How to write the beginning and end of the composition? As the saying goes, everything is difficult at the beginning, so is writing a composition, but the beginning of an article is very important, especially a perfect composition. Judging the quality of a composition has much to do with the beginning and end of the composition. The following is a perfect composition excerpt compiled by Mr. Niu for everyone, hoping to help everyone!

First, the appearance description begins.

That is, the five senses, body shape, manners and habits, clothes, etc. of people or things are the opening forms of writing content. Portrait description should be vivid and lifelike, so that the image of people or things is full and the effect is vivid.

For example, I, a gluttonous and lazy child, naturally grew into a pair of pigs, with my chubby face getting bigger every day and my small eyes getting smaller and smaller. Every time I have to open my eyes to see this beautiful and lovely world, I ...

Second, the beginning of personality characteristics.

That is to say, the character, habit, quality and other characteristics of the characters are taken as the beginning of the article, and the characteristics of the characters are directly and vividly expressed. Language should be concise, accurate and wonderful.

For example, I have a strange mother who is gentle to me like water, and nothing "baby", "darling" and "doll" is enough for me; But when I am sad, I yell at you with my teeth clenched, even punching and kicking. (Excerpted from "Multi-faceted Mom"

Third, the beginning of environmental description.

That is to say, describe the scene background closely related to the content of the article at the beginning, in order to achieve the artistic effect of setting off the mood of the characters, or expressing the characters' images, or highlighting the theme.

In the evening, the sky suddenly became cloudy. In an instant, the wind roared, the yellow sand filled the sky and the dust flew. There are many people waiting at every station. (Excerpted from "That day, I really regretted it")

Fourth, cleverly set the beginning of the question.

That is, the author skillfully asks questions at the beginning to arouse suspense, thus improving readers' interest in reading.

This kind of openness is usually divided into three types: 1 and rhetorical openness. 2. Start with a question. 3, the question type begins.

No matter what form we start with, we should serve the theme and have a sense of mystery and freshness.

Such as: strange! How can there be four strong big men standing in the "mother-infant boarding house", while a mother with a child in her arms is pushed out of the column? Can't those people read? (selected from "pseudo-illiteracy")

Fifth, the psychological description begins.

That is, starting with people's thoughts and moods, we can express the protagonist's emotions with accurate language, create a psychological atmosphere, give readers a strong feeling and enhance the appeal of the article.

For example, the first time I saw my article published in a newspaper in type, and the first time I took the manuscript fee earned by my skills, all the happy feelings such as excitement, pride and self-confidence welled up. I am really good, my classmates will envy me, and I want to congratulate myself. (selected from "First News")

Sixth, skillfully use parallelism to start.

That is, three or more sentences or phrases with the same or similar structure are put together to express a unified idea. This phenomenon is called "parallelism". The beginning of parallelism plays a special role in expressing characters' personalities, narrating events and experiences, expressing thoughts and feelings, and fully showing the truth. Its language is magnificent, the rhythm of words is neat, and the perfect combination of emotion and beauty gives readers a beautiful enjoyment.

For example, I am about to bid farewell to my hometown where I was born and raised, to my close relatives, to my kind folks, and to the train to the south to pursue my ideals, my beliefs and my brilliant tomorrow! (Excerpt from Out of the House)

Seven, contrast rendering at the beginning.

That is to say, from the beginning, the opposing people and things or the opposing two aspects of the same person and thing are juxtaposed to form a sharp contrast. The contrast at the beginning can highlight the center and deepen the reader's impression of people or things.

For example, I have a mother who often gives me a thumbs-up and praises me as "great", and a father who often frowns and calls me "terrible". It is these two kinds of extreme love that make me often understand the direction of my efforts in self-confidence. (from two kinds of love)

Eight, reveal the beginning of the center.

That is, at the beginning of the article, the ideological quality of the characters, or the significance of the event, or the characteristics of the scenery, or the philosophy revealed. Will be interpreted to highlight the center of the composition.

I want to marry this book. It was books that taught me a lot of knowledge, books that taught me how to be a man, books that gave me a lot of joys and sorrows ... (selected from I want to marry a book)

Ninth, celebrity quotes begin.

In other words, citing famous sayings as the opening quotation of the article makes the article stand higher, refine the center more accurately, and make the article more literary.

