The so-called adaptation is to intercept a certain part of poetry and directly turn it into our composition language or interpret the artistic conception of poetry in our own language. For example, the following paragraphs: optimism is a line of egrets, heading straight for the blue sky; Optimism is 10 thousand white sails beside the shipwreck; Optimism is the lush grass floating in the wind on Nautilus Island. Optimism is something that turns into spring mud to protect flowers.
-Topic "Optimism" fragment In the numb air where everyone is intoxicated, you choose to be awake; In the evil world where everyone is turbid, you choose innocence. Fade the gaudy clothes, and you choose the clothes with flounces; Out of Beijing, you chose the waves of the Miluo River.
-The fragment of "Facing the Choice" comes from the sincere choice of the heart, so that the lush grass on Nautilus Island can be outlined, the breeze and bright moon on the 24 th Bridge can be touched, and the sunshine and purple smoke between the incense burner peaks can be rendered. -"A Good Time" fragment Yes, without glitz and carving, we are like a hibiscus from clear water, emitting charming fragrance.
-"Simple" fragment A cloud is floating in the sky, faint and free, you feel good, this is the language; The rising sun shines brightly, and you feel full of vitality. This is Chinese. The bloody sunset reflects half the sky, which makes people feel infinite nostalgia. Don't forget that this is also a language. Language is the majestic Kunlun Mountain, the dew that has refused to drip on the grass for a long time, and the peony that is the old capital of the ancient city. Language is the silent Leng Yue, the quiet lotus pond, the fishing boat in the monstrous white waves outside Qinhuangdao, the egret in the blue sky, the 10,000-point white sail beside the sunken ship, and the bright future of the mountain after heavy water recovery.
-The words "Cold fragrance flies away" do not directly quote the poems of Du Fu, Liu Yuxi and Gong Zizhen. Instead, the image in the poem is regarded as an integral part of his composition language or the author boldly describes the artistic conception of the poem in his own language. This kind of passage reminds us of the artistic conception of poetry, and brings us into the poetic artistic conception of deja vu, but we can also feel the composer's voice.
It can also increase the literary grace of the article. Of course, the most important thing in writing such a passage is the author's ability to analyze, comprehend and summarize poetry.
If you don't understand the artistic conception of poetry and apply it casually, you will "draw a tiger and not be a dog." The first is to imitate poetry.
This method is that the author writes another poem in the same form in his own language according to the form of the poem, so as to express his feelings. For example, there is a passage in an essay entitled "Home": I dreamed of coming home suddenly at night, watery and busy fishing.
There is no sound everywhere, only the fragrance is cool. It is expected that when I feel homesick every year, on a moonlit night, in Weixi.
This composition is a good imitation of Su Shi's poem "Jiangchengzi": I dreamed at night and suddenly went home, dressed up at the Xiao Xuan window. Care for each other without words, only a thousand lines of tears
It is expected that the heartbroken place will be broken every year, and the moonlit night will be short and rambling. Su Shi's "Jiangchengzi" expressed his thoughts on his dead wife, recalled the good old days and looked at the bleak dwarf pine mountain. Only he is "inseparable", how can he not make people think a lot and make people angry! And the yearning for "home" is not the case? Compared with the "four silences" around us, the busy figures and lively labor scenes of hometown folks only have infinite thoughts! It can be said that imitation poetry can not only guide readers into the artistic conception of the original poem with the help of poetry, but also show the author's ability to "apply what he has learned" in writing and make the article brilliant.
Not only classical poetry is suitable for imitation, but modern poetry can also be borrowed from "attacking jade". For example, the fragment of the composition "Responsibility" is copied from the poet Haizi's "Spring Flowers Face the Sea", and the end of the article is beautifully written: The poet Haizi said in "Spring Flowers Face the Sea": From tomorrow on, be a happy person | Feed horses, chop firewood and travel around the world | From tomorrow on, care about food and vegetables | Me.
