① Composition, put forward a new point of view from the story of "Shang Zhongyong" and narrate it

Edison once said: "Genius is one percent inspiration, one hundred percent inspiration." Ninety-nine points of sweat." And Zhongyong's deeds are the best true portrayal of this famous saying.

When I first read the classical Chinese article "Injuring Zhongyong", I felt a bit "cannot afford to be hurt". A five-year-old child "has no knowledge of books". He was able to "write four poems and name them himself". If this person is given a little guidance, he will surely excel. Zhongyong's talent was highly praised by the people of the city. They "brought his father a little guest or begged him with coins." This shows that Zhongyong is talented and intelligent. However, his father "took advantage of it and made Zhongyong pay homage to the people in the city every day and did not let him learn." This led to the tragedy that Zhongyong "disappeared from everyone".

The main reason why Zhongyong is ignored by everyone is his father. His short-sightedness, ignorance, greed for money and talent, and the wrong approach of "not learning" delayed Zhongyong's great learning time. , and eventually became ordinary people. Zhongyong was born in such a peasant family that had been farming for generations, and his outcome was doomed from the beginning. Is it just his father's fault? No, no, if it weren't for the people's mentality of being in harmony with others, Zhongyong's father would not pay homage to them and would not let Zhongyong study. In this way, the people of Yi are also one of the "accomplices". And I think the real reason lies in Zhongyong himself. If his aptitude faded when he was young, it was his father's fault, but he. e252. Isn't it his own responsibility to grow up but still not understand the importance of learning, to be lazy and not enterprising? Even if you are born in such a family and do not have the conditions to study, you must create conditions. Just like a sponge that only squeezes out water but does not absorb any "ink", it will always be exhausted one day.

We are in a great time for learning and have excellent learning conditions. Why not study hard? Could it be that he wants to follow in Zhong Yong’s footsteps and make the same mistake again? You must know that Yan Zhenqing once said: "A black-haired person does not know how to study hard early, and a white-haired person regrets studying late."

If a young man does not work hard, he will be sad. We cannot decide our origins, but we can create our future. We cannot go back to yesterday, but we can seize today. A person's talent is certainly valuable, but education is more important. The sweat you put in is directly proportional to the fruits you gain.

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② Write an essay of about 600 words on the topic of Shang Zhongyong

There is no such thing as a person who is born knowing, and "genius" does not exist either. Although people have different talents, they mainly come from diligent study. The inspiration given to me by the article "Shang Zhongyong" is: Even if a person has high talent, if he does not study hard, it will be difficult to achieve real achievements.

The story of Zhongyong is this: Fang Zhongyong, who was not a scholar, was able to "point to objects and compose poems immediately" when he was 5 years old, and "named himself", and was "remarkable in both literature and science" , thus becoming famous in the city. When he was twelve or thirteen years old, his talent gradually declined, and "his poems were no longer as good as those he had heard before." When he reached adulthood, he "lost himself to everyone".

A talented prodigy was reduced to an unknown "mediocre person" because his profit-seeking father took him around every day and refused to let him study! Can this not make people feel sad? The child prodigy disappeared from everyone, and the responsibility lies with his father because he "failed to learn." Geniuses like Fang Zhongyong still want to become ordinary people because they have not studied hard. Then, if those ordinary people do not study, wouldn't they be worse than ordinary mediocre people?

So, talent comes from diligent study! It is not uncommon in history for "child prodigies" to become "mediocre" because they did not study hard; and it is not uncommon for "child prodigies" or "geniuses" to become world-famous scientists and inventors because of their unremitting efforts. But there are many people there.

Newton was not a child prodigy, but he studied diligently throughout his life and finally achieved remarkable achievements. Einstein was not a child prodigy. He took two college entrance examinations before being admitted. After graduation, he worked as a clerk in a patent office for 7 years. He studied and worked tenaciously under difficult conditions and finally laid the foundation for the theory of relativity.

This is not only true in science, but also in literature and art. No matter who they are, they can achieve this or that as long as they work hard. The success of writers Dickens, Balzac and others also profoundly illustrates the truth: talent comes from diligent study!

③ How to write the composition "Whose fault is the injury to Zhongyong"

In addition to the traditional interpretation, I always feel that "Injury to Zhongyong" and "Sun Quan's Persuasion" "Xue" also has another profound meaning.

