After completing the following six points, you should have no problem getting 60 points.

1: When preparing for the essay, don’t make the mistake from the beginning

Whether it is the national exam or the provincial exam, the general score for the essay is between 35 and 55!

You may ask: Why do I get worse the more I study? Why do the harder I work, the lower my score?

Actually: You are on the wrong path, wrong from the beginning!

Application Discussion The main essay is generally 40 points, and the first few questions are 60 points! We can infer that if you score 35-55 points, the total score of the first small questions is only 10-35 points!

How terrifying and cruel The truth! Therefore, the key to the success or failure of the application is not the composition writing, but the score of the previous small questions - if you cannot secure 45 points, there is basically no hope of passing or even entering the exam!

Hua Mujun’s point of view: Composition is the key to breakthrough in high-level exams. A way to pass the test, and small questions are the lifeline! Spending 70% or more of your energy on preparing and studying for small questions is the only way for us with ordinary basic skills to break through the essay!

2. The way you answer the question determines whether you can get in.

How many people are within 3 points of the interview?

However, a small 3 points not only dooms you to lose the opportunity to counterattack. , also announced the failure result of the public examination in advance! Is it really so difficult to score 3 points or even add a few more points?

To be honest: before we enter the examination room, the level of application is already established! People Relying on clothes, answering essays depends on "pretending to be formal" Just imagine: for the same answer sheet, will the score be higher if the answer sheet is neat and tidy, or if the answer sheet lacks planning and outlines?!

My point of view Yes:

(1) The previous small questions are deliberately presented in a "summarize first, then divide" method and are presented in an organized manner, so that the marking teacher can catch the key points and scoring points of your answer at a glance. .

(2) The writing point of the composition should be clear and frank. On the one hand, the core point of the article should be expressed directly and objectively at the beginning, without being pretentious or ambiguous; on the other hand, the summary of the arguments should be rigorous and clear, ensuring that each paragraph of the article has an independent core function - such as the first The first paragraph is to quote the topic and express opinions, the second paragraph is to propose sub-arguments and demonstrate arguments, and the last paragraph is the conclusion and sublimation.

(3) 80% of the time, dignified writing will win favor and even extra points. Application papers are marked manually, and everyone loves beauty, and marking teachers are no exception. Of course, this is an essay examination, not a calligraphy competition, and the impact of writing on the results cannot be infinitely magnified. However, it is definitely beneficial to pay attention to paper writing and ensure that the paper is clean and tidy!

Hua Mujun’s opinion: Doing the little things you can do is not only an attitude and cultivation, but also an important ability. It is also an important weight for whether you can enter the field at the same level!

3. The logical connector is to improve the score. The artifact

First of all, it needs to be emphasized: logical connectors are not equal to a simple list of "one, two, three, four".

Whether it is a small question or a large composition, the main thread is logic. For example, the comprehensive analysis question is based on the core levels of "what is the assertion", "analysis and explanation of the assertion" and "summary overview". Argument writing focuses on the core points to demonstrate and explain, which is actually a form of logical expression.

Several logical connectors actually connect in series the core ideas and structure of an essay, such as the commonly used logical connectors for "Huamuzi" articles:

The first paragraph: ...(background). However... (leading to the topic of the article). To do this, we need to...(express the core idea of ??the article).

The second paragraph...(point one). ...The problem begins to emerge (the reason for the sub-argument). For this, it is necessary…. At the same time,...promote...(measures, requirements + effects).

The third paragraph:...(sub-point two). ...the phenomenon is prominent (the reason for the argument). To this end, we should... (measures, requirements + effects).

Paragraph 4: ...(sub-point three). ...highlights... (the reason for the sub-argument). For this, we need..., let... (measures, requirements + effects).

Paragraph 5: ...(overview). ...is...is...even more (connect with the social background and deepen the theme of the article)...

Just imagine, when we have mastered this kind of rules and techniques, and have appropriate training and summary, and have a basic understanding of the materials and topic topics during specific exams, will we still worry about not being able to write? Or Will it take ten minutes or even dozens of minutes to think about the structure and level of the article?

Hua Mujun’s point of view: The question type is the form of thesis examination, while logic is the test proposition, presentation of answer content, A soul that shows ability. In a large sense, preparation for the essay is to cultivate administrative thinking and improve logical analysis skills.

4. Essay writing is thinking + structure + expression

Hmm, this conclusion is very bold, and it is different from the views you have seen in any book, but it is so willful, It's that simple.