Facing the responsibility, I want to say: from today, be a responsible person, faithfully perform your duties, stick to your post, and care for the environment and others from today. I have a sincere heart, face the responsibility, and the seasons are like spring. Some people say that if your article can't shine like the sun, let it shine like the moon; If you can't have the brilliance of the moon, let it shine like a star; If you can't shine like a star, at least raise a few fireflies to illuminate the article.
I think poetry is a firefly. If you make good use of this song "Firefly", I believe it will definitely add gorgeous colors to your composition, illuminate your profound cultural thinking and illuminate the "tired" eyes of reviewers. [Recommended reason] Wonderful language and profound cultural thinking are the main reasons for the success of most articles. Clever use of poetry in composition can increase literary talent, improve composition scores and even hold high traditional excellent culture.
The composition of the college entrance examination is wonderful. The ancients often said that "there are poems in the belly". Classical poetry contains profound cultural background and emotional resources. The clever use of ancient poetry can activate language expression, highlight the background of the article, and make the article exude a strong bookish and cultural atmosphere.
This is undoubtedly an effective and convenient way to "shine" and "innovate" the college entrance examination composition. Then, how to use ancient poetry to add luster to your college entrance examination composition? First, the wonderful quotations of famous ancient poems and sentences are the most common way in college entrance examination composition. Quotation can be divided into partial quotation and full quotation.
1. Local quotation refers to quoting famous sentences of classical poetry in local positions of an article, such as the title, inscription, opening paragraph and ending of the article. These places are located in prominent positions, which are easy to attract readers' attention and leave a good impression on readers.
Quoting ancient poems and famous sentences in the title of an article can make the title look elegant and rich in literary talent.
2. Make the finishing point with the composition topic of the poem. How about using the word "love" skillfully? (In 2003, the college entrance examination graded the composition topic, using Li Qingzhao's poem "Slow Voice". ) Busy, busy, and helpless (2004 Shanghai college entrance examination full marks composition topic. How to use the poem "Gaixia Song" by Xiang Yu) How to get the word "worry" and how to use poetry as an inscription, and guide the whole text to use poetry as an inscription, and guide the inscription of the famous college entrance examination "Eight Diagrams Landscape" in 2004: "Mountain, calm and sincere; Water, agility and wisdom.
The benevolent Leshan, the wise happy water. Inscription for the masterpiece "Alone on the Tall Building": "Last night, the west wind withered the green trees, and I went to the tall building alone and looked at the horizon. At the beginning of the poem, "The Color of Life" wrote: "I am afraid that the ship will not move and there will be many worries. "This is the color of Li Qingzhao's life, gloomy and dreary." The river does not return, and the waves are exhausted. "This is the color of Su Shi's life, bold and ultra-broad.
What color is my life? The author begins with the famous sentences of Li Qingzhao and Su Shi, two poets in the Song Dynasty, and tells us two completely different life trajectories vividly and concisely. Although the famous sentences are short, they are subtle and profound, very general, which strongly shocks readers' hearts and inspires people to make correct choices about their own life path.
Starting with a poem, the pronunciation begins with a poem, and the pronunciation "Watch your actions with your eyes" (a masterpiece of Fujian college entrance examination in 2003) reads: enter the colorful letters and pick up the footsteps of the pioneers; Open the fallen photo album and collect the sincere tears of history. Who lamented that "I don't know the true face of Lushan Mountain, but I am only in this mountain"? Who lamented that "petals flow like tears, and lonely birds sing their sorrows"? All the joys and sorrows seem to be telling: please continue reading! The author used Su Shi's Xilin Wall Topic and Du Fu's Spring Hope.
Write scenery with poetry, beautiful realm, beautiful realm. The flowers in the eyes of the Tang people are charming and fierce. "At sunrise, the flowers in the river are red, and in spring, the river is as green as blue."
The beautiful scenery there is colorful. The flowers in the eyes of the Song people made the Iraqis haggard. "I asked the flowers in tears and flew over the swing."
