Thinking: What is the basis for Uncle Jian to judge Qin Shihuang's "death"? What character does his words reflect?

Qing: Based on his analysis of Qin, Zheng and Jin. Qin: "teachers attack far away", "teachers are tired", "diligent but not doing, against your will". Zheng: "Zheng will know what the teacher is doing" and "prepare for it far away". Jin: "and travel thousands of miles, who knows!" " Therefore, the conclusion is: "I saw the teacher come out, but I didn't see him come in." Uncle Jian's analysis shows that he is unpredictable. Regardless of the shame of being ridiculed and the danger of being killed, he exhorted in the form of a crying teacher, which made people feel the loyalty of an old minister, the sorrow of a loving father and the persistence of a wise man.

Thinking: What words and deeds did Qin Mugong write in the article? What personality does it reflect?

Clear: I wrote Qin Mugong's Interview, Words and Scold, which showed his greedy, hypocritical and willful character.

Thinking: What is the basis for Wang to judge Qin Shihuang's "doomed"?

Clear: There are two reasons: First, it is "light and rude"-"light is lack of wisdom, and rudeness is off"; The second is "escape from danger, but can't make a plan."

Thinking: What role does this paragraph play in the full text?

Qing: Uncle Jian said that Qin Shihuang was doomed and Wang's children also said that they were doomed, which further reflected that Qin Shihuang was doomed. At the same time, it also shows Wang's cleverness. He is still young.

Thinking: This paragraph has shaped the image of a businessman who loves the motherland. When it was discovered that the motherland was in danger, Gao Xian immediately abandoned self-interest and solved the worries for the country. What are his wit and courage?

Clear: two aspects: ① decisive action and improvisation. On the one hand, he claimed that he had been ordered by Zheng Jun to offer a reward to Qin Shihuang, and on the other hand, he quickly sent someone back to China to report. (2) calm, decent words. He told the manager a seemingly inconspicuous but actually tough rhetoric, which was in line with the identity of a "special envoy" and convinced Zheng that he had already prepared for it.

Thinking: What is the implication of Huang Wuzi's words?

Clear: What Huang Wuzi said to Qizi and others is a diplomatic rhetoric that is quite euphemistic, measured and full of wind and frost. The seemingly polite words imply that Qin's plot has been peeped, which is a mocking marching order.

Thinking: Why write "non-slip" slightly? What's the point of clicking?

Obviously, the "escape" is the direct result of attacking Zheng, and it has nothing to do with the success or failure of the grain war, so we can fully see the greed and incompetence by just clicking on it. In the passive situation, Meng Ming used his weakness to eliminate the valve, which did not make Qin Jun "diligent and useless", and also reflected his talent as commander-in-chief of Qin Jun.

Thinking: In this paragraph, I wrote an argument between Xian Zhen and Luan Zhi. Who else actually wrote it in secret?

Qing Dynasty: The dispute between Xian Zhen and Luan Zhi shows that the State of Jin had a strategic dispute before the war, and secretly wrote that Duke Xiang of Jin chose good and followed it, which was in sharp contrast to Qin Mugong's arbitrariness and disobedience.

Thinking: What content in this paragraph once again confirms Uncle Jian's foresight?

Clear: Uncle Jian has long concluded that "I don't know who can walk the Wan Li Road", which was confirmed by the military discussion in Jin State. At the beginning, the ideological and moral basis of ambushing Qin Shihuang was that "Qin did not listen to his uncle's orders, but the greed of the people benefited me." This is just in line with what Uncle Jian said: "Do not do it diligently, but do it against your will". Jin's "The Chef Defeats Qin" not only directly proves the correctness of Uncle Jian's inference that "the chef is in charge", but also proves that Uncle Jian's viewpoint of "tiring the teacher" is correct.

Thinking: Xian Zhen's sigh against the release of prisoners in the Qin Dynasty is a further elaboration of the last sentence when he argued with Luan Zhi?

Clarity: It is a further elaboration of the last paragraph, "Suffering the enemy for life", which is even more indignant.

Thinking: What kind of character does this paragraph and the previous paragraph reflect Xian Zhen?

