to growth is uneven but full of sunshine, expressing an optimistic mood. It not only takes care of the main idea, but also shows deep feelings.

Tip 7: Implicit and intriguing.

This is a technique contrary to direct thinking, that is, the meaning is not clearly expressed, but contained in the described image. Leave rich imagination space for readers. Such as "two dandelion seeds" is:

The new seed cultivated by the second seed is mature. It looked at the child who had left her, and suddenly remembered the seed boss:' where is my brother?' Did you degenerate on the grassland like me and give birth to so many children so soon?

Here, "I left my own children" and "it fell on the grassland like me and gave birth to so many children so soon", one is the implied topic "position and value"; The second is the implicit theme: a person's life destiny and life value will be different in different positions.

Tip 8: draw close-ups of gods to strengthen feelings.

It is to skillfully intercept the instantaneous expressions of the characters, make the finishing point, and let readers see the rich, complex and subtle inner world of the characters. Anhui examinee's masterpiece "What? -"That's right!" 》:

"Rinrin Bell ..." "What? Is the exam over? " I'm surprised. Then I thought, "Yes, it should be like this!"

The sentences such as "I'm surprised" and "Let me think about it" here not only conceal the topic, but also vividly depict the attitude of strict candidates when they suddenly hear the bell at the end of the exam, which makes people feel as if they were there.

Beautiful seasons are like beautiful postcards, turning from page to page. I grew up quietly and happily in the embrace of nature. Like the lotus in front of the door blooming the true colors of life.

In chronological order, in the form of fragment composition, a picture of the four seasons of nature is depicted in a fresh and elegant style. The end closely follows the changes of the years, writes about his own growth, and summarizes the full text smoothly and naturally.

Second, echo from beginning to end. The end-to-end echo can highlight the center and make the structure compact and seamless. For example, Anhui volume full score composition "Starting from moving":

At the beginning, because we were moved, the brilliance and color of life were appreciated by us; Because we are moved, the rhythm and strength of life will give us hope; Because we are moved, the deep beauty of everything will be moved and appreciated by us. Then, let's start with emotion and enrich our splendid life with emotion.

The ending is difficult and bumpy, and we are not afraid; Sandstorm and heavy snow, we still hold our heads high. This is because moving has prepared the richest food for our hearts. Starting with emotion, let the course of life go to a beautiful distance forever. Starting with emotion, let the hard and long life be full of happiness and hope because of emotion!

In the first paragraph, the meaning of moving is interpreted in parallel sentences, and the ending and beginning are coordinated, which deepens the main idea.

Third, pawn Zhang Xianzhi. At the end of the article, it is to express the theme clearly in concise language, or to explain the author's writing intention clearly, which is often called "the finishing touch", such as China's excellent composition "Life is Above Everything" in Volume I:

Life is too precious to compare with its roundness, gold is too precious to compare with its luster, and diamonds are too precious to compare with its thoroughness and purity, let alone its tenacity. It is irreplaceable, it is above everything else. This is the most alarming feeling brought by the earthquake, which makes me pay attention to life again. I only hope that every life can shine under the oath of surpassing everything. Life is above everything else, love it and pay attention to it.

Here, the preciousness of life is written by metaphor, parallelism and other rhetorical devices, pointing out that "life is above everything else" and "care for life and attach importance to life".

Fourth, quote good sentences. Ending with poems, proverbs or epigrams can not only increase the cultural connotation of the article, but also deepen the theme, which has the expression effect of "endless words and endless meanings". For example, Jiangsu wrote a high-scoring composition "Curiosity":

There is a saying in Hamlet: "In a shell, you think you are the king of the infinite universe." Perhaps, it is because of real "curiosity" that we can burst into such a stronger cry. Moreover, because of curiosity, our world is much wider than a shell.

At the end, Shakespeare's character language is quoted, from which philosophy is expounded, which stimulates readers' imagination and thinking.

Fifth, the scene blends. The combination of scenery description and lyricism shows readers a beautiful picture full of poetry and painting, which not only expresses the author's feelings well, but also easily arouses readers' emotional waves and causes * * * sounds, which has strong artistic appeal. For example, Shandong volume full score composition "Flowers bloom in March":

When the first breeze of spring blows through Yuan Ye, the grass sticks out its blue head; When the first sunshine of spring shines, the snow melts and the stream gurgles; The first new thunder sounded and the flowers bloomed in March. It is philosophical, indifferent, calm, a beautiful flower fragrance that goes with the flow.

The author evokes readers' senses with fresh and natural brushstrokes, paints a picture full of spring, and makes comments from it, integrating reason with reason.

Sixth, set up hanging questions. The ending is not written according to the general development order of things or readers' psychological expectations, but unexpected and reasonable, just like Mo Bosang's "Necklace", which is memorable; Or in the form of questions, ask questions, deepen the theme and stimulate thinking. For example, in Beijing, the composition "Little Cup Truth" scored full marks:

Isn't the "Scientific Outlook on Development" embodied in the small cup also worthy of human reflection on major issues such as industrial and agricultural development, environmental protection and urban expansion? Why is the road getting wider and wider, but the traffic is getting more and more blocked? Why are high-rise residential areas more and more dense, while people's spiritual homes are more and more empty? Why is the water quality of Taihu Lake and Chaohu Lake becoming more and more polluted today with advanced technology? Facts have proved that only by ignoring ecological balance and following scientific laws can "development" give full play to the potential of material characteristics, otherwise it will get twice the result with half the effort and even be "punished by civilization"

Candidates send out many associations from an empty cup, and finally connect with social reality, ask questions and answer them themselves, that is, say things out, which enhances the practical significance of the article.

As the saying goes, "there is no fixed method in writing", but there are still some rules to follow in writing. As long as candidates carefully ponder and strengthen training, natural practice makes perfect. The ancients said, "Closing a sentence is like ringing a bell, and there is more than enough voiceless sound." I hope that all candidates can write something that is rich in content, can withstand chewing and can inspire readers to think and imagine.