1 1 in composition evaluation, such beautiful handwriting and clear and neat structure can not help but give people a refreshing feeling, which teachers should really learn from you. Let's promote each other in the future Chinese study, shall we?
2. Delicate description, strong life breath, accurate and vivid words and sentences.
3. The implicit ending of the article is both topical and intriguing.
Four ... tell us in a relaxed and happy tone, which is unforgettable.
5. The article has clear clues, prominent themes and closely focuses on …
6. The little author observes carefully and narrates orderly.
7. The language is appropriate and romantic, and the context is smooth, showing the image of a bookworm's bosom friend and the feelings between "I" and "bosom friend", which is smart and elegant.
8. The language of the article is fresh and lively, the description can grasp the main features of things, and the length is short and pithy, which is worth reading.
9. The meticulous description of characters' language, manners and movements is a major feature of this article.
10. The central sentence revealed at the end of the article is a clear pen and summary, short and powerful.
1 1. Pay attention to specific things and develop appropriate imagination, which is success.
12, with fluent full-text language and free and easy writing, is a relatively successful work.
13, the article is detailed, orderly, vivid and concrete, which is a masterpiece.
14, make full use of the combination of static and dynamic writing, supplemented by metaphor, personification and other techniques.
15, with feeling switch and feeling at the end. In this way, the article is coordinated from beginning to end, and the theme of the article is repeated, which is very infectious.
16, the metaphor is appropriate and the words are vivid.
17, the full text is lively, the language is fresh, always full of humor, and it is very interesting to read.
18, the quotation of several common sayings in the full text is just right, with nostalgia as the clue. It just reflects your ideology.
19, the use of some subtle words adds a lot of interest to the article.
Although it is a trivial matter, the author's description is vivid, and an indispensable ending highlights the theme of the article.
2 1, your article is very creative-complete the idea in the form of geometric proof questions. The full text is very literary!
22. Wen Neng Yi Qing. You should not take writing as a burden, but record your mental journey with a positive attitude and delicate brushwork.
23. Writing is like being a man. From your life experience, you can see that you are a good young man who makes progress. You have your own unique insights and profound understanding of things, which is really commendable.
24. This article makes ... detailed.
25. There are many wonderful sentences in the full text, which add some literary interest to the article.
26. The imagination of the article is reasonable.
27. The story is vivid and concrete, and the words and deeds of the characters conform to their respective identity characteristics.
28. The language is accurate, vivid and vivid, and the content is extremely rich and specific.
29. The ending is just right and the center is clear. The language is simple, profound and intriguing.
This composition is novel in material, brilliant in conception and lively in language. There is a fresh breath of life and children's interest between the lines.
3 1. The praise for the characters at the end is sincere and touching.
32. Proper details and the combination of reality and reality are two major characteristics, while ... is richer and more vivid.
33, focused, detailed properly, specific content.
34. The language of the article is easy to understand, close to the reality of life and friendly to read.
35. The tone of the whole article is relaxed and humorous, and it is interesting and fascinating to read.
36. An extraordinary beginning to attract readers.
37. The article comes from life, so although the language is not very beautiful, it is true and interesting, and the writing is reasonable.
38. By enriching the characters' language and actions, the ideological quality of the characters is set off.
This article fully and appropriately renders the atmosphere of … and gives a detailed and vivid description of the key points of the article.
40. The structure of the article is concise and reasonable, and the author's understanding of the original text is very profound and thorough. The full-text language is forceful, hit the floor, exciting and exciting.
4 1, the language of the article is vivid and rich, and it is readable.
42. The full text is fresh and elegant, friendly and euphemistic, simple and unconventional, which is worth learning.
43. Although the language is not gorgeous, it is extremely accurate and vivid, with rich and real emotions, which makes it interesting to read.
44. Reading your article is really a pleasure. The first is the pleasure of thoughts and feelings, which of course comes from the profound and fresh conception of your article. As the saying goes, "Climbing a mountain is full of emotion and watching the sea is full of meaning". You are a conscientious person in life, and you touched others with your true feelings. This is the greatest success of your composition.
45. The narrative of the case is vivid, concrete and interesting, which is in line with the previous metaphor. Finally, the author expressed his feelings for … in a few words, which is touching.