When it comes to thinking, just remember two sentences: 1. Treat yourself as a civil servant when answering questions and writing articles, without being subjective or lyrical; 2. Pay attention to cause and effect, and analyze what issues the materials reflect. What is the problem and what angles should we analyze the problem from, and what angles should we use to solve the problem. At the same time, care should be taken to ensure that the writing is smooth and does not contradict itself.

As for the structure of the article, I think "one core argument, three (two) sub-arguments, and five (four) paragraphs" is enough. Maybe you are worried about whether it is "patterned", but I want to tell you: if you don't even have a basic article structure and framework, it can only be regarded as a running account!

OK, if you really want to improve the article structure If you want to be innovative and show your style and personality appropriately, please remember one sentence: Ensure that the core argument of the article is clear, the sub-arguments are clear, and the arguments are developed around the arguments.

For expression, there is no need to be too fancy, just stick to "simple, natural and objective". You can usually accumulate proprietary vocabulary and sentence patterns and cultivate your sense of language through government work reports, people's current commentaries, news broadcasts, etc. .

Hua Mujun’s point of view: To improve your essay writing ability, you can completely dismantle and improve the abilities required, consciously cultivate your own administrative thinking ability by understanding national policies and guidelines, and learn through imitation and training. Clarify the inherent article structure in your writing, and improve your writing skills through the accumulation and imitation of vocabulary, sentence patterns, and sentence patterns.

5. The best way to improve your expressive ability is imitation and grafting

It is said that when you see a good person, you must think of others!

"Thinking of others" has never been a problem , the key to the question is how to “meet a wise man”? Where to meet him? After all, in this era, when you go out and turn left, you are more likely to meet a “magic stick” and “fool” than to meet a beautiful woman or a macho man!

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Don't ask why there are only these two places, just ask yourself: How much information and how many books are there? Have you really seen it?! Good things and useful things are like having a wife. The more the better, but the ones that suit you and can be used by you are really good!

In the specifics When practicing imitation, you can follow the following principles:

1. The topic of the application will cover the five major categories of politics, economy, culture, society, and ecological civilization (the content of the political category does not need to be deliberately paid attention to), so the usual While studying, you can consciously classify articles and accumulated materials.

2. When studying, you don’t need to pay attention to the entire article. It may be a beginning, maybe an end, maybe just a parallel sentence pattern, or even just a few words. Please note it down carefully.

My attitude is: If you don’t have dozens of pages of notes like this, you can’t be considered as having studied the essay seriously!

3. Imitate and rewrite based on the sentence patterns and vocabulary you wrote down. , some of the content can be directly used in your own writing. Give an example:

Original text To save and inherit intangible cultural heritage, we must start from the awareness of cultural security, incorporate the inheritance of folk culture into the overall plan of national economic and social development, and inject cultural security into the foundation of primary and secondary schools. In education, we should give full play to the important role of intangible cultural heritage in traditional cultural education and patriotism education for the majority of minors, integrate the promotion of national culture into life and socialist economic construction, and let it be in mind and heart, behavior and deeds. Inherited.

To prevent and manage food safety issues, we must start with food safety awareness, incorporate food safety issues into the overall planning of national economic and social development, inject food safety into basic education in primary and secondary schools, and give full play to Major food safety accidents and food safety identification knowledge play an important role in food safety education, integrating food safety work into people's lives and social and economic construction, and truly implementing food safety work.

After persisting for a month or two, if you feel that there is no progress, there is only one reason: you are not diligent enough!

Hua Mujun’s point of view: Learning about essays is as important as finding a partner. The key is not to cast the net everywhere, but to have strategies, methods, and persistence!

6. There is no need to work hard to accumulate hot spots

The application examination will be based on hot topics, but it must be Note that its focus is not on the hot spots or issues themselves, but on a kind of thinking and logic - the ability to objectively understand problems, analyze problems dialectically (both sides), and effectively solve problems.

In your usual preparation for exams, you may have spent a lot of time memorizing a certain hot spot or the reason for the question, but will the material orientation of the exam be the same as your memory? On the contrary, it will often make your answers Deviating from the material will make you feel at a loss, have sweaty palms, and be upset! This is why there is a common phenomenon of "feeling good when you leave the exam room, but disappointed when you check your scores!"

Methods for application study , There is a lot of experience, but listing too much means having no experience. As a test-taker, if you grasp the main direction and basic purpose, any problem can be easily solved.

Hua Mujun’s point of view: The application is exam-oriented. The important thing is not to guess the questions, or even to be "well-informed", but to be able to skillfully use this kind of thinking on the basis of understanding national policies and guidelines. The ability to analyze and deal with problems. Mastering and continuously improving this ability will not only open up the "two channels of appointment and supervision" for application preparation, but it will also be of great benefit to our lives and work!