1. Composition starting with a poem

Plum blossoms "Only the east wind blows and the west wind blows. The leaves in the mountains are empty.

Only the plum blossoms cannot be blown away, they are still new. "White embraces new red." I praise the steadfast pines and cypresses, I praise the hedge chrysanthemums that brave the west wind, I praise the lotus's defiance of the mud, but I even more praise the plum blossoms' proud blooming in the snow.

When all the flowers wither, only the plum blossoms are vibrant. Facing the snowflakes flying all over the sky, we stood proudly in the biting cold wind. In the middle of winter, when the ground is frozen and the sky is cold, the plum blossoms blooming proud of the snow are so bright. The fragrance of the stock is refreshing.

The flowers are white with red inside, and the petals are smooth and transparent, as if they were carved from amber or jasper, with a bit of ice-cold elegance. Some are as bright as morning glow, some are as white as auspicious snow, and some are as green as jasper. Plum blossoms may bloom early or late. On the same plum tree, you can see various forms of blooming. Some are waiting shyly, with tender and lovely pink buds; some have just bloomed, and a few little bees have gotten in, greedily sucking the pollen; some have been blooming for a long time, with tender pink petals that are lovely; previously they were lively and lively The plum blossoms that once bloomed have now withered petals. When the wind blows the flowers and falls, you don't have to worry about the petals breaking. Plum blossoms are not delicate flowers. The colder it is, the more wind and snow pressure it has, the more energetic and delicate it blooms. There is a saying from the ancients: "The edge of a sword comes from sharpening, and the fragrance of plum blossoms comes from the bitter cold." What blows it is not the gentle spring breeze, but the biting cold wind; what nourishes it is not the cool and sweet rain, but the cold air. of ice and snow; what illuminates it is not the bright sunshine, but a ray of setting sun in the severe cold. Only a challenging life is a good life. It was a proud fragrance in the cold. Facing the fluttering white snow, she smiled even brighter. It never competes with the flowers for the bright spring, nor does it show off its beauty. It is proud and never arrogant. Every morning in the cold winter, a unique, elegant fragrance floats from the window.

It is not only its elegant and elegant demeanor that has made ancient and modern poets and painters praise it, but also its icy muscles and jade bones, and its lingering fragrance in the cold, which is regarded as the essence of the nation and is valued by the world. With its noble, strong and humble character, plum blossoms inspire people to work hard.

The color of plum blossoms is gorgeous but not demonic.

The fragrance of plum blossoms is quiet and elegant.

The appearance of plum blossoms is ancient and delicate.

Aren’t these our construction workers? No matter how cold or hot it is, whether it's windy or rainy, no matter how cold it is, they work hard at their jobs.

I want to learn plum blossoms, and I want to be a person like plum blossoms. 2. Beauty is everywhere (composition) Begin the opening paragraph with a poem

1. Get a head start. The most taboo thing about opening a paragraph is that it gives the impression of going off topic in one stroke. It tells the marking teacher directly that the author has not reviewed it. If the question is accurate, the score of the essay will be greatly reduced.

Please look at the beginnings of several essays from the 2004 Guangdong College Entrance Examination. Example 1 "Remembered by Language and Communication": "Look at the flowers blooming and falling, and the clouds rolling and relaxing.

The bright sunshine in early spring reveals the breath of summer; the lush green clothing in midsummer indicates autumn. The harvest is abundant; the abundant fruits of golden autumn indicate the bleakness of winter. As autumn turns to winter, everything in nature performs wonderfully.

How can we look forward to the early spring if we have not experienced the baptism of winter. Hope? Our human society is like the natural world. Without the connection of language and different lifestyles, how can we connect the world as a whole and build a bridge of communication? "This metaphor is inappropriate at the beginning. The metaphor section does not lay out the similarities very well. Why do you say this? Language and communication are the relationship between premise and result, but where does this relationship exist between "green clothing" and "harvest", "fruit" and "bleakness"? In particular, the rhetorical question "If you have not experienced the baptism of severe winter, how can you hope for the hope of early spring?" is even more inaccessible to the topic.

Example 2 "Soul Interaction": "The big trees never laugh at the weakness of the grass. Although the grass is weak, it adds to the greenness of the grassland; peonies never laugh at the simplicity of wild flowers. Although wild flowers are simple, But it brings infinite vitality to the earth. The reason why big trees, grass, peonies and wild flowers can live in harmony is because they have the same language, communicate with each other, and have spiritual interactions. "

When moving closer to the topic, this beginning also fails to identify the similarities and seems far-fetched. Example 3 "Language and Communication": "Language is a grass, communication is a green shade; language is a white cloud, communication is a cloud; language is a flower, communication is a sea of ??flowers."