The candles there are all red makeup, red, thin, green and beautiful. Flowers in the eyes of the Qing people, wandering water, "Flowers wither and flowers fly all over the sky, and who has pity when the fragrance dies?" The flowers there are tender, moving and beautiful.
The above passage is selected from the composition "Flowers are better this year than last year" written by a college entrance examination champion in Liaoning Province. This paper extracts Daiyu's poems from Bai Juyi's Memories of Jiangnan, Ouyang Xiu's Love Flowers and A Dream of Red Mansions, and closely follows the theme, presenting three different pictures, some sad and some desolate. The flowers of the past and the flowers of today set each other off, and the historical scenes set each other off, which laid a good foundation for expressing the theme. Moreover, it is beyond the concept to discuss with poetry, to discuss with poetry, and to look at things from the perspective of onlookers.
Be swayed by considerations of gain and loss, and know your heartbeat. It means "don't be shocked by honor or disgrace, look at the flowers before the court; I have no intention of staying, and I have no intention of staying. I just look up at the clouds in the sky, which is the power of "Taishan collapses in front and does not move".
We can only realize that our mentality is the most accurate mirror if we infer that the beauty and ugliness of things can't be offset by our own feelings. Gain an optimism from "a crane in the clear sky rows clouds and leads poetry to the blue sky", and read a self-confidence from "not afraid of floating clouds to cover your eyes, just to climb high and look far"; With a look on the sidelines, it has become a ray of affection in the hearts of philosophers and an extraordinary height that future generations expect! What is happiness? There is a saying: "Happiness is the concern of' she sews carefully, she makes up thoroughly, and she is afraid that the delay will make him go home late', and it is the harvest of' a drop in the spring, a million kinds of Qiu Lai'; Happiness is a wish of' wishing people a long life * * *' and a memory of' always remembering the sunset in Xiting and not knowing how to get home'; Happiness is the pursuit of "I don't regret that my belt is getting wider and wider, and I am haggard for Iraq."
To express our love for the great rivers and mountains of the motherland, we can use such a set of sentences: "I love Lushan Waterfall," flying down to thousands of feet, and it is suspected that the Milky Way has set for nine days "; I like "Caiyun Lake"? My mind is free and easy, and birds fly back and forth in front of my nervous eyes. "Taishan pole; I love the Yellow River meandering into the sea, never to return; I love the Three Gorges of the Yangtze River, and the apes on both sides of the Yangtze River can't stop crying. I love the simplicity of "the bright moon in Qin dynasty and the local customs in Han dynasty"; I love the beautiful south of the Yangtze River, where "the sunrise makes the river blossom better than the fire". Turn poems into sentences, poems into sentences, poems into paragraphs, poems into paragraphs. For example, I like the poem "Who has never lived or died since ancient times, kept the heart of Dan and followed the history of history".
This expression is too straightforward and makes people feel a little naive. The second level is that there is some explanation (or explanation) behind the poem.
For example, "life is' where petals have fallen like tears, where birds surprise me and hate me'". (2) "Life is the unremitting pursuit of' clothing is rich without regret and haggard for Iraq'."
Such as: ① Beauty is the brightness of "a line of egrets ascending to heaven", ② Beauty is the luxuriance of "a nest of herbs with Parrot Island", ③ Beauty is the selflessness of "turning into spring mud to protect flowers more". For example, missing is Su Shi's "Suddenly returning from a dream at night, caring for each other without words, only a thousand lines of tears." It can be translated into (1) "Missing makes the originator of the wild school dream of returning to his hometown, caring for each other and shedding tears for thousands of lines".
What I miss is Liu Yong's "Where to Wake Up Tonight"? Liu Yang An Xiaofeng is dying. "This can be changed into (2)" Missing makes the graceful owner wake up in Yang Liuan, the morning breeze and the waning moon ".