46. The content is vivid and rich, the language is novel and refreshing, and the structure is unique and reasonable.
47. The author is clever in conception, good at choosing points to expand, and his writing is ups and downs, which is intriguing.
48. The full-text language is vivid and accurate, and the plot is wonderful and tortuous, which seems to bring readers into a happy paradise and make people smile.
49, juvenile life, always write down many absurd stories; There are always many magical dreams in the hearts of teenagers. This essay, like a boat full of dreams, is full of the author's innocence, dreams, yearning and just beginning to mature, and sails far away.
50. The beginning is touching and has real feelings.
5 1, as a casual feeling, your article is quick-thinking and colorful. The rich life experience and delicate thoughts and feelings revealed between the lines surprised the teacher. I hope you will make persistent efforts in your future writing and form a landscape of your own!
52. The details are quite ingenious. Extremely rich in skills.
Your writing is as simple and open-minded as your personality. Your writing skills are very good, which is also the crystallization of your long-term tempering. I hope you will feel and appreciate life with your heart and write more touching articles in the future study process.
54. Although the story is ordinary, it is sincere, rich and touching.
55. The beginning of the article is novel and serves as a warning. Let readers have the impression of … as soon as they meet.
56. The ending is full of expectation and enthusiasm. Words are done, meaning is still unfinished.
57. Language is lively and interesting.
58. You can associate snow with the pursuit of life. Starting from the details of life, the spirit of innovation is commendable. This article reflects your plain writing style. Who says "boiled water" is not the best drink?
59. You are a very independent and knowledgeable student. I quite agree with you, but it would be even more icing on the cake if the writing arrangement was more compact.
60. It is really "writing like a god". It seems that you must have read a lot of literary works. The content is so rich that it shows your literary skills. Only by adjusting the materials in a certain logical order will this article be more exciting.
6 1. Although writing is not your favorite, you keep writing like a snail at every step, never stopping. Your spirit is really admirable. With your personality, you will definitely break into your own world.
62. The application of contrast deepens the theme; The plot is also quite clever, and the whole story is both unexpected and reasonable. The language is unpretentious, and the author's love and hate are all contained in the narrative, which can make readers feel and think deeply.
63. The vivid description of details reveals the inner world of the characters in a useful way, which is the success of this paper.
64. The full text is easy to understand and interesting.
65. Be concise at the beginning.
66. Close-ups are unique and interesting. The full text is full of childlike innocence and interest, and it is very kind to read.
67, full of passion, describes ...
68. The article blends into the scenery, portrays the scenery while expressing emotions, and is good at using metaphors to make the article vivid and concrete.
It can be said that your article is full of true feelings. People, failure is inevitable, and it is even more valuable to have the courage to face it. I believe it is gold, and there will always be flashes. I hope you can adjust your mind as soon as possible, and you will find that the sky is bluer.
70. The introduction of father in the article is comprehensive: from appearance to heart, from work to life; The introduction to the father is also focused: focusing on the feelings of the father. The characters are plump, real and full of life. Be proud of such a father, work harder and live up to his expectations!
7 1, the article can read fresh and interesting language, describe things … between the lines, full of childlike interest in childhood, endless laughter, can be called a masterpiece.
72. For the description of the scenery, the language is concise and accurate, while the association is touching the scene, and the scene naturally blends into one.
73. This article is lyrical in narration.
74. Although you can live happily in your own world, the development of society has been globalized, so you should devote yourself to collective life with a brand-new attitude to adapt to the development of society.
75. The ending is clear and meaningful.
76. The beginning of the article is fascinating and attracts readers. The combination of point and surface makes the article vivid, concrete and meticulous.
77. Exquisite and refined handwriting reveals your wisdom. Steady and down-to-earth, is the direction of your writing efforts in the future.
78. The beginning of the article is very clear and plays a leading role in the full text.
79. The choice of the article is novel, which arouses readers' desire to continue reading.
80. Through vivid language description, readers seem to be in a dream.
8 1, the author has a strong ability to control, and the whole article is written in one go, giving people a comfortable feeling that shines at the moment!