Because both stories are related to learning and education, I integrated these two articles into teaching. During the discussion, there was an issue that was not new and aroused the interest of both teachers and students.

This question is: Can the title "Injury to Zhongyong" be changed to "Fang Zhongyong", and "Sun Quan Encourages Learning" can be changed to "Lü Meng is angry".

Regarding the former, everyone said that it cannot be changed. The focus of "Injury Zhongyong" is "injury", which sets the emotional tone of the story.

I asked who was "hurting", and the students said Wang Anshi. I asked why, and my classmates said the author was Wang Anshi. I continued to ask what other characters were involved in the story, and they said they included Fang Zhongyong’s father, a scholar, a local, Wang Anshi’s uncle, etc. I asked why these people didn't "injure" me, and everyone was silent. Later, a classmate said that in fact, they were still "injured". People in his uncle's family said that Fang Zhongyong "was lost to everyone." This was quite a heavy statement and it was proof. But another classmate disagreed. He said that there was no exclamation point at the end of this sentence. God knows whether the person who said this was sighing or gloating. Everyone was silent.

As for the latter, the students agreed that it cannot be changed. Because after the change, the focus of the story has shifted, and Sun Quan's important role cannot be highlighted. I asked: Do you mean that the protagonist of this story is Sun Quan and not Lu Meng? If this is the case, why does the second half of the story completely abandon Sun Quan and focus on Lu Meng? Everyone was silent.

So I guided the students to shift their attention to explore the people around Fang Zhongyong and Lu Meng - there are actually two types of protagonists hidden behind Fang Zhongyong and Lu Meng. Rather than saying that these two stories are about Fang Zhongyong and Lü Meng, it is better to say that they are about the people who caused Zhongyong's tragedy and made Lü Meng's progress. Furthermore, from the unobtrusive details of these two stories, we can also see many heavy realities.

For example, we can see the abnormal respect for culture in society at that time. Fang Zhongyong, the son of a farmer, quickly improved his family's social status because he could "point to objects and compose poems" at a young age. "People from the city" not only "guest their fathers", but even "beg for them with coins". The same is true in "Sun Quan's Encourage to Learn". Lü Meng, who started to learn after listening to the advice, was not only warmly praised by his colleague Lu Su, but also went to "worship Meng's mother" when leaving, and "parted as friends". It can be said that Lu Meng's status in the hearts of his friends has been greatly improved because of his reading. This is essentially the same attitude as the "Yi people" towards the child prodigy Fang Zhongyong. Can we think this way: Whether it is "Yi people" or Lu Su, their actions are actually "encouraging learning". But what is the essence of encouraging learning? Judging from the description in the text, the society at that time valued knowledge and respected reading. However, this kind of respect is utilitarian and backward philistine in form. When reading becomes a means and step to improve one's social status and obtain economic benefits, intentionally or unintentionally, reading does not truly reflect its deep impact on people. value. But Sun Quan was different. He was very clever in persuading Lu Meng. He said: "Why do I want you to study the classics and become a doctor? When you dabble in it, you can see the past. You talk about many things, who is so lonely? I study alone and think that I am self-satisfied. It's very beneficial." These two casual sentences showed Sun Quan's understanding and experience of the high realm of reading beyond utilitarianism. I guess that the stubborn Lu Meng was moved far more deeply than Lu Su's later praise of him. The charm of "Sun Quan Encourages Learning" and the fact that Sun Quan is the protagonist in the title, I think, come from the profound concept contained in this passage: thinking about the ultimate purpose of reading. Unfortunately, in Chinese society, in the eyes of most people, studying is still just a convenient way to gain fame and wealth. Therefore, the educational level of Chinese society is relatively low.

Lu Meng's "success" was largely attributed to Sun Quan's persuasion to study clearly. But Fang Zhongyong was not so lucky. The "persuasion" that surrounded him full of the smell of copper actually foreshadowed the tragic fate of the genius from the beginning. Because the behavior of his father and the "Yi people" reflects the inevitable short-sighted choices of a backward society.

