How to deduct the topic from the exam-oriented composition?
First of all, learn to break the question at the beginning.
If you interrupt the title (or topic) in one sentence at the beginning of the exam-oriented composition, it will show the relationship between your article and the title (topic), showing that you are writing closely around the center. If there is a lack of questions at the beginning, and the marking teacher is too far away to find information closely related to the center (topic), then there will be suspicion that the topic is not tight or digression.
You are writing a narrative. If you break the title of the article at the beginning, the marking teacher will follow your "signpost" and know that your next story is written under the guidance of this "signpost". For example, Mr. Zhu Ziqing's "Back" begins with the title: "I haven't seen my father for more than two years, and the most unforgettable thing is his back." Readers will soon understand that what is to be written below is the father's back, which is closely related to the topic of "back" and breaks the following essence. Another example is a student's exercise "Warm Current". The first sentence is: "I live in such a circle every day: many warm currents form a whirlpool around me." The reader immediately understood that the following are some happy experiences around the author. The warm current is not a warm and humid airflow in nature, but a warm current full of love between people, which is closely related to the topic and also shows lofty intentions. One sentence leads to the full text.
If you write an argumentative essay, you should stick to the topic (or topic) at the beginning and put forward your own central argument. Of course, the argument can be put forward anywhere in the article, but in order to avoid the suspicion of unclear views and the convenience of mastering the materials, it is better to put it at the beginning. Let the commentator know what is the center of your discussion. For example, a candidate in Shanghai wrote an argumentative essay entitled "Opportunity". A few simple words at the beginning lead to the central argument: "Seize the opportunity and face the challenge, and victory is just around the corner." The marking teacher understood this central argument, followed by the explanatory process of "seizing opportunities will lead to success", the discussion process of "how to seize opportunities and how not to be afraid of risks and failures", and finally the process of integrating with practice, which also felt logical and reasonable.
Secondly, we should learn to answer questions halfway.
In the process of writing, at the beginning or end of each material plate, we should try our best to respond to the title, indicating the relationship between the material and the title (or center). For example, at 200 1, a candidate's composition "Intersection is Honesty" consists of four sections: joy, anger, sadness and joy. After the brief narration of each section, there is a response to the title. For example, in the section "Happiness", the author tells the story of happiness due to honesty and replies to the title (or topic): "Very well, honesty makes me happy!" Sticking to the title and topic as well as the quick subtitle will give the marking teacher a feeling that the candidates are writing closely around the center (topic).
Finally, learn to ask questions at the end.
The end of the article is a key part. As many readers know, the meaning of the article will be so clear only after reading the last paragraph, sentence and word. The marking teacher reads very fast, and the focus of intensive reading is not only the beginning transition, but also the end. From the writing point of view, the ending can make the theme of the article more clear and the center more prominent. Therefore, the question at the end is more important than the question at the beginning and the answer in the middle. Mr. Zhu Ziqing sighed at the end of the back: "Alas! I don't know when I can see him again! " I miss my father very much. After "I hate hens" and "I changed my mind", Mr. Lao She's article "Hens" used a sentence: "I dare not hate hens anymore." Praise the greatness of hens. Mr. Yang Shuo said at the end of "Litchi Honey": "I dreamed that I became a little bee." Expressed the feelings of loving the working people. These are all examples of famous people solving problems. Students can learn to imitate and write their own wonderful pen at the end of the article.
2. How to write a good ending of a composition The ancients once compared the ending of an article to a "leopard tail", meaning that a good ending should be short and powerful, making the finishing point. How to write the end of an article? You can try the following six endings: 1 Natural ending, simply natural ending, that is, ending the article with the result of the event. After the event is described, the article naturally ends. For example, the end of flying over Luding Bridge: "The main force of the Red Army crossed the natural barrier Dadu River and went to the forefront of the Anti-Japanese War." No sooner had the author finished what he wanted to say than the article came to an abrupt end, giving people a relaxed and happy ending. One of the most common ending methods in writing is to respond to the topic at the end, which is what we usually call the ending point. For example, at the end of the lesson "If there were no dust", how monotonous nature would be if there were no dust in the atmosphere! Another example is the ending of "Beautiful Xiaoxing 'anling", "Xiaoxing 'anling is a huge treasure house and a beautiful garden". This ending not only reveals the meaning of the topic, points out the center of the article, but also enhances the appeal of the article, and the structure of the article will be very rigorous. Third, the question-based ending, expressing the feelings of writing an article in the form of questions, is also a good way to end. For example, ending with rhetorical questions or questions has the functions of inspiration, infection, emphasis and affirmation, with the aim of expressing true feelings. This way of ending is suitable for narratives that focus on people or things. Fourth, quoting the end is simply quoting a poem at the end, or summing up the full text with famous sayings and epigrams, which is a very eye-catching ending. For example, the ending of Guilin Landscape says, "It's really a boat trip." People travel in the world of painting. The ending is concise and powerful, which can inspire readers from the quotation at the end. 5. Heuristic ending with endless aftertaste. Heuristic ending is to leave some kind of education or inspiration for readers at the end of the article, which makes people feel that "words are endless." For example, at the end of the lesson "Pearl Bird", "Trust often creates a beautiful realm." You can use metaphors and metaphors at the end of writing an article. Stick to the theme, write inspiring or inspiring words, and leave room for readers to think. 6. Summary ending, highlighting the center Summary ending is to summarize the full text at the end of the article to highlight the center. For example, at the end of Prairie: "The sun has set in the west, and no one will leave. Yes! The people of Mongolia and China are deeply tolerant of each other, and the world is green and the sun is setting! " The ending of "Planting Flowers": "There are joys and sorrows, smiles and tears, flowers and fruits, and fragrant colors. It requires both labor and knowledge. This is the fun of growing flowers. " This ending allows readers to quickly grasp the center of the article, and the author's writing purpose and the central idea of the article are clear at a glance. There are not only six ways to write the end of the article. If you can read excellent articles carefully, you will find more and more.