Translate the following poem into the following poem: ① Beauty is the brilliance of "a row of egrets soaring into the sky", ② Beauty is the prosperity of "a nest of herbs with Parrot Island", ③ Beauty is the selflessness of "turning into spring mud to protect flowers more". Reference answer: ① Beauty is the line for egrets to ascend to heaven. Beauty is the lush grass fluttering in the wind at the head of Nautilus Island.
3 "Beauty is a little red that turns into spring mud to protect flowers." First, the expression-n famous sentences+arguments.
Draw a sword and cut off water, which is the most helpless myth; Raising a glass to eliminate sorrow is the most emotional elegy. I was moved by the mystery of "I don't know if the water came first, but it is suspected that it will not disappear after the winter snow", intoxicated by the misty sadness of "a puff of smoke, a city wind and a plum rain" and immersed in the sadness of "look closely, it is not a small flower, but a little tear".
3. If time can go back, a composition written in verse or lyrics.
Time is like a mountain stream, gone forever, like a meteor flying in a hurry. People's time is always limited. As the saying goes, "an inch of time is worth an inch of gold, and an inch of gold can't buy an inch of time." Doesn't this mean that time is precious? Since time is so precious, if only time could go back!
People always make mistakes. When they do something wrong, it is too late to regret it. If time can go back, can't they make up for what they did wrong? And you can go back to that innocent childhood and experience that "golden" feeling again. Isn't that a good thing? If I could go back in time, I would like to go back to Denmark in the19th century, back to the age of a little match girl, and bring people like her to modern times to make them feel what happiness is.
If time could be turned back, the world might be peaceful. When people see the evil consequences of war, they will understand the danger of war. World War I and World War II, the Nanjing Massacre, the atomic bombing in Hiroshima, Japan and other appalling things would not have happened, so many innocent people would not have died from gunfire, and countless lives would not have trembled in the shadow of war.
If time could go back, there might be a new scene on the earth. When future generations realized environmental protection, the Yellow River would not be half a bowl of sand and half a bowl of water as it is now; The loess plateau may be a green, vibrant and prosperous scene; That big desert will disappear in this world.
Going back in time is so good, why don't you create it? You know, this is a distant dream, an unimaginable dream, a dream that I don't know how to accomplish, and a beautiful dream that inspires people to create! Learn science well and study hard from now on. I will try my best to realize this dream.
4. How to skillfully decorate the composition with ancient poems and famous sentences? China's ancient poetry is a rich treasure-house, which has nurtured generations of literati with profound ideological connotations and superb artistic techniques. The ancients often said that "poetry and books are full of energy." Classical poetry contains profound cultural and emotional resources, and the clever use of ancient poetry can activate language expression and highlight the connotation of the article. This is undoubtedly an effective and convenient way to "shine" and "innovate" the college entrance examination composition. 1 Poetic topics are good at quoting classics in propositions, making the topic the focus of the composition, so that readers will have a sense of cohesion when they first see the full text, and they will feel thousands of miles away after writing. If you want to show the diversity of heroes' personalities, you can "be colorful and have four seasons like spring." The characters "ten thousand" and "thousand" show that heroes are talented people, the characters "purple" and "red" show heroes' distinctive and diverse personalities, and the characters "spring" describe the role of heroes in social development. It is these colorful "flowers" that dress up our poor and white inner world. These poems are amazing because of their ingenious and unique use. Poetic titles can make a composition move all over the body, and we only need to quote a suitable poem. 2 The structure of poetry Ancient literati paid great attention to composition in their poems. Poetry has its complete frame structure and emotional context. In addition, the poem itself is concise and meaningful, and the rhyme is harmonious. Using ancient poetry to conceive the writing structure of the article can not only make the composition clear, but also give people a feeling of elegance and beauty. Can impress readers in the shortest time. This is a good demonstration of the excellent composition "Pipa parents have feelings" in Hunan college entrance examination in 2004. These verses are the key verses that connect the poetic content and run through the emotional context of the full text in Pipa Story. They are cited as signs of composition transformation and emotional turning point, which not only skillfully string together some life details of parents' concern and education for "I". But also make the writing structure of the article wide open. Read from it, don't have a lasting appeal and feelings. In order to stand out in the college entrance examination, in addition to lofty ideals, beautiful language and ingenious structure are also indispensable. Using the emotional clues of ancient poems to arrange the structure of the article will make your composition blossom a spark of innovation. 