This requires further discussion. The opening chapter of "Injury to Zhongyong" emphasizes that Zhongyong's family has been engaged in farming for generations. Is this just a reflection of Zhongyong's genius IQ? I think this further hints at the social background at that time: education in rural areas was extremely backward, so backward that not only one generation was not educated, but all generations were unable to receive education. Economic backwardness has restricted the consciousness of farmers. They are content with the status quo and regard the unreasonable status quo as reasonable. They have no intention and inability to reflect on their own destiny. This has been the living situation of most farmers for thousands of years. Other social classes above the farmers are not surprised by this and regard it as normal. This is a social tragedy and a personal tragedy. Only by realizing this, can we understand why Fang Zhongyong's father would "spread Zhongyong around the people of the city every day and not let them learn". In many impoverished mountainous areas today, even if farmers have the awareness to educate their children, due to economic constraints, isn't the problem of out-of-school children still a serious social problem?

The students asked: Why didn’t anyone lend a helping hand to Fang Zhongyong at that time? Forget that his father was stupid, why did those educated scholars, the educated and wealthy among the "people", including Wang Anshi, watch the father of a child prodigy waste his own child prodigy son? It is really difficult for me to answer this question from the students. Personal consciousness is often subject to the overall consciousness of society. When the entire society is still in an ignorant and uncivilized state, can we still force individuals to reach any higher level of consciousness? What's more, for a country, the degree of attention an individual may receive is really an unknown quantity that individuals cannot hope for. In other words, an individual's destiny is too small in the face of social development. This is still the case today when the media is highly developed and the lives of ordinary people have received unprecedented attention from society, let alone in a backward farming society.

However, it is valuable for us to raise this question. Does it allow us to think about what responsibility a sound, civilized and developed society should have for human development?

From this perspective, the object of Wang Anshi's "injury" to Zhongyong was not only Fang Zhongyong, but also the stupid Zhongyong's father, the numb "people", and the powerless society. , even including Wang Anshi himself who looked on coldly but was helpless.

We can also think further: Can Zhongyong's "tragedy" be avoided? What other reasons contributed to Lu Meng's "comedy"? Among the many differences between the two stories, one difference deserves special attention: the protagonist of "Shang Zhongyong" is a five-year-old genius child. Children themselves are generally unable to resist the guidance and pressure exerted by adult society, while "Sun Quan Encourages Learning" It tells an adult story, and Lu Meng's own awakening is the key factor in his change. Can these enlighten us: A mature and civilized society should bear important responsibilities for human development, especially the growth of children, and the awakening of individual human consciousness is also the key reason that determines a person's destiny?

④ Story composition of "Injury to Zhongyong"

Today at noon, my mother told me a story during dinner: Once upon a time, there was a child in the village named Zhongyong who never read the version. After studying, when he was five years old, one day, he suddenly started crying and making a fuss, asking for paper and pen, but their family was so poor that they didn't even have a pen or a piece of paper! Everyone at home tried to persuade him, but he refused to listen. As a result, he had to borrow a piece of paper and a pen from a neighbor's house. He immediately stopped crying and even wrote well! As a result, people outside the village and people in the village who knew him asked him to write letters. His father took him everywhere to write letters for people. Some people gave him some money to thank him. His father thought Zhong Yong could help him earn money. If he has no money, he will not be allowed to study.

Many years later, a person from the village went out and came back. How is he doing now? "One person replied: "It's no different from ordinary people. "After listening to this story, I understood a truth: geniuses who don't study will also be stupid.

⑤ When Zhongyong read Zhongyong's 600-word essay

This semester, I learned In the text "Injury to Zhongyong", through Mr. Wang Anshi's ideas, I have a deep understanding of the principle of "jade is not cut, it is not used". This article talks about Fang Zhongyong, who was talented since he was a child, but his father was greedy for immediate benefits. Instead of learning, he eventually became an ordinary person.

Is what Mr. Wang Anshi said just a pity for Fang Zhongyong? I'm afraid it doesn't, but it also contains the condemnation of Fang Zhongyong and his son. Father Yong lost a talent to society for his own small gain, "Is it worth it? Isn’t the harm this causes to society less important than our own interests? "We can't help but ask ourselves. In fact, Zhongyong was "buried" in the vast sea of ??people like this.

Imagine if Fang Zhongyong had firmly changed his stance from "not to learn" to "I want to learn", then It's a different scene. People don't "hurt Zhongyong" but "praise" Zhongyong... Imagine that if Fang Zhongyong's father could let Zhongyong continue to study and work hard, then he might still be a A great poet who can be compared with Wang Anshi or one of Wang Anshi's disciples; imagine that if Fang Zhongyong's neighbors did not spend money to ask him to come to their homes to compose poems, Zhongyong's father would not be so greedy for money that he would become a great poet. As for wasting a good talent, imagine...