3. Write a composition at the beginning or end (be sure to deduct the topic) urgent ~ ~ ~ Beginning: Oh! Old innocence can be described as the king of changing faces: at first it was a sunny day, and soon it was overcast. Thousands of grenades fell from the sky, flowers exploded on the ground, and our sleeves were wet, which was terrible! But even this would not be enough We didn't finish eating when we got up, which led us to soak in soup temporarily to prepare for the spring sports meeting that had been planned for a week. I gnashed my teeth with anger and secretly said, "I hate it, so I made psychological preparations all night, but it didn't come in handy!" " "However, it comes at the right time. The old class came into the classroom with students' plaintive voices, put down their notebooks and paused and said, "Students, the school decided to have a holiday because it rained too hard." "wow! Long live the teacher! "We are ecstatic. I estimate that if the old class is not in the classroom, the roof of our class will not be needed. I packed my homework into my schoolbag at nearly the speed of light, rushed out of the classroom like crazy and got on the train home. After a period of inhuman crowded torture, thankfully, I finally came back alive. End: Unexpectedly, this is the beginning of another nightmare: I didn't know my brother and sister had a holiday until I got home. Well, at two o'clock sharp, I turned on the TV in a hurry, but it just ignored me and still had its big dream of spring and autumn. I was so angry that I wanted to smash it. Before I let it out, my brother rushed in from the door and said, "Sister, adults say that there will be a power outage at home for two days because of the heavy rain!" "When I heard this, I was startled and fell on the bed and shouted," Oh, dear! Oh, my God! My "fairy couple"! Help! ! ! "It's raining, wow, it's raining.
4. How to write a warm composition about fatherly love with a caption at the end for your reference and modify it yourself 1. Some people say that father's love is a mountain; Some people say that fatherly love is a quilt, but for me, it is a warmth that has never been seen before.
I remember getting up early that morning and finding my head dizzy and I had no appetite for dinner. Grandma saw that I was wrong and said, "Are you suffering from heatstroke?" "Maybe." I was calm when I said this, but my grandmother was like a rabbit discovered by the enemy. She was at a loss and scratched me in a hurry, and the result was particularly red.
I saw it. Call my father. My father heard this and hurried home. He saw me lying in bed in pain, my rosy cheeks turned pale, and my neat hair became messy now. How haggard he is at this time! Let me heartache! "I'll take you to the hospital right away!" Dad, talk quickly.
In the hospital, I was found to be suffering from heatstroke due to doing warm-up exercises in the sun, and I had to go through many examinations. These days in the hospital, my father bought me medicine and books, amused me when I was bored, and comforted me when I had an injection in pain.
At this time, I think he cares more about me than my mother, which makes me feel how happy and warm it is to have such a father. Once upon a time, I thought my father didn't love me because he scolded me; Once upon a time, I thought my father didn't care about me because he ignored me.
Without him, would I be today? How can I go to school now without him? How can I eat and drink now without him? Dad, thank you for everything. Whenever the sun sets, the stars shine at dusk; I looked at the stars and the light of mercury flowing in the crescent moon.
My father and I, riding the night breeze, walked leisurely on the winding road. The afterglow of the sun shone obliquely on my father, and a beautiful silhouette was immediately reflected on the ground.
In this quiet moment, I will slowly count the past. The days with my father.
You know, it is difficult to walk with my father in the sunset. Those happy rosaries are cultivated in the fire of love and exude fragrance from time to time.
"Dad, let's go on the swing, shall we?" I make unreasonable demands, regardless of occasion, place or status. Father was about to speak, but he shut up again. He's obviously scared.
Looking at his deep pool-like eyes, I seem to see a fish with a broken tail falling into a deep pool, and I can't find my way; Old moss is spreading. I opened my mouth to take back what I had just said, but I was still silent.
People are quiet, and the stars are shining in the windows far and near. "all right! Play with you once. "
Father finally compromised. Although I am not used to it, he is willing to match his love for my "willfulness".
