1. There are various sentence patterns in using whole Chinese, and only the whole sentence is most popular with readers.
what is a whole sentence? A whole sentence is relative to a casual sentence, that is, a group of sentences with the same structure and roughly equal words. It is embodied in sentences that use rhetorical devices such as parallelism, duality, repetition, truthfulness, and loop.
its advantages are the harmonious beauty of phonology and the neat beauty of rhythm form, and at the same time, it makes the content richer and the meaning deeper. When using this form, we should pay attention not to pursue the form deliberately, but to focus on the profound implication of the content.
For example: ② Bees gather flowers and brew honey; Silkworms eat mulberry and spit silk; Cows eat grass and milk. As the soul of all things, people who have learned scientific knowledge should not just repeat the wisdom of their predecessors, but should create something.
(If only parallelism is used in a paragraph, it will inevitably appear dull and not profound enough. Because this paragraph lists two unquestionable common sense in real life first, it makes the latter view more acceptable.
In writing in the examination room, this method often leads to unexpected results.) ③ How can you not like to start? It's a pity that I haven't seen the towering mountains; I still regret seeing the majestic mountains and never seeing the vastness of the sea; I still regret seeing the vastness of the sea and never seeing the vastness of the desert; It's a pity to see the vastness of the desert and never see the mystery of the forest. There are endless scenery in the world, and I have a feeling of being young.
(I always lead the full text by asking questions, and then answer the reasons of "I like to start" with parallelism and truthfulness rhetoric. The language situation is smooth and advanced layer by layer, thus laying a strong foundation for concluding the sentence "I am in the mood of being young".) If we can concentrate our pen and ink and write a beginning or an end in the form of a whole sentence in the examination room composition, we will certainly light up the "literary talent" of the whole article. Then, we should develop it. 2. Embedding famous sentences and properly quoting famous aphorisms can enrich the language of the article and enhance the expression effect of the article. It is impossible for the article to be full of words, but if you can quote some famous aphorisms that shine with wisdom and contain rich ideological connotations, it will often greatly add color to the article.
For example: ① I will choose to give up and find a more suitable goal. Since I can't find a "prosperous land of flowers and willows, a gentle and rich country", why not find a pure land of "moonlight in its groves of pine and stones of crystal in its brooks"? Since we can't enjoy the beautiful scenery of "the bright moon is born in the tide", why not cook a pot of chrysanthemum wine and invite Sparse Star to drink it? 2 I like Li Qingzhao, who is full of heroic spirit in graceful manners. Although "people are thinner than yellow flowers", she also sings Xiang Yu, who refuses to cross Jiangdong. I like Su Shi, who has extraordinary talent and is calm in the face of shock. Although he longs for the great cause of "heroic posture and heroic hair", he has infiltrated the natural harmony of "light makeup and heavy makeup"; I like Lu Xun, who is jealous of evil and has a soft heart. Although he is "pointing at a thousand fingers", he also has the deep affection of "bowing his head and being a willing ox". (3) Choose fraternity, that is, choose to cherish feelings.
all the way through life, we care about our feelings everywhere. Affection, friendship and love all make life full of emotion and beauty.
"the thread in the hands of a fond-hearted mother, makes clothes for the body of her wayward boy" is the love of family; "and yet, while China holds our friendship, and heaven remains our neighbourhood" is the concern of friendship; "When * * * cut the candle at the west window, but talk about evening rain" is the missing of love. Every life can't go out of the range of emotions. It is those emotions that make people live well, work hard and cherish their own minutes.
cherish emotions and make life more touching and memorable. The above three fragments selected from the excellent compositions of the college entrance examination have all taken famous ancient poems and sentences, which have achieved twice the result with half the effort in expression, and at the same time, they have shown their own cultural heritage to the marking teacher.
If the language and words from the author's pen are compared to a crown, then the proper epigrams are like pearls embedded in the crown. Above the examination room, candidates who have accumulated rich ancient poems and famous sentences in their chests should not show their talents with this! Third, turn virtual into real.
the purpose of turning virtual into real is to make abstract and implicit conceptual words concrete, vivid, knowable and sensible. What is happiness? Happiness is the breeze blowing head-on when you open the window in the early summer morning.
It's the peace of mind when you sit alone in a corner listening to songs, and the gratitude when you take over your job from your mother. Happiness is always around you.
② Friendship is a beneficial savings in life. This savings, is to give everything to help in trouble, is harsh advice on the wrong road, is a sincere help when you fall, is a spring breeze to wipe away tears when you are in pain.