Ming: Xian Zhen firmly stood in the position of Jin State and deeply realized the harmfulness of releasing tigers to the mountains. He lamented bitterly that Kim was "destined to die". He forgot the etiquette of the monarch and his subjects and called Wenbo a "woman". First he was angry, then he threw up. His loyalty and fortitude were obvious in the last stage when he urged Qin Shihuang to attack, and even more incisively and vividly in the process of angrily denouncing the prisoners.

Thinking: What does Meng Ming mean?

Qing: Meng Ming pretended to be grateful, focusing on the last sentence: "If you avoid it, you will worship it for three years." The implication is "if I can save my life, I will take revenge in three years", which shows honesty, strength, self-esteem and self-confidence as a general.

Thinking: How to manage the beginning of this paragraph?

Qing: This passage echoes Qin Bo's crying teacher and Jian Shu's crying teacher from a distance. The beginning of "Lonely against Uncle Jian" confirms Uncle Jian's prediction that "I can't learn from my teacher" and highlights the inevitability of Uncle Jian's saying that Teacher Qin will fail.

Thinking: How does this passage reflect Qin Mugong's personality?

In this passage, Qin Mugong realized that Yaoshan's failure was caused by his own disobedience to Uncle Jian. He cried when he was a native teacher, and repeatedly claimed that "loneliness is also a sin" and "loneliness is also a mistake". He blamed himself and was very painful. He "didn't take Meng Ming's place" and "didn't cover up his virtue with a brush". All these reflect that he is not only headstrong, but also brave to admit his mistakes, not angry and arrogant, and makes good use of people, shaping a real person with complete and full personality.

The article has written seven scenes (see blackboard design), taking the argument between Uncle Jian as the full text program, and organized four major contradictions among the three parties in an orderly manner in chronological order (the beginning and end of Qin Jun's crusade), which confirmed Uncle Jian's analysis of the war and the cause and effect of the war from various aspects. The author's intention is not to "describe the war", but to "demonstrate"-to reveal the causal law of the victory and defeat of the war: greed and violence will fail, and only by knowing ourselves and knowing ourselves can we be invincible. Therefore, the article only uses one sentence to write the battle of Qin Jin cuisine, which makes the center of the full text prominent and the details appropriate.

(2) Character language not only shows the character's personality, but also reflects the superb skills of diplomatic rhetoric in the political struggle of that era. This paper gives three typical examples of diplomatic rhetoric: first, if the string is high, it reveals the edge in euphemism; Second, the words of Emperor Wu Zi express the solemn realm with diligent words; Third, Meng Ming's words modestly covered up the murder.

In winter, Jin Wengong passed away. On Chen Geng Day, the State of Jin will park Jin Wengong's coffin in Quwo and bury it another day. As soon as the team escorting the coffin walked out of Crimson City, a voice similar to Niu Jiao sounded in the coffin. Oracle made the doctors bow down and said, "Your Majesty ordered us to prepare for war, and the western troops will pass through our territory. Our army will surely win a great victory if it attacks them. "

Qi Zi sent someone from the State of Zheng to report to the State of Qin, saying, "The people of the State of Zheng put me in charge of the key to their north gate. If they secretly send troops to sneak attack, Zheng Can will take it down. " Qin Mugong asked uncle Jian about it. Uncle Jian said: "I have never heard of letting the army work hard and travel far to attack distant countries." Our army is exhausted, but we are ready in Jun Zheng. Probably not, right? Zheng will certainly know the action of our army; The army tried to make an expedition, but found nothing. The officers and men in the army are bound to have resentment and betrayal. Besides, marching thousands of miles, no one knows! "Refused to do it, summoned the thyme generals Meng, Xi Qi and Bai, and ordered them to lead the army from the capital of Dongmen. Uncle Jian cried and said, "Meng Ming! I can only see the army start, but I can't see it coming back! " Qin Mugong sent someone to see his uncle Jane: "What do you know? Your life is over! When the army comes back, the tree on your grave will be as thick as your hands folded! "

Uncle Jian's son also joined the army. Uncle Jian sent him away with tears in his eyes and said, "The Jin people must have attacked our army in Yaoshan. There are two hills in Yaoshan, and the hill in the south is the tomb of Xia Gao. The hill to the north is Zhou Wenwang's shelter. You will surely die between these two mountains, and I will collect your bones there. " Qin's army then moved eastward.

