I. Contents:

1. The content is close to modern life, novel and unique, grasping the pulse of the times and showing the flavor of the times.

2. The context is clear, the sense of hierarchy is strong, and the narrative is orderly and not chaotic.

3. Proper details, clear priorities and clear thinking. Carefully selected, the material seems to be tailor-made for the theme.

4. The narrative is detailed and concrete, the details are vivid and vivid, the characters are vivid and prominent, and the images are full and vivid.

5. Use the environment to set off the emotions of the characters, and the scenes blend, the feelings are in the scene, and the scene is in the scene.

6. Rich imagination, strange ideas, not divorced from the truth of life, tied with the association of life, broaden the reader's thinking and make people feel lively and interesting.

7. Scenery description is vivid and lifelike, words and sentences are appropriate, scenes are born together, and scenes blend together, just like a vivid sketch painting presented to readers.

8. Imagination is wonderful. It not only comes from life, but also transcends life, broadens readers' horizons and is full of artistic charm.

9. The description of the event process is detailed and specific. Although there are many contents, it seems to be orderly, which reflects the author's clear thinking and planning ability for the layout of the article.

10. The appearance is lifelike, the characters are lifelike, and the clothes are decent, just like a mirror reflecting the characters' personality, which is really called "life depends on each other".

1 1. The description of the environment is objective and true, and the environment serves the characters, which better explains the ins and outs of the formation of the characters' personalities.

12. The expression is vivid and vivid, and there are not many words, which outline the personality characteristics of the characters at a glance. The words and manners of the characters have distinct and unique personalities.

13. The content before and after is not closely related, and some contents are too isolated and not closely related to the main body of the article.

14. The narrative is short and rough, with only a frame structure, and the characters lack distinctive personality characteristics.

15. The details are not properly arranged and the priorities are not clear enough.

16. The content is mostly outlined by lines, lacking detailed description based on points.

Second, the theme:

1. Focus is prominent, the center is clear, and the thinking is clear.

2. Clear views, clear likes and dislikes, making people clear at a glance.

3. Directly highlight the theme in the content, clear and to the point, without redundancy.

4. The theme is serious, the thought is noble, and the enterprise is strong.

4. The center is not clear enough and the concept is not clear enough.

5. The theme is vague, the meaning is vague, and the purpose of writing is unknown.

6. Although there is a central theme, the expression is not strong enough, but it seems empty and powerless.

7. The theme is not serious enough, and there are still dross in thought.

Third, the plot:

1. The plot is tortuous, and the narrative process has a certain sense of ups and downs, which reflects the curvy beauty of the plot and is fascinating.

2. The plot is strong in faltering, and there are accidents at ordinary times, which can attract readers' attention.

3. The plot changes unconventional, with occasional suspense, waves and surprises. The development process of the event embodies the author's innovative ideas.

4. The plot develops smoothly and lacks certain ups and downs.

5. The plot changes are unremarkable and lack of new ideas.

6. The plot is straight, there is no suspense, and it seems to be a running account.

7. The process is very detailed, but the ending is short and incomplete. The structure is unreasonable, giving people the feeling of anticlimactic.

8. The idea is unreasonable and the content is full of loopholes, which can't reflect the truth of life.

9. The plot is ups and downs, and the transformation is too fast and not coherent enough.

Fourth, rhetoric:

1. The metaphor is vivid, vivid and appropriate, and the ontology is similar to the metaphor, which greatly enhances the interest and persuasiveness of the article.

2. Appropriate use of contrast, comparison and other methods, through the disparity and differences between things, effectively prove the center of the article.

3. Taking advantage of parallelism to explain the characteristics of things in many ways not only enhances the language potential, but also leaves a very deep impression on readers.

4. Using personification skillfully, the images in the text have the characteristics of human behavior, thoughts and feelings, and reflect the spiritual course of the protagonist in the text from the side.

Verb (abbreviation for verb) material selection:

1. The selection of materials is too popular and unrepresentative, and the old themes and ideas are unremarkable.

2. Although the events with certain narrative value in life are selected, the hidden truth of the events has not been deeply reflected due to the incomplete analysis and excavation.

3. The material selection is dull, too old, vulgar, simple and naive, and there is no new idea, so it is difficult to deeply reflect the times and authenticity of life.

4. Failure to reflect the truth through trivial matters, and lack of proficiency in the expression of "seeing the big from the small".

5. Lack of multi-angle description of the characters, only a narrow theme is selected, showing the one-sided personality characteristics of the characters.

6. Be able to choose themes with typical significance in life, and the events are more representative.

7. The selection of materials is novel and unique, not mediocre, and it is refreshing to sweep away pedantry.

8. Although it describes ordinary things, the analysis is thorough and reasonable, and the rational excavation is in-depth, highlighting the essence of the incident.

9. Although the incident is small, it reflects profound truth and has certain universality.

10. The selection of materials from many aspects and angles fully reflects the personality characteristics of the characters, and the characters are full of personality.

Six, emotion:

1. The language is simple, the feelings are dull, and the affection is not deep enough.

2. Emotion is too strong, and it doesn't look too emotional. On the other hand, it is complacent.

3. Emotion lacks depth, fails to convey feelings through scenes, and fails to generate feelings from events. Although feelings are hidden in words, they fail to dig deep.

4. Psychological depiction is not vivid and concrete enough to effectively express the thoughts, attitudes and likes and dislikes of the characters. Reason: 1. Repeatedly emphasize the author's point of view from different angles and aspects, with thorough reasoning and clear thinking.

5. Quoting famous sayings and classic examples is more convincing and can express the author's point of view more effectively.

6. Strong arguments, thorough and reasonable analysis and strong philosophy.

7. Rich examples, proper selection and description are more convincing.

8. Strong feelings, such as volcanic eruption and bubbling out, can deeply move readers.

9. Sincere feelings, strong feelings, like mellow wine, make people drunk if they don't drink it.

10. Emotions are real and natural, and there is no suspicion of affectation. Show your true feelings with a normal heart.

1 1. The mental journey is true and delicate, and the thoughts and attitudes of the characters are clear to readers at a glance.

12. The feelings are true and delicate, and the words are touching, which really comes from the author's heart.

13. Seek the gains and losses of life from self-reflection, reveal the true feelings in confession, and the words are powerful and shocking.

VII. Statement:

1. The sentence is fluent, the sentence meaning is fluent, the text is beautiful, the narrative is vivid, the image is vivid, and the language expression ability is strong.

2. The language is concise, to the point, to the point, concise and powerful, full of pen power, and a few words can convey the appearance of the characters.

3. The language is fluent, detailed and vivid; The meaning of the sentence is implicit and euphemistic, with profound implications. After reading it, it is like a lingering fragrance after drinking.

4. The language is vivid and humorous, which makes people laugh.

5. The behavior description is accurate, and the verb series vividly highlights the psychological state of the characters and points out their personality characteristics.