Falling flowers are beautiful. After the fragrance, it falls into the mud, grinds into dust and nourishes a brand-new life in the soil. It has fulfilled its mission as a flower, willingly and without regrets. A dewdrop is also touching. It runs between heaven and earth and nourishes the vast biosphere. In the huge team of rain, although it is a trivial drop, it shows the value of life so vividly. The same is true of people's life. Maybe you are not a general with great military exploits or a hero who saves the country and the people, but as long as you stick to your post and do your best, you can sublimate your limited life into eternal beauty. Life is not vigorous, but hard work and dedication
The old man in charge of inspecting the railway has been working in the mountains for decades, rain or shine, and is conscientious. Solemnly patrolling in the deep mountains makes me feel reverent. There are many such people around us. Although they are humble, they have dazzling personality traits.
On the campus of the University of Hong Kong, the most respected person is not the famous professors, but an ordinary cleaner. As a cleaner, she worked hard and remained unknown for more than twenty years. Get up early every day and start a busy life. Whether it is sunny or rainy, I can always see her bending down to clean. In addition to finishing her own work, she is also like her mother, giving lectures and caring to college students who don't understand school life from time to time. Because of her earnest and selfless love, the leaders of HKU publicly praised the most beautiful cleaner mother and called on all teachers and students to learn from her.
Why does a cleaner become the most respected person in a place like Hong Kong University where senior intellectuals gather? It is persistence and dedication, love and dedication. They are the most beautiful medals, which make an ordinary life show infinite value.
A few days ago, the heroic deeds of the most beautiful brother in the mountain city sparked heated discussion on the Internet. Li Zhiyong is an ordinary taxi driver. He took a passenger to the river and saw the passenger jump into the river. He didn't hesitate at all. A fish jumped into the water, and Li Zhiyong gave his life without hesitation. Colleagues in the company say that he is very responsible for his work and he will not hesitate to help people around him. Li Zhiyong, a family member, is a good husband and father.
Hugo once said that everyone who takes life seriously is a hero. The harmony and beauty of our society lies not only in Einstein and Jobs, but also in more civilian heroes. He is Jiao He. They are ordinary but great, and they are small but dazzling.
Workers in the ant colony family, dung beetles, they work hard in the pasture ... The persistence of these little people has created the whole group. The realization of life value lies in persistence and seriousness. It is best to do the best.
20 13 Guangdong college entrance examination perfect score composition: light up thousands of lights
A rich man who is enthusiastic about charity donated money to three poor families, but he got a completely different answer.
The family refused, thinking it was charity-this was a warning.
The family hesitated and declared that they would pay it back-this is a kind of worry.
The family accepted it gladly and shed tears of gratitude-this is good.
In the face of others' goodwill and goodwill, we should respond with goodwill. In this process, love is transmitted and goodness is carried forward.
People who quit are wary and alert, which is really unacceptable. Just like when you were hungry and cold in the cold wind, suddenly someone brought a cage of hot steamed bread, but you scoffed, held your head high and left. How chilling! Compared with charity, it should be said that it is help and mutual assistance. There is no difference between the rich and the poor. What connects each other should be the warm ties of progress and the pursuit of public happiness. If you are on guard, you will build a cold high wall, which is impenetrable and impenetrable by love.
Worrying is anxiety and anxiety, not the best policy. Worried people turn the relaxed goodwill of others into an invisible burden on their shoulders. They understand that acceptance is rewarded, but they don't fully understand the connotation of this reward. They focus on the donations they receive, wondering whether they can afford this heavy debt in the future, but they don't know that if they integrate the goodwill they accept into their lives and spread it out, they will try their best to light up the hearts of those who need light more. This is the best reward. The so-called trouble is also trouble.
Good people are influenced by external things and come from the heart. Accept goodwill and understand the goodness of others; Learn to be grateful and light up your heart. In times of crisis, grasping the helping hand extended by others at the right time is not only acceptance, but also inner magnanimity and clarity. If you refuse like a quitter, you will still struggle on the line of food and clothing in the future. More importantly, if you don't know how to accept, you won't know how to give. How much love can an occluded heart hold? If you are as worried as an alarmist, then your future life should be overwhelmed by the double pressure of spirit and material, accepting and only thinking about repayment. I don't know if it will spread to a wider scope and whether love will wither in your hands.