82. The article is elegant, fluent and clear, especially the characters' language is humorous.
83. The full text is clear, vivid, compact and interesting.
84. The beginning of the article is simple and appropriate, and it is very artistic to set off the emotions of the characters through environmental description.
85. This paper chooses a brand-new angle to let your thoughts run freely here, which is your greatest success. What the teacher wants to remind you is that when dealing with the world, there are always some rules that we need to grasp, so that your thoughts will be more profound and you will always receive the effect of "seeing the world through dripping water".
86. After reading your article, it seems that a stream flows before my eyes, pure and lovely. I hope you can keep this style of writing and express rich connotations in pure language.
87. The narrative is natural and vivid, with compact structure, natural connection and prominent center.
88. This article narrates the events of … in the order of events. The language is fluent, the level is clear, and it is very enjoyable from beginning to end.
89. The article ends with …, which is concise and full of charm.
90. Careful conception and profound thinking show that you grew up in the world of writing. There is still a long way to write in the future. I hope you can think hard and keep innovating.
9 1, Wenneng Yansheng, I think the article is a reflection of your heart. The road of life is indeed tortuous and long, but as long as you work hard and persevere, the crown of success will definitely belong to you.
92. This article is full of passion. Between the lines, we can understand the little author's love for …. The full text has distinct levels and fluent sentences.
93, 1 The poetic language at the beginning and end of the article is full of imagination and beautiful rhythm, which makes people want to read, love to read and put it down.
94. The full-text narrative is concentrated, the language is concise and fluent, and the feelings are sincere and touching.
95, based on real life, appropriate materials, very innovative, clear paragraphs, natural transition, full of interest and strong readability.
96. The end of the article is unconventional, giving people the feeling of wanting to rest.
97 ... is both practical and contains simple and profound philosophy, which is both exciting and emotional to read.
98. The article is well organized and forms a complete image.
99. A lot of spoken English in life makes the article more natural and friendly.
100, the ending focuses on expressing emotions, giving consideration to the beginning, and summarizing the full text. Coherent from beginning to end, in one go.
Composition evaluation 2 1. The article echoes from beginning to end, with concise sentences, hitting the nail on the head and pointing to the theme. Through the description of the scenery of the four seasons, explain the beauty of xx and take care of the beginning. It is best to pay attention to the clear level of paragraphs.
2. In your pen, the scenery of xx is so beautiful and moving, and the activities are so colorful. I love you too, beautiful xx.
3. Grasp the different characteristics of spring, such as grass, trees and flowers, and describe the vibrant scene of spring in the order of "xx", reflecting a person's heartfelt joy.
4. Vividly wrote the scene of "xx" playing happily, with vivid language and concrete description, and wrote the beauty of "xx" with vivid metaphor.
5. The description of "xx" and "XX" is distinctive, childlike and refreshing, and the quotation of the ancient poem "XX" is also appropriate, which enhances the expression effect of the article.
6. The "xx" in spring is really beautiful. We grasped the writing method of "xx", wrote the characteristics of "xx" and also wrote the characteristics of "xx". Although we have all seen these scenery, we have a brand-new feeling through your careful observation.
7. Observe carefully and write clearly the characteristics of "xx" according to the method of summarizing first and then dividing. Accurate language and concrete images make us feel immersive.
8. This passage is a general description, a specific description, and a combination of static and dynamic, which shows the loveliness of "xx". Take care of the exercises before and after, observe them carefully and write down your favorite feelings.
9. Because of rich associations, the pen front shines brilliantly. Look, compare "xx" with "xx", "xx" and "xx". These images are metaphors of how vividly "xx" is written.
10. The scenery description captures the characteristics of the scenery and describes the blending of the scenery, from far to near, from surface to point, and is handled in an orderly manner. The articles written are more coherent, and the scenery is different, which captures the modeling characteristics.
1 1. In your pen, "xx" is like a small garden, so full of vitality. The description of "XX" is in sequence, which is clear at a glance.
12. The characteristics of "xx" are introduced from the outside to the inside. Observe orderly and carefully. The writing is accurate and vivid, arousing many senses, and the content is true and concrete.
13. Write "xx" first, then "xx", then "xx" and finally "xx". How clear the writing idea is and how delicate the description is. You see, with appropriate metaphors, say "xx" vividly.