3.6438+0 quotes famous poems and sentences, which can make the original pale and powerless words vivid and more touching. Sometimes, it can make the finishing point. Proper use of famous sentences can really add interest to the language and enhance the effect of expressing feelings. "How can you ask the canal so clearly because there is running water at the source?" Famous sentences are undoubtedly such living water, which makes our language canal cool. Proper quotation of famous sentences in writing can really make witty remarks and show your accumulation to others. For example, in "Wild Goose", "Picking chrysanthemums under the east fence and seeing Nanshan leisurely" I found a kind of leisure; "I didn't go on a date until midnight, so I knocked on a chess piece and my snuff dropped." I found an elegant; "But before he could conquer, he was already dead, and the heroes cried on their coats from then on." I found a tragic feeling. -"Dreams after 90s" These paragraphs are all selected from students' compositions. It is because the author makes good use of poetic sentences that the language of the article is beautiful and poetic, such as the fragrance of tea, which makes people ecstatic. It also allows the author's thoughts to penetrate into some classic plots, which are more and more heavy and better reflect the candidates. Give people a refreshing feeling. 3.2 Using poems around the theme of the composition, using the meaning of story scenes, literary allusions and famous sayings, using one's own "meaning" to blend into the "environment" of others, using one's own unique perception of poetry and combining the ideas of the composition to decorate the full text can make the article meaningful and produce a long and heavy aesthetic feeling. For example, the composition "My Favorite Plum" You are standing on a cliff. Who is in charge of ups and downs? " Because of such boldness of vision, during the difficult Long March, you regarded Wuling as a small spray and Wumeng as a mud pill. Against the background of war and smoke, you walk through countless long iron gates like a stroll. All the dangers and setbacks are just the cold snow on your branches, expressing your unparalleled elegance and extraordinary wisdom. Standing on the top of the cliff, you left a height you can never trust and created a whole. She is laughing from it, and she is laughing at an open plum soul. The author skillfully uses the original sentences of Du Fu's and * * *' s poems, and sticks to the topic of "My favorite plum" with his own understanding of the poet's works, or praises others, or is bold and free, and interprets the national spirit and soul from different angles. The translated poem conforms to the content of the article, enhances the expressive force and appeal of the language, and supplements and adds to the original poem. In a word, writing is a process of reading a lot and accumulating constantly. If students are good at observation, diligent in thinking, constantly feeling and accumulating the essence of traditional culture, they can apply ancient poems and famous sentences to the text according to the above methods to improve their language expression ability and add icing on the cake to your composition.
5. Poems, indirect quotations, ancient poems and famous sentences that can be used in Chinese composition, 12 1. Last year Mozi cleared the door, and tonight's rain is thrilling. It only takes a few nights to ruin a lifetime of haggard.
2. Fold the reed flowers and give them away.
It's not Su Causeway who folds willows and frowns at night.
4. Free flying flowers are as light as dreams, and endless silk rain is as fine as sorrow.
5. Look at pear blossoms coldly, and they will never stop living in their loved ones.
6. New wine adds residual wine, and this spring will not reduce the previous spring resentment.
7. It's still boring to get drunk and sing a song about wine. I don't regret that my belt is getting wider and wider, which makes people haggard for Iraq.
8. Tears asked the flowers to be silent and flew over the swing.
9. Who abandoned leisure for a long time? Every spring comes, melancholy remains. I often get sick before spending every day, but I don't care if I look thin in the mirror.
10. Red candle has no good way to feel sorry for itself, and cries for others on a cold night.
1 1. It's a pity that the old lovers joined hands and thought about it all night.