③ chic is a beautiful scenery that adheres to everyone's mind. The connotation of chic is all-encompassing. "Picking chrysanthemums under the hedge" is a kind of pure chic, "better than walking around" is a kind of joyful chic, and "pointing out the mountains and inspiring words" is a kind of heroic chic.
bling and heavy makeup are not chic; Blindly following the crowd, chasing fashion is not chic; It is not chic to talk nonsense and be glib; It's not chic to brag and compare with each other. "Happiness", "friendship" and "chic" in the above paragraphs are abstract nouns. If the concepts are simply explained, it is difficult for readers to have a buzz. However, the author can easily arouse the readers' perceptual experience and make people have rich associations by interpreting specific events in life.
using this method to write time, ideals, beliefs, self-esteem, self-improvement ... can't they all be vivid and touching? Fourth, be skillful in application. China culture has a long history, leaving many famous sayings.
Poems and songs, movies and TV shows, song advertisements, and many sentences are familiar. If famous sentences are transformed and used, old bottles are filled with new wine, and if you can use them easily in your composition and embed them in your own articles, you will often achieve the ideal effect of turning decay into magic.
① Some students satirize some abnormal phenomena today, and change the first sentence of My Humble Room Inscription to "If the score is not high, you have the right to have sex; There are not many, and money is spiritual. " A student preparing for the college entrance examination has to do an examination paper of 11.35 kilograms a semester, so he can only think about taking a floppy disk to surf in class.
③ "Cloned sheep has no father or mother. Celebrities publish books, which is a mess.
Tell you a secret: XXX actually cloned the signature of parents! "Little radio" announced loudly. " (4) a real warrior, dare to face the miserable score and face the severe criticism.
⑤ The blood can flow and the head can be broken. Never mess up your hair.
the above sentences are witty and quiet. 2. How to make the composition literary
1. Image is the key to literary talent.
literary talent can be brilliant just by stacking images. For example, in Ma Zhiyuan's "Tianjingsha", if you decide to write prose, this is a good method, and it is often refreshing to use it at the beginning. 2. If you decide to write an argumentative paper, parallelism is the most immediate way to make the article have momentum. For example, how many talented people's brows have been wrinkled by the wind in the Tang Dynasty? How many beautiful women's eyes were wet by the rain in the Song Dynasty? How many literati's cheeks paled in the snow of the Ming Dynasty? Chinese culture with ten thousand customs is so worrying ... (Hehe, this example was written by myself, so don't take it amiss) 3. Argumentative essay in prose language.
Maybe you will wonder why the above example is classified as an argumentative essay when it is clearly written in prose. In fact, writing argumentative essays in prose language is the easiest way to get high marks, because it has prose language, beautiful literary style and rigorous structure of argumentative essays, so that teachers can see it at a glance. 4. Accumulate some typical but not rampant examples. Don't write a composition just because Tao Yuanming didn't bend his back for five buckets of rice, Li Bai didn't meet his talent, Su Shi was demoted with a broad mind, and Edison failed to invent the light bulb n times. This rotten material will deduct points for your article when the teacher is tired of aesthetics. 3. How to make the composition literary
1. Image is the key to literary talent. The accumulation of images alone can also be brilliant.
For example, Ma Zhiyuan's "Tianjingsha", a dead vine, an old tree, a faint crow, a small bridge and a flowing water family
If you decide to write prose, it is often refreshing to use it at the beginning
2. If you decide to write argumentative essays, parallelism is the most immediate way to make the articles have momentum
For example,
How many talented people's brows have been wrinkled by the wind in the Tang Dynasty?
How many beauties' eyes were wet by the rain in Song Dynasty?
How many literati's cheeks have been paled by the snow in the Ming Dynasty?
Chinese culture with ten thousand customs is so worrying ...
(Hehe, this example was written by myself, so don't take it personally)
3. Argumentative essay in prose language. Perhaps you will wonder why the above example is classified as an argumentative essay when it is clearly written in prose.
In fact, writing an argumentative essay in prose language is the easiest way to get high marks, because it is prose language, beautiful in literary style, and has a rigorous structure of argumentative essay, so that teachers can see it at a glance.