14. By describing his own scenery of xx, the author can say that he expresses his love for the school through the scenery, with fluent sentences and clear center.
15. This article is beautifully written and lyrical, and it is a beautiful ode to childhood life. With lyrical style, the author vividly depicts the scenery of the four seasons in the corner of xx and deeply recalls the wonderful childhood life spent there.
16. Based on the structure of "total score", this paper describes the beautiful scenery of the four seasons in xx by extracting key elements such as "students with big trees and big flowers", which is clear-cut and coherent, and is a good landscape writing exercise.
17. The article reveals the love for xx between the lines, and skillfully uses dynamic stereoscopic perception to make xx melt in all seasons. As time goes on, it shows movement and vitality. In addition, the little author has always been pregnant with a heart of constantly exploring the unknown, a desire for knowledge and a love for the motherland, which makes every reader feel gratified.
18. Just like a little painter, you painted the beautiful scenery of your xx for everyone. The four seasons are different and the scenery is different. Short words show your love for xx, and the scenes blend. Great!
19. Your composition is full of emotions, and between the lines is your love for xx. Finally, say out loud and express the main idea: "Love xx, great!" Beautiful language, a large number of rhetorical devices such as personification, vividly depicts the four seasons scenery of xx.
20. The scenery of the four seasons is really beautiful. Your exercises are clear and informative, and your words are particularly vivid and accurate.
Composition evaluation 3 1. Briefly explain the time, place and result …
2. The language is concise, standardized and attractive at the beginning.
3 ... begins with ... which is more innovative.
4. The opening is concise, concise and orderly; Pay attention to description ... leave a deep impression.
5. I used a scene metaphor at the beginning, which is quite innovative; Flashback the beginning and render the artistic conception.
6. Getting to the point at the beginning is also a way of writing.
7. The beginning is very lively. The use of personification makes the beginning lively.
8. Ask questions at the beginning to attract readers.
9. Cut to the chase at the beginning, making people clear at a glance.
10. Point to the beginning and use attractive words.
Composition evaluation 4 1. Emotion is too strong, so it looks less emotional. On the contrary, it is conscious.
2. Emotion lacks depth, fails to convey feelings through scenes, and fails to generate feelings from events. Although feelings are hidden in words, they fail to dig deep.
3. Psychological depiction is not vivid and concrete enough to effectively express the attitude, likes and dislikes of the characters.
4. Things repeatedly emphasize the author's point of view from different angles and aspects, with thorough reasoning and clear organization.
5. Quoting classic examples of famous sayings is more convincing and can express the author's point of view more powerfully.
6. Strong arguments, thorough and reasonable analysis and strong philosophy.
7. Rich examples, proper selection and description are more convincing.
8. The logical reasoning ability is weak, and the evidence is not conclusive enough.
9. Failure to tell the truth, to tell the truth, to create a true personality and to express a unique individual.
10. The sentence is fluent, the sentence meaning is fluent, the words are beautiful, the narrative image is vivid and vivid, and the language expression ability is strong.
1 1. The language is concise, concise, concise and powerful, and a few words can convey the spirit of the characters.
12. The language is fluent, detailed and vivid; The meaning of the sentence is implicit and euphemistic, with profound implications. After reading it, it is like a lingering fragrance after drinking.
13. The language is vivid and humorous, which makes people laugh.
14. The language is basically fluent, occasionally fluent.
15. The language is not fluent enough, and the meaning of the sentence is vague and puzzling.
16. This sentence is wordy, but it doesn't express the meaning. It's just detailed and redundant.
17. The language is too brief and seems to be an outline narrative, but it fails to get an outline.
18. The meaning of the text is incomplete, and the narrative is boring, dry and lifeless.
19. Miscellaneous articles can be detailed and focused.
This article fully and appropriately renders the atmosphere of … and gives a detailed and vivid description of the key points of the article.
Composition evaluation 5 1. The design of the work is ingenious, and the writing is concise and smooth. The imagination is bold, creative, novel and attractive to read.
2. imaginative and innovative. Introduce yourself at the beginning, and introduce yourself below. In addition, the language of the article is concise and humorous.
3. The article is not long, but the process is clearly described, and the activities of the characters are concrete, real, vivid and interesting. The full text is compact and complete in structure and fluent in writing.