For example, I remember that Cheng Yi seems to have said: "The smell of foreign objects is disgusting for a long time; The longer the taste of reading, the deeper. " The more books you read, the more you can appreciate their subtleties. I have loved reading since I was a child, breathing with the protagonist in the book, and my fate has often reached the point of forgetting to eat and sleep. (selected from book interest)

Ten, the beginning of the oral description.

That is, starting with the characters' language or dialogue directly, readers can see the characters as soon as they come into contact with the article, which makes the characters more vivid.

Such as: "lazy! It's almost eight o'clock! You'll be late if you don't get up! Did you hear that? I'll build the bed! " The roar of the mother lion made me reluctantly get out of the warm bed. (Excerpted from Mom in My Eyes)

11. Express your feelings at the beginning.

That is, the author expresses his feelings or opinions artistically with beautiful and accurate language, profoundly reveals the theme of the article, enhances the appeal of the article, and makes readers hum.

When I am quiet, I always think of that alley, which is faint and contains a lot of human feelings. For many years, the grass and trees in the alley have always haunted me, with stone-paved streets, ancient wooden doors, tall and straight trees, ordinary and ordinary people ... (selected from "Faint Alley")

Twelve, flashback descriptive beginning.

That is to say, writing the ending and result of the event at the beginning to create suspense, and then describing it according to the development of the plot not only emphasizes the importance of the result, enhances the expression effect of the article, but also arouses readers' interest in reading and increases the charm of the article.

Such as: haha! My article "Summer Rain in a hurry" has been submitted again! Looking at the beautiful sentences I typed, I can't help but think of the rain a week ago. I really realize that a good article is drawn with heart and emotion. (selected from "I love to experience life with my heart")

Thirteen, the heart tells the beginning.

That is, at the beginning of the article, the author reveals his heart to the protagonist in the article, talks with the second person and speaks his own psychological words.

For example, when your mother is old, your back is hunched, just like a plow that keeps plowing on the yellow land all day; When your mother is old, your body is so thin, just like a sugarcane sucked by your children. My daughter has grown up and become beautiful, but my mother's forehead is covered with wrinkles and her head is covered with white hair. Mom, you gave me life, you gave me wisdom, you cultivated my sentiment, and you guided us on the journey of life. Without your mother, I will have nothing. (Excerpted from "Deep Love")

1, natural ending.

This ending is very easy. The story is finished, the result comes out, and the article ends. This is the natural ending.

For example, at the end of "You Bijia Mountain", we were a little tired because the sun was setting in the west, so we took a bus together and took the fun of playing in Bijia Mountain and stepped into the road home. ...

Step 2 end

When things are done, sum up your gains, and often use compound sentences with progressive relationships to talk about your gains or feelings.

An interesting eggshell experiment is over. This eggshell experiment is really interesting! Not only did I exercise my hands-on ability, but I also learned the truth of "centralization and decentralization of power". What a great harvest! So I like this experiment!

3. Heuristic ending (also known as "wise")

This ending is to write out the enlightenment and clear truth obtained after something, which plays the role of pointing out the center.

It has been a long time, but I can't forget it. Although this incident is very small, it inspires me a lot, because it makes me understand the truth that no matter what people have done wrong, as long as they realize their mistakes and dare to admit and correct them, they will definitely make a new start and make progress.

4. Question ending (also called "rhetorical question")

It's over. In order to emphasize the truth or enlightenment he understands, the author deliberately ends with a question or rhetorical question, which not only expresses his wishes, but also stimulates the readers' thinking and plays a role in strengthening the center.

In the end, we finally made up. Through this incident, we learned that sincere treatment, tolerance and understanding are the basis of friendship. What do you think, friend? The last sentence can also be said, "friend, don't you think so?"

5. Wonderful ending

This ending belongs to imagination and sustenance. It is the result that you don't write things directly, and this result may not be a situation, so you express your will or result by "dreaming". This fantastic style is very interesting and intriguing.

For example, at the end of the article "Looking for Mom", the boy had a sweet dream that the little girl found her mother and was snuggling in her arms. Birds also fly back to their nests and sing happily with their mothers!

6. The lead song introduces the ending

There are "Song Quotations" at the beginning and "Song Quotations" at the end. According to the content and center of the matter, choose an appropriate old saying or one or two lyrics as the end of the article, which is full of encouragement, guidance and encouragement.