Mr. Wang Anshi also expressed his views on genius when he wrote this article. People often say that "successful people are often not the smartest, but the most diligent." ". Fang Zhongyong is a genius, but even a genius cannot do without hard work, otherwise sooner or later there will be a day when his talents are exhausted. Among the successful people in ancient and modern times, at home and abroad, none of them achieved success without diligent study. What is the praise and admiration of the world? Wang Xianzhi "used up three tanks of water, a bit like Xi Zhi" and eventually became a great calligrapher. The French writer Flaubert's study window faced the Seine River, and because it was lit all night, he was regarded as a fisherman. Deng, there are many such things, and there are countless things like Fang Zhongyong's.

Yes, success depends on acquired efforts! I will work harder and become Fang Zhongyong's "opposite number". p>

⑥ Composition: What I learned from "Shang Zhongyong"

What I learned from "Shang Zhongyong"

After reading Mr. Wang Anshi's " "Injury to Zhongyong", I feel deeply that Fang Zhongyong, a genius, will eventually become an ordinary person. Do we only have pity and sympathy for his experience? I am afraid that there should also be some criticism from Fang Zhongyong's father and the people of the county? Well, they lost a talent for society for their own small interests. Isn't the harm to society more important than their own interests? Wang Anshi's purpose in writing this article should not only be this, but also to benefit the genius.

Genius, as the name suggests: a person who has received talent from God. Of course, genius is much better than ordinary people. With a little education and learning, he can become a rare talent in society. Why did Fang Zhongyong eventually become an ordinary person, not even as good as an ordinary person? This is because he did not receive acquired education, did not make progress, and just stayed in the same place, while others were working hard and making progress, and in the end he had to be eliminated. Exceed.

Natural talent is important, but acquired education is also essential. Without acquired education, good talents will be wasted. On the contrary, an ordinary person, through his continuous efforts, may also make a great contribution to society.

To make progress, you should study diligently. The ancients said: "The best in work is diligence." Diligent study is the mother of success. Diligence can make up for clumsiness. Nearly wisdom, among the successful people at home and abroad in ancient and modern times, which one achieved success without diligent study and received praise and admiration from the world? Wang Xianzhi "used up three jars of water, and became a bit like Xizhi" and eventually became a great calligrapher. The French writer Flaubert's study window faced the Seine River. Because the light was transparent all night, he was used as a fishing lantern by boatmen. His understanding of genius was "Genius is nothing more than long-term patience, work hard!" Eventually he became a great writer. None of them are born smart. Their talents are not necessarily better than Fang Zhongyong. The source of their success lies in their patience and diligence.

Genius lies in accumulation over time, and wisdom lies in continuous study. No matter how talented a person is, if he does not study diligently, he will not be able to achieve a great career. It is even difficult to support oneself; a person with average talent will definitely produce results if he studies diligently and works hard. Studying hard is an indispensable part of success. Maybe we are not geniuses, but let us start now, study hard and diligently, and we will be able to do something great.

⑦ Composition: The story of a genius child prodigy - Shang Zhongyong

"Shang Zhongyong" is an article by Wang Anshi. It tells the story of a genius child who failed to learn because he did not study. The story of being reduced to a mortal. I think this article is very thought-provoking, especially for students and parents.

First of all, for students. It can be seen from the article that Fang Zhongyong is indeed a very good person. A gifted child. When he was five years old, he could point to objects and write poems, and these poems were very literary and amazing. However, having talent does not mean eternal excellence and success. Although Fang Zhongyong had extraordinary talent, he did not Study and improve, so you finally become an ordinary person. If such a smart person doesn't work hard, he will become an ordinary person. So what will happen to people who are not very talented if they don't work hard? This is a very terrible result. So, We should redouble our efforts and forge ahead.

If we change this story: Imagine that Fang Zhongyong is a child with low talent, but he is very demanding to make progress and studies hard day and night. Then the meaning of this story What will be the outcome? I estimate that Fang Zhongyong, who keeps working hard the day after tomorrow, will definitely become the pillar of the country! Many people think that the hard work of the day after tomorrow is more important than the innate talent. That’s right, because “genius is one percent inspiration, plus Ninety-nine percent blood and sweat", so the two Fang Zhongyongs in reality and imagination have different talents, different efforts, and different results. This is just as the great writer Mao Dun said: "People with high talents If he is lazy by nature, that is, if he does not work hard to develop his talents, his achievements will not be very great, and sometimes he will not be as good as those with lower talents than him." Therefore, it is understood that one's own efforts are very important. .