12. Feelings are like water, and the ceremony is like a dream. You can take care of the magpie bridge and go home. If the relationship is long, you will be here sooner or later.
13. Endless sky and graceful demeanor, scenes of dreams in jathyapple, miles of tenderness in the spring breeze.
14. I live at the head of the Yangtze River and you live at the end of the Yangtze River. I miss you every day and drink the Yangtze River water.
15. I'm not talking about striving for spring, but jealousy. Even after autumn, when it is ground into dirt and turned into dust, plum blossoms still emit fragrance as usual.
16. I was shocked but turned back. No one could save me. It kept wandering among the cold branches, but refused to perch on any tree, and finally landed alone on the cold shoal.
17. It's endless hate to get together in a hurry. This year's flowers are better than last year's, but next year's flowers will be better. You know who you are with.
18. Long meaning, short hair, slow love all day.
19. I don't know if it will be very late after getting drunk. At that time, * * * I enjoyed flowers, and now I don't have half of tally.
20. Lilac tears and broken branches are incomparable and sad. Born sentimental, don't do romantic things.
2 1. Everything is for nothing, and tears flow first. It is said that Shuangxi Spring is still good, and it is also planned to make canoes. I'm afraid the boat won't move. I'm worried.
22. It's hard to get rid of the old days. The heart is like a double screen with Qian Qian knots inside.
23. Masonry fell like snow, still full. Hongyan has flown back, the journey is far away, and the dream is hard to come true. The sadness of parting is like weeds in spring, which go further and further.
24. The ferry is green with branches and leaves.
25. Don't die? West wind blinds, people are thinner than yellow flowers.
26. It's easier to see than at other times. Running water is gone, and spring is gone.
27. The 24th Bridge is still there, the waves are swaying, and Leng Yue is silent.
28. Ten years of life and death are ambiguous, and you will forget it without thinking.
29. People don't know where, but the green wave still flows eastward.
30. There is nothing to do. It's like knowing Yan.
3 1. Since ancient times, it is even more worthy of being left out in the cold. Where did you wake up after drinking today? Fear is just the edge, facing the sad morning breeze and the waning moon.
32. Rouge tears make people drunk, grow up naturally when they are heavy, and hate water.
33. The crowd searched for him for thousands of Baidu, and suddenly looking back, the man was there, and the lights were dim.
34. Where is the synthesis of sadness? Leave people's hearts to autumn.
35. It is better to be a peach and apricot than to marry Dongfeng.
36. Three points in spring, two points in dust and one point in water. Fine, it seems that it is not easy, it is a crystal tear.
37. However, a wisp of acacia is separated by a stream and a distant mountain.
38. It rained in the middle of the night on the plane leaves, and the sound of the leaves was parting.
39. feelings are getting late, and the mirror is full of surprises.
40. Songbirds know how much they hate, but they don't know how to cry.
4 1. Bananas do not show lilac festival. After being haggard for a long time, both of them are tired of affairs.
42. Think that spring is not old, people worry that spring is old, and sorrow is only in the world.
43. The chrysanthemums bloom, but the chrysanthemums stay. The geese fly high, but they don't return.
44. Carved fences and jade bricks should still exist, but Zhu Yan changed them. Ask how much sorrow you can have, just like a river flowing eastward.
45. Sadness is getting farther and farther away, and the distance is like spring water.
46. Flowers are like flowers, and no one regrets teaching.
47. In the bright moon, the tall buildings rest themselves, and the wine turns into homesick tears.
48. The phoenix tree was drizzling until dusk. This time, what a sad sentence!
49. Flowers bloom and fall, and flowing water gurgles. One kind of lovesickness, two places of leisure. There is no way to eliminate this situation, only frown and mind.
50. Ruthlessness is not like sentimentality, but an inch is still a thousand shares. Ultima Thule is still far from the end, only the mind is infinitely long, and there is no time.
5 1. If you have a tiger in your heart, smell the roses. After the feast, I was in tears.