4. The plot is lively and interesting, the narrative is clear and complete, and it also shows the author's intelligence and wit, full of family life interest, and his writing is smooth and lively.
You are very good at grasping the characteristics of things and describing them carefully, which shows that there is emotion between writing and writing. The article is very convincing and thought-provoking. In writing, the plot is vivid and the article is magnificent, which is very instructive to read.
6. This article expresses sincere praise for the beautiful mind with concrete examples, vivid and beautiful language and novel and unique writing style.
7. There are three main advantages of this paper: this paper can closely follow the requirements of the topic and write the process completely. Rigorous structure, focused. The language is concise and fluent, and the beginning and end are natural and accurate. The beginning is concise and natural, the structure is clear, and the psychological description is true, which reflects the author's good language control ability. The characteristics of this article can be summarized as cordial, warm and meaningful.
8. The description in the article is fresh and lively, cheerful and clear. The childlike innocence between the lines makes the article have it.
9. A major feature of this article is the detailed description of the characters' language, manners and movements. The ending is full of expectation and enthusiasm, and the words are still unfinished.
10. The article will be written in detail, and the warmth like sunshine between the lines will naturally sublimate the theme of the article to a higher level.
1 1. The music is beautiful, and so is the language of this article. Poetic language and fantastic imagination, how beautiful! The "reading" and "feeling" of the article are closely related, and the action is described with examples, which is touching at the beginning and has real feelings. The structure of the article is concise and reasonable, and the author's understanding of the original text is also very profound and thorough. The full-text language is forceful, hit the floor, exciting and exciting.
12. Although the language of this article is not gorgeous, it is extremely accurate and vivid, full of emotion and truth, and it is very interesting to read. A large number of spoken English in life is used to make the article more natural and close to the people. The ending is clear and meaningful.
13. This composition has novel materials, wonderful ideas and lively language. There is a fresh breath of life and children's interest between the lines.
14. The article narrates the events according to the sequence of events. The language is fluent and the level is clear. It looks very happy from beginning to end.
15. The article is full of respect, gratitude, affection and emotion from beginning to end, which is the shocking force of this article.
Composition evaluation 6 1. The plot develops smoothly, lacking certain ups and downs.
2. The plot changes are unremarkable and lack of new ideas.
3. The plot is straight, there is no suspense, and it seems to be a running account.
The process is very detailed, but the ending is short. The structure is unreasonable, giving people the feeling of anticlimactic.
5. The idea is unreasonable and the content is full of loopholes, which can't reflect the truth of life.
6. The plot is ups and downs, and the transformation is too fast and not coherent enough.
7. The metaphor is vivid, the ontology is similar to the metaphor, and the interest and persuasiveness of the article are greatly enhanced.
8. Appropriate use of comparison and other methods, through the disparity and differences between things, effectively prove the center of the article.
9. Seize the opportunity to explain the characteristics of things in many ways by parallelism, which not only enhances the language potential, but also leaves a very deep impression on readers.
10. The clever use of personification makes the things in the text have the characteristics of human behavior, thoughts and feelings, and reflects the mental journey of the protagonist in the text from the side.
1 1. The selection of materials is too popular and unrepresentative to some extent, and the old themes and old ideas are unremarkable.
12. Although the events with certain narrative value in life are selected, the hidden truth of the events cannot be deeply reflected due to the incomplete analysis and mining.
13. The materials are plain, too old, vulgar, simple and naive, and have no new ideas, so it is difficult to deeply reflect the authenticity of life.
14. Failure to reflect the truth through trivial matters, and lack of proficiency in the use of the expression "seeing the big from the small".
15. Lack of multi-angle description of the characters, only a narrow theme is selected, showing the one-sided personality characteristics of the characters.
16. Being able to choose typical themes in life, the events are more representative.
17. The material selection is novel and unique, not mediocre, and it is refreshing.
18. Although it describes ordinary things, the analysis is thorough and reasonable, and the rational excavation is in-depth, highlighting the essence of the incident.
19. Although the incident is small, it reflects profound truth and has certain universality.
20. Multi-angle material selection fully reflects the personality characteristics of the characters, and the characters are full.