The next thing that should be considered deeply is the parents. For a child as smart as Fang Zhongyong to eventually become an ordinary person, the main responsibility lies with his father. Fang Zhongyong’s father discovered his son’s talent and was very happy. .But he did not send the child to study in time to let the child improve further. Instead, he took the child to visit everywhere every day, exchanging the child's talent for other people's courtesy and money. In this way, Fang Zhongyong's father was greedy for what he got. Making small profits and ruining the bright future of a child's life. This is not only a loss to the Fang family, but also a loss to society's talents! Therefore, as a parent, you should be responsible for your children and not destroy a promising life for yourself. Tomorrow.

Fang Zhongyong’s lesson tells people: parents must create conditions for their children, and children should study hard and make continuous progress, and must not let themselves, their parents and society down.

⑧ The composition "What I Thought About Fang Zhongyong's Tragedy" is five to six hundred words, urgently needed! ! Original~~~

After reading the article "Injury to Zhongyong", it did make me feel a little "injured". Zhongyong was born with intelligence and intelligence, and could compose poems at a young age, but in the end he ended up "losing sight of everyone". If a child prodigy like Fang Zhongyong studies hard and diligently from an early age, he will definitely become a world-famous talent and a pillar of the country in the future. Fang Zhongyong is a genius, but even a genius cannot do without hard work. Otherwise, sooner or later the day will come when "the talent is exhausted".

Why can’t the genius Fang Zhongyong achieve major achievements? I think this is Fang Zhongyong's father's fault. Fang Zhongyong eventually "lost everyone" and he has to bear the main responsibility. Zhongyong's father was greedy for wealth. When Zhongyong was young, he took him around every day to seek benefits instead of letting him study, which delayed his opportunity to study and wasted the life of a genius. This also tells us that as parents, we should give our children the best education and should not focus on immediate interests.

People often say: "Successful people are often not the smartest, but diligent." We now have such good learning conditions, and teachers and parents attach so much importance to our learning, so , we have no reason not to study diligently.

Adolescence is the best time to learn. We must seize the time and learn more knowledge. We must not be "the boss is just sad."

⑨ What did you understand through Shang Zhongyong's article? Around 300

Fang Zhongyong, who was talented as a child, became "invisible to everyone" before he was twenty years old. After reading this article, I can't help but feel sorry for Zhongyong. Fang's father, who is ignorant and only interested in profit, has lost Zhongyong's talent because of his "not learning".

Zhongyong, who drifted with the crowd and "went around people" all day long, cut off his own path to success because of "people he didn't accept".

Genius is, firstly, the result of unremitting efforts and hard study; secondly, it is a gift received from innateness. And true genius is a combination of both. As the saying goes, "If jade is not polished, it will not become a useful tool." Yes, Zhongyong's piece of good jade is rare. But no matter how good the jade is, it will become a rotten stone without carving, but if you change it to a rotten stone that is willing to work hard, it will one day become a beautiful jade that people praise.

Beethoven, the world-famous musician, did not have innate intelligence. Physically, he was still a disabled person - deaf. However, he worked tirelessly for his musical dream and created a world-famous song that is well-known to every household.

Newton, a well-known scientist, had no extraordinary talent, but he loved reading more and more, and finally discovered the law of universal gravitation under that very ordinary apple tree. Many of his contributions have become legends throughout the ages.

There are many such ions in ancient and modern times at home and abroad. Their stories tell us the same truth: hard work is the basis for success.

There is a saying that "The best in work comes from hard work, and the most important thing from playfulness" If I were Fang Zhongyong, I would definitely keep this truth in mind. Give full play to your unique innate advantages, constantly enrich yourself, and accumulate accumulated experience. Make your knowledge inexhaustible.

However, I am not him. I can only realize my ideal through my unremitting struggle and hard pursuit. "Genius is one percent inspiration and ninety-nine percent hard work." Then, I will use my ninety-nine percent plus that meager one percent.

I firmly believe that I can do it!

My friend, if you are a piece of jade, you must "carve" it to your heart's content to turn it into a "vessel"; if you are a piece of iron, you must also "grind" it relentlessly to turn it into a "needle"