Only good, no tasteless precautions, don't think unnecessary ideas, know how to accept, and should be willing to share. The so-called "people are good, although the blessing has not arrived, the disaster is far away", which applies not only to the giver, but also to the receiver. Accept and be grateful, let the light pass, illuminate yourself, warm others, and light thousands of lights.
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This exam composition deserves the word "gentleness".
The content is comments on three families. If you want to comment, you have to express your position. If you want to express your position, you must give reasons. This is very hard work, which is also the reason why the thought is not profound. Should poor families accept sincere donations from the rich? The author believes that it depends on whether it is conducive to the transmission of goodness and the promotion of love. It is thoughtful to be able to tell the reason from this level.
This year is still a material composition, and the material tells stories. Candidates can talk about things and write articles similar to current reviews. The materials reflect the attitude of the three families to the donation, and it can also be said that the materials are viewpoint (attitude) type. Faced with several viewpoints (attitudes), we can compare them and discuss which is higher or lower. For viewpoint materials, this writing method can ensure that the thinking will not deviate from the scope of material content and meaning. But we should use the same scale to judge whether other people's views are appropriate. This scale belongs to a positive value system, such as whether it is conducive to the spread of love. This is the key. This article is a model in this respect. Quality wins.
Wen also won. The language is accurate, concise and calm, and the writing is shining with rationality. The analysis is moderate and in place, but it is convincing without imposing on others.
In a word, this is an exemplary composition in the examination room, which can be used for reference from the aspects of examination, conception, language and structure.
20 13 Guangdong college entrance examination perfect composition: let love flow in both directions
China has a famous saying: "A drop of water is rewarded with a spring." It can be seen that gratitude is a traditional virtue of the Chinese nation and has been passed down. There is some truth in this statement. Everyone needs help sometimes. If you accept help but take it for granted, don't appreciate it and return it with love, who will be willing to help? Therefore, for the harmonious development of society, please don't hurt people's hearts and let love flow in both directions.
Thankfully, grateful people are the mainstream of our society. When a self-made businessman becomes rich, he will never forget the hard days of the past, which makes him want to pass on his love to those who still need it. We are all ordinary people, and I believe most people are willing to taste the joy of gratitude. When the giver sees that the person he helps knows how to repay, even if it is not for himself, but for society and others, he sees the value of what he has done, which undoubtedly gives him the motivation to continue to do good things. This is the dedication of love, the two-way flow of love, the acquisition of love and the benefit of society.
Maybe you only paid one point, but the society may benefit a lot. Remember the rainstorm in Beijing last summer? Disaster is being broadcast, and warmth is being staged. A group of people from rural Hebei helped the victims, regardless of their personal safety, and they were praised by everyone. As everyone knows, they were all rescuers of the Tangshan earthquake that year, and it was everyone's selfless dedication that gave them the materials and confidence to survive. Now, they don't forget to repay them and help another group of people get a new life. The flow of love and positive energy supports the society, stands firm and goes forward bravely. We can't forget the most beautiful rural teacher-Wu Yuxi, who suffered from gastric cancer for more than ten years and had three quarters of his stomach removed. He has never missed a class and corrected his homework for so many years. It was the concern of the community, students and parents who helped him to support the platform. This two-way flowing love is more precious and harder than gold.
Of course, there is also the phenomenon that the "regression chain" of love is missing. Look at a director in Shaanxi who helped many enterprises to raise money during his term of office, but was "abandoned" by enterprises after his term of office, and you will know how painful unrequited love is and the society will become less harmonious.
Don't let "two-way love" be lost, let love pass on.
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To write an article in the examination room, you must first have ideas. The reason why this article is excellent lies in its high intention. It believes that love is not one-way, but two-way, and it can still flow, calling for "let love flow in both directions." Giving and receiving are both manifestations of love. We should respect each other and communicate with each other, so that the world will be full of love and will continue to pass it on. From the perspective of conception, the author's conception is superior and most worthy of recognition among many candidates.
Around "let love flow in two directions", the author expresses the significance of the two-way flow of love from the perspective of the giver in the second paragraph. In the third paragraph, the author uses two examples to express the value of the flow of love from the perspective of the receiver. The fourth paragraph begins with negative examples to express the pain of unrequited love. Finally, an appeal is made: don't let the two-way love be lost, let the love pass on.
The author's thinking is clear and focused, which is an excellent composition in the examination room.