For example, at the end of the article "Cherish Every Minute": Only by cherishing every minute can we not waste the shadow of light and do what we should do, which is the greatest inspiration to me after this incident. Friend, "don't be idle, you will lose your head!" " "

1, end of summary

Finally, the article summarizes the performance and personality of the characters.

For example, at the end of my role model: This is Wang Xiaoping, my role model. He is so diligent and helpful, and now he has become the idol of his classmates!

Step 2 praise the end

At the end, praise the characters, highlight and point out the center with Acura.

For example, at the end of My Teacher, Mr. Wang loves his students so much and is loyal to the lofty education cause. She works diligently and selflessly, and is worthy of the glorious title of "excellent teacher"!

3. Lyric ending

At the end, I regret my praise, praise and admiration for the characters.

For example, at the end of the article My Teacher: Ah, dear Miss Wang, you are like this, caring for us in every way like a loving mother; He is like a diligent gardener, nurturing us to grow up without regrets; Your loyalty and persistence in your career have deeply touched every one of us, and we are proud to have a good teacher like you!

4. Debate ending

Use argumentative sentences to explain your views and opinions on the characters you write and strengthen the center of the article.

For example, the "selfless devotee" at the end of the article, this is my teacher, a selfless devotee. Does she have any relatives or children? Doesn't she know how to work hard? Doesn't she need to enjoy a comfortable life? No, she knows everything. However, she regards teaching and educating people as her first life and selfless dedication as her greatest happiness. How can we not love and admire such a teacher?

5. At the end of the article, the topic is closed.

This kind of ending, like the summative ending, is the most common and easy to master. It is mainly the "eye" in the title or the related topic written at last.

For example, at the end of the article "People worth learning", this is Wang Xiaogang, a person worth learning. His modesty, his frankness and his enthusiasm for others have set an example for me to move forward, which I admire.

1: The person who has the greatest influence on me.

There is always a voice to guide me, and there is always a call hidden in my heart. My mother's great influence will always accompany me to grow up.

The great strength my mother gave me will always be with me. "Poor wind!" I have no reason not to work hard. For your smile, for my future, for that feeling of happiness. All good things will shine in hard sweat.

Mother, you didn't know the vastness of the sea until your family saw it; I don't know the majesty of the mountain without looking. Your affection is like a trickle, singing in my heart; Your family is like a fire, flying in the sky of my soul. The flow of time precipitated the warmth my family gave me, and I seemed to solidify myself.

2. Great mother

How great maternal love is, we have a saying that "only mothers are good in the world, and children with mothers are like a treasure." The word "mom" came out of my mouth again and again, and the words "baby" kept coming out of my mother's mouth. Maternal love is delicate and silent, and it is made up of bits and pieces. Not so vigorous, nor earth-shattering. Motherly love has always moistened me and accompanied me in my heart.

It's selfless maternal love, it's noble maternal love, and it's also great maternal love. Mom, I want to say to you: Mom, I love you!

3. My good friend

I believe everyone has a bosom friend who will accompany you through many wonderful things, whether happy or sad, and I have such a bosom friend. She is Liu Xiaoxue, a very kind girl, who works hard and perseveres.

I believe that Xiaoxue and I will go on like this. Xiaoxue is also the best gift from God and a good bosom friend.

4. Mom's love

"Only a mother is good in the world, and a child with a mother is like a baby …" We grew up listening to this song, but we didn't know the meaning of this song when we were young. Now that we have grown up and gone to school, we finally realize the meaning of this song.

"Only a mother is good in the world, and a child with a mother is like a baby …" has been lingering in my ear and accompanied me to grow up.

5: My teacher

I finally understand that in the minds of teachers, their love for all their classmates is the same. Students with good grades make teachers happy; Students with poor grades worry teachers more.

Teachers, you have interpreted the sacred and great profession of human soul engineer with the most selfless love in the world!

6. Teachers

Your eyes are my eternal concern. Even if I walk through thousands of waters in Qian Shan, I can't walk out of your kind eyes. Your call is my eternal warmth. No matter the rain or shine, you always light the lamp in my heart. Your back is my eternal attachment, and your strength draws us forward bravely.

Teacher, you are like a street lamp, shining on us. Teacher, you are like a boatman, pulling us across the rapids. Teacher, we miss you and thank you more sincerely!