I took my father's big old hand and walked to the swing, which was my childhood paradise with my father, but I never came after I grew up. When I was ready to sit on the swing, my father beat me to it.
It turns out that dad loves to play more than I do. However, my father picked up the paper in his pocket and carefully wiped the dust. He sat down first to see if it was broken and tied a knot in a slightly loose place.
I sat on it carefully and my father gave me a gentle push. I think it's too low, so I want to be higher. My father just answered softly, which added a little strength to me.
Before long, I began to cry for the feeling of flying again. Father stopped and said with extremely gentle expectation, "that's too dangerous." It is not good to fall. "
As if nothing had happened, I confidently said "no" to my father. My father is still uneasy, and I see fear in his anxious eyes.
Because I fell once, I fell on my feet. In order not to hurt me, he tied me up with branches and ropes, like a seat belt.
At the moment of swinging, I saw the last sunset, emitting red afterglow in the soft shade of the garden. In a twinkling, it was obviously dark around.
But by my side, there is a warm sun, which is giving me a warm and moving breath like music. Father always gives people sunshine-like warmth, even in the dark, there is a glimmer of light.
Father's love is like the grandeur of "flying down thousands of feet" and the vicissitudes of "old Brawly's nocturnal journey". In the polishing of time and the changes of the world, it is always destined to be a long and dark emotion.
In addition to admirable maternal love, there are actually many touching loves in the world, such as the equally beautiful fatherly love. Father's love is not as meticulous as mother's love, which often makes us forget the love they have been accompanying. Father's love is an ordinary song, which permeates every season of our lives.
After reading this article, we were all deeply moved by the sincerity between the author and father. The author was very naughty when he was a child. In order to get him into the habit of reading at night, his father urges him every night. Once again, because he was so tired that his father fell asleep, he pressed a wedge to remind himself, but for fear of disturbing the children, he sat there motionless until his back ached.
After I entered middle school, my father took pains to send him meals regardless of the cold and heat, but I failed in the college entrance examination because I fell in love with Muse. In order to fulfill my literary dream, I chose the military camp. When I got there, all the work was menial. Just when I wanted to escape, a letter from my father kept me going. Finally, I was admitted to the journalism department of a political college. It was my father's deep love and earnest heart that made the author know how to persist and work hard, and finally ushered in hope.
I remembered the time before, when we went out for a trip, and I accidentally threw up on my father because of motion sickness. He threw his clothes aside and let me lie on his lap. Unconsciously, I slept for a long time. After waking up, I saw my father sitting there motionless for fear of waking me up. Many people say that maternal love is great, but how many people can really appreciate fatherly love? Motherly love is delicate, and fatherly love is serious. Father's love is as great as mother's love, as selfless, asking for nothing in return, but expressing it in different ways.
When you personally feel the father's love, you will feel the warmth of the father's love and be moved in your heart. Hope to adopt, O(∩_∩)O Thank you.
5. How to write a general composition? Divide the writing at the beginning of the composition into 1. Deduct the topic. That is, write the keywords or words in the topic into the first paragraph. (point) 2. Positioning. On the one hand, it mainly refers to determining the scope of writing, that is, determining what to write in this article. On the other hand, it also refers to the completion of emotional positioning. Is it a compliment or a disgrace? Express your point of view. 3. The quotation is as follows. Exactly. Why do you say that? What is the specific situation? Lead to the following. For example, the middle of "Climbing Tiandu Peak" and "Rich Xisha Islands" is written as 1. Write after the beginning. Because the beginning needs "deduction", of course, it will not digress. It's very important to keep the composition on topic. Example "Summer Palace" (2) is written in an orderly way in a certain order. Example: chronological order, spatial order, emotional order. 3) detailed focus is written in great detail. Which example do you think is the most typical and convincing? Just focus on this paragraph and write it in detail at the end of the composition. 000000000055 Reuse the first keyword. 2. Write down your feelings. That is, write your own feelings, feelings or sentiments (only one of them). Writing "feelings" at the end can clarify or sublimate your point of view. Example: Summer Palace, charming Zhangjiajie, race against time, green. What if I can't find the right words to express myself? When writing a composition, students often encounter such a situation. When describing something or someone, they just can't find the right words to express it, despite their good intentions. What should I do? First, extensive reading. Extensive reading is to read more extracurricular books and learn the "nutrition" of words from them. Second, we should focus on reciting. For a good work, we should be familiar with it. We should recite good words and sentences, especially beautiful chapters. The function of recitation is to thoroughly understand the original content, accumulate vocabulary, master word collocation, and facilitate reference or reference when writing. Zhu Ziqing's Spring is "red as fire, pink as chardonnay, and white as snow": "hair like cattle, needle like silk". Many students use for reference or application in their compositions, which is obviously the result of familiar reading or reciting. Thirdly, after careful analysis, extensive reading and key recitation, they must master the skills of using words.