4. Accumulate some typical but not rampant examples. Don't write a composition just because Tao Yuanming didn't bend his back for five buckets of rice, Li Bai didn't meet his talent, Su Shi was demoted with a broad mind, and Edison failed to invent the light bulb n times. This kind of worn-out material will deduct points for your article when the teacher is tired of aesthetics. 4. How to write a composition with literary grace and vividness
1. Observe. Observe the world around you carefully. Pay attention to every detail. 2. Read. The more you read, the better. Read famous classics and all kinds of words. Read not only what you like, but also what you don't agree with. If you want to criticize a person's work, you must read it first. Only when you know it can you have the right to speak. 3. Excerpt. You must have the habit of excerpting when reading. When you see the sentences and paragraphs that you think are good, which can arouse your excitement or inspire you, copy them in a fixed place. 4. Recite. Good poems, sentences and articles should be recited. Recite is a process of accumulation. 5. Articles should be ready. That is to say, writing articles should have momentum, and the next writing is like a river. There must be ups and downs, especially the best twists and turns of some stories, which give people an unexpected feeling. Only in this way can readers be attracted to read on. 6. The words used in the article should be considered more to see which is the most suitable. Some well-written articles seem to be plain at first glance, and you seem to think that you can write them. But if you study them carefully, you will find that, In fact, behind the plain, there is the author's deliberation. Just like the highest state of women's makeup is to make it natural, as if there is no makeup. Writing an article is also not by piling up gorgeous rhetoric. It is to carefully choose words without missing a trace. 7. Writing an article must have feelings. Writing an article shows your heart to a great extent. If an article can't even be moved by the author himself, How can you touch others? Readers can communicate with the author through the author's words, so I write my heart by hand. When you write something with your heart, you will find that it is completely different from what you usually write to cope with or something else. 8. Write more articles. No matter how much you say, it is better to write by hand. 5. How to write a composition with literary grace
First of all, when writing a composition, you should have a clear point of view and clear thinking. Don't think that literary grace means changing sentence patterns and using several rhetorical devices, but realize that language and thought are inseparable. There is no thought that is divorced from language, and there is no language that does not express any thought. With a clear point of view and clear thinking, language expression will be smooth; Grasping the characteristics of things, language expression will be more vivid. Therefore, to make an article literary, we must first have a clear point of view and clear thinking. Secondly, temper the language and pay attention to the literariness of the language. Confucius said: words without words are not far away. He believed that speaking and writing articles should not only be thoughtful, but also literary, and articles will not be passed down. It can be seen that a good article should not only be thoughtful but also rich in literature. For middle school students who are not proficient in language skills, it is particularly important to temper the language and pay attention to the literariness of the language. Here are several ways to make the article rich in literary talent: Method 1: Temper the language and pursue the vivid image of the language. To make your composition reflect the vivid characteristics of words, you must have a direction and purpose in the process of accumulating words, that is, what words should we accumulate in the composition. So what words should you use in the composition? In a nutshell, it is fresh, lively, not old-fashioned, not rigid, full of vitality, expressive and infectious words, that is, vivid words. Write a human narrative, seeking its vividness; Expressing one's feelings and aspirations, and seeking for the smoothness of his sense. ① Using vivid words. The vividness of language is often closely connected with the vividness, just like the shape and shadow. In other words, a vivid language is often a vivid language, whose main feature is architectural beauty, that is, three-dimensional sense. It can mobilize readers' vivid thinking and arouse readers' rich imagination and association. It can give people a feeling of being there, seeing things and hearing their voices. For example, a monk knocks on the door under the moon, and the spring breeze is green. The green in Jiang Nanan (adjectives are used flexibly as verbs). Because of the vivid and appropriate use of the two words, the work has become a masterpiece that has been passed down through the ages. In shaping the characters, action description is an important means to portray their characters. The key to describing their behavior is verbs. It can accurately reflect the subtle differences between characters' actions, show the characters' personality characteristics, convey the author's love and hate feelings, make the characters vivid and give people a sense of relief. Therefore, the verbs used in writing should be accurate, vivid and sensible, reflect the characters' personality characteristics and contain the author's love and hate feelings. ② Use musical words. The so-called musical beauty means that when the author writes, By taking advantage of the tonal characteristics such as the change of Chinese characters' levelness and the harmony of phonology, a kind of melodic beauty is formed, which makes the article full of sound and emotion, beautiful in sound and meaning. In the process of writing, attention should be paid to tone collocation, coordination of rhyme, skillful use of overlapping words, and emphasis on rhythm, etc. For example, the moonlight is like running water, quietly pouring on this leaf and flower. Thin green fog floats in the lotus pond, and leaves and flowers seem to be there. The moonlight is enlivened with a dynamic verb, and the scene of Yue Hui shining like a torrent is written. It depicts the moonlight rising slowly from bottom to top, spreading slowly and permeating the lotus pond. Washing the cage turns a static scene into a moving scene, vividly depicting the hazy beauty of the moonlight. Method 2: Choose sentence patterns to strive for the richness and diversity of language. Different sentence patterns can be used to express the same meaning. It can also be expressed in several different sentence patterns. The mood and emotional appeal change accordingly, so the language style and expression effect are different. For example, the whole sentence (such as four-character case, etc.) makes the sentence neat, the scattered sentence makes the text flow, and the article is lively and interesting by using spoken English skillfully. Using classical Chinese skillfully, the article has its own quaint style. The so-called flexible sentence pattern refers to the author's writing according to the characteristics of the language environment and the needs of expression.