In the thirty-third year of Lu Xigong, in the spring, the warriors around the chariot took off their helmets and got off to walk (to show their respect: to salute the Zhou Dynasty), but as soon as they got on the bus, 300 warriors jumped up (to show their rudeness to Zhou). Zhou Wang's grandson is still young. After watching Qin Jun's performance, he said to Zhou Wang, "Qin Jun is frivolous and rude, and he is bound to fail. If you are frivolous, you will have fewer strategies, and rudeness will not be serious; Can you take risks without being serious and strategic?

When I arrived in hua county, it happened that a businessman named Zheng was going to Zhoudu to do business. Gao Xian first sent four pieces of cooked cowhide to Qin Shihuang, and then sent twelve cows to comfort Qin Jun, saying, "The monarch of our country heard that you marched through our country and sent me to take the liberty to comfort your men. Our country is not rich. For your subordinates to stay, you can only provide food for one day, and you can only do security work for one night. " At the same time, send someone to report Zheng quickly.

Zheng Mugong sent someone to check the guest house where Qizi and others lived. It turned out that they had packed their bags and sharpened their weapons. Feed enough horses. Zheng Mugong sent Huang Wuzi to politely decline Dr. Qin, who was guarding the state of Zheng. He said: "You have lived in our country for a long time, and the dry food and meat, the slaughtered animals and the slaughtered animals are all exhausted. Because you are leaving, Zheng's zoo is the same as Qin's. How about you go hunting elk and take it away and give our country a chance to rest? " So Qi Zi fled to Lu, while He fled to Song.

Meng Ming said: "Zheng is ready and can't expect anything. Invincible, everywhere. Let's go back. " Destroy the slippery country and return it to Qin.

It turned out that the State of Jin said, "The State of Qin went against Uncle Jian's wishes and made the people work hard because of greed. God has given us an opportunity, which can't be lost and the enemy can't indulge. Let the enemy go, and you will bury the future trouble. It is unlucky to go against God and have to crusade against Qin Jun. " Luan Zhi said, "Is it because Wen Gong died that he went against his will and didn't repay Qin Jun's patronage?" Xian Zhen said: "Qin is not mourning for us (the monarch), but attacking our same-sex country. Qin is so rude, what can I report? " It is said that conniving at the enemy for one day is a hidden danger for generations. Considering the interests of future generations, can you say that it is against the wishes of the dead king? So he ordered to mobilize Jiang Rong's army. Duke Xiang of Jin went to the funeral, and he rode the chariot with a loud voice, and Lai Ju was the right knight.

In April this summer, on the fourth day, 8 Jin Army defeated Qin Jun in Yaoshan. Capture thyme Meng, beg in the west, and return. So he put on black mourning for Wen Gong. Kim began to wear black mourning clothes.

Wenbo defended the three commanders: "They really alienated the relationship between our two kings. Qin Mugong won them and ate them, so why do you punish them unfairly? " How about letting them go back to the state of Qin and be punished to satisfy their monarch's wishes? "Duke Jinxiang promised her.

Go to the court and ask about Qin prisoners. Duke Xiang of Jin said, "Madam, I will let you go." Xian Zhen said angrily, "Beowulf struggled to get them on the battlefield, and this woman let them go at once in the court. Destroyed the fruits of the war and increased the arrogance of the enemy. He died in a few days. " I spit and didn't look back.

Duke Xiang of Jin sent Chu Yang's father after him. Catch up with the Yellow River, Qin people have boarded the boat and left the shore. Xie Zuoma lied to Qin people that Xianggong had ordered a gift for Meng Ming. Meng Ming kowtowed and said, "Jin Jun was kind and didn't kill the detained officials, so we went back to China to be punished. Our monarch killed me for this, and I will never forget this failure. If you follow your grace and avoid death, three years later, thank you. "

Qin Bo waited in the suburbs wearing clothes with no literary talent and cried to the army, "It is my sin to disobey Uncle Jian's advice and wronged you." Meng Ming was not deposed. "It's my fault, the doctor have what sin? It's just that I won't use a temporary fault to cover up the great virtue of my life. "