This beginning treats "language" and "communication" as the relationship between the individual and the whole, and also fails to understand the connection between the two. The above three examples are all writing methods that use metaphors to break into the topic in order to increase literary talent. This is also the usual writing method of many candidates.

If the examinee does not have an accurate grasp of the topic and gets off track at the beginning, his or her score will be seriously affected. The following example illustrates the role of language more accurately and vividly.

Example 4 "Communication starts with language": "Language is a bridge, connecting this shore and the other shore; language is a waterfall, connecting streams and deep pools; language is a rainbow, connecting the sky and the earth. Only language can be accurately understood Only through expression can communication be successful.

If the language is wrong, it may cause unpredictable consequences. So how can the language be expressed accurately and the communication be successful? "So, is the opening paragraph good? The core issue still lies in reviewing the question; when reviewing the meaning of the question and solving the problem, first seek accuracy and then image.

Here are some ways to start a chapter. 1. Quoting famous sayings ① Asking what love is in the world can directly teach you whether life or death is mutual.

Yuan Haowen is indeed easy to ask and very good at asking questions. His question can be said to be a question for the ages.

Over the years, how many people have been lingering on this issue, and how many people have made the final answer in life after paying a huge price. But each family's words are as different as each person's face.

Xi Shi said: "Love is a tool..." ("Asking What Love Is in the World") ②In a church in the Middle Ages, a saint began his speech: "The reason why I became Saint, because I have seen through money, and what is mine belongs to everyone."

Time passes with a snap of the finger. In a prison across the century, a thief began his life monologue: "The reason why I became a thief is because I have seen through money, and what belongs to everyone is mine."

(" "The Saint and the Thief") ③ Rodin, the master of aesthetics, once said: "Beauty is everywhere. For our eyes, it is not a lack of beauty, but a lack of discovery." Today, inspired by this innovative scholar, I I want to say: "The answer is universal. For our brains, it is not a lack of thinking, but a lack of perspective."

Many times, we are confused by the incomprehension of the problem or wandering between multiple solutions. At an intersection, how to go becomes a mystery in your mind, and you are often indecisive and leaning left and right. At this time, it is necessary to think from a different angle, which will give you more chances of success. ("Spinning the Kaleidoscope") 2. Clever use of letter format ①Dear Grandpa Confucius: Hello! I am an ordinary descendant of yours, and I have the courage to write to you after thousands of years, not only to send you my respectful greetings, but also to urgently await your advice on several difficult questions.

("A Letter to Confucius") ②Hateful standard answer: When I see you, I am really filled with righteous indignation. So, driven by the flames of anger, I write this letter to denounce you.

The answers are rich and colorful, but you have to wear the "standard" hat. You know, just because of the word "standard", countless tragedies have happened.

The following are your three major crimes: ... ("A Letter to the "Standard Answer"") 3. Borrow the writing style of Zhanghui novel ① "It is said that the general trend of the world will be united if it is divided for a long time, and it will be divided if it is united for a long time." The era when the three kingdoms of Wei, Shu, and Wu were at odds with each other no longer exists. The rivers are moving eastward, and the waves have wiped out all the heroes of the past.

And Adou, the former heir to the Kingdom of Shu, has also become "lucky about Shu", and the world has become the world of the "Sima clan". ("Meeting of Heroes of the Three Kingdoms") ②The Juyi Hall in Liangshanbo is now brightly lit and full of people.

A hundred and eight heroes gathered here, and everyone was quarreling. What are they arguing about? It turns out that Liang Shanbo will be selecting tiger fighting heroes recently.

This honorary title is a big deal. Whoever wins it can take the second place in Liangshanbo. So all the heroes gathered here and argued endlessly.

("Who is the Tiger Fighting Hero") 4. Use rhetoric skillfully. Starting with rhetorical techniques can easily express the author's inner feelings and arouse the reader's interest in reading. For example, the beginning of "Spiritual Choice" in 2002 reads: "If you choose wings, you will embrace the entire blue sky; if you choose fins, you will kiss the vast blue sea; if you choose four legs, you will experience Boundless green forest.

But my choice is to start with a parallel sentence, the sentence structure is neat, the tone is sonorous, and the contrast between the front and the back not only highlights the topic but also sets up suspense, which encourages people to appreciate it. read.

In addition, the outstanding composition of the 2001 College Entrance Examination was "Integrity One by One."