7. The role model in my heart

Example is everyone's goal. The example is great and admirable. It's worth learning. It shows you your own shortcomings. Many heroes in the story are my role models: Halwei Captain sacrificed himself to save others and was fearless in times of crisis; Hai Wa is witty, brave and calm; Liu Hulan would rather die than surrender ... My role model is an ordinary person who has been teaching me how to be a man.

My mother is my role model. She used words to help me eliminate difficulties and give me courage to face everything.

8: Success and Failure

From ancient times to the present, the words success and failure are always so distinct. In the eyes of laymen, successful people will always be above and successful, while unsuccessful people will be regarded as a thorn in the side and a thorn in the flesh, and will never turn over. Success has no eternal success, and failure has no eternal failure!

Success or failure is a point in life. Like a straight line, every point is pointed out. Every point can be said to be success or failure. But how to draw this point depends on you. How to draw a circle?

The straight line of life is no longer straight or straight! But at every point!

9. unforgettable memories

There are many things in the past, but there is one thing I can't forget.

Although it has been a long time, it has left a deep imprint on my memory!

10: Start from a little bit.

The gray sky hangs like lead, and there is a chill in the air.

Walking in a corner of the city, when you pick up a can and a piece of paper scraps on the ground, you will naturally throw them into the trash can. When you are running and playing on campus, don't kill plants or trample on the lawn. No matter what you do, you should start from a little bit.

1 1: Thank you.

If you ask me: What moved you and made you unforgettable? A dazzling star will flash in my mind, and that dazzling star is: a warm thank you.

This gratitude is so sweet, kind and warm. Let your heart feel warm, even if it is cold. Yes, if others help you, you will be happy. If you help others, others will be happy, and in turn you will be happy. As long as everyone gives a little love, the world will become a warm world.

12: childhood fun

Childhood is golden, with laughter and tears. I remember when I was five years old, we added a new member to our family-a puppy. Because of it, many innocent and interesting things happened during that time.

13: the choice of mentality

The soul is the foundation of a person, and people's thoughts wander and sublimate in the depths of the soul; The mind is a person's soul, and people's actions change because of the tossing and turning of the soul.

In the face of life's choices again and again, we should always keep a pure and noble heart, a warm and enthusiastic heart and an indomitable heart. Like that climber, we should lend a helping hand, warm others with our body and mind, and make the right choice.

14: Happy

Happiness is the most precious thing for everyone. It can't be bought with money, and everyone has a different understanding of happiness.

What is the happiness of bees? Is to give sweetness to human beings and make plants fruitful. So the bees kissed the flowers happily and danced among them.

What is the happiness of flowers? It is to show people that beautiful and moving gesture, which makes people look full of energy, so flowers sing in the wind.

Therefore, happiness is different. Everyone, animals, plants, etc. Each has his own happiness. If you can share your happiness with others, you will certainly have more happiness than you do now.

15: riding for the first time

Students must have had their first time. Climbing the mountain for the first time; Swimming for the first time; Going out for the first time; Cooking for the first time; Won the first prize; Riding a bike for the first time.

I have also realized a truth: you must have perseverance and courage to do things, and you are not afraid of hardships and difficulties. If you give up halfway, you will accomplish nothing.

Was your first time so exciting? Have you ever had a first time? Tell me and I'll share it with you! I am going to ride a bike. Goodbye!

16: shameful thing

"I hope that every time I recall, I don't feel guilty about life." This famous saying of Uncle Lei Feng has always been regarded as my motto. However, just this week, something happened that made me feel very ashamed.

17: rules

There are many rules in real life. Such as basic rules, traffic rules, public places rules ... but you know what? Playing games should also abide by the rules of the game.

Every rule in life should be followed. Including the rules of the game ......

18: I participated in the sports meeting for the first time.

A drop of dew can reflect the brilliance of the sun, and a green leaf can show the vitality of the earth ... an ordinary little thing will make me feel, inspire and benefit for life.

Only hard work will yield results, and opportunities will not stop. Don't wait until you die to regret everything. It is because of so many firsts that we understand the truth of life.

19: Nostalgia

Doug, did you hear my inner call on the distant horizon? No one will greet me after school. Who will you talk to if you are unhappy in the future? I hope you will come back with me, but I hope you will have a good life in heaven.

Whenever I see my neighbor's children playing with his dog, I feel so miserable and envious. Doudou, I cried again at this moment. Are you okay?